Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Aaron008R]

Finally finished the exams! Now to more backlog-breaking!

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Aaron:

Don't you know? Being outnumbered is a key factor for the eventual amounts of ownage the allies will deliver! It is what all protagonists strive for!

Well, what with the Numbers being upgraded, and the Doctor having an Ace-level combatant on his side, that's a problem, yes. But I'll find ways to even out the equation.

Another Dendrobium Cannon, hm? Well, as said, "The bigger the better". I can only imagine what destructive power Dieci would have if she was upgraded have a cannon of that standard... Just be thankful it isn't the god-like Wing Zero cannon. Now that is a monster.

Heh, the Gate of Babylon works well when applied to Cinque, does it not? As for Caladbolg...I have no idea what I might use its design for. Further weapons in her arsenal?

And speaking of Gilgamesh, I can somehow picture Nove snapping and doing this:

Spoiler:

Nove: ENUMA ELISH!!

Right, I gotta stop this now.

And, to Lowe, it matters not- the bigger the bang, the swifter the job, right? There's uncountable amounts of weapons in the Vault last time I checked on Gate of Babylon...

1) Understood.
2) DOES NOT COMPUTE!!!!!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Wala, kuripot ako eh

Bodyguards huh? So S&W would be running along with Aurion then. How long's this mission's gonna last... but first, what is the mission anyway?

I'm gonna love this

I'll start brainstorming about the details. I'll link this to some investigations regarding the Choukijin antagonists.



Congratulations on the 8k get, Kha!

[LoweGear]

And Kha and Aaron go for 8000th Post and 8000th Reply!!!! ONWARDS TO 10000!!!!!!

BREAKING THROUGH THE FORUM'S FATE!!!!

[Dream_Traveller]

@Lowe, Kha and Aaron:

Well, you know, Nove's a tad too temperamental, and when and if she snaps...

So I think Enuma is an apt choice, so sue me.

And just a brief note, that'd be Enkidu with the chains, not Enuma Elish, which is a blade...and...blade, gauntlet...eh, close enough.

Or...would you rather I used this?

[Final h4xx]

Spoiler for Size:

Imagine that in gauntlet form...

Nove...or Subaru, even (): Ekusu...

*The gears spin, and the gauntlet glows a bright gold, projecting a beam of energy.*

CALIBAAAAAA!!!

[End final h4xx]

*Runs for the hills.*

[Nightengale]

Hmm... I realized I haven't exactly written anything new nor posted in a while...

*looks around*

Looks like I better prep something up for 8k.

Originally Posted by Estavali

Tk3997, I see your point, and I agree my emphasis on the living quarters may have been excessive (I get very irritated when I see soldiers/policemen having what I consider to be unnecessarily luxuries in-camp. Adequate comfort is one thing, taking it too far is another).

I would like to say though that what I said is to make them look more in line with military/law-enforcer's life. Besides the living quarters, you've also mentioned the lack of organisation, discipline and etc in RF6, which I also think should be reinforced. Right now imho RF6 looks more like a holiday training camp for kids and teenagers, and not combat unit. The only one that moderately look like her role would be Vita.

In my opinion, the weakness was not the lack of organization and discipline, but rather the fact that RF6's existence and purpose as a possible one-man-stand task force against unknown odds were like... not drilled into them. They were pampered and not drilled in any sense of urgency.

Yes, they went through severe training, but that's about it. The only ones who were really prepared beforehand and even they themselves did a shitty job of it were the older cast. Only the Aces understood their role of being a Special-Ops, while the weaker, but still important members of RF6, the Forwards got the 'well, just be careful' kind of urgency.

Originally Posted by Kha

But before you click on that, I must warn you, even at 80% completion, it's Bluecheesium power must not be estimated...

Urgh... powerful indeed.

Finally...so this is the power of der Kleriker.

Originally Posted by Estavali

Ehh, someone once told me that this place is the pit of madness (and Kha isn't really helping to alleviate that image ), and that I'd be safer staying away from here.

Now that I'm in, I should say that this pit looks a bit more bottomless than those of Hell .

Btw, can anyone please enlighten me on how things are done here? If I'm to input my own characters here, am I supposed to keep to the OC fanon timeline, or can I create my own based on Nighty's official timeline? I have some already in mind that may or may not conform with the OC timeline Kha has provided.

(I humbly confess I have not yet undertake the daunting task of going through nearly 400 pages of supposed madness .)

Nonsense. It's not a pit of madness, it's an abyss of endlessness.

True, it's hard to eat up everything, but just read on slowly and you'll see why this place had lasted so long. Everytime things looked like it could turn stale, new dimensions were added, storylines improved, and we eat up the cheese like never before.

Starting from characters, we've developed histories, timelines, factions, universes... and we're damn proud of it.

And there is no rule. Just limit the h4xx.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Coaching? Don't you mean training? Coaching makes it sound like we are talking about a soccer team.

BUT! BUT! COACH!



Oh right, you've probably never watched Gunbuster.

Originally Posted by Keroko

You know what I realized? When the Nanoha OC-thread has surpassed the Nanoha Image thread, the Nanoha OC-thread will not just be the largest thread on the Nanoha forums, it will be the largest thread on the entire Animesuki forums!

We need a kiriban for this! Something! Anything!

Speaking of which, I wonder if there's any brave soul out there willing to compile and see how much bluecheese had been piled up...

I wonder if there's over 1, 000, 000 words of profile/stories, etc now...

Originally Posted by Kha

I was joking about it... It's because Kha Aznable of the Twist's Fate timeline is a "sort of" older brother of the Numbers, packed full of equipment just because Scagletti wanted to see how far Kha could go, and Kha wanted to become stronger for more noble reasons. And in that timeline, Kha hi-jacked a top-secret TSAB Knight Armor that took the form of ***dam Wing Ver.Ka. Now that armor was incomplete, but when completed... Let's just say it has 2 Nuclear Barrels instead of one...

No need; in CrosyS, and many other scenarios, shooting Caladbolg II is Sophia's standard Weapon Summon because its so cheap. Uses Falchions too. She's a Archer Weapon Summoner after all.

Hmm... Where is that image...? I had it somewhere... The one of Kluize and all the Devices being flung out... Anyone seen it? It supposed to be in this thread or the image thread somewhere...

How about...

the official release of

CODEX: DAEMONJAEGER

When we reach the pinnacle, everything comes back to its beginning...

Once upon a time, everything began... it was the beginning of Der Kleriker.

And soon, people flocked as it grew...

We have enough characters and materials to have a Legend of Magical Heroes anime.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Finally finished the exams! Now to more backlog-breaking!

Congratulations on the 8k get, Kha!

It's been a while!!! Gratz, Aniki!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And Kha and Aaron go for 8000th Post and 8000th Reply!!!! ONWARDS TO 10000!!!!!!

BREAKING THROUGH THE FORUM'S FATE!!!!

??????: That's it, Aniki! BREAK THROUGH THE HEAVENS WITH YOUR DRILL!!!

Kha: Don't you mean "Shield"?

??????: No matter! SPIN ON!

Tausend Kreuz: [Exprozion!]

??????: THIS IS IT!

THE "I WON'T LET YOU GET AWAY--"
Kha: AVENGES SCHIELD!

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I'll start brainstorming about the details. I'll link this to some investigations regarding the Choukijin antagonists.

Choukijin? So the Phantoms would be involved sooner or later then? Like where this is going

Mind if Mai comes along for the ride?

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Lowe, Kha and Aaron:

Well, you know, Nove's a tad too temperamental, and when and if she snaps...

So I think Enuma is an apt choice, so sue me.

And just a brief note, that'd be Enkidu with the chains, not Enuma Elish, which is a blade...and...blade, gauntlet...eh, close enough.

Or...would you rather I used this?

[Final h4xx]

Spoiler for Size:

Imagine that in gauntlet form...

Nove...or Subaru, even (): Ekusu...

*The gears spin, and the gauntlet glows a bright gold, projecting a beam of energy.*

CALIBAAAAAA!!!

[End final h4xx]

*Runs for the hills.*

DOES NOT COMPUTE

I'd rather see Subaru do this:



Subaru: BROOOOKEN PHAAAAAANTOM!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Hmm... I realized I haven't exactly written anything new nor posted in a while...

*looks around*

Looks like I better prep something up for 8k.

Too late

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Urgh... powerful indeed.

Finally...so this is the power of der Kleriker.

His power? He's not even done yet

Originally Posted by Kha

When we reach the pinnacle, everything comes back to its beginning...

Once upon a time, everything began... it was the beginning of Der Kleriker.

And soon, people flocked as it grew...

We have enough characters and materials to have a Legend of Magical Heroes anime.

Such a project would reek of so much EPICSIUM that it could fill and expand that void in the universe!!!!!

Originally Posted by Kha

It's been a while!!!

??????: That's it, Aniki! BREAK THROUGH THE HEAVENS WITH YOUR DRILL!!!

Kha: Don't you mean "Shield"?

??????: No matter! SPIN ON!

Tausend Kreuz: [Exprozion!]

??????: THIS IS IT!

THE "I WON'T LET YOU GET AWAY--"
Kha: AVENGES SCHIELD!

*Cries Manly Tears*

ORE WO DARE DATTO OMOTTE YARU!!!!

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

[Final h4xx]

Spoiler for Size:

Imagine that in gauntlet form...

Nove...or Subaru, even (): Ekusu...

*The gears spin, and the gauntlet glows a bright gold, projecting a beam of energy.*

CALIBAAAAAA!!!

[End final h4xx]

*Runs for the hills.*

Sakura Zaki: That strike is but a clone... (raises hand)

The true form of righteousness is the Blade of Justice!

*wind and light begins to gather*



Sakura: My heart, my book, my power... Reveal thy true form to me!



Sakura: Sword of Seiou! By the Covenant, your Empress commands! RELEASE!

*the roiling energies reach a climax and erupt*



Sakura: I HAVE THE POWER!!!

??????: Oh dang her armor doesn't change to a bikini--

Sakura:
??????:

*X-CALIBRE >>>>>>>> ??????*

Who is ?????? ?

??????: ORE WO DARE DATTO OMOTTE YARU!!!!

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Too late

Doesn't matter. I always have some piece or so everytime the barrier's broken. It's just it'll be slower this time.

Technically, I've already finished the Aurion/Saga talk piece... and some things are progressing relatively well...

Speaking of which, I still need to finish that thing selkirk showed.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

His power? He's not even done yet

But 80%, right? That should be good enough of a gauge.

Plus since it's like a compilation OVA of Der Kleriker Kronikles, those who had been around from the beginning oh his birth knows a lot of details already.

Plus, it'd make for a good template, should I ever find the need to fill in voids in profiles I find lacking...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Such a project would reek of so much EPICSIUM that it could fill and expand that void in the universe!!!!!

Too bad there's no Reinhart equivalent, if Kha's going to be Yang-Wen Li.

Or...maybe...Kluize!?

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Choukijin? So the Phantoms would be involved sooner or later then? Like where this is going

Mind if Mai comes along for the ride?

Of course! I'm planning on having Mai save their butts and preserve Aurion's cover.

Originally Posted by Kha

Spoiler for size:

Sakura Zaki: That strike is but a clone... (raises hand)

The true form of righteousness is the Blade of Justice!

*wind and light begins to gather*



Sakura: My heart, my book, my power... Reveal thy true form to me!



Sakura: Sword of Seiou! By the Covenant, your Empress commands! RELEASE!

*the roiling energies reach a climax and erupt*



Sakura: I HAVE THE POWER!!!

??????: Oh dang her armor doesn't change to a bikini--

Sakura:
??????:

*X-CALIBRE >>>>>>>> ??????*

Who is ?????? ?

??????: ORE WO DARE DATTO OMOTTE YARU!!!!

I've just seen the incomplete Daemonjaeger. All I can say is.


@Nighty: Wow, finished? When can we see it?

[Tk3997]

I HAVE THE POWER!!!

Lulz He-man!!!

Anyway I'm off to bed (at 7 AM, what can I say night owl! probably why I'm laughing at a He-man joke ) I'll plow this backlog and maybe make a content post or at least comments sometime this afternoon probably.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Kha

Sakura Zaki: That strike is but a clone... (raises hand)

The true form of righteousness is the Blade of Justice!

*wind and light begins to gather*

Sakura: My heart, my book, my power... Reveal thy true form to me!

Sakura: Sword of Seiou! By the Covenant, your Empress commands! RELEASE!

*the roiling energies reach a climax and erupt*

Sakura: I HAVE THE POWER!!!

??????: Oh dang her armor doesn't change to a bikini--

Sakura:
??????:

*X-CALIBRE >>>>>>>> ??????*

Who is ?????? ?

??????: ORE WO DARE DATTO OMOTTE YARU!!!!

Everything from FSN to CCS to He-Man to GL?

*head asplodes*

So, who was the poor person wondering about Sakura's choice of clothes?

*runs*

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Doesn't matter. I always have some piece or so everytime the barrier's broken. It's just it'll be slower this time.

Technically, I've already finished the Aurion/Saga talk piece... and some things are progressing relatively well...

Speaking of which, I still need to finish that thing selkirk showed.

just have to wait for your chance at 10K

Will be waiting for that A/S piece

Originally Posted by Nightengale

But 80%, right? That should be good enough of a gauge.

Plus since it's like a compilation OVA of Der Kleriker Kronikles, those who had been around from the beginning oh his birth knows a lot of details already.

Plus, it'd make for a good template, should I ever find the need to fill in voids in profiles I find lacking...

It's good as a reference though. An incredibly massive OC reference

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Of course! I'm planning on having Mai save their butts and preserve Aurion's cover.

Aurion: Uhm... This is my niece, Black Selena
Mai: ...

Dozo.

Aurion: As you can see she's incredibly shy, but to imagine that she went all this way here to meet her beloved father, who manages this place. And due to his busy schedule she has not seen him for a long time. Would you dare rob her of that chance to be together with her dear father?

Secretary: ... ehm... I'll see to it right away sir.

Mai: ...

[Liingo]

Congrats on the 8k post and replies Kha, Aaron

*Sigh* Too busy atm to do much work.... Missing out on some epic stuff in here...

@ Lowe

It's... It's... It's GARLOCK!!!!!!!!!!!!

We so need an OC that's capable of gattai, don't you think

I'll be back later on...

[haiz123321]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Coaching? Don't you mean training? Coaching makes it sound like we are talking about a soccer team.

Hmm, u got a point there, i changed it to mentor instead of a coach lol XD

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@Nighty: Wow, finished? When can we see it?

In a day or 2. I still need to check on some things too.

~~~

Maybe we should introduce a Lost Logia instead...

I mean, Cradle of the Saint King? If a Cradle is already that huge... imagine the King's first place of worship/church/cathedral...

Not to mention how is it able to draw magical powers from Mid-childa's... moon...

Vivio: Ahh~~ That is my... Cathedral...

Spoiler for Gurren Lagann 22:

Garcadia! The Cathedral of the Saint King!

*runs from Exa Core Drill*

[Liingo]

You know.. if that was truly Vivio's cathedral, alot of us wouldn't have so many complaints

Spoiler for for GL 22:

Is there another name for the Cathedral Terra? Although I wouldn't be surprised if in ep23 it's been renamed to XX-Gurren, or Gurren-XX

ALthough it wouldn't be fun with that as Vivio's cathedral without massive hotblood

[Dream_Traveller]

Alas, my Excalibur has been bested by your efforts, good Sir Kha! And Damonjager is...

Can't wait to see more of his power...indeed, intrigued I am.

However, there is but one Phantasm that conquer even your combo! Able to kill in a single blow without the enemy even realizing such...I present to you...

ZABANIYA!

()

Spoiler for Said Phantasm:

This guy kinda reminds me of "Dark" V for some reason, despite the fact alternate V looks like Hei, not True Assassin.

@Nightengale's proposed cathedral bit: Dayumn. Loss for words there.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Urgh... powerful indeed.

Finally...so this is the power of der Kleriker.

It's just formatting...

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Nonsense. It's not a pit of madness, it's an abyss of endlessness.

True, it's hard to eat up everything, but just read on slowly and you'll see why this place had lasted so long. Everytime things looked like it could turn stale, new dimensions were added, storylines improved, and we eat up the cheese like never before.

Starting from characters, we've developed histories, timelines, factions, universes... and we're damn proud of it.

And there is no rule. Just limit the h4xx.

Quoted for best advice! This post has become the welcome banner for the thread.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

BUT! BUT! COACH!



Oh right, you've probably never watched Gunbuster.

I found nothing wrong with "Coach" but I never watched Gunbuster either.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Speaking of which, I wonder if there's any brave soul out there willing to compile and see how much bluecheese had been piled up...

I wonder if there's over 1, 000, 000 words of profile/stories, etc now...

I'm still in the middle of my mid-sem testing...

Originally Posted by Nightengale

When we reach the pinnacle, everything comes back to its beginning...

Once upon a time, everything began... it was the beginning of Der Kleriker.

And soon, people flocked as it grew...

We have enough characters and materials to have a Legend of Magical Heroes anime.

I... don't know how should I react, now that my wave of GARphoria has worn off.

But at LoMH. And we can release Super Lyrical Wars Original Generation for PSP!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*Cries Manly Tears*

ORE WO DARE DATTO OMOTTE YARU!!!!

Look! The Thread is Burning!

Originally Posted by Nightengale

But 80%, right? That should be good enough of a gauge.

Plus since it's like a compilation OVA of Der Kleriker Kronikles, those who had been around from the beginning oh his birth knows a lot of details already.

Plus, it'd make for a good template, should I ever find the need to fill in voids in profiles I find lacking...

That's why, for everyone, I'm updating the profile up to Leryk. The incomplete one was up to the start of StrikerS, Strike Lightning. There'll be more there, and we finally get to see Sakura and Sakura Zaki's attacks. Plus a spoiler on the new device coming in 1 or 2 scenarios time.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Too bad there's no Reinhart equivalent, if Kha's going to be Yang-Wen Li.

Or...maybe...Kluize!?

This looks familiar, yet foreign... Where have I seen this before...?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I've just seen the incomplete Daemonjaeger. All I can say is.

I'm worried I can't finish my official release by tonight. Have to overhaul the Knight Armor and Device Synopsis sections, plus generate the list of Traced spells and how they are used, AND get Infinite Spell Forge in there, PLUS the last chapter, then there's still A's to StrikerS...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Everything from FSN to CCS to He-Man to GL?

*head asplodes*

So, who was the poor person wondering about Sakura's choice of clothes?

*runs*

??????: [I blaze from the brightest depths of the Unlimited Imperium Vault! I heed the summons of a thousand maidens crying to be avenged! BELIEVE IN ME THAT I WILL BELIEVE IN YOU! I AM B--]

*thrown away spinning*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Aurion: Uhm... This is my niece, Black Selena
Mai: ...

Dozo.

Aurion: As you can see she's incredibly shy, but to imagine that she went all this way here to meet her beloved father, who manages this place. And due to his busy schedule she has not seen him for a long time. Would you dare rob her of that chance to be together with her dear father?

Secretary: ... ehm... I'll see to it right away sir.

Mai: ...

I can't stop laughing at Mai's reactions...

*chainsaw revs*

Oh cr--

[Cinque]IYAAAAA![/Cinque]

Originally Posted by Liingo

We so need an OC that's capable of gattai, don't you think

I'll be back later on...

* @ Lingo*

*points to DaiStahlMut*



*points to Kor Fuzion ~Climax Shift~ - Yami to Hikari no Tenshi*

OC that's capable of gattai?

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Alas, my Excalibur has been bested by your efforts, good Sir Kha! And Damonjager is...

Can't wait to see more of his power...indeed, intrigued I am.

However, there is but one Phantasm that conquer even your combo! Able to kill in a single blow without the enemy even realizing such...I present to you...

ZABANIYA!

()

Spoiler for Said Phantasm:

This guy kinda reminds me of "Dark" V for some reason, despite the fact alternate V looks like Hei, not True Assassin.

No harm intended, I was just having fun, especially that Sakura sequence was completely spoilerific.

My entire 21ste each have Servant refs (Sophia is the combined worth of 2 Servants and 1 Mage) that's why they all got it in them.

Rider is Lutecia's mama, I hope. Lancer is well... Nanoha "Lancer" Takamichi.

Artei's fighting style is that of an Assassin, but has yet to learn the Noble Illusion "Zabaniya", as that Noble Illusion is one used by the evil and now-outlawed Ecclesarchy, eliminating almost all possibilities to learn that Noble Illusion. The original trumps the fake this round, as always.

And I'd prefer Hei to the "Old Man of the Mountain"...

[Dream_Traveller]

Oh? Interesting with the servant refs, and even more so that Zabaniya is outlawed...I wonder what methods Artei will use, if any, to know of it fully...

Heh. "Old Man of the Mountain", yes...his design is tempting, but, as you stated, Hei's is better.

On a side note, I have gotten an idea for an upgrade to Tre which borders on...rather gargantuan...stuff.

Like so:

Spoiler for Hm...:

You can't see the fist's other side, obviously, but you should get a clear idea of how large it is.

[Liingo]

@ Dream Traveller..

Tre with a power fist....

Does not Compute

[Dream_Traveller]

Eh~, I've made so many non-computable things...

It is an interesting concept, though...and knowing Tre's strength, she could probably use one more than a tad efficiently.