2011-06-30, 08:54 | Link #32001 | |
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Nanoha is slightly exaggerating and Fate isn't calling her out on it because she doesn't think it's a good idea. Of course I'd have said that instory if that contradiction hadn't slipped my mind when I wrote it. That's what I meant, a child made from using their combined genetic material not a clone of one of them. I probably should have had one of them say that but I didn't think it would make sense in-story for one of them to outright state that instead leaving it implied/subtly stated (depending on how you took Nanoha saying that the she explained to her parent's that the child would be hers and Fate's to her parents) by Nanoha. Oh and I don't mind the nitpicking, it let's me know what plotholes I need to fill in, and what needs a better explanation. Edit: Page claim for...uh...my first page claim. |
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Cute things, sharp teeth.
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GAH! Snorted some drink from laughing and it buuuuurrrrnnnnsss >.< Quote:
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*groans* you know that image is going to plague me constantly until I bleed it out on paper, right? And with every passing day it's just going to get steamier and steamier...
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2011-06-30, 13:10 | Link #32005 | |
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Join Date: May 2011
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I do agree that she is a lot hotter now...
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2011-06-30, 21:15 | Link #32009 | ||
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I perv. |
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2011-06-30, 21:26 | Link #32011 |
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I can see Vivio being a bit curious about it... and thus springing it on Cia to "test out her skills at escaping". Because we all know that Cia should keep her skills as a Shadow in tip-top shape.
*flees*
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2011-06-30, 21:36 | Link #32012 | |
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2011-06-30, 21:40 | Link #32014 | |
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2011-06-30, 21:45 | Link #32015 | |
Forever a Journey
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But honestly, I can't really imagine either Viv or Lu being into that either. A short crack fic about an awkward sexual experience would be hilarious thou *glances at Mozco*.
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2011-06-30, 21:49 | Link #32016 |
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My bad? I was originally cranking these out at a much faster rate, but... well, then I hit the actual main Shadowverse storyline and all of the lovely dissecting of Lutecia's psyche, plus I got into college. I'm close to the end, but it's harder to get to since I made the whole series much darker than I originally intended.
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2011-06-30, 21:50 | Link #32018 | ||
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Now that it has, it'll be harder to resist. |
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2011-06-30, 21:51 | Link #32020 | |
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authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha |
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