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tsunade666 · 2010-09-30, 11:27

collapse or easter fantasy fanfic also updated.

chaoz the new chapter look shorter for me than the past one. Well great update.

Chaos2Frozen · 2010-09-30, 18:56

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Originally Posted by tsunade666

chaoz the new chapter look shorter for me than the past one. Well great update.

Actually, it was 200 words more

But I can see what you mean, my intention was to speed up the process as I'm sure you all have noticed- Alot of this is the same formula. I want to get out of this House as soon as possible and move on to the next part of the story

Don't worry, the next chapter would complete this 'hour', and if you played the game, you'll know what's coming

As for a reference, what do you think is better? Less but Longer chapters, or More but Shorter chapters?

tsunade666 · 2010-09-30, 23:31

hmmm I don't know. Though for me the chapters about touma running wild trying to find the key and index solving the case inside the mansion feels longer.

Its just when I start reading it...... it's already finish. That kind of feeling.

Chaos2Frozen · 2010-09-30, 23:50

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Originally Posted by tsunade666

hmmm I don't know. Though for me the chapters about touma running wild trying to find the key and index solving the case inside the mansion feels longer.

That's because they are. I written about 4000-6000 words for them, 2-3 times as much as the recent two

Then again, it could also be contributed to the fact that I was still introducing the 'world', I doubt people would like to know the details about every dark and creepy room, and every dark and creepy encounter right? Cause they're really alot of them

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Its just when I start reading it...... it's already finish. That kind of feeling.

Hmm, I understand. I'll see what I can to return to the original format for the second half of this fic.

Chaos2Frozen · 2010-10-03, 06:45

Managed to some how complete it over the weekend...

5000 words, should be enough I hope

End of the Fourth Hour

The investigation is now over, the tempo will change.

MeisterBabylon · 2010-10-04, 07:28

*remains buried under pile of assignments and tests*

X_x

Chaos2Frozen · 2010-10-04, 07:44

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

*remains buried under pile of assignments and tests*

X_x

Mah~Mah~ The second season should get you cranking ideas again soon enough

blitz1/2 · 2010-10-04, 09:04

I think this should go under the fanart section, but it's connected to the Collapse of the Eastern Fantasy. So, I was undecided. Compared to my first Nue/Touma pic, this really looks epic.

Spoiler for for fanart:

Cosmic Eagle · 2010-10-08, 02:20

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

I think this should go under the fanart section, but it's connected to the Collapse of the Eastern Fantasy. So, I was undecided. Compared to my first Nue/Touma pic, this really looks epic.

Spoiler for for fanart:

I still think Touma x Scarlet sisters is effing hot...

blitz1/2 · 2010-10-08, 07:37

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Originally Posted by Cosmic Eagle

I still think Touma x Scarlet sisters is effing hot...

I can work on that next, if you want.

Cosmic Eagle · 2010-10-08, 07:53

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

I can work on that next, if you want.

Yeah.......more gothic loli is always win

Ashaman · 2010-10-10, 13:54

New project by me:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6387903/...ersion_Project

Its only a short first chapter/prologue.

Hope you enjoy.

Also, Shiro and Kuro update:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6013204/3/Shiro_and_Kuro

blitz1/2 · 2010-10-12, 10:58

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Originally Posted by Cosmic Eagle

Yeah.......more gothic loli is always win

For Flere's chapter 8 of collapse of eastern fantasy. and Cosmic's request I guess.

Spoiler for remitouma:

outerelf · 2010-10-20, 12:41

Going to pimp my own story:

Title: Akihabara
Summery: Onee-sans, Tsundere's, Dominatrix ladies, oh my! Who shall win this fight? Who will win the heart of the spiky-haired boy? *Warning: This may contain some High Octane Nightmare Fuel and the writer will not be held responsible for any mental images.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6413055/1/Akihabara

MrTerrorist · 2010-10-20, 13:24

^
rofl!! Best. Fanfic. ever!!!

tsunade666 · 2010-10-20, 13:41

I leave a review their.

It gone longer but a lot funnier.

I wish you would continue it but the event end with tsuchimikado getting bed slap.

btw I use tsun on other site.

Master Assassin · 2010-10-20, 18:41

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Originally Posted by outerelf

Going to pimp my own story:

Title: Akihabara
Summery: Onee-sans, Tsundere's, Dominatrix ladies, oh my! Who shall win this fight? Who will win the hart of the spiky-haired boy? *Warning: This may contain some High Octane Nightmare Fuel and the writer will not be held responsible for any mental images.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6413055/1/Akihabara

Just to correct: It's "Kanzaki". I was wondering for a while when I saw it as "Kanazaki" o_o

anyways.

I almost fell out of my chair laughing

outerelf · 2010-10-20, 19:26

*looks at fic* *bangs head repeatedly against the wall* I'll go fix that now. Thanks for pointing it out... Sorry that I missed that.

Anyways,

I'm glad you like

I do try hard.

Flere821 · 2010-10-20, 22:26

Wow... that was a good laugh, if ignoring that those people will probably never meet up like that in Akihabara...

Still, a good read, thanks =D

Cosmic Eagle · 2010-10-20, 22:36

You know I'm now actually worried about walking alone in Akihabara should I ever vist Tokyo....

2010-09-30, 11:27	Link #241
tsunade666 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: In my room	collapse or easter fantasy fanfic also updated. chaoz the new chapter look shorter for me than the past one. Well great update. __________________ To A certain Lonely Hero

2010-09-30, 23:31	Link #243
tsunade666 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: In my room	hmmm I don't know. Though for me the chapters about touma running wild trying to find the key and index solving the case inside the mansion feels longer. Its just when I start reading it...... it's already finish. That kind of feeling. __________________ To A certain Lonely Hero

2010-10-03, 06:45	Link #245
Chaos2Frozen We're Back Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Redgrave City Age: 35	Managed to some how complete it over the weekend... 5000 words, should be enough I hope End of the Fourth Hour The investigation is now over, the tempo will change. __________________ Devil Trigger , Subhuman , Crimson Cloud , Mad Qualia

2010-10-04, 07:28	Link #246
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	remains buried under pile of assignments and tests X_x __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2010-10-04, 09:04	Link #248
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	I think this should go under the fanart section, but it's connected to the Collapse of the Eastern Fantasy. So, I was undecided. Compared to my first Nue/Touma pic, this really looks epic. Spoiler for for fanart: __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

2010-10-10, 13:54	Link #252
Ashaman Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Age: 34	New project by me: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6387903/...ersion_Project Its only a short first chapter/prologue. Hope you enjoy. Also, Shiro and Kuro update: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6013204/3/Shiro_and_Kuro __________________ Last edited by Ashaman; 2010-10-10 at 15:52.

2010-10-20, 12:41	Link #254
outerelf Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Bouncing	Going to pimp my own story: Title: Akihabara Summery: Onee-sans, Tsundere's, Dominatrix ladies, oh my! Who shall win this fight? Who will win the heart of the spiky-haired boy? Warning: This may contain some High Octane Nightmare Fuel and the writer will not be held responsible for any mental images. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6413055/1/Akihabara Last edited by outerelf; 2010-10-21 at 21:10.*

2010-10-20, 13:24	Link #255
MrTerrorist Takao Tsundere Cruiser Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Classified	^ rofl!! Best. Fanfic. ever!!! __________________

2010-10-20, 13:41	Link #256
tsunade666 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: In my room	I leave a review their. It gone longer but a lot funnier. I wish you would continue it but the event end with tsuchimikado getting bed slap. btw I use tsun on other site. __________________ To A certain Lonely Hero

2010-10-20, 19:26	Link #258
outerelf Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Bouncing	looks at fic bangs head repeatedly against the wall I'll go fix that now. Thanks for pointing it out... Sorry that I missed that. Anyways, I'm glad you like I do try hard.

2010-10-20, 22:26	Link #259
Flere821 Lurker Join Date: Aug 2010	Wow... that was a good laugh, if ignoring that those people will probably never meet up like that in Akihabara... Still, a good read, thanks =D

2010-10-20, 22:36	Link #260
Cosmic Eagle 今宵の虎徹は血に飢えている Join Date: Jan 2009	You know I'm now actually worried about walking alone in Akihabara should I ever vist Tokyo.... __________________