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MeisterBabylon · 2011-10-09, 05:20

And the funny thing? Kuriya is actually a top net idol named Ruri-chan, so she'd retort that it makes her sound like a pornstar! She finds herself surrounded by nutcases and does her best to avoid getting too involved in them.

wavehawk · 2011-10-09, 05:23

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

And the funny thing? Kuriya is actually a top net idol named Ruri-chan, so she'd retort that it makes her sound like a pornstar! She finds herself surrounded by nutcases and does her best to avoid getting too involved in them.

- Chiu, is that you?

The joke is actually that Kujira = Whale, and the basis of the word Gojira (Godzilla)--which I think some in Class 1-2 will take to calling her when she goes into her "Complaining Rampage mode".

"Kujira-chan's rampaging again..."

I'm still very tempted to add my own character into this, but don't know where to start outside of that short I wrote. At this rate, she's going to be a Mary Sue Deconstruction...

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-09, 05:27

Aww, shit! Someone's getting close and personal to Ichika!

wavehawk · 2011-10-09, 05:30

Aaaand it's Houki in the lead~~~

HasuMasu · 2011-10-09, 05:36

The amount of Houki is super-effective to my tastes.

Just as planned.

MeisterBabylon · 2011-10-09, 05:37

I just noticed that I have just 1 slot free for Sue Inverse...

*sees Karon and Tsubomi high-5*

Showing her that H DouJin was the right thing to do after all!

wavehawk · 2011-10-09, 05:40

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

I just noticed that I have just 1 slot free for Sue Inverse...

- "Sue Inverse"?

Eratas123 · 2011-10-09, 05:54

Why don't you put a girl who was raised as a boy? The person who refers to herself with male honorifics and dresses like a boy in casual outings. The les yay potential is pretty big there.

You could also use the girl who's a blood knight and loves picking fights for no reason other than to prove herself better. The people who beat her are the one's who earn her respect.

Lastly you could put the silent bookworm type. She's usually shy and doesn't talk much but when she's pissed then she turns into a berserker with a mouth like a drunken sailor. Might be funny for opponents to expect an easy match then suddenly get curb stomped.

wavehawk · 2011-10-09, 05:56

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

Why don't you put a girl who was raised as a boy? The person who refers to herself with male honorifics and dresses like a boy in casual outings. The les yay potential is pretty big there.

- Charl?

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You could also use the girl who's a blood knight and loves picking fights for no reason other than to prove herself better. The people who beat her are the one's who earn her respect.

- Laura?

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Lastly you could put the silent bookworm type. She's usually shy and doesn't talk much but when she's pissed then she turns into a berserker with a mouth like a drunken sailor. Might be funny for opponents to expect an easy match then suddenly get curb stomped.

- Kanzashi?

It's kind of like what's already been done before. I think it's better if we try something that's not doen before--or else use existign cocnepts and ideas and turn them on their head...

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-09, 05:56

Reading Wavehawk and MeisterBabylon's convesation from page 123-125...

OPed once again, no comment.

Sacred twins is 75%, but I had to bring myself pulled the most homoerotic scenes in this fic so far and... well...

Please cheer me up...please...

*Pukes*

wavehawk · 2011-10-09, 05:59

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Please cheer me up...please...

- ~BUENO!~ (Gets you from behind)

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-09, 06:02

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

- ~BUENO!~ (Gets you from behind)

THAT'S SOUNDS VERY WRONG!

But thanks for the cheer anyway, I'm currently going trans am, ETC is by tomorrow morning!

Eratas123 · 2011-10-09, 06:06

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

- Charl?

- Laura?

- Kanzashi?

It's kind of like what's already been done before. I think it's better if we try something that's not doen before--or else use existign cocnepts and ideas and turn them on their head...

Didn't notice that, I don't know how I missed it.

1. Girl with a split personality: Not just a mood swinger but someone who suffers from genuine Identity disorder. Both personality's can use the IS for offense and defense respectively.

2. Child genius: A girl who was found to have an exceptionally high sync rate for her age and sent to the academy early as an experiment. 10 years old.

That's all I have for now, are these any better?

MeisterBabylon · 2011-10-09, 06:08

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

- "Sue Inverse"?

Your nameless OC who's a MS Deconstruction.

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

Why don't you put a girl who was raised as a boy? The person who refers to herself with male honorifics and dresses like a boy in casual outings. The les yay potential is pretty big there.

While not exactly raised as a boy, we have a biker IS chick, Fujiwara Keiko. My prototype plans are that she's very tomboyish, what with growing up in a US Marine camp and all. But she really wants to be seen as cute and cuddly, even though she can snipe girls' hearts with just one look.

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You could also use the girl who's a blood knight and loves picking fights for no reason other than to prove herself better. The people who beat her are the one's who earn her respect.

Not moe enough, also, kinda done to death...

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Lastly you could put the silent bookworm type. She's usually shy and doesn't talk much but when she's pissed then she turns into a berserker with a mouth like a drunken sailor. Might be funny for opponents to expect an easy match then suddenly get curb stomped.

This was done 3 times in the original OC list, we need something else.

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Reading Wavehawk and MeisterBabylon's convesation from page 123-125...

OPed once again, no comment.

What is OPed?!

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1. Girl with a split personality: Not just a mood swinger but someone who suffers from genuine Identity disorder. Both personality's can use the IS for offense and defense respectively.

Because of Karon's pampering, her IS awakens when it Second Shifts... (it will be covered)

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2. Child genius: A girl who was found to have an exceptionally high sync rate for her age and sent to the academy early as an experiment. 10 years old.

Hmm... I could replace someone in the list for that, but for now, we have a lot of age-regressed people in 1-2 already. Maybe have Angelina have this trait, and its Nichijou all over again!

Eratas123 · 2011-10-09, 06:08

@ Blitz and Meister- Here's the first part of the Karon x Irish draft. Sorry for the crappy fight scene, I hate writing those

Spoiler:

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-09, 06:18

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Blitz and Meister- Here's the first part of the Karon x Irish draft. Sorry for the crappy fight scene, I hate writing those

Spoiler:

THAT BITCH WHO PULL THE TRIGGER HAD TO DIE!!!

Just kidding thought, the draft is as good as I expected (and hoped). The scene with Maya in the end is really touching

@ Meister Babylon

OPed = Out-of-Placed, meaning the time I enter and read the forum, I got no freaking idea what you guys are talking about.

Source: Yachiyo-san, who's somehow disappear these days ( I miss her

)

HasuMasu · 2011-10-09, 06:34

^ Now now, I know you're making a fic about us, but pairings are a no-no.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-09, 06:43

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

THAT BITCH WHO PULL THE TRIGGER HAD TO DIE!!!

Just kidding thought, the draft is as good as I expected (and hoped). The scene with Maya in the end is really touching

@ Meister Babylon

OPed = Out-of-Placed, meaning the time I enter and read the forum, I got no freaking idea what you guys are talking about.

Source: Yachiyo-san, who's somehow disappear these days ( I miss her

)

Of course this leads to mood whiplash later.

Here's an example:

Spoiler:

side note- I'm wondering where Yachiyo is too.

@ Meister- Is the draft okay?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-09, 06:45

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^ Now now, I know you're making a fic about us, but pairings are a no-no.

What? No! I mean, seriously, SHIPPING?!

Of course not! With male-to-female ratio like this, there's no way we can do shipping.

Besides, I missed her because she, by far, the only one who spoke softly and calmly, yeah, just that, not because she's the only girl.

(Why my statement is all potholed to TvTropes??)

Eratas123 · 2011-10-09, 06:52

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

What? No! I mean, seriously, SHIPPING?!

Of course not! With male-to-female ratio like this, there's no way we can do shipping.

Besides, I missed her because she, by far, the only one who spoke softly and calmly, yeah, just that, not because she's the only girl.

(Why my statement is all potholed to TvTropes??)

Bishonen Ghetto? I doubt that

By the way, is the example I posted okay? I'll include it if it is.

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MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	And the funny thing? Kuriya is actually a top net idol named Ruri-chan, so she'd retort that it makes her sound like a pornstar! She finds herself surrounded by nutcases and does her best to avoid getting too involved in them. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

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wavehawk Some say I'm the Reverse Join Date: Jul 2006	Aaaand it's Houki in the lead~~~ __________________ "We haven't been properly introduced..."

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HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	The amount of Houki is super-effective to my tastes. Just as planned. __________________

2011-10-09, 05:37	Link #2486
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	I just noticed that I have just 1 slot free for Sue Inverse... sees Karon and Tsubomi high-5 Showing her that H DouJin was the right thing to do after all! __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Reading Wavehawk and MeisterBabylon's convesation from page 123-125... OPed once again, no comment. Sacred twins is 75%, but I had to bring myself pulled the most homoerotic scenes in this fic so far and... well... Please cheer me up...please... Pukes __________________

2011-10-09, 05:27	Link #2483
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Aww, shit! Someone's getting close and personal to Ichika!

2011-10-09, 05:54	Link #2488
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Why don't you put a girl who was raised as a boy? The person who refers to herself with male honorifics and dresses like a boy in casual outings. The les yay potential is pretty big there. You could also use the girl who's a blood knight and loves picking fights for no reason other than to prove herself better. The people who beat her are the one's who earn her respect. Lastly you could put the silent bookworm type. She's usually shy and doesn't talk much but when she's pissed then she turns into a berserker with a mouth like a drunken sailor. Might be funny for opponents to expect an easy match then suddenly get curb stomped.

2011-10-09, 06:08	Link #2495
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Blitz and Meister- Here's the first part of the Karon x Irish draft. Sorry for the crappy fight scene, I hate writing those Spoiler: POV: Irish Location: IS academy, field. Come and get me! I'll kill every one of you! "Irish, STOP!" 'I only have one chaff grenade left, looks like I'll have to rely on the knife.'[/I] "GET HIM!" BOOM "Everyone! Please stop!" Explosions ring out all around me, I managed to dodge them but the skull suit is reaching it's limit. 'Gotta escape the circle first.' I run ti the right and flip under the IS unit blocking my way, four of them give chase. 'Hope this works!' I stop and turn around before throwing my remaining chaff grenade in front of me. BANG "AH!" The one in the green unit (Erika they called her) got hit the closest and her unit temporarily locked up. 'Now!' I run towards her unit before jumping on top of it and stabbing the shield as hard as I could. CLANG The sound of breaking glass echoed for a split second before the knife pierced through. "ERIKA!" I flip behind her and hold the knife up to her neck. " pant pant Don't move...or she dies!" "LET HER GO!" "Shut up!" 'Damn it...the suit's close to failing. I'll be a helpless unless I can end this fast.' "Aren't you two mind readers? Can't you do something?" "His mind's closed off, we can't read it." "Damn! This is a pain in the ass!" 'Can't read me huh? If I knew that earlier I wouldn't be here now.' "Irish...please let her go..." "K-Karon?" The girl in the green mech asked. "Please...don't come any closer." Karon slowly walked by her classmates towards me. "Karon what are you doing!?" "Just trust me Riselle. Irish...please let her go..." "He's insane! He won't listen to reason." "He's scared! I know you can't read his mind but you have to feel that he's just panicked right now." "..." 'What is she doing? She's already lured me into a trap.' "Irish, if you kill her then you're gonna be no different from the people you hate." "Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! You're trying to trap me again, not this time." "Let her go, she's innocent." I push the knife closer to her neck but I know it's futile. She was right, I couldn't stab her even if I tried. 'Allen...I've wasted the life you've given me.' I loosen my hold on her and drop to the floor, I've lost. "...You win...kill me if you want." "With pleasure." One of the IS pilots raised her rifle and aimed it at my chest, it looks like it's gonna be over soon. 'I'm sorry Allen, looks like it's over for me.' "NO!" A voice suddenly pierced through the air, I look up and see a body shielding mine. "...What are you doing? Get out of here!" "Are you just gonna give up!? What about your brother's sacrifice?" "..." "Don't you have anything to live for!" '...Joshua' "Get out of the way Karon, he doesn't deserve a second chance." "Stay out of this!" I see her lining up the shot, she wasn't going to stop. "No!" BANG "Argh!" "IRISH!" Pain riddled my body, I didn't know what was happening. "Irish! Hang on!" Why did I push her out of the way? I could've just ran. "Take him to the clinic!" Maybe...I just didn't want her to save me, to admit that...I was wrong about her. These were the last things I thought before everything went black. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Location: School Clinic. 'I-It hurts, it hurts so much' "How.....s.....doi "We've.....cu..." Voices were speaking all around me, I couldn't open my eyes. "M-Mommy...it hurts." "Shh~ Mommy's here, don't worry" I felt a hand touch my face and I feel myself relaxing. "Go to sleep, it'll be over soon."

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HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	^ Now now, I know you're making a fic about us, but pairings are a no-no. __________________