2014-07-24, 14:04 | Link #1661 | |
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The characterization writing (and dialogue) are definitely the weaker aspect of Aldnoah Zero thus far. That's my main criticism for this show. Even trainwrecks like Valvrave which had obviously a weaker world building and ridiculous premise had more compelling characterization (to use a recent example).
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2014-07-24, 14:08 | Link #1662 | |
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I can't call him a "sissy" at all. It's not cowardice persay, it's self-preservation. It's not like he's backing down to school yard bullies. These are an entire country of bullies that have a say in whether he lives or dies. That's a big difference. This is a group that controls him and has done their best to break him. And after 5 years of living as a slave, I'm guessing he has adopted a subservient behavior just to survive. However, we can see from last week that he hasn't broken, and somewhere in there, he still has the strength and resolve to rebel when he is pushed to the limit, or when someone he truly cares about is threatened. However, this emergence of courage takes time, especially for someone who is used to living a certain way. But I believe Slaine will shake off his chains eventually. It will just take some time.
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2014-07-24, 14:12 | Link #1663 |
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I think it's gonna start developing this episode.
The groundwork that was laid out from the first 3 is probably gonna give us better characterization since we can now see it from different perspectives. Inaho's side is planning the next move while Slaine's solo act is probably him finding out more about who came up with the assassination attempt. About VVV: It's been said earlier, but it's a nice reunion to see almost everyone show up except KleenexGhost and Destined Fate. Shadow too.
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2014-07-24, 14:17 | Link #1664 | |
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But yeah, hopefully uh characterization starts trucking because so far I'm just at loss about what to do with the characters in general. My favorite is Yuki, but Marito and Slaine are also good. I guess of the younger girls, Inko might become my favorite with some tweaks. It really threw me off none of them reacted strongly to a friend's death. Yes, it is. Nice to see you all, guys!
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2014-07-24, 14:25 | Link #1666 |
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Archetypes don't matter, it's how they are written.
She doesn't. Nobody is bullying or beating up Rayet so far. She was established (in a picture) to have lived happily with her father too. She's also part of a conspiracy to assassinate someone to start a war. Gets no sympathy points from me. She doesn't even care about her actions or her father's actions, all she is sad about is that her father is dead (she was even smug and satisfied with the results before this happened). Slaine, in the meantime, was displayed very upset about the war and not just about Asseylum's death. There's such a difference in moral compass I can barely start... I don't know if they are trying to sold her as "sympathetic", but they surely failed if they were aiming for this which, again, I attribute to poor writing.
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2014-07-24, 14:30 | Link #1667 |
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You guys forgot finalfury,
Now back to topic, no love for the females? The princess is really warming me up to her, I mean where else can I gets such a trigger happy princess? Beside the facts that she friggin cute(not as much as Saki), she is actually doing something instead of being idle!
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2014-07-24, 14:35 | Link #1668 | |
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2014-07-24, 14:37 | Link #1669 | ||
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I have high hopes pined on Inko. Rayet could be interesting, I suppose, depends again how they'll approach her. I'm all for self-serving, selfish borderline sociopath characters as long they have some decent justification or charisma (two things she's sorely lacking so far). So in order of interest: Yuki first, Inko distant second, then the princess and lastly Rayet. The other female characters look a bit more secondary and it's to early to tell.
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2014-07-24, 15:02 | Link #1670 | |
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As far is known story goes, Slain has it better. why? his parents cause of death is unknown to us, he has the princess that knows his story and cares for him (either as a friend or whatever) Rayet saw her father killed, was betrayed by her own people, has no one left. As far as martian hierarchy, the sleeper agents sent to earth where promised knighthood, meaning they where probably piss poor on Mars. And fuck Slain, even though his own feelings towards the war or the death of the princess, that didn't stop him from flying that plane and killing his own people. Not until he saw the princess alive did he take selfish action. And you claim Rayet's moral compass is fucked up? Just because she's on the other side of the fence, she fought for what she believed in, for her people and planet, untill she was betrayed. Slain was following orders, just because he was to told to do so and because he was scared to get caned again, without taking his own responsibility. |
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2014-07-24, 15:07 | Link #1671 |
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Don't know what series you're watching but Slaine never killed a Terran as far as we know it.
No, she fought because they were promised Knighthood. That's selfish no matter how you look at it.
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Now self-serving bastards can be interesting too, L-Elf was certainly one of those but he had charisma and coolness to actually pull it off to make the audience not hate him. Something Rayet lacks so far. When she gains it, my opinion of her will change. I don't mind obviously moral corrupted characters, I quite enjoy them a bit, but they need to be charismatic too. Hey my favorite Seed character is Fllay who is similar to Rayet but she actually had... a personality? Rayet so far doesn't even have a personality to tell she's interesting or not. Even Inaho is more defined than she is. Yeah, and? He was self-doubting and upset. Rayet was giddy about the war. She only felt bad because her dad is dead. So sympathetic!
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2014-07-24, 15:21 | Link #1673 |
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hmz you're right it's worse then that, he just sits in his cockpit with his eyes closed while all around him F22's are being shot out of the sky by Trillram and a helpless guy on a parachute gets splattered by his fuselage.
Oh and he shoots at Calm with intend to kill, plus poitns for apologizing before trying to turn him into swiss cheese though. |
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2014-07-24, 15:37 | Link #1676 | |
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I think is more fair to label this, following troupes as generalization, she's the Token Evil Team Mate of Earthlings to Slaine's Token Good Team Mate of Martians.
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2014-07-24, 16:03 | Link #1677 |
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I thought Rayet had just smiled while reassuring her father that the mission hadn't been a burden for her, but after reviewing that bit it does seem like she smirks a bit afterwards. Could be the animation not giving quite the right impression but with the generally high production values on this show that's less likely than with a lot of other series.
She could potentially serve the role of a typical Martian who looks down on earthlings who ends up having a change in perspective. One does get the impression contempt for earthlings is fairly widespread among the Martians. Though actually here's one big problem with Rayet's character: if she's been on Earth a long time, then shouldn't she have connections there? And if its just a short term mission then why did daddy even bother to bring her along? I'll also admit her character highlights how cute girls often get a free pass where a male character might not. |
2014-07-24, 16:05 | Link #1678 |
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Tbh, I acknowledge that Slaine is a treasure trove of untapped character potential & development. You guys also know how much of an L-Elf fanboy I am, but for some reason, I just can't get into Slaine. I know he's the most "human" character so far, but I'm not really a fan of reserved characters or characters that are completely submissive to others.
In this regard, I find myself liking Inaho more, despite the flaws & machine-like behavior, I'm holding onto the fleeting hope that character development will fix this problem. I also look more forward to Inaho's interactions with the princess over Slaine's. That's because all Slaine's gonna do is blush at every sentence she says & be like "Princess" while making a worried face. At least with Inaho, we'll get to see some actual conversation. Besides, we can already tell that Slaine loves her, so there's not really much to expand on except for making the feelings mutual, in Inaho's case, that's a treasure trove for development & interaction waiting to happen.
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But Thess is correct that outside of the last few episodes of Valvrave, the two of us have gotten along pretty well. Right now, I agree with Thess on Slaine, and I'm still deciding what I think of Asseylum and Inaho. All three characters have good potential, but Slaine is the one that feels the most real and sensible to me so far. Playmaker2k put it very well with... Quote:
The only thing I find a bit puzzling about Slaine is why he chose to join the Martians in the first place, although I suppose if his father dragged him along at a young age there wasn't much a kid could do about that. All of Slaine's words and actions in the anime thus far make perfect sense to me, and in fact are nicely balanced. He really had no choice but to gun down Trillram if he wanted to ensure Asseylum's safety, but even then, you could tell he's not some cold-blooded murderer. So that showed courage on his part, in my view. He didn't do it because he enjoyed it (however much we the viewers might have enjoyed it ), he did it because it was likely necessary in order to protect someone important to him.
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