Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Hiddenryuu]

That gradient red background gotta change Rick, it fights with your main subject way too many times. And remember shapes first.

Shiningsword, lol! Hope there is more... ^_^

And woot, first page claim :-P

[Sam the Onion]

Slow day is slow

Originally Posted by Satashi

*The camera pans down the hallway with several doors. Behind one door one can hear the cast of Lucky Star singing Karaoke happily together. Next to this room is a special door. Behind it lies the cast of Nanoha paired with two very special outer Cadians. One the stage stands Yuuno, Chrono, Kha, and Keroko(the male version!)

Spoiler for KHRACK!!!!!!!!!!!:

*snip*

Satashi is corrupted to the core...

But the Khrack she produces is top quality

Spoiler for 95, 96, 97, 98, 99, 100 & 101:

”How does this look?” Linque opened the curtain and spun around in a red top and a mini.

”Good lord! Get men's clothing.” Subaru stated both laughing and horrified. ”How did you even get that?” She covered her eyes and handed a pair of jeans to the man.

”Some well aimed momentum bursts.” Linque took the jeans and closed the curtain.

”That's pretty handy ability.” Subaru leaned to a wall and held stacks of clothes with her. Linque turned out to be more feminine than she was when it came to clothing. He had to get too much of everything. It was amazing how much a half month's paycheck could buy.

”It sure is. But kinda dangerous.” Linque zipped up and opened the curtain again. ”If I hit a wall or a person in those speeds, it's not a pretty sight.” He spun again showing his clothing.

”Looks good.” Subaru relieved the metrosexual man. ”Good point. But you seem to handle it pretty well.” She handed another pair of jeans.

”Result of long practise. Back in the days, there weren't any acolytes of Crondo that could even do it.”

”But isn't that just because you're kickass compared to them?” Subaru praised.

”Haha~ That could be it too. But I think it's mostly because nobody ever thought about doing it.” He opened the curtain again. His dressing speed was amazing.

”Those look better.” Subaru handed yet another pair of jeans. ”Nobody thought about doing it?” She repeated.

”Once upon a time when the gods decided to share their powers, they wrote rules for their own magic's that even them couldn't change. People thought they were absolute until we appeared. We, the Selshin knights, were nicknamed as the Rule Benders by some people.” Linque explained. ”Originally Same-san noticed that because something wasn't mentioned in the rules it wasn't impossible to do. After that we began finding many loopholes and ways to abuse from the rules.”

”So originally you were just able to store actions in the air, right?” Subaru pondered.

”Exactly. But after Same-san's finding, I noticed that it wasn't mentioned anywhere that you couldn't store actions to yourself nor were there any rulse on what you could store.” Linque opened the curtain once more and posed in black jeans.

”Nope, blue jeans look better.” Subaru answered. ”And the gods just watched you defy them?”

”Well, of course they weren't too happy about it but they couldn't do anything. Everything in those orders were absolute and we couldn't go against them, we just went around them. Nothing bad in that.” Linque shrugged his shoulders before closing the curtain. ”They were allowed interfeare only when guiding us or we did something really bad.”

”So they were not allowed to interfere with human lives.” Subaru pondered and nodded to herself.

”Not directly but if we went against their will they could strip out powers. Mostly the punishement for misuse was our powers being temporary disabling, the time depending on what we did. In extreme cases, we could be killed.” Linque opened the curtain and was now in black straight pants stolen from Aren.

”For example?” Subaru took the unwanted jeans from Linque and placed them to their hanger.

”Like when you throw a relic, inherited from god him or herself, away.” Linque smiled.

”What kind of an idiot would throw away an artifact?” Subaru laughed.

Linque laughed a bit and nodded towards the counter.

”Same!?” Subaru yelled at the black monk, stacking bills on the reception. ”Aahhaha~” She held her stomach from laughter.

”That's how he is.” Linque helped Subaru stand up.

”But wait. He is still alive, right?”

”Oh, yes. He is very alive indeed. Lucine-chan was pretty mad back then, but Same-san is pretty good negotiator when it comes down to it.” Linque explained, gathering the fallen bags.

”What happened?” Subaru inquired.

”Hmm... Well, alright, I'll tell you. Don't tell anybody else.” Linque pleaded, gaining a nod from the woman. ”It was about 20 years after the finish of the new book and the original T4 acolyte of Lucine died, so Same-san was suppose to inherit the relic. There were suppose to be only one T4 acolyte at the time but we four and Aren-kun were exceptions.”

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It was a warm evening; the time when shadows were strongest. Everybody was dressed at their best, mostly black and dark purple though, for the event for announcing the successor of the temple of Lucine and even Same was humbled by the ceremony and didn't show his usual nature.

The event was held in the courtyard of the head temple, who was in charge of successing business. Even that the event was in the head temple, there were mostly followers of Lucine. The only exceptions were the three other knights and the head priest.

”Same Myes. You are chosen by Lucine and are the strongest amoung her acolytes.” The head priest announced from a low pedestal in the middle of the courtyard. ”Come, child of Lucine.” She extended her arm towards the outer edge.

Same walked slowly as instructed towards the platform and arrived silently in front of the head priest and kneeled down. His posture was peaceful and serene. If you didn't know him, you'd have thought he was always like this. That's how natural it looked like on his youthful face.

The head priest turned around and picked a staff from it's holder that had been brought there. The staff was long and black with dark purple decorations pulsing on it's side. On the tip there was four claws that held a orb which was constantly turning between violet and red.

”Rise, the new master acolyte of Lucine and accept her gift to you.” The head priest kneeled down as Same rose and picked up the staff he was offered.

”What the hell is this?” Same jerked his hood off. ”A pointed stick?” He pondered, holding the staff upside down.

”What?” The head priest questioned from her kneel.

”What you want me to do with this? Act all high and might? Wave it around and hope something to fly out? What about bananas?” He complained, causing other acolytes to yell at him.

”Figures.” Linque covered sighed deeply from the side and considered leaving the scene to save himself from whatever was to come.

”I don't need this. This isn't practical nor cool. Just look at it. It's not even stable to walk with.” Same attempted to lean on it.

”But you're holding it upside down.” The head priest reasoned, but was ignored.

-I call for a gateway to the Lands of the Dead- A portal opened instantly next to him. ”Get me a gun next time.” Same yelled and threw the staff through the portal. ”A shadow powered!” He added before he closed the portal and clapped his hands. ”I'm done.” Same bowed at the staggered priest and walked down from the pedestal.

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”What happened next?” Subaru asked carrying multiple bags with Linque.

”Well, of course Lucine-chan was pissed and if she wanted she could kill Same-san on the spot but she decided to visit him first.” Linque sat on a bench and rest his legs.

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”Same Myes!” A blond woman screamed at the lazed man a week after the famed ceremony. The room was filled with pillows of various colors, had multiple bowls filled with fruit and four hammocks on the sides. It was one of the resting place's for the knights and today was a fairly rare occasion as all four were gathered.

”Hum?” Same spun in a giant pillow and watched a woman, accompanied by two giant warriors, walk angrily towards her.

”Why did you throw away my gift!?” The woman yelled. She had long blonde hair, thin lined glasses and a violet well tied ribbon, resembling a flower, over her right ear. By the looks she couldn't be more than very mature 16 years old. She was wearing a long dark green robe, similar to Linque's, and had dark red shirt and pants. You wouldn't have guessed that she was the goddess of darkness even if somebody had told you.

”Necchi?” Same's eyes widened and all knights awoke from their bored states. ”What brings you here?” He bowed slightly from his pillow.

”I just said!” Lucine screamed, waving her hands around frustrated.

”Oh...” Same recalled. ”Ah, yes. It wasn't practical.” He grabbed an apple from a bowl. ”Apple?” He offered it to the woman in front of him.

Lucine glared at the man silently for a long time, constantly switching his eyes between the apple and the man. ”Practical? The Soul Beacon wasn't practical?!” She grabbed the apple and bit a chunk out of it, which she swallowed quickly.

”So that's what it was.” Same hit his palm with his fist.

”Yes, that's what it was!” Lucine kept screaming and took chunks of the apple in between.

”Anyway. It wasn't practical. I'm not into soul calling. A shadow powered gun on the other hand, now THAT would be useful.” Same took another apple and offered it to Lucine who had already eaten the previous.

”You should be the last person to care about practicality!” Lucine shouted. ”What about all those canes you've used without any reason?” She crossed her arms, nodding.

”You've been watching me?” Same asked and turned his head away. ”You should respect privacy.” He bit his thumb and acted hurt.

”D-don't try to change the subject!” Lucine blushed and her gaze wandered in the large room. ”You know, I'm this close from killing you and even your shackles won't save you from me.” She showed nearly non-existant space between her thumb and index finger. ”If you don't come up with some very special negotiation skills, I'm forced to kill you on the spot.”

”Very special negotiation skills?” Same threw the apple away, rose up and walked closer to Lucine. ”I'm pretty good with my tongue.” He spun Lucine around and forced a passionate kiss on her lips.

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”Wait a second!” Subaru tried to shake the mind images away. ”He forced a liplock on a goddess!?” She asked for a confirmation.

”He sure did.” Linque laughed at the memory.

”But that wasn't all, right?”

”Nope, it wasn't.” He continued.

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”Oh, no. He just didn't!?” All other knights rose from their seats and searched for a better view of the event.

”Miss Lucine!?” One of the warriors accompaniying her called and lifted his axe.

But he stopped when Lucine wrapped her arms over Same's back.

Time stopped in the room. The two ignored everybody around them and kissed passionately like lovers reuniting.

”Have some decency...” Linque sighed as the two added tongue into the kiss without even the slightest sign of hiding it.

After a time that seemed like an eternity, the two parted. Same lifted Lucine up and released her from his hold but her knees failed to hold her.

”Careful, Lucine.” Same held the woman close and supported her.

”He used a real name in everyday speech!?” All knights screamed in their minds, which reflected to their faces.

”Ah...” Lucine supported herself using Same's shoulder. ”I-I'll see what I can do.” She licked her lips and walked towards the door barely able to stand.

”I will be waiting, Lucine.” Same said with manly voice and licked his lips until the warriors had closed the door. ”Kyaaa~” He blushed to ears and rolled on the floor.

”You sure did it now.” Miachell smirked. ”Now to see how she answers.” She looked at the closed door.

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”And that's it.” Linque finished.

”Lucine didn't come?” Subaru asked almost tearing from the ending.

”Oh, yes, she did. But nobody else was around then.” Linque turned towards Subaru and moved his eyebrows suggestively.

”Dear lord! Same's a stud.” Subaru laughed.

”Don't know about that. Same-san and Lucine-chan are pretty secretive about their relationship.”

”Relationship? So, there's even more?” Subaru gleamed.

”Well, they are now married with children so of course there is more.” Linque explained lifting his shoulders.

”Same's married?!” Subaru yelled. ”And has children?!”

”Ehm...” A blond man coughed behind the bench. ”It seems Lin-rin has been gossiping again.” The black robed man blushed brightly.

”Ah, hello Same-san.” Linque waved casually. ”You still blush when I tell people about you and Lucine-chan? You've been together for over 300 years and you still aren't open with your relationship?” He teased, giggling.

”Be quiet!” Same screamed. ”It's not that. It's just that if the rumor spreads about god being married to a mortal, the results wouldn't be pretty.” He pulled his hood over his head to cover blushing.

”You know that most of the people here are atheists and don't knows the existance of Selshin?” Subaru reasoned.

”Be quiet!” Same failed to argue back. ”Suba-chi, please be quiet about everything you heard from Lin-rin. And Lin-rin, please don't tell her anymore about us.” He turned around and walked to Erio waiting in a safe distance.

”Why are you blushing?” Erio asked, handing some bags to the man.

”Be quiet!” Same ordered and grabbed the bags from Erio.

”Hmm...” Subaru pondered about the situation for a short while. ”How are the two now? Did they get busy often in the temple?” She poked Linque's side with her elbow.

”Otherwise maybe, but the temple doesn't let anybody but it's owner inside so the two haven't met in a long time.” Linque lowered his head and voice.

”Oh... That's kinda sad.” Subaru mimicked Linque.

”But from the way Same-san is acting I'd guess she is visiting him soon.” Linque awoke from his depressed state and smiled.

”How is he exactly acting?” Subaru asked with glassy eyes.

”His stupidity gradually decreases whenever Lucine-chan is coming.” Linque rose from the bench and grabbed few bags near it.

”A happy end.” Subaru shed few tears of joy and picked the rest of the bags.

Plenty words today but you could consider the whole thing as one scenario

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

Satashi is corrupted to the core...

But the Khrack she produces is top quality

It's true Satashi is quickly becoming a Khrack master

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by Satashi

oh hey, SbtB hit the 300 review mark.

Many thanks to all the readers and reviewers, whom without which I wouldn't write at all.

Thank you everyone!

Andrei: And so the downspiral continues... as so my Creator had predicted...

Andrei Lights a candle for the Nanoha Section's Soul

Originally Posted by Satashi

Ah, my 300 reviews are from the same 15-20 people reviewing every chapter :3 don't feel bad.

besides, it's not the review number that counts the most, it's the page views. you can have 5 reviews and 500 views

If you remember what i had said to you...

you still have a long way to go boya~

Andrei: One of my Creator's fics is about 95 chapters long- though only having 130+ reviews- compare to the other stories in its category though it is huge... and is not yet even half over...

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

@Satashi

3 shorts in a day?!
I guess you're writing is working again, huh?

Well we can fix that...

Plays the harmonium in an attempt to provide entertainment and to attempt to invoke a disaster

===

@ Kha: since you're totally worked up in other Nanoverse Projects, Can i have full acquisition of Nanoha FileS III?

I seems that Mai-Otome is beckoning again... and currently computing good...

Though 0.Sifr is taking too long!!!

Where am i supposed to pick up the demn Divine Sky Sapphire if i don't know where the Blue Sky Sapphire came from then?!!

*Runs*

@ Satarack:



Short Coming up!!!

[Satashi]

@Saint X:

@thread: SbtB 18 is 5.3k words long without card or diary entires. ETA is tonight sometime.

EDIT: SbtB XVIII is 6,110 words long. Completed. Waiting for proofing.

In the mean time, Have a clip of what goes on while I'm in the OC chat room...

Spoiler for Outer Cadians:

[Dr_Tom]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@Saint X:

@thread: SbtB 18 is 5.3k words long without card or diary entires. ETA is tonight sometime.

EDIT: SbtB XVIII is 6,110 words long. Completed. Waiting for proofing.

In the mean time, Have a clip of what goes on while I'm in the OC chat room...

Spoiler for Outer Cadians:

This news makes me very happy

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@Saint X:

@thread: SbtB 18 is 5.3k words long without card or diary entires. ETA is tonight sometime.

EDIT: SbtB XVIII is 6,110 words long. Completed. Waiting for proofing.

In the mean time, Have a clip of what goes on while I'm in the OC chat room...

Spoiler for Outer Cadians:

You really know how to improve ones day.

Originally Posted by Saint X

I seems that Mai-Otome is beckoning again... and currently computing good...

Though 0.Sifr is taking too long!!!

Where am i supposed to pick up the demn Divine Sky Sapphire if i don't know where the Blue Sky Sapphire came from then?!!

Your're right. Waiting time is too long.

[Kirika-chan]

Originally Posted by Dr_Tom

This news makes me very happy

Me too, I agreed

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Satashi

In the mean time, Have a clip of what goes on while I'm in the OC chat room...

Spoiler for Outer Cadians:

Hmm... First impression

With red pants = Kha
With blue shirt = Satashi
With gray shirt = Keroko
Random black guy = Fuyu

Dunno why

Spoiler for 102 & 103:

”Nanoha, we should be going already.” Fate called from the door.

”I don't think we should.” A woman on the bed said with a sad tone.

”Why is that?” Fate walked towards the giant bed, unbuttoning her jacket.

”Well, you see...” The brunette staggered. ”The new unit left already and now there's nobody to carry our bags.”

Fate sighed deeply before sitting on the bed and grabbing the woman's leg. ”You're the one who proposed for a party.” She began moving her fingers along Nanoha's leg. ”I'll tickle you.” She threathened and held the leg with all her might. In all these years, Fate had found one weakness in Nanoha; her legs were ticklish.

”Watch it. I still got some of that syrup left.” Nanoha lifted her pillow, revealing the syrup bottle.

”Please don't remind me about that.” Fate blushed and backed away. ”I only have hair in my head left.” She curled her hair around her finger.

”Hehee~” Nanoha showed her tongue and hugged Fate from behind. ”I'm sorry about your body hair.” She whispered to her ear.

”It's okay... It's not like there was someone to see them anyway.”

”There's always me.” Nanoha smiled and jumped off the bed.

”Shower's don't count.” Fate rose up and walked back to the door.

”You wanted more?” Nanoha tilted her head.

”What are you talking about?” Fate turned quickly towards Nanoha. ”Th-that's not what I meant.” She waved her hands at the approaching Nanoha.

”Okay then.” Nanoha passed Fate and grabbed her coat. ”Shall we go?” She smiled and walked out from the room.

”Eh?” Fate blinked. ”She got me again.” She sighed before following Nanoha.

____________________

”Lanlai-chan?” Caro tried to get the attention of a black haired girl. They had now finished buying all personal items.

”Yes?” Lanlai inspected a packet of meat in her hand. Caro and Lanlai had decided to make mexican food for the party. Caro claimed to be good in it and, surprisingly, Lanlai didn't object.

”I've been wondering.” A pink dressed girl pushed the cart onward. ”Where did you get that Thought gem?” She stopped to catch the flying meat packet.

”That? I had it on me.” Lanlai grabbed another packet of meat. ”Mexican food is meaty, right?” She gave a pondering look at Caro.

”Yes, but there's limit to everything.” Lanlai nodded and placed the meat packet back to it's place. ”Why did you have it?” Caro pondered.

”So that you could win in the temple.” Lanlai slowed down so she could walk next to Caro.

”You weren't serious there!?” Caro raised her voice, catching the attention of other shoppers. ”Sorry.” After few embarrased bows the others continued to ignore the two.

”I was serious with that potential.” Lanlai smiled. ”I used Thought gem to limit my transformations.” She explained.

”So that serpent thingie wasn't even one of your strongest forms?” Caro staggered slightly terrified. ”It was winning against Fate-san.”

”Ehehe~” Lanlai scratched her head flattered. ”No it wasn't but he was powered by the temple ownership so he was pretty close to the them.” Lanlai forced Caro to stop as she almost drove over a person. ”Watch the road.”

”Sorry.” Caro bowed again before turning towards the vegetable section. ”So if you hadn't used Thought gem we would have died there?”

”Pretty much. As would all others.” Lanlai bounced to a carrot stand. ”Unlimited mana isn't something you want to mess with. Remember what Aren-nii did in the TSAB headquaters?” She picked a carrot and pointed it at Caro.

”So that would have happened if you didn't use it.” Caro lowered her head and fell silent. ”Why couldn't you make it so that you had no change of winning in the first place?”

”Well, we couldn't risk if some looters popped out, so we had to have atleast some of our strenght.” Lanlai took a quick look at the shopping list Nanoha had given them. ”Po-ta-to?” She spelled and began searching the stalls.

”That does sound reasonable.” She thought aloud. ”All of you used a Thought gem?” Caro guided Lanlai to the potato stand.

”Yea. But I don't know what they used.” Lanlai answered, collecting potatos from a green stall. ”It took us pretty long time to get all the-those gems.” She shook her head and placed the large sack of potatoes on the cart.

”You have more Thought gems?”

”I... Same-nii is holding them for us. He has special connections to the gods.” Lanlai explained hesitantly.

”Special connections? Same-san?” Caro blinked.

Lanlai quickly checked her surroundings and whispering something to Caro's ear.

”Same-san is married to a goddess!?” Caro lifted her voice and again gathered the attention of fellow shoppers. ”Sorry.” She performed her bow round before turning back at Lanlai.

”He sure is.” Lanlai giggled. ”And as a result Same-nii got some special privileges.”

”Like?” Caro pushed the cart towards a lettuce stand.

”He has a personal vault in the Land of the Dead for storage.”

”And there he keeps the rest of the gems?” Lanlai nodded as an answer. ”But why didn't he put all those books and paintings there when we left the temple?” Caro thought aloud.

”Well that is...” Lanlai stopped midsentence. ”I really don't know.” She picked up a lettuce roll.

~--
”What's next?” A black robed monk questioned. People around him watched closely as a pile of bags followed them on a black platform.

”Let's see...” Erio pulled the note out from his pocket. ”Liquor?!” He shouted from surprise. ”Maybe we got the wrong list...” And placed the note back to his pocket, laughing.

”Liquor? Not a proplem.” Same grabbed his bicep and floated forward with nearly inhuman speed without even moving his legs.

”Erio-kun?” A suprised voice called for the boy nearby.

”Caro, Lanlai, small world. We met Subaru-san and Linque-san not too long ago.” Erio turned towards the voice and bowed like Aren had taught him.

”Good day, Erio-kun.” Lanlai greeted the red haired boy. ”Weren't you suppose to be with Same-nii?” She searched the surroundings.

”He just left to buy liquor, but I'm kinda worried.” Erio's eyes left Caro and Lanlai and fixated on the way Same went.

”You have every right to be.” Lanlai comforted the boy with a pat on the back.

”We have something to ask him. Which way did he go?”

”You don't know where the liquor section is? Never mind.” Erio slapped his mind and pointed towards the outer edge of the hall.

”Thanks Erio-kun.” Caro gave a light bow and pushed her cart onward.

”See you.” Lanlai waved and followed Caro.

”I'll stay here and guard this stack.” Erio waved and faced the pile of bags behind him.

As the thought of Same being alone with alcohol worried them, they walked faster than normal towards the liquor section. The convenient store was one of the smaller in Cranagan, the capital of Mid-Childa. Most of RF6 used this store as the bigger ones were always crowded, no matter what the time was and here they had less change to run into their rabid fans. The superkids Nanoha, Fate and Hayate had a surprisingly big fanbase and thus all people interacting with them were in constant danger of being stalked.

”Great, nothing is broken yet.” Lanlai sighed as she saw Same read a label in a wine bottle. ”Same-nii!” She called for the black robed person.

”Lan-chan? Ruchi? You need to buy alcohol too?” Same placed the bottle carefully back to it's shelf and walked to the girls.

”Naah, I'm done already. We just came to ask you about something.”

”Alright, shoot.” Same flexed his fingers and prepeared himself.

”Why didn't you use the vault to store your paintings and the books?” Lanlai inquired.

”What vault?” Same approached Lanlai with aghast look.

”The vault you used to exchange letters with Lucine-nee.” Lanlai expressed her slight irritation with a loud step.

”I remember the letters, but I don't remember any vault.” Same scratched his chin and his gaze began to wander.

”Have you removed your Thought gem yet?” Lanlai sighed and slumped her shoulders.

”Wha-? Ah, yes, I had that.” Same laughed embarrased and four blue flames appeared from his head, materializing in his hand. ”Oh, that vault.” He remembered instantly.

”You used your Thought gem to make yourself forget about your vault?!” Lanlai lifted her voice from dissatisfaction.

”If I didn't I could have used Nemesis in the battle.” Same reasoned and lifted his shoulders.

”Ah- Good point.” Lanlai walked back to Caro's side ”You do think sometimes.” She praised, honestly impressed. ”But how could you forget about the gems side-effects?”

”I was distracted.” Same laughed proudly.

”What is this Nemesis?” Caro asked after her silence.

”My gun, the Unwelcome Visitor. You might not want to meet her.” Same smiled and returned to inspecting the labels. ”You think red wine is too fancy?”

”Remember who you are asking.” Lanlai chuckled and left the section.

”Nemesis is that scary?” Caro followed Lanlai out from the alcohol section.

”A gun with unlimited homing ammo and that kills you in the most painful way everytime it hits. Yea, it is pretty scary.” Lanlai stated with her usual tone, nodding.

Caro froze on that spot from the shock. Lanlai wasn't serious in the temple and yet managed to fatally injure Caro and was winning against Fate. Same was just as monster as he almost killed both Nanoha and Teana without his greatest weapon. Reminiscing this an old question raised to Caro's consciousness. How did she survive those wounds?

Lanlai noticed this quickly and returned to Caro's side. ”Don't worry. He won't hit anybody he doesn't want to.” She gave her a comforting pat on the back.

”Ehhehe~” Caro gave an uneasy laugh before picking up her pace.

Slow days are slow

[Keroko]

I don't go to the OC chat though. :3

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Keroko

I don't go to the OC chat though. :3

You seem to be proud of that :3

BTW is it safe to assume if I mess up my characterization of Keroko, you'll point it out?

[Keroko]

Of course, I'm pretty liberal about what you do with my characters, as long as you don't pull them OOC. As soon as you do that, I'll point it out (characterization is very important to me, one of the reasons I can't stand 'Bunny Ace' stories or things like an extremely daring Fate).

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Of course, I'm pretty liberal about what you do with my characters, as long as you don't pull them OOC. As soon as you do that, I'll point it out (characterization is very important to me, one of the reasons I can't stand 'Bunny Ace' stories or things like an extremely daring Fate).

don't like my bunnies but you liked Keroha? T_T

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Of course, I'm pretty liberal about what you do with my characters, as long as you don't pull them OOC. As soon as you do that, I'll point it out (characterization is very important to me, one of the reasons I can't stand 'Bunny Ace' stories or things like an extremely daring Fate).

Noted :3

Originally Posted by Satashi

don't like my bunnies but you liked Keroha? T_T

LOL Poor Satashi :3 *pats Satashi on the head*

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Satashi

don't like my bunnies but you liked Keroha? T_T

Less bunny, more realism in that one. Which is why I liked it. It's the fics that have Nanoha and Fate doing it everywhere and anytime under any circumstance that I don't really like.

I don't mind Nanoha and Fate having sex, but when its written as if they're a pair of horny bunnies, I generally lose my interest. To take an example: Fate is a very shy person, I just can't see her as a 'bunny' character without drawing her OOC.

[Kagerou]

Originally Posted by Keroko

I don't mind Nanoha and Fate having sex, but when its written as if they're a pair of horny bunnies, I generally lose my interest. To take an example: Fate is a very shy person, I just can't see her as a 'bunny' character without drawing her OOC.

Well you know what they say about the quiet ones...

*runs*

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Less bunny, more realism in that one. Which is why I liked it. It's the fics that have Nanoha and Fate doing it everywhere and anytime under any circumstance that I don't really like.

I don't mind Nanoha and Fate having sex, but when its written as if they're a pair of horny bunnies, I generally lose my interest. To take an example: Fate is a very shy person, I just can't see her as a 'bunny' character without drawing her OOC.

I would say to each their own, because I actually find it cute that Nanoha and Fate are like bunnies, but you have a point. It does seem to scream Fate being OOC. But hey, once in a while, it's always nice :3

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Well you know what they say about the quiet ones...

*runs*

*catches up to Kagerou and smacks him upside the head*

Get your head out of the gutter! Sukebe!!!

[Kagerou]

<.<
>.>

*dumps cold water on himself*
*Kagerou is now known as Kagerou-chan*
Kagerou-chan: "You wouldn't hit a girl now, would you? ^^;"

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Kagerou

<.<
>.>

*dumps cold water on himself*
*Kagerou is now known as Kagerou-chan*
Kagerou-chan: "You wouldn't hit a girl now, would you? ^^;"

No I wouldn't. However....*splashes hot water onto Kagerou-chan and then punts him into the air*

NOW GET YOU ASS INTO THE IRC CHANNEL! IT'S TOO QUIET!!!

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Well you know what they say about the quiet ones...

*runs*

... scream the loudest, I know. And I'm not arguing that.

I'm saying that Fate is shy, very shy her being a horny bunny as she is often portrayed (I think the 4koma's are the source of that) is pretty OOC. Is it wrong to write her that way? Not at all, freedom of authors and all. I'm just not that fond of it usually, Like I said: Characterization is important to me. I prefer to write with the characters as they are, because that's who they are. To twist them into other things would be to forcibly change the characters, I can't do that so easilly. Forcing change upon characters I like is difficult for me, because if I do so, they're no longer the characters I have come to know and love.

Now, there are characters I can 'cheat' with in that regard. Like Precia, whom we know can be nice, and Jail, who is very kind to his Cyborgs. I can write those as good guys, but that's about it. Doing stuff like writing... say... 'Evil Yuuno' stories, or indeed 'Bunny Fate' stories are extremely difficult for me to write. I can do it, but I'd rather not.