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Old 2008-11-10, 07:45   Link #10801
Preston
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*Stumbles in* Eh.. How long was I out? What'd I miss? *Reaches for NanoFate*

EDIT: Ha. Page for NanoFate.net D:
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Old 2008-11-10, 08:28   Link #10802
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*Stumbles in* Eh.. How long was I out? What'd I miss? *Reaches for NanoFate*

EDIT: Ha. Page for NanoFate.net D:
You missed a lot :3 You won't find much NanoFate here anymore

@DezoPenguin:That was a great thing to wake up to <3 I'm very glad you liked the chapter ^_^


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*waves to Keroko* Now I see what you (um, Keroko, not Satashi) meant that Syn was a good debater--she picked up Vivio's hug-and-kiss-friend example and totally took it to the house!
I'd like to point out that there is a difference between Keroko's Syn and my Syn. Since she said I could have free-range on Syn and use her anyway I want, I kind of made my Syn (Sata-Syn as she was called.... that's funny :3 ) into her own person. The things in my stories that she does doesn't necessarily mean official Syn does them. For example, everything in PS!V was made up by me. Her personality (besides being one not to think before speaking) and her quirks (such as her love to cook, how she's dealing with the situation, and her foot fetish lol) were thigns that I added into her character. The things that double as Keroko's Syn (such as the way Syn can articulate her feelings perfectly, or how she can grasp Vivio's example and run with it) are just happy coincidences that happened when I wrote them and tehn Keroko said her Syn can do it as well.

So unless Keroko documents papers saying that I can give Syn officialness and share the character, please remember that my Syn isn't the official one and that the things in my story don't mean that they're how Kero-Syn would really act ^_^
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Old 2008-11-10, 08:42   Link #10803
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt. 37:
SATASHI *RUNS and give a bear hug* you are awesome, love it you amazing writer.

the way you done it, the way you put Syn and Vivio back, the last parts i cry when i read it, i want more, please update soon.

i wonder what Syn decided about Vivio, will she accpet Vivio with everything?

i have to wait and see.

please hurry up, please *puppy eyes*
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Old 2008-11-10, 11:14   Link #10804
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No update right now :3 but I'm happy to have gotten such good replies to last part. I was REALLY scared that I wouldn't do it good enough since everyone was so vocal about them when they broke up. I tried really hard on that segment to make it stay realistic. If anyone else has anything to add to it, I'd love to hear it. Even though I can't really reply to specifics without giving away the story, I still read it all ^^ Penguin-chan especially makes me smile with those kick butt comments and suggestions.

Oh, and Evil Rick is making me a signature that is breathtakingly awesome about PornStar!Vivio. I can't wait to show it to everyone when he's done ^_^
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Old 2008-11-10, 11:33   Link #10805
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No update right now :3 but I'm happy to have gotten such good replies to last part. I was REALLY scared that I wouldn't do it good enough since everyone was so vocal about them when they broke up. I tried really hard on that segment to make it stay realistic. If anyone else has anything to add to it, I'd love to hear it. Even though I can't really reply to specifics without giving away the story, I still read it all ^^ Penguin-chan especially makes me smile with those kick butt comments and suggestions.

Oh, and Evil Rick is making me a signature that is breathtakingly awesome about PornStar!Vivio. I can't wait to show it to everyone when he's done ^_^

don't be scared the way you wrote it, it's more than excellent, let me tell you something if i wrote the same story as you i wouldn't write it the way you do.

it's perfect in my view, and it's a peice of art, i'm so sorry when i became as you called it so vocal when Syn and Vivio broke up.

i will be wait for the other parts.
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Old 2008-11-10, 11:35   Link #10806
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You missed a lot :3 You won't find much NanoFate here anymore
How come? The site is more popular than ever... I haven't been around... but I have had the host moaning at me about the ever increasing bandwidth usage.

I'm done with the fanfiction though. My own IP eats what free time I have now. -__- But hey, what with the film coming sometime ...fairly... soon, there will probably be a revival.
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Old 2008-11-10, 11:49   Link #10807
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How come? The site is more popular than ever... I haven't been around... but I have had the host moaning at me about the ever increasing bandwidth usage.

I'm done with the fanfiction though. My own IP eats what free time I have now. -__- But hey, what with the film coming sometime ...fairly... soon, there will probably be a revival.
Probably there are more authors than ever writing nanofate at fanfiction.net (which is proportional to an increase in the nanofate fanbase, which directly impacts on our bandwidth usage for nanofate.net, as it has proved xD), I have seen many new authors both for English and Spanish communities recently, but it seems like they are only posting the fics there, which isn't bad because if something is posted only in this community most people will miss it.

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Old 2008-11-10, 12:22   Link #10808
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Saaaaaaaad chapter!

I think Syn is not taking the right direction while asking Vivio to leave her job

Can't wait to see what will hapen now
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Old 2008-11-10, 13:45   Link #10809
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Three chapters? And what about those who are long, as in ranging from 20k to 30k words?
A case by case basis. If your chapters are OMG HUEG, then you might only need two. I'm not doing just one, though, unless someone gives me a good reason to, so one-shots are for the most part out of the question (I will make the occasional exception though, if I feel like it ).

And also, Evil Rick: Staring at your avatar too long makes my head explode.
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Old 2008-11-10, 13:46   Link #10810
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Old 2008-11-10, 13:53   Link #10811
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Hmmmm after so long time I've decided to post some of my thoughts.
Though I haven't seen any (or at least not that much as I have been used to) NanoFate here I must admit a lot of interesting stories is floating around. I know I have been, and I still am lazy to voice my opinion but today something made me to do so.

@RadiantBeam: Your Lutecia x Vivio stories made my day, but in second story I for some reason enjoyed the most these parts where Nanoha wanted to watch them. I guess for that we should thank to DezoPenguin.
But I think that Vivio is used extensively these days, like Nanoha and Fate year ago. I wonder what character will be under scope few months later....

@DezoPenguin: Every time I read your reviews I fell a pang of envy. I just hope that when I reach your age I will be able to write such quality reviews/texts too. So please continue with that, I'm glad I'm at least able to read and understand them.

And at least @Satashi: I will admit it without torture, I strongly disliked PS!Vivio from the beginning, but when the story started to be more serious I slowly become to like it. But my natural curiosity did not allowed me to miss it and now I'm glad I read every single part. My reasons for disliking were especially these ones who work in adult entertainment industry (I had once such "honour" to speak shortly with one of them and it was somewhat disgusting.) and that I especially like stories in which main couple begins as pair of two pure, innocent beings. You may call it a fetish or so, I don't care.
But when it started to be interesting to me and when I began to wait for every new update was the point when confrontation of their "worlds" was inevitable. I mean the point when Syn and Vivio began to be serious. The point when it began to smell like reality. For myself, who has quite simmilar point of view on sex and such things like Syn is especially interesting to read (or watch) and imagine myself in their positions. And personally, if I were Syn I doubt I would ever be able to forgive Vivio (or forget deeds).

I feel like I should write more or write more sophisticated text, but I'm not DezoPenguin so I leave such itellectual (I hope I used right word, if not I'm sorry) stuff to him. As KoSSa, I think I wroten enought.
Just one thing. I'm really want to read conclusion of PS!Vivivo no matter what is going to happen.
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Old 2008-11-10, 14:02   Link #10812
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How come? The site is more popular than ever... I haven't been around... but I have had the host moaning at me about the ever increasing bandwidth usage.
Ah, NanoFate is still huge at other places, but here at AS it's focused more on other pairings, like Lutecia/Caro for example. Though there's still plenty of it around to enjoy :3

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Saaaaaaaad chapter!

I think Syn is not taking the right direction while asking Vivio to leave her job

Can't wait to see what will hapen now
Let's hope she comes around :3'

Cookies to rick for my new siggy/avatar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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@DezoPenguin: Every time I read your reviews I fell a pang of envy. I just hope that when I reach your age I will be able to write such quality reviews/texts too. So please continue with that, I'm glad I'm at least able to read and understand them.

And at least @Satashi: I will admit it without torture, I strongly disliked PS!Vivio from the beginning, but when the story started to be more serious I slowly become to like it. But my natural curiosity did not allowed me to miss it and now I'm glad I read every single part. My reasons for disliking were especially these ones who work in adult entertainment industry (I had once such "honour" to speak shortly with one of them and it was somewhat disgusting.) and that I especially like stories in which main couple begins as pair of two pure, innocent beings. You may call it a fetish or so, I don't care.
But when it started to be interesting to me and when I began to wait for every new update was the point when confrontation of their "worlds" was inevitable. I mean the point when Syn and Vivio began to be serious. The point when it began to smell like reality. For myself, who has quite simmilar point of view on sex and such things like Syn is especially interesting to read (or watch) and imagine myself in their positions. And personally, if I were Syn I doubt I would ever be able to forgive Vivio (or forget deeds).

I feel like I should write more or write more sophisticated text, but I'm not DezoPenguin so I leave such itellectual (I hope I used right word, if not I'm sorry) stuff to him. As KoSSa, I think I wroten enought.
Just one thing. I'm really want to read conclusion of PS!Vivivo no matter what is going to happen.

you did great on saying what you wanted to. Infact, I'm really happy that you didn't like it at first but then started to. It makes me feel nice. Hopefully when I re-do the fist few bits it will be more... professional? After all, it was never intended to be a serious story until about half way though >.< Thanks alot for the kind words!!
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Old 2008-11-10, 14:27   Link #10813
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A case by case basis. If your chapters are OMG HUEG, then you might only need two. I'm not doing just one, though, unless someone gives me a good reason to, so one-shots are for the most part out of the question (I will make the occasional exception though, if I feel like it ).

And also, Evil Rick: Staring at your avatar too long makes my head explode.
PM sent. AX also reviewed the thing. In OCT.
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Old 2008-11-10, 16:03   Link #10814
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Uhmmm , Tha Dha?

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Enough for a fic or don't?
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Old 2008-11-10, 16:18   Link #10815
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@RadiantBeam: Your Lutecia x Vivio stories made my day, but in second story I for some reason enjoyed the most these parts where Nanoha wanted to watch them. I guess for that we should thank to DezoPenguin.

But I think that Vivio is used extensively these days, like Nanoha and Fate year ago. I wonder what character will be under scope few months later....

Heh, thank you very much. ^__^ I've actually recieved a few requests to continue on with the Lutecia/Vivio stories from what I've built with Never Been Kissed and Never Confessed, but I must admit I'm a little hesitant about it. I honestly didn't think the pairing would be this popular.

And DezoPenguin is awesome. I owe him a lot for writing that omake for me. :3
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Old 2008-11-10, 17:01   Link #10816
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This little fic is called A Day In The Lab. I give a special thanks to Black_Wolf for beta-ing the story.

Spoiler for Semi-NSFW Lilgumba's 1st Nanoha fanfic:
Ah well your first bit of fic and it's cracktasti-*shot*

But really it was very amusing and made me smile. hope you do more Gumba.
and pumpkins really are delis-*shot*


@PS!V With all this talk I'm just going to stand back and read and comment on the irc, too many comments and it'll turn into the PS!V board ( I've noticed the walls of text are starting to get to where the word count is longer then the part itself).

As for me, I'm working on something but alas it's keeping me from writing any crack :c.
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Old 2008-11-10, 17:26   Link #10817
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@PS!V With all this talk I'm just going to stand back and read and comment on the irc, too many comments and it'll turn into the PS!V board ( I've noticed the walls of text are starting to get to where the word count is longer then the part itself).
You know, that's a good point. The next time I do a wall-of-text review, I'll spoilertag the thing to save space. In fact, I think I'll go back and do that to the last one.
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Old 2008-11-10, 17:27   Link #10818
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awww. this is the saddest and best chapter so far!!!
I love how they talked about their situation and how much Vivio believes in Syn.
I wonder what Syn will do now...

Anyway, This is soooo great, Satashi!!! ^^

Good work. (:
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Old 2008-11-10, 17:42   Link #10819
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So after saying I'd write this well... A looooong time ago. I just now did it!
This crack contains nudity so don't read it if you're offended by that kind of stuff. Nothing explicit or detailed so I think it's AS safe.

Spoiler for An Ace of Lyrical:


*Flees*
It was... lackluster. The reason being that there wasn't really all that much detail on the fanservice. Now normally this isn't a bad idea for a fic (and indeed, it can be agood one) but for a fic that is obviously a fanservice fic, having very little detail on what the girls are wearing and their actions and emotions during the stripping sort of goes against the purpose of the fic. It's like writing a romance fic with very little emphasis on the romance.

My advice: Don't hold back! Dive full deep in the clothing, the actions, and the emotions of the characters. You're not trying to write an all-ages fic, you're writing a fanservice fic.

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*waves to Keroko* Now I see what you (um, Keroko, not Satashi) meant that Syn was a good debater--she picked up Vivio's hug-and-kiss-friend example and totally took it to the house!
Coincidence on Satashi's part or not, that's exactly how Syn works.

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Mind you, she's also being unfair--I can't imagine a scenario in which anyone who isn't a professional sex worker would have a pity-sex gangbang. And the sleeping-with-the-friend example doesn't actually follow what's going on, because there is an emotional link in the example, just not the emotion of romantic love. Indeed, the emotion might actually be non-romantic love, since in the example Syn would feel sufficiently strongly about this person to want to do something which she considers to be an intimate and personal act for them. Whereas Vivio's job is just that--Vivio's emotional link is confined to "weekly paycheck" and maybe a bit of pride if a scene or a movie turns out really well and garners praise. So Vivio would have more justification to be hurt than Syn would.
She's not being unfair at all, Vivio had a chance to explain things from her point of view, and Syn replied in kind. Feelings are hardly ever justified, much less controlled. Syn believes that having sex is the ultimate act of intimacy, for Vivio it is but one way to express love, and one she has only recently discovered. Vivio is struggling with new morales and feelings whereas Syn is now struggling with feelings and morales she has had for years. The fact that Syn is actually struggling to come to terms with Vivio rather then just stick to the believes that have served her well for years is an feat of its own.

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(a) Either Syn or Vivio or both will decide they aren't suited after all and break it off naturally and without major angst; or
(b) Syn will come to treasure Vivio as a person, realize that her job really is just a job that just happens to cross boundaries that most people draw in different places, and no longer feel squicked; or
(c) Vivio will come to realize that her feelings for Syn are sufficiently real and strong that she can take the plunge of abandoning her career (whether or not Syn still demands it); or
(d) Vivio will decide that Syn's inability to accept her as she is marks the relationship as fatally flawed because Syn cannot trust her, leaving them both in an angsty breakup; or
(e) Both (b) and (c).
There is also the option of Syn coming to terms with Vivio's profession, possibly by learning how it works from Vivio. This might even result in Syn learning to like the profession. Like how you learn to like a show you hated before through your friends.

Mind you, the above scenario is unlikely, and if it happens, then it would take a long time. There's a big gap between a show and pornography.

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I'd like to note that it seems highly unrealistic that Syn would be unable to deal with Vivio being in pornography but be fine with her formerly being in pornography, unless the problem she has with it really is confined to "you are cheating on me by having sex with other people" and nothing else.
The possibility is open, because it would show how much Vivio cares for Syn. However, this deal would be very unfair on Vivio's half. Should Syn come to terms with Vivio's profession, she will lose the morals she held close for years. Should they never see eachother again, both will lose eachother. Should Vivio quit her job for Syn, she would lose the life she has been struggling to give up.

I personally consider the surrendering of morales in the face of love and friendship a much lesser sacrifice that to give up years of your live.

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How come? The site is more popular than ever... I haven't been around... but I have had the host moaning at me about the ever increasing bandwidth usage.
The FF thread has a huge boost in alternative pairings, we even had a suggestive Nanoha/Shamal recently. Talk about rare!
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Old 2008-11-10, 18:05   Link #10820
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

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Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
-Chapter 14
-Chapter 15
-Chapter 16
-Chapter 17
-Chapter 18
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