Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[TheShinySword]

GO GO SHEBA! Don't miss your opportunity to read this people

Knight: I love Quack!Fate more and more every short >.> Leti and Lindy *gigglesnort*

[Sheba]

My dice have decided.

Sorry Laith, it will be

B

[Laith]

And B wins... and you get NanosFate

well you lose this

Spoiler for The Dance of the Star:

Once upon a time
a star wanted to dance
The star tried and tried
but it always failed
The sun decided to help the star
in exchange for her glimmering light
the star accepted
and learned to dance
but without its light
the star lost its enjoyment for dance
the poor start had lost
its light and its dance

What does it mean? You´ll never know

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Laith

well you lose this

Spoiler for The Dance of the Star:

Once upon a time
a star wanted to dance
The star tried and tried
but it always failed
The sun decided to help the star
in exchange for her glimmering light
the star accepted
and learned to dance
but without its light
the star lost its enjoyment for dance
the poor start had lost
its light and its dance

What does it mean? You´ll never know

I read it and I kept thinking "a star is a sun... (and vice-versa)"

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

I read it and I kept thinking "a star is a sun... (and vice-versa)"

And the sun is as hot as Paris Hilton (I swear I saw that on wikipedia once)


TT-TT Laith dun torture your poor beta like that

[Laith]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

I read it and I kept thinking "a star is a sun... (and vice-versa)"

But in ye olde times, a star was not a sun.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

And the sun is as hot as Paris Hilton (I swear I saw that on wikipedia once)


TT-TT Laith dun torture your poor beta like that

...I am Ebil >=3

[NorthernFallout]

Make them suffer! *Laughs manically and goes back the depth of the darkness*

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Current standings for Divided Destiny:

A) IIIII
B) IIII
C)

1.5 hours remaining.

[ThEJeDI6911]

A Fighting crime, trying to save the world Here they come just in time, the Powerpuff Girls Powerpuff!

Made it in time~.

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by Laith

And B wins... and you get NanosFate

well you lose this

Spoiler for The Dance of the Star:

Once upon a time
a star wanted to dance
The star tried and tried
but it always failed
The sun decided to help the star
in exchange for her glimmering light
the star accepted
and learned to dance
but without its light
the star lost its enjoyment for dance
the poor start had lost
its light and its dance

What does it mean? You´ll never know

So does that mean we'll never get to meet Hayate? Or just not in the chapter that you are currently writing?

[Laith]

Oh Hayate is going to appear... MUCH later.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Laith

Oh Hayate is going to appear... MUCH later.

*glares at B voters* I blame you for our lack of Hayate

[Tempy]

Originally Posted by Laith

Oh Hayate is going to appear... MUCH later.

Once again, Hayate has been shafted in favor of Nanoha and Fate.

Hayachin... isn't it sad...

(Cookies if you get the reference)

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Tempest Dynasty

Once again, Hayate has been shafted in favor of Nanoha and Fate.

Hayachin... isn't it sad...

(Cookies if you get the reference)

l to the o to the l Isn't it sad Sacchin

[Laith]

Is indeed sad for sacchin... i mean hayate

Spoiler for A Chained Life pt1:

It was a normal day in the bazaar. People were buying their daily needs, hearing the latest rumors and, for the ones that could afford it, buying slaves. A people´s dealer, as some called them, was the best way to make a life if one wasn´t a noble.

One may wonder how they could sell humans at the best profit without being arrested. Though in any other reign these sellers could be killed for this act, in Cranagan, thanks to the Testarossa´s royal family, this business was overlooked. After all who would clean their castle if there were no slaves? Not them certainly.
In this particular place, one of the main sellers, a brunette with blue eyes, owner of a bar, the Raising Heart to be precise, was giving what many would call a bargain. She was giving away three kids, one boy and two girls, for the minimal price of five gold coins.

“Good evening ladies and gentlemen, come on, come on, pass and see the new offer that I do to anyone that wants it. These three kids, young strong, can be yours for the minimal price of five gold coins. That’s right, three little workers for that minimal price. Who wants these young yet efficient workers? They may not seem like nothing right now but they will be a great help in the future. Who says me?” the owner of the bar, Nanoha Takamachi, was trying to get the people around her to buy her new product, but so far she had no luck. Perhaps it was that the kids were harder to educate, or that this time the buyers were interested in something else. “Come on don’t be shy, this offer is just today”

These three kids, a blond with green eyes, a red haired with blue eyes and a blonde with one red eye and a green eye, were scared about what could become of them, although only one, the blonde, showed it. The blond was trying to hide his fear in a calmed face, while the red haired was had an angered one.

“I accept your offer,” a woman with raven hair and purple spoke. The always hailed, Lord of Cranagan, Precia Testarossa had arrived to the bar. It was not a common sight that a person of such importance entered a place like this, officially at least. “And I´ll give you ten gold coins instead of five.”

“Why, thank you my lady. I appreciate your generosity,” Nanoha bowed to Precia in a respectful and somewhat mocking mode. “Why doesn’t the Lord of this beautiful land accompany me so we can wrap this transaction?” she asked. Without waiting for a response she walked into a door at the other side of the room. As she expected, Precia followed her into the room.

The room was small as it only had table and four chairs. It was mostly used to resolve important matters, as the owner of the bar called them, and this one was one of those.
ç
“So Precia,” Nanoha dropped the formalities. It was only known by their closest friends that the two of them were, as a lack of a better term, friends. Although the age difference was over ten years, the two of them could understand each other. Except for certain times when they did random actions like this one. “Why do you need these three? It’s not like you to suddenly buy new workers.”

“Why I just took pity on the kids, after all it looked like they were about to suffer in the hands of the white devil,” Precia and Nanoha smiled. It was known that the owner of Raising Heart was merciless with almost anyone, the only exception being her lover and waitress of the bar, the lord in front of her and her personal guardian. “Besides its good for your business, isn’t it?

“Don’t try to weasel out of this my lady.” the brunette retorted. It was natural curiosity that the merchant felt. “Is it for our dear and cute Fate?” the brunette smirked. There was only one reason why Precia Testarossa would do something so abnormal, and that was her daughter.

“You know me too well Nanoha,” the black haired replied with a smile on her face “She has been down lately after Alicia left, so I decided to get her some friends to play with. What a coincidence that you were making such an offer,”

“Indeed, what a coincidence,” the brunette said. But as she had learned, there were no coincidences in this life. “So want me to take them to your castle right away or you will wait ´till I say goodbye?” the brunette giggled.

“Whatever you like my friend” the black haired woman stood up from her chair “But try to not leave any marks” with that said the lord of Cranagan left the room.

Wait it says pt1? And its not NanoFate? At least its not Yunnoha

[Evangelion Xgouki]

And the polls are now closed :3

The final count for Divided Destiny:

A) IIIIII
B) IIII
C)

And Fate shall be heading out to see if her friend is burning the midnight oil :3[/QUOTE]

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Laith

Is indeed sad for sacchin... i mean hayate

Spoiler for A Chained Life pt1:

It was a normal day in the bazaar. People were buying their daily needs, hearing the latest rumors and, for the ones that could afford it, buying slaves. A people´s dealer, as some called them, was the best way to make a life if one wasn´t a noble.

One may wonder how they could sell humans at the best profit without being arrested. Though in any other reign these sellers could be killed for this act, in Cranagan, thanks to the Testarossa´s royal family, this business was overlooked. After all who would clean their castle if there were no slaves? Not them certainly.
In this particular place, one of the main sellers, a brunette with blue eyes, owner of a bar, the Raising Heart to be precise, was giving what many would call a bargain. She was giving away three kids, one boy and two girls, for the minimal price of five gold coins.

“Good evening ladies and gentlemen, come on, come on, pass and see the new offer that I do to anyone that wants it. These three kids, young strong, can be yours for the minimal price of five gold coins. That’s right, three little workers for that minimal price. Who wants these young yet efficient workers? They may not seem like nothing right now but they will be a great help in the future. Who says me?” the owner of the bar, Nanoha Takamachi, was trying to get the people around her to buy her new product, but so far she had no luck. Perhaps it was that the kids were harder to educate, or that this time the buyers were interested in something else. “Come on don’t be shy, this offer is just today”

These three kids, a blond with green eyes, a red haired with blue eyes and a blonde with one red eye and a green eye, were scared about what could become of them, although only one, the blonde, showed it. The blond was trying to hide his fear in a calmed face, while the red haired was had an angered one.

“I accept your offer,” a woman with raven hair and purple spoke. The always hailed, Lord of Cranagan, Precia Testarossa had arrived to the bar. It was not a common sight that a person of such importance entered a place like this, officially at least. “And I´ll give you ten gold coins instead of five.”

“Why, thank you my lady. I appreciate your generosity,” Nanoha bowed to Precia in a respectful and somewhat mocking mode. “Why doesn’t the Lord of this beautiful land accompany me so we can wrap this transaction?” she asked. Without waiting for a response she walked into a door at the other side of the room. As she expected, Precia followed her into the room.

The room was small as it only had table and four chairs. It was mostly used to resolve important matters, as the owner of the bar called them, and this one was one of those.
ç
“So Precia,” Nanoha dropped the formalities. It was only known by their closest friends that the two of them were, as a lack of a better term, friends. Although the age difference was over ten years, the two of them could understand each other. Except for certain times when they did random actions like this one. “Why do you need these three? It’s not like you to suddenly buy new workers.”

“Why I just took pity on the kids, after all it looked like they were about to suffer in the hands of the white devil,” Precia and Nanoha smiled. It was known that the owner of Raising Heart was merciless with almost anyone, the only exception being her lover and waitress of the bar, the lord in front of her and her personal guardian. “Besides its good for your business, isn’t it?

“Don’t try to weasel out of this my lady.” the brunette retorted. It was natural curiosity that the merchant felt. “Is it for our dear and cute Fate?” the brunette smirked. There was only one reason why Precia Testarossa would do something so abnormal, and that was her daughter.

“You know me too well Nanoha,” the black haired replied with a smile on her face “She has been down lately after Alicia left, so I decided to get her some friends to play with. What a coincidence that you were making such an offer,”

“Indeed, what a coincidence,” the brunette said. But as she had learned, there were no coincidences in this life. “So want me to take them to your castle right away or you will wait ´till I say goodbye?” the brunette giggled.

“Whatever you like my friend” the black haired woman stood up from her chair “But try to not leave any marks” with that said the lord of Cranagan left the room.

Wait it says pt1? And its not NanoFate? At least its not Yunnoha

I have no idea where this is going lol. even if it's not yunnoha it can still be yute- ; )
As usual I humbly offer to be your beta for this too

[Sassy_Bread]

Originally Posted by Laith

And B wins... and you get NanosFate

well you lose this

Spoiler for The Dance of the Star:

Once upon a time
a star wanted to dance
The star tried and tried
but it always failed
The sun decided to help the star
in exchange for her glimmering light
the star accepted
and learned to dance
but without its light
the star lost its enjoyment for dance
the poor start had lost
its light and its dance

What does it mean? You´ll never know

Originally Posted by Laith

Oh Hayate is going to appear... MUCH later.

Awww....damn you people who voted B! And I'm pretty sure most of you were NanoFate people. Jeez...
Hmmm....would the star be Hayate? The sun Vivio? Argh...I give up.

Originally Posted by Laith

Spoiler for A Chained Life pt1:

It was a normal day in the bazaar. People were buying their daily needs, hearing the latest rumors and, for the ones that could afford it, buying slaves. A people´s dealer, as some called them, was the best way to make a life if one wasn´t a noble.

One may wonder how they could sell humans at the best profit without being arrested. Though in any other reign these sellers could be killed for this act, in Cranagan, thanks to the Testarossa´s royal family, this business was overlooked. After all who would clean their castle if there were no slaves? Not them certainly.
In this particular place, one of the main sellers, a brunette with blue eyes, owner of a bar, the Raising Heart to be precise, was giving what many would call a bargain. She was giving away three kids, one boy and two girls, for the minimal price of five gold coins.

“Good evening ladies and gentlemen, come on, come on, pass and see the new offer that I do to anyone that wants it. These three kids, young strong, can be yours for the minimal price of five gold coins. That’s right, three little workers for that minimal price. Who wants these young yet efficient workers? They may not seem like nothing right now but they will be a great help in the future. Who says me?” the owner of the bar, Nanoha Takamachi, was trying to get the people around her to buy her new product, but so far she had no luck. Perhaps it was that the kids were harder to educate, or that this time the buyers were interested in something else. “Come on don’t be shy, this offer is just today”

These three kids, a blond with green eyes, a red haired with blue eyes and a blonde with one red eye and a green eye, were scared about what could become of them, although only one, the blonde, showed it. The blond was trying to hide his fear in a calmed face, while the red haired was had an angered one.

“I accept your offer,” a woman with raven hair and purple spoke. The always hailed, Lord of Cranagan, Precia Testarossa had arrived to the bar. It was not a common sight that a person of such importance entered a place like this, officially at least. “And I´ll give you ten gold coins instead of five.”

“Why, thank you my lady. I appreciate your generosity,” Nanoha bowed to Precia in a respectful and somewhat mocking mode. “Why doesn’t the Lord of this beautiful land accompany me so we can wrap this transaction?” she asked. Without waiting for a response she walked into a door at the other side of the room. As she expected, Precia followed her into the room.

The room was small as it only had table and four chairs. It was mostly used to resolve important matters, as the owner of the bar called them, and this one was one of those.
ç
“So Precia,” Nanoha dropped the formalities. It was only known by their closest friends that the two of them were, as a lack of a better term, friends. Although the age difference was over ten years, the two of them could understand each other. Except for certain times when they did random actions like this one. “Why do you need these three? It’s not like you to suddenly buy new workers.”

“Why I just took pity on the kids, after all it looked like they were about to suffer in the hands of the white devil,” Precia and Nanoha smiled. It was known that the owner of Raising Heart was merciless with almost anyone, the only exception being her lover and waitress of the bar, the lord in front of her and her personal guardian. “Besides its good for your business, isn’t it?

“Don’t try to weasel out of this my lady.” the brunette retorted. It was natural curiosity that the merchant felt. “Is it for our dear and cute Fate?” the brunette smirked. There was only one reason why Precia Testarossa would do something so abnormal, and that was her daughter.

“You know me too well Nanoha,” the black haired replied with a smile on her face “She has been down lately after Alicia left, so I decided to get her some friends to play with. What a coincidence that you were making such an offer,”

“Indeed, what a coincidence,” the brunette said. But as she had learned, there were no coincidences in this life. “So want me to take them to your castle right away or you will wait ´till I say goodbye?” the brunette giggled.

“Whatever you like my friend” the black haired woman stood up from her chair “But try to not leave any marks” with that said the lord of Cranagan left the room.

Awww....
It's nice that this is only the first part. I wanna see what happens to Yuuno, Erio, and Vivio. -_-

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Sassy_Bread

Awww....
It's nice that this is only the first part. I wanna see what happens to Yuuno, Erio, and Vivio. -_-

1 boy and 2 girls I believe it's Yuuno Vita and Vivio (I got confused until I checked over it again)

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by markesellus

Very true, nice subtle hint there.

Why, thank you

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

That's totally the point Fuyu

Spoiler for ...:

But Lancelot saved her and there was a war and arthur dies and Guinevere becomes a nun >.> (And I think Lancelot becomes a monk). It is a tragedy after all. But I'm not doing it just throwing the idea out there.

Spoiler for answer:

Oh, thank God *sighs out in relief* It'd be terrible for that to happen >< (Since in this case, Yuuno would die, Nanoha would become a nun and....so would Fate?

In any case, drama is no good ; so I'm glad it's simply an idea

EDIT: LOL! Page claim in the name of busy authors who only post once a day now (and that's if we're lucky) and successful stories :3