2011-08-01, 18:36 | Link #1822 |
Portable Dude Mk. II
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: All ghillied up spying on someone ~2,000 yards away using telescope sights.
Age: 35
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6484074/4/Unlucky_Star
And to think I almost forgot about this... I blame it all on work. And I've been getting more tired and tired lately right after coming back from work...
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2011-08-02, 09:53 | Link #1828 | |
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2011-08-02, 10:15 | Link #1829 |
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Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: Dai Korai Teikoku
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An idea: Accelerator and Yuriko attempt to get Touma to F**K either one of them. When Touma attempts to stall, the two try to bluff the opposite side into giving up, eventually leading to a Accelerator x Yuriko "scene" as Touma watches, stunned.
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2011-08-02, 10:58 | Link #1831 | |
I crack you up
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Age: 30
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2011-08-03, 00:49 | Link #1834 |
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Join Date: Sep 2010
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.....After reading the previous page, i have a favor to ask...could someone put a warning sign on the top of the page?...warning about the madness to come of course, also..
FUCK YEAH!!! 3 OF MY FAVORITE STORIES ARE BEING UPDATED AT THE SAME TIME?!, THIS IS HEAVEN!! and the cracks are good too Last edited by chrono9472; 2011-08-03 at 09:42. |
2011-08-03, 03:14 | Link #1835 |
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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Lal: Captain! The thread is still being bombarded by too much crack. Holographic field integrity has dropped to 35.62%.
Tsubomi: Return fire! [Uminari no Felli, Level 4 Hydro Pump]. Shiina: Nandeyane...? >.>
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2011-08-03, 03:46 | Link #1836 | |
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Ok, I'm not criticizing you or anything. In fact, the character profile is awesome in so many ways that words fail me. However, wouldn't manipulating blood flow and all the stuff with it be... um... TOO high level? I mean, Misaka 10032 is a Level 3 but she can't see the electromagnetic fields emitted by people or do any cyber-hacking like Mikoto. I dunno, blood flow seems more like a Level 5 range power for a Hydrokinetic to me. Especially when you're going into into subatomics and healing. Just my two cents. |
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2011-08-03, 07:49 | Link #1838 | |
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2) Its not really that subatomical. She's just stopping unwanted fluid motion out of cells and blood vessels. The cells then realign on their own and "stick" together temporarily with Van der Waal's forces. The moment she lets go, the person bleeds out again. Cells are small, but they aren't that small. I agree that maybe "healing" wasn't the right word to use here, but I find this power to be a reasonable approximation of "Cure Light Wounds". Or "bandaging". She can reduce the size of bruises or move inflammatory chemicals away from an injury site using osmotic drag, but ultimately, it requires a functioning clotting system, and very often no breaks in the skin. Damaged vessels that can be quickly replugged by platelets and small amounts of fibrin will be "healed" by her. Rupture a vein, or even an artery, that would burst the moment she lets go. 3) I know the power straddles the line between being useful in a tactical situation (Level 4), and useful in daily life (Level 3). I ruled it to be Level 3 because of the need to be in touch-range to perform any useful healing (and let's face it, a normal person with a sword is not tactically useful) and that Felli is very unwilling to kill. This may turn out to me being overly zealous in creating a team medic and pushing the level too far below that which is acceptable, but my reasons are as above. I've also modified the profile after reading it again, so that the Level 3 limits are more prominent. I hope to pick you guys’ brains for a bit for all my profiles after all. So, thanks for reviewing.
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2011-08-03, 11:11 | Link #1839 |
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7238716/...ile_Simplicity
So, I've read the second chapter of Fragile Simplicity by stormwolfex and I have to say that it's actually pretty good. He says he doesn't have a plot for it yet or so it would seem. <.< Still, I laughed at the Awaki and Accelerator part. It was like having UST and BST in the same room and the place was flooded with it. I almost thought they were going to start going at it the moment Yomikawa left the room. Still, it was kinda odd for him to kill off all but one of the SISTERS for Radio Noise. But I suppose it would be natural for Crowley to have fail safes in curbing Aiwass and possibly Kazakiri. I wanna know what happens to the cast in this story set in the future though. |
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