2008-04-02, 14:52 | Link #3083 | |
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That being said, if I didn't have a Japanese test to study for right now, I'd claim a part. Perhaps when I get back. |
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2008-04-02, 15:17 | Link #3084 | |
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"Mou, Vivio," Nanoha sniffed at her. "We're not getting a bunch of stuff like that, go put it back." With a shake of her head she continued on her path through the aisle and putting only the items on her shopping list into the cart. 'I swear, that girl has a sweet tooth that puts Fate to shame. Honestly, all those snacks...I need to teach her how to shop properly within a budget.' Vivio scuffled her foot across the floor as she turned and walked back the way she had come. "Jeez, I'm sixteen already, I can pick a few things out..." Sadly she put her fruit snacks back on the shelf. As she turned She looked at Fate, who was smiling at her happily. "Let's..." She began, taking a few of Vivio's items top go pay out for on her own. "Keep this a secret from Mama, okay?" "Fate-mama, thank you." She smiled brightly and allowed herself to be pet a few times. "You're the best!" ~*out of time T_T continued later maybe*~
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2008-04-02, 15:21 | Link #3085 | ||
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Otherwise good but Jail relying in talking of morals and values to a person who just slaghtered your guards and whose every friend you just killed doesn't really compute Spoiler for 126 & 127:
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2008-04-02, 16:19 | Link #3086 | |
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2008-04-02, 16:39 | Link #3087 | |
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Anyway. Thank you to everyone who read and commented on my story. The general response has been good and I'm rather surprised to tell the truth, since I had no idea how to write these kinda fics when I started. Do people want more of them I wonder? :3 |
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2008-04-02, 16:43 | Link #3088 | |||
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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Haha. Please continue when Fate is sober...and remembers Nanoha's promise for "another time"
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2008-04-02, 18:48 | Link #3089 | |
sitting on NxF bench
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: From where the pretzel comes
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everybody dead on the other hand, it's nice to see Nanoha go berserk, you hardly see that |
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2008-04-03, 01:57 | Link #3093 | |
Undercover Mole
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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The first mission! Sounds a bit kreepy (yes...creepy with a K). Karil kind of seems like a wuss...but i still like her. Is it really a little girl? or is it...a slave!? Dun dun dun...
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2008-04-03, 03:49 | Link #3094 | |
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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I like the way you, did the dawning realisation for Jail. Couldnt comment on this sooner as my laptop had a severe virus. (In MGLN terms thats an S rank virus) |
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2008-04-03, 11:36 | Link #3096 | |
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Imaginary World no. 856
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That was nice. It had a nice mood throughout the story and what Nanoha and Fate were talking felt very sincere and genuine. Although the last bit totally broke that mood! Vivio will have to learn very strong barrier magic unless she wants to have her boyfriends hospitalized. With parents like Nanoha and Fate, who needs enemies?
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2008-04-03, 11:46 | Link #3097 |
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Impressive. Because at the same time as I love Fate and Nanoha as a pairing, they're sort of completely different when it comes to parenting styles. At least you've managed to help them find a happy medium, because Vivio is going to be a wild child when she grows up.
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2008-04-03, 12:44 | Link #3100 | |
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I got lunch, sat down, started nibbling my philly cheese sub and was like "hey, ya know what? *chew chew* I think Vivio should dress up in something and have Nanoha stop her *swallows, chugs mountain dew, writes* and... Let's put Fate in there for good measure.... *post, finishes lunch*" Challenge? Teenage!Vivio? I don't have time right now but I might do something at next break depending if I can or not. Kinda busy today and my left wrist is killing me for some reason @_@
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authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha |
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