2010-09-12, 20:38 | Link #26961 | |
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.... Okay I mean no, it's true, but only because it seemed like an easier ending than having to actually go into detail and develop Lutecia's issues, you know? It's not like I thought it would be a cruel ending and would get fun out of seeing the readers rage at me for killing Lutecia and dooming Vivio to a cold, lonely existence!
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2010-09-12, 20:40 | Link #26962 | |
"Hey, Isaac?"
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2010-09-12, 21:33 | Link #26963 | |
Goat Herder
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*slaughtered*
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2010-09-12, 22:17 | Link #26967 | |
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Truly a beautiful, if sad, piece. I can certainly relate to the feeling behind it, and I admit I thought I would cry several times while reading through it. Very good job with the short, and I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you feel better. *hugs* Probably by her ghost.
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2010-09-12, 22:31 | Link #26974 | |
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I really empathized with Vivio here, as like I said before I've been to many funerals and I didn't always know how I was supposed to feel or act (usually because I had no idea who the dead person was). In the end you really do need to look to the future and move forward while keeping the departed's memory in your heart. It was a great piece. ... Though I do have to admit it did make me happy to see 'Yuuno-papa'
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2010-09-12, 22:47 | Link #26976 |
"Hey, Isaac?"
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A good piece. Sad, obviously, but good. It relaly gets across the sense of loss very well, but it's also reassuring to see the family coming together to cope. The last bits are really hopeful, they make you feel like 'it will take awhile, but everything will be all right. Never the same, but... all right.'
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2010-09-12, 23:05 | Link #26978 | |
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But losing a father... I know how that goes all too well, so this fic really hit close to home. Like I said in the rep, I really hope writing this fic helped you.
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2010-09-12, 23:40 | Link #26980 | |
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Well it was still good and definitely needed the reworking to flow into Yuuno's enlightenment moment. Now that he's knows what the problem is, maybe we'll be back on Mid for the big showdown before we know it.
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