Hidan no Aria [Light Novel]

[Flere821]

Originally Posted by KiRa08o2

what about GIII,isn't he introduced to be kinji rival-about the same age and the same charisma allowing to make ally(or subordinate)of enemie?
if he can become and decent antagonist,i'll be satisfied.

Spoiler:

G III's age wasn't specified, but he's powerful to the point just his killing intent (on the same level as Kinji's father) made Watson, Kinji and Kaname freeze up. It was stated he outclassed Kinji by several magnitudes and the entire Team Baskerville cannot beat him.
I don't think he'd make a good rival for Kinji when there's such a large power difference. But being a good antagonist is possible.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Spoiler:

G III's age wasn't specified, but he's powerful to the point just his killing intent (on the same level as Kinji's father) made Watson, Kinji and Kaname freeze up. It was stated he outclassed Kinji by several magnitudes and the entire Team Baskerville cannot beat him.
I don't think he'd make a good rival for Kinji when there's such a large power difference. But being a good antagonist is possible.

that is until Kinji gets super Hysteria mode, complete with gold hair and green eyes, with an aura that emits the Kamijou/Kinji disease. xD

[ZeKeR]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

that is until Kinji gets super Hysteria mode, complete with gold hair and green eyes, with an aura that emits the Kamijou/Kinji disease. xD

so shall we include Kinji in the wanted gaiz list? highest ranking was Shiki Tohno.

[Flere821]

Wait, Shiki Tohno is the highest guy on the list? >.>

I would have thought some other guy (eg Negi Springfield, Kamijou Touma) would be the #1...

But yeah, I'd say put Kinji on the list. Last I checked he has 7(?) girls after him.

Spoiler for list of girls after Kinji as of Vol10:

Aria
Shirayuki
Riko
Reki
Watson
Jeanne/Joan/Durandal
Kanade
---
Other girls possibly on the list: Fuuma (his kouhai), Shirayuki's younger sister that visited him once before.

Anyone I missed?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Wait, Shiki Tohno is the highest guy on the list? >.>

I would have thought some other guy (eg Negi Springfield, Kamijou Touma) would be the #1...

That list was a long time ago, well before Index...

Actually, I could have sworn remembering that Athrun Zala had the highest bounty.

(Negi technically was one of the highest- They deem him a 'Time Sensitive Case')

Originally Posted by KiRa08o2

And about the Index thing:

Spoiler for Opinion:

Hidan no Aria isn't really that kind of series, similar to Index. I mean, in Index, it can be done, since all of them - Accelerator, Shiage, etc - can manage to have a story for their own. Here, the problem is if the story is told from a I-don't-know-who's viewpoint, would it be the same HnA? Probably not. Also, you need to give them more focus, and taking care of them as other main characters, or near-MCs, and it needs more efforts.

HnA can go on with Shiranui having an important role, I guess. But if they introduced another boy at Volume 11...i don't know.

Spoiler:

I've sort of got what you mean, but things didn't start like that for Index either, it was a good solid 10 volumes give or take before those characters started getting their own story. So it's really never too late to start.

In any case, my 'rant' was just about a wasted opportunity to use Watson in a different way than just another girl... Or Rather, just another Reverse-trap girl keeping her gender a secret because of some ridiculous family traditions -_-

I mean, if they want to build that kind of romance drama what's wrong with using a real guy? Bah nvm, it's just my opinion

Originally Posted by Flere821

Spoiler:

G III's age wasn't specified, but he's powerful to the point just his killing intent (on the same level as Kinji's father) made Watson, Kinji and Kaname freeze up. It was stated he outclassed Kinji by several magnitudes and the entire Team Baskerville cannot beat him.
I don't think he'd make a good rival for Kinji when there's such a large power difference. But being a good antagonist is possible.

Yes well... I know a certain other two people that have a large difference in power... Just saying... >.>

*cough*

After all "defeated the undefeatable" has been done before in this series...

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

that is until Kinji gets super Hysteria mode, complete with gold hair and green eyes, with an aura that emits the Kamijou/Kinji disease. xD

Ah, so we're heading in that direction again...

Originally Posted by ZeKeR

so shall we include Kinji in the wanted gaiz list? highest ranking was Shiki Tohno.

I thought the highest was Athrun Zala?

Anyway I love that list Are people still making it

[blitz1/2]

Who's Kanade again?

[Athena]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Who's Kanade again?

I bet he menat Kaname.

Originally Posted by ZeKeR

so shall we include Kinji in the wanted gaiz list? highest ranking was Shiki Tohno.

Dundam SEED's dude was the highest.

Wait, I'll post it here:

Spoiler for IMG:

A 15,000,000 bounty should be put on Kinji's I guess.

Late Edit: summary for the end of V10+rest

Spoiler for V10:

Spoiler for V10, chapter 1&2:

Chapter 1

Basically, at the beginning, Watson came to help. And it seems that G IV basically has no intention to harm Kinji. In chapter 1, you see scenes of G IV fighting against the girls, and screaming things such as the one Kinji loves the most. Seems that G III is an American Butei. Kinji tried to figt G IV, but got beaten up pretty badly. Anyways, the Washington Butei rules or such forbids killing anyone, so the four girls were all safe. BTW, G III is superior to G IV, and their attitudes show it.

Chapter 2

In a conversation with Jeanne, Watson and the fox-girl (forgot her name in japanese) it is said that these fellas (G III and G IV) are using 'science'. Also, fox-girl suggests that Kinji, instead of fighting them, take them in their side or such. Basically, she suggests taking them into [Masters] (was that term correct?) and Watso also says that she felt that G IV had feellings for Kinji. So, she said Kinji could become the 'Romeo', which is a term in Butei for a man to seduce a woman.

After that, Kinji gets in the hospital and sees Hilda (let me check the name afterwards) with some food (which are Riko's favorite). Hilda was trying to hide herself, but got discovered by Kinji. She was shy of giving that food to Riko, so asks Kinji to do it instead, and also gives Kinji a medicine for Riko (which seems to be disgusting). It is guessed that Hilda has feelings that are rather strong towards Riko...

Anyways, back in the hospital, Kinji enters the room (numbere 303, if I did not misread) and sees also Aya (the Amdo girl) with the other four patients (Aria and the bunch). Aside Riko's activities, the four of them were all having Aya make better weapons (and Shirayuki's M60 was present). They all had different reasons

Aria: "You can't be attacked and not do anything in return"
Shirayuki: "The one who's the closer to Kin-chan is me, and definitvely not that girl"
Riko: "Hehehe, this girls' reunion is fun, Riko is very excited"
Reki: "Butei needs to give back a tooth for a tooth" (These citations are roughly translated with parts ommitted)

Kinji pulls away Aria, while the latter one was saying somthing like asking another rocket backpack from Aya. Kinji was starting to ask if they should oull G IV on their side (which Aria obviously refuses) and G IV suddenly appeared.

While the four girls were reparing their weapon (and Aya scared oof being in the middle of a fight), G IV suddenly says this line

"I finally found you, brother. Let's go home, I bet that you're hungry."

Even Riko and Shirayuki were surprised by that line. And as Kinji was protesting, he got kissed by his 'little sister' (he smelled a milk candy scent, BTW).

Kinji is accused of treason by the Aria, afterwards. Shirayuki fainted, Riko said that she could not stand something like that, and when Kinji asked help from Reki, she said.

"I don't understand, but right now, I don't want to talk with Kinji."

After that, G IV said that she knows the four of them live together with Kinji, because of their 'scents' in Kinji's room.

Also, she gave to each one nicknames. Radish head, Demure girl (or something like that), cute-acting girl and silent freak. (The one I'm sure to have translated correctly is silent freak) After that, G IV took Kinji and both left the room.

As Kinji was resisting, G IV said things such as
"Wait 5 minutes. I'll go kill all of them, so Onii-chan doesn't think of them"
or
"Onii-chan should only look at me"
and such thing as these. (The two sentences above aren't citations, BTW. Only summarizing most of what she said.)

After that, she asked Kinji if she can grant her a wish, which is to stay at his side. With her little sister saying all that, plus the fact that she was crying Kinji couldn't refuse.

She also asks for another favour, which is to buy her milk candies. After they go on a bus, with many buteis on it, G IV suddenly calls Kinji 'Onii-chan', and all passangers were surprised by that, saying that how can someone as cute as her be Kinji's little sister. When they ask her name, Kinji, thinking that she can't say 'G IV' as a name, made up one. He said that her name was Kaname.

After they got off, Kaname said that she was happy that Kinji gave her a name, and asked him to call her with that name from onwards. She was shedding tears of happiness.

Also, a bullet was aimed at them, but kaname saw it comming from the reflection on Kinji's eyes.

Spoiler for C3:

The story starts with Kinji entering his room. To his surprise, the room was clean. Way too clean. Aria's cushihon, heart-shaped, was gone, so was Shirayuki's closet and Riko's H-games piled up. When he asked Kaname what did she do with these things, she said that she all sent them to the hospital, the cushion, the H-games and the black set of underwear. She said that she cut them all to pieces, by hand, and that cutting all these things was very tiring (obviously). after that, when Kinji got kinda angry, she said that Kinji didn't have any taste for women, and asked Kinji to swear to not touch, to not hug any girl beside her (that would be a major event for the following chapters). Kinji swore, saying that he doesn't want to touch any to begin with. She suddenly started saying that Kinji was cool, and that she fell in love with him, and also saying that the blood relationship was nothing. When Kinji asked her why, she said that it was because he gave her milk candies.

Kaname decided to cook for Kinji (and was rubbing the cooking knfe with a diamond while smiling). She said thiing ssuch as taking the four girls' abilities, and that's why she could cook like Shirayuki. She also said that it was the first time she felt at home.

After that, during the school days, she made up a love letter so she could make Kinji jealous ( I am skipping the jealousy by the students to have a cute sister). She also asked Kinji to hug her, which he accepted. Tightly. She cried once again because she was very happy. Then she wanted him to kiss her. Kinji did, once again. However, he did not ended up in Hysteria mode, no matter how long did he kissed.

After that, when he was alone, Kinji went to ask Fuuma (was that her name) for the report on Kaname, in a park with no real lights. BTW, Fuuma had half of her body in a hole, to hide herself. She said the same things as Flere821 mentionned above, plus that Kinji's sister was getting along with girls, but ONLY girls.

And here's the first event. Fuuma got stuck in the hole (airhead) and asked Kinji to pull her out. Kinji accepted, and ended up falling on her, on the ground. (imagine the scene). Fuuma, aroused, said that her parents would kill her if they learnt that both of them ended up doing 'that' before marriage. Kinji gave the lame excuse that it was practice, and Fuuma accepted that excuse. The reason why Kinji needed to give an excuse is that relationships between seniors-juniors are forbidden, or something like that (need someone to clear that up.)

Dialogue's like this.

"Don't say anything stupod. This is training. Do some push-ups."
"D-d-d-d-d-do I need to do up-and-down movements?!?!"

And they started doing movements. Imagine the scene. It could easily create a misunderstanding, but Fuuma still did that (weird sounds were coming from her mouth, interpret it whetever way you want.) And they ended up doing that for a while, in the dark.

When they were finished, Kinji walked (and thinking he should protect her so she won't be deceived by anyone) for a bit and heard sounds. When he went to that place, where the sound came from, there were many bamboos cut.

Spoiler for C4:

The next day, Kaname wanted to watch a movie with Kinji. Kinji accepts. Also, she gives Kinji a doll, representing him, and Kinji noticed it was him only because there was the name 'Onii-chan' glued to the doll. Alos, he saw that there was another doll holding te Kin-doll's hand, and it was Kaname-doll. BTW, there was a lot of blood on the dolls. Then, she said that there were presents because Kinji became her 'lover' or somthing like that. She asked if Kinji broke her promise, and Kinji said no, since what happened with Fuuma was only a little 'incident'.

After that, Kinji went to the SSR to find Aria. When he arrived she was training with a senior, for something called 'cognitive training' (Google translation). Though it seems that she failed, from the sceen and from what she said to Kinji after. She added that she won't be living with him until that 'ennemy' s gone (she seems very angry when she knew that Kin gave the name 'Kaname' to G IV). However, after arguing for some time (Aria threatened to attack the boys' dormitory with the British Air Force if he made a move on Kaname), they reconcile. They ended up hugging each other due to a seagull (or something like that). They had a conversation while hugging each other. Aria started saying that she was wrong, along with things such as maybe Kaname is his sister. Then, Aria asked Kinji to lower his head. Though he initially refused, he finally lowered his head. At that time, Aria--kissed him.

As he went into H-mode (hysteria mode), he saw that there was something abnormal. He looked around and saw the words' Traitortraitortraitortraitortraitortraitor' carved on the ciment, most likely done with a superhuman strengh.


After the event with Aria, Kinji returns home, where Kaname was cooking. During some lovey-dovey stuffs (such as Kaname insisting on the fact that Kinji loves her the most), Kinji noticed that Kaname's finger was injured.

At school, Kinji received a message during English course from Watson (who throew him a piece of paper), telling him to come at 5 PM in the art room. He went there alone. There, Watson tells Kinji about the R-Buteis, G III, IQ 290, what Flere821 said, with G III's charisma and such. After that, Watson asks for the 'Training' or the 'Play' with Kinji. She has chosen a 'woman manager in community activities' (please correct that). During the time Watson was changing into the clothes for that, Kinji thought that someone was behind the door. Seems that it was only his imagination. Then, Watson finished changing and seems that she wants Kinji to stare at her because 'it is written in the act' (Watson wrote it herself, BTW). After that, they start the training, and today's (that day's) training was to be close to each other (I mean, physically close). Obviously, when Watson was approaching him, he felt his blood in his head. Also, Kinji needed to call her by a name (something like 艾尔 in the Chinese version). When they've gotten close to each other, here's what happened.

"OK, let'S do it today, Tohyama."
"Do what?"
"Don't worry"
"Ha!?"
"Only on the ch-cheek. I, I didn't use any lipstick. That would be next time."
"What the hell is your intent--"

And thus, Kinji was kissed on the cheek (he said that it was the 2 without 3, since it's the third time he's been kissed this month).

After that, Watson was obviously over-excited, hugged Kinji and asked him to tell her that he loves her, as a part of the act. Kinji, when he felt Watson's body, went into Hysteria. Then he heard the sound of greending teeth, and also saw someone staring through the keyhole. Then he said out Watson's name (Watson's acting name, which I mentionned above), and Watson repeating Kinji's, but both for two obvious different reasons. then he said to Watson that someone saw them, so asked her to change back. When Kinji went out, pulling Watson who quickly changed herself into a boy, and thus, her clothes were...messy. then, as Kinji pulled he rout of the room, he saw Shiranui, whi was having the 'WTH is going on' expression, and Watson covering his chest while hiding behind Kinji. And from Shiranui's perspective Watson is a boy, so...well, Kiji was stressed out, and searched for an excuse, saying to Shiranui
"S-S-Shiranui, let me explain. I'll explain why--"
And Shiranui smiled towards him and said.
"Don't worry, it isn't something bad---I promise i won't say anything."
And like that, Kinji and Watson left, just as Shiranui...and obviously, Kinji had a reason to be down.

Spoiler for Chapter 5+GFTN!:

OK, following that, more misunderstandings happen. For example, Kinji said that she’ll have a new sister, and Shirayuki interprets it as sister-in=law, etc. At the end, she faints of happiness.

Back home, Kinji bumps in her sister, who was wearing only her underwear with a Popsicle in her mouth. And Kinji felt his blood rushing to his head. She charged in Kinji’s arms, and talked about the relationship between the siblings Isis and Osiris (Egypt mythology, if you don’t know.) When Kinji mentioned that another sibling of his, from his father’s side, will come, she decided to do it know. And when Kinji finally enters H-mode, he understood what would go on with Kaname. And as he wanted to approach Kaname, what Flere mentioned in the previous posts happened, with Kaname starting to act weak and protest. And Kinji, who didn’t want to ‘break’ her, stopped.

GFTN!:

The next morning, Kinji wakes up and sees Kaname talking to trhe birds (obviously, they can’t hear her). She apologized to Kinji for what she did last night, and said that she was made in Los Alamos research center, as a weapon. She said that if she can’t use Hysteria, G III would abandon her, and she can’t do anything against the men who would come take her back, since she escaped. After she said that she was a failure, Kinji let out the sweet words as usual, things like that she can live with him and that her Hysteria will be a secret. And as she kissed Kinji again, a furious Shirayuki barged in, furious because Kaname kissed Kinji more times than herself did. And Kaname also went into dark-kaname mode, and asked if she’s there to take her big brother from her. And when Kaname mentioned that Kinji doesn’t let her sleep at night, Shirayuki went berserk with her M60 in her hands, and challenged Kaname. Here’s the 5-6 last lines for the epilogue:

“Ka- Kaname! I challenge you! As the fiancée of Kin-chan-sama, I request a duel against you--------”

Eh......?

(F-f-fiancée......?)

E-excuse me, Shirayuki-san? I did ask you to come here and pretend that you’re a relative of mine......

But that setting—isn’t it significantly off the mark?

Go For The NEXT!!!

[Flere821]

[QUOTE=KiRa08o2;3731705]I

Spoiler for IMG:

A 15,000,000 bounty should be put on Kinji's I guess.
That list is out of date, for example Negi have probably jumped 3 places by this point in the manga

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Flere821

A 15,000,000 bounty should be put on Kinji's I guess.
That list is out of date, for example Negi have probably jumped 3 places by this point in the manga

I agree, the time sensitive case of Negi has finally exploded, but most of these guys are pretty much in the ground by now, these days a whole other generation has taken it's place

Given his combat potential, and the size and quality of his harem, the closest match to Kinji is probably Shirou, 12-15 million. But frankly Kinji isn't as well-known as Shirou, I suppose making him less of a threat?

[Flere821]

In-universe, just about everyone that knows about IU and Sherlock knows about Kinji, so I'd say his bounty will be high. And if we're judging by threat level, Kinji > Shirou IMO, what with HSS making him the ultimate ladies' man to girls of his age group. It's like having Shirou's BAR without having to jump at it for hours on end.

In our universe, yeah the bounty's probably not going to be as high as Shirou's.

[tsunade666]

Originally Posted by KiRa08o2

[/SPOILER]

Spoiler for V10:

Spoiler for V10, chapter 1&2:

Chapter 1

Basically, at the beginning, Watson came to help. And it seems that G IV basically has no intention to harm Kinji. In chapter 1, you see scenes of G IV fighting against the girls, and screaming things such as the one Kinji loves the most. Seems that G III is an American Butei. Kinji tried to figt G IV, but got beaten up pretty badly. Anyways, the Washington Butei rules or such forbids killing anyone, so the four girls were all safe. BTW, G III is superior to G IV, and their attitudes show it.

Chapter 2

In a conversation with Jeanne, Watson and the fox-girl (forgot her name in japanese) it is said that these fellas (G III and G IV) are using 'science'. Also, fox-girl suggests that Kinji, instead of fighting them, take them in their side or such. Basically, she suggests taking them into [Masters] (was that term correct?) and Watso also says that she felt that G IV had feellings for Kinji. So, she said Kinji could become the 'Romeo', which is a term in Butei for a man to seduce a woman.

After that, Kinji gets in the hospital and sees Hilda (let me check the name afterwards) with some food (which are Riko's favorite). Hilda was trying to hide herself, but got discovered by Kinji. She was shy of giving that food to Riko, so asks Kinji to do it instead, and also gives Kinji a medicine for Riko (which seems to be disgusting). It is guessed that Hilda has feelings that are rather strong towards Riko...

Anyways, back in the hospital, Kinji enters the room (numbere 303, if I did not misread) and sees also Aya (the Amdo girl) with the other four patients (Aria and the bunch). Aside Riko's activities, the four of them were all having Aya make better weapons (and Shirayuki's M60 was present). They all had different reasons

Aria: "You can't be attacked and not do anything in return"
Shirayuki: "The one who's the closer to Kin-chan is me, and definitvely not that girl"
Riko: "Hehehe, this girls' reunion is fun, Riko is very excited"
Reki: "Butei needs to give back a tooth for a tooth" (These citations are roughly translated with parts ommitted)

Kinji pulls away Aria, while the latter one was saying somthing like asking another rocket backpack from Aya. Kinji was starting to ask if they should oull G IV on their side (which Aria obviously refuses) and G IV suddenly appeared.

While the four girls were reparing their weapon (and Aya scared oof being in the middle of a fight), G IV suddenly says this line

"I finally found you, brother. Let's go home, I bet that you're hungry."

Even Riko and Shirayuki were surprised by that line. And as Kinji was protesting, he got kissed by his 'little sister' (he smelled a milk candy scent, BTW).

Kinji is accused of treason by the Aria, afterwards. Shirayuki fainted, Riko said that she could not stand something like that, and when Kinji asked help from Reki, she said.

"I don't understand, but right now, I don't want to talk with Kinji."

After that, G IV said that she knows the four of them live together with Kinji, because of their 'scents' in Kinji's room.

Also, she gave to each one nicknames. Radish head, Demure girl (or something like that), cute-acting girl and silent freak. (The one I'm sure to have translated correctly is silent freak) After that, G IV took Kinji and both left the room.

As Kinji was resisting, G IV said things such as
"Wait 5 minutes. I'll go kill all of them, so Onii-chan doesn't think of them"
or
"Onii-chan should only look at me"
and such thing as these. (The two sentences above aren't citations, BTW. Only summarizing most of what she said.)

After that, she asked Kinji if she can grant her a wish, which is to stay at his side. With her little sister saying all that, plus the fact that she was crying Kinji couldn't refuse.

She also asks for another favour, which is to buy her milk candies. After they go on a bus, with many buteis on it, G IV suddenly calls Kinji 'Onii-chan', and all passangers were surprised by that, saying that how can someone as cute as her be Kinji's little sister. When they ask her name, Kinji, thinking that she can't say 'G IV' as a name, made up one. He said that her name was Kaname.

After they got off, Kaname said that she was happy that Kinji gave her a name, and asked him to call her with that name from onwards. She was shedding tears of happiness.

Also, a bullet was aimed at them, but kaname saw it comming from the reflection on Kinji's eyes.

Spoiler for C3:

The story starts with Kinji entering his room. To his surprise, the room was clean. Way too clean. Aria's cushihon, heart-shaped, was gone, so was Shirayuki's closet and Riko's H-games piled up. When he asked Kaname what did she do with these things, she said that she all sent them to the hospital, the cushion, the H-games and the black set of underwear. She said that she cut them all to pieces, by hand, and that cutting all these things was very tiring (obviously). after that, when Kinji got kinda angry, she said that Kinji didn't have any taste for women, and asked Kinji to swear to not touch, to not hug any girl beside her (that would be a major event for the following chapters). Kinji swore, saying that he doesn't want to touch any to begin with. She suddenly started saying that Kinji was cool, and that she fell in love with him, and also saying that the blood relationship was nothing. When Kinji asked her why, she said that it was because he gave her milk candies.

Kaname decided to cook for Kinji (and was rubbing the cooking knfe with a diamond while smiling). She said thiing ssuch as taking the four girls' abilities, and that's why she could cook like Shirayuki. She also said that it was the first time she felt at home.

After that, during the school days, she made up a love letter so she could make Kinji jealous ( I am skipping the jealousy by the students to have a cute sister). She also asked Kinji to hug her, which he accepted. Tightly. She cried once again because she was very happy. Then she wanted him to kiss her. Kinji did, once again. However, he did not ended up in Hysteria mode, no matter how long did he kissed.

After that, when he was alone, Kinji went to ask Fuuma (was that her name) for the report on Kaname, in a park with no real lights. BTW, Fuuma had half of her body in a hole, to hide herself. She said the same things as Flere821 mentionned above, plus that Kinji's sister was getting along with girls, but ONLY girls.

And here's the first event. Fuuma got stuck in the hole (airhead) and asked Kinji to pull her out. Kinji accepted, and ended up falling on her, on the ground. (imagine the scene). Fuuma, aroused, said that her parents would kill her if they learnt that both of them ended up doing 'that' before marriage. Kinji gave the lame excuse that it was practice, and Fuuma accepted that excuse. The reason why Kinji needed to give an excuse is that relationships between seniors-juniors are forbidden, or something like that (need someone to clear that up.)

Dialogue's like this.

"Don't say anything stupod. This is training. Do some push-ups."
"D-d-d-d-d-do I need to do up-and-down movements?!?!"

And they started doing movements. Imagine the scene. It could easily create a misunderstanding, but Fuuma still did that (weird sounds were coming from her mouth, interpret it whetever way you want.) And they ended up doing that for a while, in the dark.

When they were finished, Kinji walked (and thinking he should protect her so she won't be deceived by anyone) for a bit and heard sounds. When he went to that place, where the sound came from, there were many bamboos cut.

Spoiler for C4:

The next day, Kaname wanted to watch a movie with Kinji. Kinji accepts. Also, she gives Kinji a doll, representing him, and Kinji noticed it was him only because there was the name 'Onii-chan' glued to the doll. Alos, he saw that there was another doll holding te Kin-doll's hand, and it was Kaname-doll. BTW, there was a lot of blood on the dolls. Then, she said that there were presents because Kinji became her 'lover' or somthing like that. She asked if Kinji broke her promise, and Kinji said no, since what happened with Fuuma was only a little 'incident'.

After that, Kinji went to the SSR to find Aria. When he arrived she was training with a senior, for something called 'cognitive training' (Google translation). Though it seems that she failed, from the sceen and from what she said to Kinji after. She added that she won't be living with him until that 'ennemy' s gone (she seems very angry when she knew that Kin gave the name 'Kaname' to G IV). However, after arguing for some time (Aria threatened to attack the boys' dormitory with the British Air Force if he made a move on Kaname), they reconcile. They ended up hugging each other due to a seagull (or something like that). They had a conversation while hugging each other. Aria started saying that she was wrong, along with things such as maybe Kaname is his sister. Then, Aria asked Kinji to lower his head. Though he initially refused, he finally lowered his head. At that time, Aria--kissed him.

As he went into H-mode (hysteria mode), he saw that there was something abnormal. He looked around and saw the words' Traitortraitortraitortraitortraitortraitor' carved on the ciment, most likely done with a superhuman strengh.


After the event with Aria, Kinji returns home, where Kaname was cooking. During some lovey-dovey stuffs (such as Kaname insisting on the fact that Kinji loves her the most), Kinji noticed that Kaname's finger was injured.

At school, Kinji received a message during English course from Watson (who throew him a piece of paper), telling him to come at 5 PM in the art room. He went there alone. There, Watson tells Kinji about the R-Buteis, G III, IQ 290, what Flere821 said, with G III's charisma and such. After that, Watson asks for the 'Training' or the 'Play' with Kinji. She has chosen a 'woman manager in community activities' (please correct that). During the time Watson was changing into the clothes for that, Kinji thought that someone was behind the door. Seems that it was only his imagination. Then, Watson finished changing and seems that she wants Kinji to stare at her because 'it is written in the act' (Watson wrote it herself, BTW). After that, they start the training, and today's (that day's) training was to be close to each other (I mean, physically close). Obviously, when Watson was approaching him, he felt his blood in his head. Also, Kinji needed to call her by a name (something like 艾尔 in the Chinese version). When they've gotten close to each other, here's what happened.

"OK, let'S do it today, Tohyama."
"Do what?"
"Don't worry"
"Ha!?"
"Only on the ch-cheek. I, I didn't use any lipstick. That would be next time."
"What the hell is your intent--"

And thus, Kinji was kissed on the cheek (he said that it was the 2 without 3, since it's the third time he's been kissed this month).

After that, Watson was obviously over-excited, hugged Kinji and asked him to tell her that he loves her, as a part of the act. Kinji, when he felt Watson's body, went into Hysteria. Then he heard the sound of greending teeth, and also saw someone staring through the keyhole. Then he said out Watson's name (Watson's acting name, which I mentionned above), and Watson repeating Kinji's, but both for two obvious different reasons. then he said to Watson that someone saw them, so asked her to change back. When Kinji went out, pulling Watson who quickly changed herself into a boy, and thus, her clothes were...messy. then, as Kinji pulled he rout of the room, he saw Shiranui, whi was having the 'WTH is going on' expression, and Watson covering his chest while hiding behind Kinji. And from Shiranui's perspective Watson is a boy, so...well, Kiji was stressed out, and searched for an excuse, saying to Shiranui
"S-S-Shiranui, let me explain. I'll explain why--"
And Shiranui smiled towards him and said.
"Don't worry, it isn't something bad---I promise i won't say anything."
And like that, Kinji and Watson left, just as Shiranui...and obviously, Kinji had a reason to be down.

Spoiler for Chapter 5+GFTN!:

OK, following that, more misunderstandings happen. For example, Kinji said that she’ll have a new sister, and Shirayuki interprets it as sister-in=law, etc. At the end, she faints of happiness.

Back home, Kinji bumps in her sister, who was wearing only her underwear with a Popsicle in her mouth. And Kinji felt his blood rushing to his head. She charged in Kinji’s arms, and talked about the relationship between the siblings Isis and Osiris (Egypt mythology, if you don’t know.) When Kinji mentioned that another sibling of his, from his father’s side, will come, she decided to do it know. And when Kinji finally enters H-mode, he understood what would go on with Kaname. And as he wanted to approach Kaname, what Flere mentioned in the previous posts happened, with Kaname starting to act weak and protest. And Kinji, who didn’t want to ‘break’ her, stopped.

GFTN!:

The next morning, Kinji wakes up and sees Kaname talking to trhe birds (obviously, they can’t hear her). She apologized to Kinji for what she did last night, and said that she was made in Los Alamos research center, as a weapon. She said that if she can’t use Hysteria, G III would abandon her, and she can’t do anything against the men who would come take her back, since she escaped. After she said that she was a failure, Kinji let out the sweet words as usual, things like that she can live with him and that her Hysteria will be a secret. And as she kissed Kinji again, a furious Shirayuki barged in, furious because Kaname kissed Kinji more times than herself did. And Kaname also went into dark-kaname mode, and asked if she’s there to take her big brother from her. And when Kaname mentioned that Kinji doesn’t let her sleep at night, Shirayuki went berserk with her M60 in her hands, and challenged Kaname. Here’s the 5-6 last lines for the epilogue:

Thanks for the summary and it helps that I can't find a time to read it. Well looking forward for vol 11

[mechdra]

I guess we need to wait till christmass to know the result of wife vs sister. I put my bet on a draw with mass destruction of Butei property lol.

Looks like Kaname's HSS is dangerous for herself. However, her HSS will be useful to bost the fighting spirit of the guy who tries to protect her in any dangerous situation except Kinji.

By the way, how old is Kanamje? Is she in 1st or 2nd year?

[ZeKeR]

so lets add the list, shall we?

Tohyama, Kinji
verbally seduced pettanko partner, unstable miko childhood friend, crossdressing female and stole the hearts of the daughter of a master thief, a cool and composed intelligence gatherer, novice ninja, girl that has an angelic voice that has stage fright, an unnerving sniper assassin and the latest, an imouto figure. may be bisexual. confirmed lolicon. known to be a Procrastinating and Undecided Slow Sissy Youth or PUSSY when in normal mode. when Hysteria mode activates, exercise caution when using bait, as girls near suspect will be smitten by the gigolo effect. Approach with EXTREME care, as suspect is virtually in command of a personal strike team/PMC. Confirmed to be armed and dangerous, and outright seductive when Hysteria mode activates.
Bounty: $15, 000, 000 (normal)/$50, 000, 000 (Hysteria)


also, untold damage and trauma shall be had should the yanderes fight it out. expect:
bullet holes
blade slashes
ground cracks
bits of blood
some chipped buildings

[mechdra]

I guess we need to give Kinji a capture level as well.

Normal: 1
HSS: 50?

[Flere821]

Originally Posted by mechdra

By the way, how old is Kaname? Is she in 1st or 2nd year?

1st year High school student (one year under Kinji), though Kinji had said she probably should still be in middle school in age.

@ZeKeR: Considering it's against Butei school rules to NOT go out unarmed, I'd say don't bother with the 'assumed' and just outright warn people he IS armed and dangerous

And Kinji's normal mode is not undecided, he wants nothing more than be left alone by all the girls after him and dealing collateral damage to his property. HSS mode however is just plainly toying with every girl around him IIRC (eg see how he stopped Aria and Riko from fighting when Riko proposed to rob Vlad's mansion).

[Athena]

Originally Posted by ZeKeR

so lets add the list, shall we?

Tohyama, Kinji
verbally seduced pettanko partner, unstable miko childhood friend, crossdressing female and stole the hearts of the daughter of a master thief, a cool and composed intelligence gatherer, novice ninja, girl that has an angelic voice that has stage fright, an unnerving sniper assassin and the latest, an imouto figure. may be bisexual and lolicon. known to be a Procrastinating and Undecided Slow Sissy Youth or PUSSY when in normal mode. when Hysteria mode activates, exercise caution when using bait, as girls near suspect will be smitten by the gigolo effect. Approach with EXTREME care, as suspect is virtually in command of a personal strike team/PMC. Confirmed to be armed and dangerous, and outright seductive when Hysteria mode activates.
Bounty: $15, 000, 000 (normal)/$50, 000, 000 (Hysteria)


also, untold damage and trauma shall be had should the yanderes fight it out. expect:
bullet holes
blade slashes
ground cracks
bits of blood
some chipped buildings

Not 'may be bisexual and lolicon'. CONFIRMED LOLICON.

[Riki]

anyone know what happen to yoake is he taking a break? cant seem to find him in forum too

[S3vEn]

Originally Posted by KiRa08o2

I bet he menat Kaname.



Dundam SEED's dude was the highest.

Wait, I'll post it here:

Spoiler for IMG:

A 15,000,000 bounty should be put on Kinji's I guess.

Late Edit: summary for the end of V10+rest

Spoiler for V10:

Spoiler for V10, chapter 1&2:

Chapter 1

Basically, at the beginning, Watson came to help. And it seems that G IV basically has no intention to harm Kinji. In chapter 1, you see scenes of G IV fighting against the girls, and screaming things such as the one Kinji loves the most. Seems that G III is an American Butei. Kinji tried to figt G IV, but got beaten up pretty badly. Anyways, the Washington Butei rules or such forbids killing anyone, so the four girls were all safe. BTW, G III is superior to G IV, and their attitudes show it.

Chapter 2

In a conversation with Jeanne, Watson and the fox-girl (forgot her name in japanese) it is said that these fellas (G III and G IV) are using 'science'. Also, fox-girl suggests that Kinji, instead of fighting them, take them in their side or such. Basically, she suggests taking them into [Masters] (was that term correct?) and Watso also says that she felt that G IV had feellings for Kinji. So, she said Kinji could become the 'Romeo', which is a term in Butei for a man to seduce a woman.

After that, Kinji gets in the hospital and sees Hilda (let me check the name afterwards) with some food (which are Riko's favorite). Hilda was trying to hide herself, but got discovered by Kinji. She was shy of giving that food to Riko, so asks Kinji to do it instead, and also gives Kinji a medicine for Riko (which seems to be disgusting). It is guessed that Hilda has feelings that are rather strong towards Riko...

Anyways, back in the hospital, Kinji enters the room (numbere 303, if I did not misread) and sees also Aya (the Amdo girl) with the other four patients (Aria and the bunch). Aside Riko's activities, the four of them were all having Aya make better weapons (and Shirayuki's M60 was present). They all had different reasons

Aria: "You can't be attacked and not do anything in return"
Shirayuki: "The one who's the closer to Kin-chan is me, and definitvely not that girl"
Riko: "Hehehe, this girls' reunion is fun, Riko is very excited"
Reki: "Butei needs to give back a tooth for a tooth" (These citations are roughly translated with parts ommitted)

Kinji pulls away Aria, while the latter one was saying somthing like asking another rocket backpack from Aya. Kinji was starting to ask if they should oull G IV on their side (which Aria obviously refuses) and G IV suddenly appeared.

While the four girls were reparing their weapon (and Aya scared oof being in the middle of a fight), G IV suddenly says this line

"I finally found you, brother. Let's go home, I bet that you're hungry."

Even Riko and Shirayuki were surprised by that line. And as Kinji was protesting, he got kissed by his 'little sister' (he smelled a milk candy scent, BTW).

Kinji is accused of treason by the Aria, afterwards. Shirayuki fainted, Riko said that she could not stand something like that, and when Kinji asked help from Reki, she said.

"I don't understand, but right now, I don't want to talk with Kinji."

After that, G IV said that she knows the four of them live together with Kinji, because of their 'scents' in Kinji's room.

Also, she gave to each one nicknames. Radish head, Demure girl (or something like that), cute-acting girl and silent freak. (The one I'm sure to have translated correctly is silent freak) After that, G IV took Kinji and both left the room.

As Kinji was resisting, G IV said things such as
"Wait 5 minutes. I'll go kill all of them, so Onii-chan doesn't think of them"
or
"Onii-chan should only look at me"
and such thing as these. (The two sentences above aren't citations, BTW. Only summarizing most of what she said.)

After that, she asked Kinji if she can grant her a wish, which is to stay at his side. With her little sister saying all that, plus the fact that she was crying Kinji couldn't refuse.

She also asks for another favour, which is to buy her milk candies. After they go on a bus, with many buteis on it, G IV suddenly calls Kinji 'Onii-chan', and all passangers were surprised by that, saying that how can someone as cute as her be Kinji's little sister. When they ask her name, Kinji, thinking that she can't say 'G IV' as a name, made up one. He said that her name was Kaname.

After they got off, Kaname said that she was happy that Kinji gave her a name, and asked him to call her with that name from onwards. She was shedding tears of happiness.

Also, a bullet was aimed at them, but kaname saw it comming from the reflection on Kinji's eyes.

Spoiler for C3:

The story starts with Kinji entering his room. To his surprise, the room was clean. Way too clean. Aria's cushihon, heart-shaped, was gone, so was Shirayuki's closet and Riko's H-games piled up. When he asked Kaname what did she do with these things, she said that she all sent them to the hospital, the cushion, the H-games and the black set of underwear. She said that she cut them all to pieces, by hand, and that cutting all these things was very tiring (obviously). after that, when Kinji got kinda angry, she said that Kinji didn't have any taste for women, and asked Kinji to swear to not touch, to not hug any girl beside her (that would be a major event for the following chapters). Kinji swore, saying that he doesn't want to touch any to begin with. She suddenly started saying that Kinji was cool, and that she fell in love with him, and also saying that the blood relationship was nothing. When Kinji asked her why, she said that it was because he gave her milk candies.

Kaname decided to cook for Kinji (and was rubbing the cooking knfe with a diamond while smiling). She said thiing ssuch as taking the four girls' abilities, and that's why she could cook like Shirayuki. She also said that it was the first time she felt at home.

After that, during the school days, she made up a love letter so she could make Kinji jealous ( I am skipping the jealousy by the students to have a cute sister). She also asked Kinji to hug her, which he accepted. Tightly. She cried once again because she was very happy. Then she wanted him to kiss her. Kinji did, once again. However, he did not ended up in Hysteria mode, no matter how long did he kissed.

After that, when he was alone, Kinji went to ask Fuuma (was that her name) for the report on Kaname, in a park with no real lights. BTW, Fuuma had half of her body in a hole, to hide herself. She said the same things as Flere821 mentionned above, plus that Kinji's sister was getting along with girls, but ONLY girls.

And here's the first event. Fuuma got stuck in the hole (airhead) and asked Kinji to pull her out. Kinji accepted, and ended up falling on her, on the ground. (imagine the scene). Fuuma, aroused, said that her parents would kill her if they learnt that both of them ended up doing 'that' before marriage. Kinji gave the lame excuse that it was practice, and Fuuma accepted that excuse. The reason why Kinji needed to give an excuse is that relationships between seniors-juniors are forbidden, or something like that (need someone to clear that up.)

Dialogue's like this.

"Don't say anything stupod. This is training. Do some push-ups."
"D-d-d-d-d-do I need to do up-and-down movements?!?!"

And they started doing movements. Imagine the scene. It could easily create a misunderstanding, but Fuuma still did that (weird sounds were coming from her mouth, interpret it whetever way you want.) And they ended up doing that for a while, in the dark.

When they were finished, Kinji walked (and thinking he should protect her so she won't be deceived by anyone) for a bit and heard sounds. When he went to that place, where the sound came from, there were many bamboos cut.

Spoiler for C4:

The next day, Kaname wanted to watch a movie with Kinji. Kinji accepts. Also, she gives Kinji a doll, representing him, and Kinji noticed it was him only because there was the name 'Onii-chan' glued to the doll. Alos, he saw that there was another doll holding te Kin-doll's hand, and it was Kaname-doll. BTW, there was a lot of blood on the dolls. Then, she said that there were presents because Kinji became her 'lover' or somthing like that. She asked if Kinji broke her promise, and Kinji said no, since what happened with Fuuma was only a little 'incident'.

After that, Kinji went to the SSR to find Aria. When he arrived she was training with a senior, for something called 'cognitive training' (Google translation). Though it seems that she failed, from the sceen and from what she said to Kinji after. She added that she won't be living with him until that 'ennemy' s gone (she seems very angry when she knew that Kin gave the name 'Kaname' to G IV). However, after arguing for some time (Aria threatened to attack the boys' dormitory with the British Air Force if he made a move on Kaname), they reconcile. They ended up hugging each other due to a seagull (or something like that). They had a conversation while hugging each other. Aria started saying that she was wrong, along with things such as maybe Kaname is his sister. Then, Aria asked Kinji to lower his head. Though he initially refused, he finally lowered his head. At that time, Aria--kissed him.

As he went into H-mode (hysteria mode), he saw that there was something abnormal. He looked around and saw the words' Traitortraitortraitortraitortraitortraitor' carved on the ciment, most likely done with a superhuman strengh.


After the event with Aria, Kinji returns home, where Kaname was cooking. During some lovey-dovey stuffs (such as Kaname insisting on the fact that Kinji loves her the most), Kinji noticed that Kaname's finger was injured.

At school, Kinji received a message during English course from Watson (who throew him a piece of paper), telling him to come at 5 PM in the art room. He went there alone. There, Watson tells Kinji about the R-Buteis, G III, IQ 290, what Flere821 said, with G III's charisma and such. After that, Watson asks for the 'Training' or the 'Play' with Kinji. She has chosen a 'woman manager in community activities' (please correct that). During the time Watson was changing into the clothes for that, Kinji thought that someone was behind the door. Seems that it was only his imagination. Then, Watson finished changing and seems that she wants Kinji to stare at her because 'it is written in the act' (Watson wrote it herself, BTW). After that, they start the training, and today's (that day's) training was to be close to each other (I mean, physically close). Obviously, when Watson was approaching him, he felt his blood in his head. Also, Kinji needed to call her by a name (something like 艾尔 in the Chinese version). When they've gotten close to each other, here's what happened.

"OK, let'S do it today, Tohyama."
"Do what?"
"Don't worry"
"Ha!?"
"Only on the ch-cheek. I, I didn't use any lipstick. That would be next time."
"What the hell is your intent--"

And thus, Kinji was kissed on the cheek (he said that it was the 2 without 3, since it's the third time he's been kissed this month).

After that, Watson was obviously over-excited, hugged Kinji and asked him to tell her that he loves her, as a part of the act. Kinji, when he felt Watson's body, went into Hysteria. Then he heard the sound of greending teeth, and also saw someone staring through the keyhole. Then he said out Watson's name (Watson's acting name, which I mentionned above), and Watson repeating Kinji's, but both for two obvious different reasons. then he said to Watson that someone saw them, so asked her to change back. When Kinji went out, pulling Watson who quickly changed herself into a boy, and thus, her clothes were...messy. then, as Kinji pulled he rout of the room, he saw Shiranui, whi was having the 'WTH is going on' expression, and Watson covering his chest while hiding behind Kinji. And from Shiranui's perspective Watson is a boy, so...well, Kiji was stressed out, and searched for an excuse, saying to Shiranui
"S-S-Shiranui, let me explain. I'll explain why--"
And Shiranui smiled towards him and said.
"Don't worry, it isn't something bad---I promise i won't say anything."
And like that, Kinji and Watson left, just as Shiranui...and obviously, Kinji had a reason to be down.

Spoiler for Chapter 5+GFTN!:

OK, following that, more misunderstandings happen. For example, Kinji said that she’ll have a new sister, and Shirayuki interprets it as sister-in=law, etc. At the end, she faints of happiness.

Back home, Kinji bumps in her sister, who was wearing only her underwear with a Popsicle in her mouth. And Kinji felt his blood rushing to his head. She charged in Kinji’s arms, and talked about the relationship between the siblings Isis and Osiris (Egypt mythology, if you don’t know.) When Kinji mentioned that another sibling of his, from his father’s side, will come, she decided to do it know. And when Kinji finally enters H-mode, he understood what would go on with Kaname. And as he wanted to approach Kaname, what Flere mentioned in the previous posts happened, with Kaname starting to act weak and protest. And Kinji, who didn’t want to ‘break’ her, stopped.

GFTN!:

The next morning, Kinji wakes up and sees Kaname talking to trhe birds (obviously, they can’t hear her). She apologized to Kinji for what she did last night, and said that she was made in Los Alamos research center, as a weapon. She said that if she can’t use Hysteria, G III would abandon her, and she can’t do anything against the men who would come take her back, since she escaped. After she said that she was a failure, Kinji let out the sweet words as usual, things like that she can live with him and that her Hysteria will be a secret. And as she kissed Kinji again, a furious Shirayuki barged in, furious because Kaname kissed Kinji more times than herself did. And Kaname also went into dark-kaname mode, and asked if she’s there to take her big brother from her. And when Kaname mentioned that Kinji doesn’t let her sleep at night, Shirayuki went berserk with her M60 in her hands, and challenged Kaname. Here’s the 5-6 last lines for the epilogue:

Thanks for the summary kira

Got to love yandere

Btw are you gonna pick up campione again? <3

[Athena]

Originally Posted by S3vEn

Btw are you gonna pick up campione again? <3

I'll do it a day during mid-october, and next would probably be bottom-december/top january. Academic reasons.

Originally Posted by Riki

anyone know what happen to yoake is he taking a break? cant seem to find him in forum too

Seems that Yoake wants to take a break because she has problems concentrating on translating. However, I'm not her spokesman, I do not know the details lol.

[Hiro Hayase]

Kaname's nickname's hahaha :Radish head, Demure girl (not demented girl?), Cute-acting girl, and Silent freak or girl.

Radish Head that's a good one for Aria hahaha, but I bet she hates eating veggies though. Demure sums up Shirayuki's character in one word, so I think its alright to use that word. :O Reki's finally showing some vivid jealousy now, very noticeable.

So in exchange for heightened combat abilities, HSS makes the user weak to romance/love issues. That explains Kinji's denseness to a certain extent, plus he still has a hatred/fear of women deep down.

I also think that adding a new character would backfire since its not TAMnI where the plot drives the story unlike HnA which has the characters driving the story. TAMnI has a broad plot and setting which allows many characters to be introduced at once.

Well I still prefer Kinji to Ichika from IS any day, at least he actually kissed a few girls and was proposed to, plus etc.