Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Ohoh... I think a few minor edits are in order... I need it for my script... Sorry. <coughharemcoughsettingcough>

oh dear did I really screw your plans up? I was just winging it you know; it might be better if you worked on it. After all, LoweGear's characterisation of Artei is way better than mine for example.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I determine my fate.
My fate is my destiny.
My destiny is predetermined.
I determine my destiny.

Life should be simple. Just live well and the Naaru will do the rest.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

More later...
WHEN MY FRICKIN CONNECTION STOPS FAILING ME!!!

I understand... I left my laptop adaptor in the clubroom so KhaxFate got delayed again...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

More Snippet Time

Continuing from the last short piece, this time taking a rather unusual tack in telling this story. The title of the piece should explain why:

Spoiler for I.M.:

What am I doing?

This new body of mine. It’s supposed to give me new sensations, a way to feel the outside world with my own tactition. Yet I cannot feel anything, my skin anesthetized of all feeling, devoid of sensation.

Shinji, what are you doing?

What am I doing here?

Why am I walking down this trail alone?

To catch up to someone I’ve lost?

With each step I take, I draw a step nearer to her. With each step the doubt only grows, one question by difficult question at a time.

And to know the answers to those questions all too well… it is the most painful difficult part of it all.

Since the first day we met…

She was another handle, another username, floating around in the vast network of the WorldNet. A lone soul, whose cries went unheeded by the incessant river of information, carrying the desires of millions of other souls pursuing their own wants, dreams and pleasures.

She thought she could find company within the anonymity of that vast ocean. That somehow, she could swim within the schools of other people’s desires and wills, and find comfort in their number. But she could not swim with the other fish, faster, stronger, and more sociable. They could not accept someone who could not fit in, who could not conform.

Whatever optimism she might have held, were but grains of sand in the face of waves of indifference and selfishness. She thought she could find company… but the WorldNet wanted to prove her wrong.

And I nearly contributed to that cause.

I was taught to be wary of my way in the vast ocean. Surely, she had friends. Surely, she just couldn’t fit in with a certain groups. Surely, somehow, she can find kindred souls to which she can share her passions with, whose company she desired, and her company returned in kind.

But I could never stop wondering. Why this certain soul intrigued me so. And as the days and the months rolled past, she still lingered in the background. Unchanging. Unmoving, Unaccepted. No matter how hard she tried. None would reciprocate. None desired her company.

Such a sad, vulnerable soul lost in the Worldnet.

I could not bear to watch her battered by the waves of solitude any longer.

---

SeCoNdChIlD: Hi there! I’m Shinji, it’s nice to meet you! What’s yours?

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: Just call me Mana.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: It’s such a nice name Mana. The energy that drives magic!

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: It is. What about it?

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Magic makes the world go round you see! And Mana drives magic! So you make the world go round!

…

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: You’re weird. There’s no such thing as magic.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: There isn’t? Are you sure about that?

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: Of course there isn’t! It’s a indisputable scientific fact.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Then why does Mana exist?

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: Your so called Mana does not exist! Such an energy is impossible to attain with the laws of physics! It is a fictional energy that cannot exist by any scientific means!

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Then why do you exist? You’re Mana aren’t you?

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: What are you stupid or something?

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Yes I am stupid. I don’t understand. All evidence says that Mana exists, because I’m talking to her right now, trying to prove that she doesn’t exist. If Mana doesn’t exist, then why is she speaking with me right now?

…

…

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: There is no Mana stupid.

…

Koutetsu_no_Mana: Because you’re talking to Matsuri. Therefore, Mana doesn’t exist.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Oh, I understand now. I apologize for my mistake Matsuri.

…

…

*beep*

Matsuri: You’re truly weird you know.

SeCoNdChIlD: No I’m not. It’s not weird to want to be friends with you. Empirical evidence says so.

…

…

SeCoNdChIlD: Matsuri?

*beep*

Matsuri: It’s impossible.

…

*beep*

Matsuri: But I agree, it’s well within possibility.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: And the chances of success improves as more opportunities are presented, like rolling a dice.

*beep*

Matsuri: No it doesn’t. Probability doesn’t work like that! Your probability average does not change no matter how many times you roll the dice! You’re no more lucky throwing the dice a thousand times than you do a hundred!

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: That may be so, but it never hurts to try doesn’t it?

…

*beep*

Matsuri: Yes, it doesn’t.
...

Matsuri: You're strange, you know that?

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: I know I am. I'm unique.

*beep*

Matsuri: That's not quite what I meant.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: But to be strange is to be unique amongst the norm is it not? To be different.

*beep*

Matsuri: I guess.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: That makes 2 - 1 in favor of me.

*beep*

Matsuri: 2 -1 one of what?!

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Arguments. You beat me with your Mana argument, and I beat you in Probability and Philosophy.

*beep*

Matsuri: !?!?!?!

...

Matsuri: That's just unfair you know.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Would you like to even the score?

*beep*

Matsuri: Is that a challenge? Give me a second and I'll give you an argument you can't counter!

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: I'd very much like that!

...

SeCoNdChIlD: But I need to get going now, I still have work to do.

*beep*

Matsuri: ok

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: We'll settle this once I see you again. Can I do that?

…

…

*beep*

Matsuri: Of course you can. I’m not letting you on-up me again.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: That’s awesome! Looking forward to the challenge!

*beep*

Matsuri: Shinji is it?

*beep*

SeCoNDChIlD: Yes?

*beep*

Matsuri: You're stupid. And Wierd. And Strange. But I want to thank you. Thanks for talking with me.

…

Matsuri: BTW, I really had fun today. I must have been a bother.

…

*beep*

Shinji: Not at all. I had fun too. And I'd very much like to see you again.

...

*beep*

Matsuri: I'm very glad to hear that. Thank you.

…

Shinji: It was nothing. I’ll see you again soon Matsuri.

*beep*

Matsuri: And the same to you Shinji.

*beep*

Shinji: And think up of a good argument next time!

*beep*

Matsuri: You bet I will stupid! :P

---

From the first day we met, she never believed in magic. And from that point on I knew that she could not possibly accept me as I am. A mere construct... a phantasm of magic.

But… I told her I’d see her again. I did not want to see her alone in that vast ocean again. And that I truly did.

And in truth I knew it would come to this someday.

But all I could feel now is pain...

I think I really need a name for this Arc...

Lowe you've done it again! Excellent chapter! I really wanna know how it all started!

As for title... "Ghostbreak"? As in, Shinji's heart is technically a Ghost in a shell, and that pretty much makes up his heart, and since his heart is going to be broken... "Ghostbreak". What do you think?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Technically it is Neltharion. In the fanon timeline, the the small fragment of power has no consiousness. In DragonS it gained one during a failed attempt to remove the fragment, said consiousness grew untill it returned all its meories, and eventually took control of Keroko. So it is, basically, a second Neltharion. Far weaker then the first, which is why the one inside Keroko tries to seek out himself. he can't stand being in such a weak mortal shell (Neltharion has a massive ego complex).

I see... Time for Keroko to be refriended then; Blaster mode outta do the trick.

Btw, for power comparison: I heard Nanoha's Blaster mode has 8 releases before her bodily limit is reached. So keeping that in mind, Rakael-Stahlmut is around Release 5 and under superGAR inspiration is just above 8. But Kha by himself, even with Schneiderform, Blaster Mode 3 > Kha's Gotteliches Schield with Bastion.

Originally Posted by Keroko

*Throws a bucket of water over Bastion* You back on earth yet?

You sure like pulling a Episode 3 Leeron on Bastion, desu ne...?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Meatbag? Artherion's cousin?

Yes Kha, I went back to HK-47 Artherion. Gurren Lagann crack wore off.

NOOOOO! We lost a member of the Dai-Baason Dan!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*peers into Glowing Scrying Ball*

That'll come about much much later

What is this artefact that I keep seeing that seems to grant Naaruvision?!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Fate: *In the showers* "Chrono, are you there?"

Chrono: ".... Nope."

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Fate: *in the showers peeking out* Onii-chan, are you there?

*sees drops of blood appearing on floor leading outwards*

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Fate: *in the showers peeking out* Onii-chan, are you there?

Chrono: Actually, it's Yuuno here...

Or this:

~~~~~~

Kha der Kleriker used Planeswalk. He teleports to beside the invisible Chrono.

Chrono: (thinks) Huh? What's he doing here? Does he intend to attack my dear sister? Looks like I got an excuse to be here; at least he can't see me.
Kha: (telepathy, eye aglow with Geass symbol) Well you look like a Christmas tree to me, Oni-chan.
Chrono: (telepathy) W-well... Er...

Fate: (wrapped in towel, Zamber at hand)... Kha. What. Are. You. Doing?
Kha: Ma-matte! This does not look like what it seems...! See! Look! Chrono is right here!

Casts Dispell, but he notices that the bathroom window was open.

Fate: ...Kha...?
Kha: (HALLAOUN!!! )

~~~~~~

Perils of living with the family.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

More Snippet Time

Continuing from the last short piece, this time taking a rather unusual tack in telling this story. The title of the piece should explain why:

Spoiler for I.M.:

What am I doing?

This new body of mine. It’s supposed to give me new sensations, a way to feel the outside world with my own tactition. Yet I cannot feel anything, my skin anesthetized of all feeling, devoid of sensation.

Shinji, what are you doing?

What am I doing here?

Why am I walking down this trail alone?

To catch up to someone I’ve lost?

With each step I take, I draw a step nearer to her. With each step the doubt only grows, one question by difficult question at a time.

And to know the answers to those questions all too well… it is the most painful difficult part of it all.

Since the first day we met…

She was another handle, another username, floating around in the vast network of the WorldNet. A lone soul, whose cries went unheeded by the incessant river of information, carrying the desires of millions of other souls pursuing their own wants, dreams and pleasures.

She thought she could find company within the anonymity of that vast ocean. That somehow, she could swim within the schools of other people’s desires and wills, and find comfort in their number. But she could not swim with the other fish, faster, stronger, and more sociable. They could not accept someone who could not fit in, who could not conform.

Whatever optimism she might have held, were but grains of sand in the face of waves of indifference and selfishness. She thought she could find company… but the WorldNet wanted to prove her wrong.

And I nearly contributed to that cause.

I was taught to be wary of my way in the vast ocean. Surely, she had friends. Surely, she just couldn’t fit in with a certain groups. Surely, somehow, she can find kindred souls to which she can share her passions with, whose company she desired, and her company returned in kind.

But I could never stop wondering. Why this certain soul intrigued me so. And as the days and the months rolled past, she still lingered in the background. Unchanging. Unmoving, Unaccepted. No matter how hard she tried. None would reciprocate. None desired her company.

Such a sad, vulnerable soul lost in the Worldnet.

I could not bear to watch her battered by the waves of solitude any longer.

---

SeCoNdChIlD: Hi there! I’m Shinji, it’s nice to meet you! What’s yours?

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: Just call me Mana.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: It’s such a nice name Mana. The energy that drives magic!

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: It is. What about it?

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Magic makes the world go round you see! And Mana drives magic! So you make the world go round!

…

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: You’re weird. There’s no such thing as magic.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: There isn’t? Are you sure about that?

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: Of course there isn’t! It’s a indisputable scientific fact.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Then why does Mana exist?

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: Your so called Mana does not exist! Such an energy is impossible to attain with the laws of physics! It is a fictional energy that cannot exist by any scientific means!

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Then why do you exist? You’re Mana aren’t you?

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: What are you stupid or something?

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Yes I am stupid. I don’t understand. All evidence says that Mana exists, because I’m talking to her right now, trying to prove that she doesn’t exist. If Mana doesn’t exist, then why is she speaking with me right now?

…

…

*beep*

Koutetsu_no_Mana: There is no Mana stupid.

…

Koutetsu_no_Mana: Because you’re talking to Matsuri. Therefore, Mana doesn’t exist.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Oh, I understand now. I apologize for my mistake Matsuri.

…

…

*beep*

Matsuri: You’re truly weird you know.

SeCoNdChIlD: No I’m not. It’s not weird to want to be friends with you. Empirical evidence says so.

…

…

SeCoNdChIlD: Matsuri?

*beep*

Matsuri: It’s impossible.

…

*beep*

Matsuri: But I agree, it’s well within possibility.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: And the chances of success improves as more opportunities are presented, like rolling a dice.

*beep*

Matsuri: No it doesn’t. Probability doesn’t work like that! Your probability average does not change no matter how many times you roll the dice! You’re no more lucky throwing the dice a thousand times than you do a hundred!

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: That may be so, but it never hurts to try doesn’t it?

…

*beep*

Matsuri: Yes, it doesn’t.
...

Matsuri: You're strange, you know that?

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: I know I am. I'm unique.

*beep*

Matsuri: That's not quite what I meant.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: But to be strange is to be unique amongst the norm is it not? To be different.

*beep*

Matsuri: I guess.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: That makes 2 - 1 in favor of me.

*beep*

Matsuri: 2 -1 one of what?!

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Arguments. You beat me with your Mana argument, and I beat you in Probability and Philosophy.

*beep*

Matsuri: !?!?!?!

...

Matsuri: That's just unfair you know.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: Would you like to even the score?

*beep*

Matsuri: Is that a challenge? Give me a second and I'll give you an argument you can't counter!

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: I'd very much like that!

...

SeCoNdChIlD: But I need to get going now, I still have work to do.

*beep*

Matsuri: ok

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: We'll settle this once I see you again. Can I do that?

…

…

*beep*

Matsuri: Of course you can. I’m not letting you on-up me again.

*beep*

SeCoNdChIlD: That’s awesome! Looking forward to the challenge!

*beep*

Matsuri: Shinji is it?

*beep*

SeCoNDChIlD: Yes?

*beep*

Matsuri: You're stupid. And Wierd. And Strange. But I want to thank you. Thanks for talking with me.

…

Matsuri: BTW, I really had fun today. I must have been a bother.

…

*beep*

Shinji: Not at all. I had fun too. And I'd very much like to see you again.

...

*beep*

Matsuri: I'm very glad to hear that. Thank you.

…

Shinji: It was nothing. I’ll see you again soon Matsuri.

*beep*

Matsuri: And the same to you Shinji.

*beep*

Shinji: And think up of a good argument next time!

*beep*

Matsuri: You bet I will stupid! :P

---

From the first day we met, she never believed in magic. And from that point on I knew that she could not possibly accept me as I am. A mere construct... a phantasm of magic.

But… I told her I’d see her again. I did not want to see her alone in that vast ocean again. And that I truly did.

And in truth I knew it would come to this someday.

But all I could feel now is pain...

I think I really need a name for this Arc...

SO NICE!!!

So this is how they met? Very fitting! MOAR!!!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Once again a simple idea gets horrbly out of hand. I don't have a timeline yet. It was only a simple idea yesterday, so I still need to work on it.

I see...

*whipes the blood of Artherion* Anyway, Keroko might get vengefull if you touch her friends or familly (pre-Black Aspect corruption instinct, they used to be guardians) which mostly depends on what you did and why. Quattro, for example, would be royally screwed if Keroko got her hands on her. Graham, on the other hand, got of lightly. He screwed around with Hayate, and Keroko did not like that, but she could see logic in his reasoning. She's still a bit reluctant to be around him, but she doesn't outright hate him.

So it would have taken Aurion a lot of time and bribery to get on Keroko's good side without discomfort, huh?

Oi oi oi, even an awakened Keroko is not that powerfull. True, she is very powerfull, but she's still beatable. Can she kick around everyone? Yes. Is she immortal/unbeatable? No. Wouldn't be a fun story otherwise, now would it?

Sounds something that you would need Blaster mode for...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Quoted for truth, although that doesn't stop us from adding more hidden meanings into the words and making it more... fun to imagine

And I'm not stopping anyone. Please continue. It's interesting to see a simple idea snowball into a frenzy...

SmartBro failing you again?

Yes... WHOLE DAY!!!

Originally Posted by Kha

oh dear did I really screw your plans up? I was just winging it you know; it might be better if you worked on it. After all, LoweGear's characterisation of Artei is way better than mine for example.

Will do. I already have a script on hand. With some hints of minor attraction and such.

Kha der Kleriker used Planeswalk. He teleports to beside the invisible Chrono.

Chrono: (thinks) Huh? What's he doing here? Does he intend to attack my dear sister? Looks like I got an excuse to be here; at least he can't see me.
Kha: (telepathy, eye aglow with Geass symbol) Well you look like a Christmas tree to me, Oni-chan.
Chrono: (telepathy) W-well... Er...

Fate: (wrapped in towel, Zamber at hand)... Kha. What. Are. You. Doing?
Kha: Ma-matte! This does not look like what it seems...! See! Look! Chrono is right here!

Casts Dispell, but he notices that the bathroom window was open.

Fate: ...Kha...?
Kha: (HALLAOUN!!! )

~~~~~~

Perils of living with the family.

Perilous indeed. So Kha calls Chrono onii-chan as well... I was expecting a more formal Nii-san or something like that.

Anyway, didn't you say that fate and Kha already bathed together tons of times?

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

And, to whoever said V was foolhardy for attempting to face Keroko/Neltharion...he just likes a challenge.

V might not know what he's getting himself into, yes...but it'll be fun to watch.

Would he be as foolhardy or confident once he sizes up his opposition?

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Lowe:

More "Girlfriend of Steel" referencing, I think...? What with Mana and all. Nice snippet- and also a nice twist on Matsuri's "name", too.

Yep, references galore!

Originally Posted by Kha

oh dear did I really screw your plans up? I was just winging it you know; it might be better if you worked on it. After all, LoweGear's characterisation of Artei is way better than mine for example.

...what?

Originally Posted by Kha

Lowe you've done it again! Excellent chapter! I really wanna know how it all started!

As for title... "Ghostbreak"? As in, Shinji's heart is technically a Ghost in a shell, and that pretty much makes up his heart, and since his heart is going to be broken... "Ghostbreak". What do you think?

I like the sound of the title, unfortunately it sounds... creepy, not quite the tone I wanted for the Arc

Originally Posted by Kha

What is this artefact that I keep seeing that seems to grant Naaruvision?!

Lemme show you where it came from:

Spoiler for Scrying:

*In a dark room, Creator-san watches a Glowing Scrying ball*

???: *female voice* Anata, dame... aaaaah...
?????: *male voice* Don't worry Mai, I'll be gentle.

Creator-san: So this is their future...

*hears noises*

Oh ****...

*hastily hides ball as Smith walks in*

Smith: Have you seen Mai around? I swear I heard her somewhere around here...

Creator-san: Mai? No, I haven't seen her around, haven't seen her at all

Smith: Ohkay, thanks for the he-

*sudden female yelp from Scrying ball as it glows*

???: Aaaah, chotto matte... aaah...
?????: I'll take good care of you...

Smith: Is that my voice?!

Creator-san: No it's not, it's...

*chainsaw revs*

Creator-san/Smith: *turns to see Mai*

Mai: ... kono...

---

*Several bloody moments later*

---

Mai: *in her room, lying in bed*

... Hatsudou.

*Scrying ball glows*

???: Aaaaaah, motto anata...

This spawned from discussions with a certain young Page...

Originally Posted by Kha

Or this:

~~~~~~

Kha der Kleriker used Cleric-warp. He teleports to beside the invisible Chrono.

Chrono: (thinks) Huh? What's he doing here? Does he intend to attack my dear sister? I better keep on the lookout; at least he can't see me.
Kha: (telepathy, eye aglow with Geass symbol) Well you look like a Christmas tree to me, Oni-chan.
Chrono: (telepathy) W-well... Er...

Fate: (wrapped in towel, Zamber at hand)... Kha. What. Are. You. Doing?
Kha: Ma-matte! This does not look like what it seems...! See! Look! Chrono is right here!

Casts Dispell, but he notices that the bathroom window was open.

Fate: ...Kha...?
Kha: (HALLAOUN!!! )

~~~~~~

Perils of living with the family.

I do hope the powers of The Divine Light can protect Kha from T3H Angry Female Strike

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Will do. I already have a script on hand. With some hints of minor attraction and such.

OK I'll leave it to ya.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Perilous indeed. So Kha calls Chrono onii-chan as well... I was expecting a more formal Nii-san or something like that.

Anyway, didn't you say that fate and Kha already bathed together tons of times?

No, more like he was trying to assert the point that for f*** is the older brother doing there in the first place. You later see him yell "HALLAOUN!!!" deshou? That's how he calls Chrono. For Amy, before she got married he calls her by her last name (which I can't remember ), but after marriage he calls her Nee-san, since she had become sister-in-law.

And this is AU; and hence I was thinking that this occured before that onsen episode in the AltS to StrikerS arc.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Lemme show you where it came from:

Spoiler for Scrying:

*In a dark room, Creator-san watches a Glowing Scrying ball*

???: *female voice* Anata, dame... aaaaah...
?????: *male voice* Don't worry Mai, I'll be gentle.

Creator-san: So this is their future...

*hears noises*

Oh ****...

*hastily hides ball as Smith walks in*

Smith: Have you seen Mai around? I swear I heard her somewhere around here...

Creator-san: Mai? No, I haven't seen her around, haven't seen her at all

Smith: Ohkay, thanks for the he-

*sudden female yelp from Scrying ball as it glows*

???: Aaaah, chotto matte... aaah...
?????: I'll take good care of you...

Smith: Is that my voice?!

Creator-san: No it's not, it's...

*chainsaw revs*

Creator-san/Smith: *turns to see Mai*

Mai: ... kono...

---

*Several bloody moments later*

---

Mai: *in her room, lying in bed*

... Hatsudou.

*Scrying ball glows*

???: Aaaaaah, motto anata...

This spawned from discussions with a certain young Page...

Gimmy, Amuro, Foy and Hiro stare at their sempai.

Erio: ...

But in the end, I see Mai enjoying the show...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I do hope the powers of The Divine Light can protect Kha from T3H Angry Female Strike

Ignores male defence values, remember?

And if she goes dere like she usually does, Chrono'd have a free show! I Kha will not let him! ()

[Dream_Traveller]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Would he be as foolhardy or confident once he sizes up his opposition?



Yep, references galore!



...what?



I like the sound of the title, unfortunately it sounds... creepy, not quite the tone I wanted for the Arc





Lemme show you where it came from:

Spoiler for Scrying:

*In a dark room, Creator-san watches a Glowing Scrying ball*

???: *female voice* Anata, dame... aaaaah...
?????: *male voice* Don't worry Mai, I'll be gentle.

Creator-san: So this is their future...

*hears noises*

Oh ****...

*hastily hides ball as Smith walks in*

Smith: Have you seen Mai around? I swear I heard her somewhere around here...

Creator-san: Mai? No, I haven't seen her around, haven't seen her at all

Smith: Ohkay, thanks for the he-

*sudden female yelp from Scrying ball as it glows*

???: Aaaah, chotto matte... aaah...
?????: I'll take good care of you...

Smith: Is that my voice?!

Creator-san: No it's not, it's...

*chainsaw revs*

Creator-san/Smith: *turns to see Mai*

Mai: ... kono...

---

*Several bloody moments later*

---

Mai: *in her room, lying in bed*

... Hatsudou.

*Scrying ball glows*

???: Aaaaaah, motto anata...

This spawned from discussions with a certain young Page...



I do hope the powers of The Divine Light can protect Kha from T3H Angry Female Strike

@Scrying:



Though it's old...

It is WIN!

Makes you wonder what Smith was thinking, too...

And, to Lowe...V might lose his confidence, yes. We can only see where the scenario takes itself, though.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

And I'm not stopping anyone. Please continue. It's interesting to see a simple idea snowball into a frenzy...

So we can expect more kinky descriptions from the closert perv pure-minded moderator Aaron then?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Yes... WHOLE DAY!!!

... I know your pain...

Originally Posted by Kha

Gimmy, Amuro, Foy and Hiro stare at their sempai.

Erio: ...

But in the end, I see Mai enjoying the show...

It was my idea though...

*runs*

And that's right, she does She's still a young girl with... needs and... desires and... frustrations afterall

*distant chainsaw revving*

Originally Posted by Kha

Ignores male defence values, remember?

And if she goes dere like she usually does, Chrono'd have a free show! I Kha will not let him! ()

... NANI?!?!?!?!

That Chro-suke... I WILL NOT LET HIM!!!!

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Scrying:



Though it's old...

It is WIN!

Makes you wonder what Smith was thinking, too...

And, to Lowe...V might lose his confidence, yes. We can only see where the scenario takes itself, though.

I think all he'll recall will be spinning bloodthirsty sawblades...

And V losing confidence against Neltharion is inevitable... just want to see how

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

~Don't they know, it's the end of the world...~

Well then, in light of the Erio/Lutecia scene I made...

Spoiler for ...Fun:

Vice: Oh, starting...

Erio: "I'm still surprise that they're actually going to do this..."

VIce: "Ah well, you're still young, you wouldn't understand..."

Erio: "Huh?"

Vice: "Nothing, pay attention to her kiddo..."

Erio: "Erm, sure..."

*Both songs have the 'techno' touch to it, though one of them is much more upbeat, 'colourful' and Energetic... While the other, powerful, deep, and poetic... *

Spoiler for Caro is true to her heart...:

True to my heart

Kimi wo chikaku de
Dare yori kanjitai

Close to my love!

Hitomi tojite
Itsuka kanau kara
Sunao na kimochi dakishime

Hikareau tokimeki toka
Afureru omoi wo
Oshiete kureta hito dakara

Namida nagashite mo
Soba ni ite kureta
Ano hi kara koi ga kirameki hajimeru

Sweet my heart!
Meguriaeta yone
Mayowanai de, change my life!

Dreaming lovers!

Hohoemi wa Kienai
Konna nimo suki dayo

True to my heart!

Mabushii kuchibiru
Setsunai manazashi ni

Close to my love!

Kata wo yosete
Kitto onaji dane
Omoir wa yasashii kiee de

True to my heart…!
True to my heart…!
True to my heart…!

Omoir wa yasashii kiee de!

Spoiler for Lutecia's scarlet tainted desires...:

Sotto kuchidzuketai shimetsukeru omoi ni kidzuite
Koi ga akaku fukaku yoru wo someteku

Tsukiakari ga terasu KIMI no yokogao
Nazomeita manazashi ni furikaeru

Ikutsumo no yoru wo kurikaeshi
Kawasu omoi kanata made

Atsuku kogare mune de dakishimete kubisuji KISU shite
Eien ni futari amaku yureugoku kanjou

Itsuka kitto ieru awaku kagayaita kono omoi
Koi ga akaku fukaku yoru wo someteku

Vice: Erio? Erio? You okay buddy?

Erio:

I'll post the translation later... Though I figure most of you might have already heard those songs before... If not, I'll post the youtube video later as well

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Spoiler for Scrying:

*In a dark room, Creator-san watches a Glowing Scrying ball*

???: *female voice* Anata, dame... aaaaah...
?????: *male voice* Don't worry Mai, I'll be gentle.

Creator-san: So this is their future...

*hears noises*

Oh ****...

*hastily hides ball as Smith walks in*

Smith: Have you seen Mai around? I swear I heard her somewhere around here...

Creator-san: Mai? No, I haven't seen her around, haven't seen her at all

Smith: Ohkay, thanks for the he-

*sudden female yelp from Scrying ball as it glows*

???: Aaaah, chotto matte... aaah...
?????: I'll take good care of you...

Smith: Is that my voice?!

Creator-san: No it's not, it's...

*chainsaw revs*

Creator-san/Smith: *turns to see Mai*

Mai: ... kono...

---

*Several bloody moments later*

---

Mai: *in her room, lying in bed*

... Hatsudou.

*Scrying ball glows*

???: Aaaaaah, motto anata...

This spawned from discussions with a certain young Page...

M-Mai! WTF?!?!

Originally Posted by Kha

OK I'll leave it to ya.

Very well. Kha's oe hell of a lucky guy in my scenarios, it seems.

No, more like he was trying to assert the point that for f*** is the older brother doing there in the first place. You later see him yell "HALLAOUN!!!" deshou? That's how he calls Chrono. For Amy, before she got married he calls her by her last name (which I can't remember ), but after marriage he calls her Nee-san, since she had become sister-in-law.

Ok...

Ignores male defence values, remember?

And if she goes dere like she usually does, Chrono'd have a free show! I Kha will not let him! ()

I was expecting more of a scream+slap=deredere scene later...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

So we can expect more kinky descriptions from the closert perv pure-minded moderator Aaron then?

I didn't expect the taunt to be directed at me...
Anyway, I can continue on experimenting and see how the people react.
As you can see, I tend to add several of those light undertones in my scenarios, right?
I love playing with the characters using Aurion's mind games there.
I manipulate certain braiwaves of how they think to give them false impressions so many times.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Well then, in light of the Erio/Lutecia scen I made...

Spoiler for ...Fun:

Vice: Oh, starting...

Erio: "I'm still surprise that they're actually going to do this..."

VIce: "Ah well, you're still young, you wouldn't understand..."

Erio: "Huh?"

Vice: "Nothing, pay attention to her kiddo..."

Erio: "Erm, sure..."

*Both songs have the 'techno' touch to it, though one of them is much more upbeat, 'colourful' and Energetic... While the other, powerful, deep, and poetic... *

Spoiler for Caro is true to her heart...:

True to my heart

Kimi wo chikaku de
Dare yori kanjitai

Close to my love!

Hitomi tojite
Itsuka kanau kara
Sunao na kimochi dakishime

Hikareau tokimeki toka
Afureru omoi wo
Oshiete kureta hito dakara

Namida nagashite mo
Soba ni ite kureta
Ano hi kara koi ga kirameki hajimeru

Sweet my heart!
Meguriaeta yone
Mayowanai de, change my life!

Dreaming lovers!

Hohoemi wa Kienai
Konna nimo suki dayo

True to my heart!

Mabushii kuchibiru
Setsunai manazashi ni

Close to my love!

Kata wo yosete
Kitto onaji dane
Omoir wa yasashii kiee de

True to my heart…!
True to my heart…!
True to my heart…!

Omoir wa yasashii kiee de!

Spoiler for Lutecia's scarlet tainted desires...:

Sotto kuchidzuketai shimetsukeru omoi ni kidzuite
Koi ga akaku fukaku yoru wo someteku

Tsukiakari ga terasu KIMI no yokogao
Nazomeita manazashi ni furikaeru

Ikutsumo no yoru wo kurikaeshi
Kawasu omoi kanata made

Atsuku kogare mune de dakishimete kubisuji KISU shite
Eien ni futari amaku yureugoku kanjou
Yubi ga fureta setsunai kono kimochi kuchibiru nazotte
Koi ni ochiru yasashii koe, sasayaite

Itsuka kitto ieru awaku kagayaita kono omoi
Koi ga akaku fukaku yoru wo someteku

Vice: Erio? Erio? You okay buddy?

Erio:

I'll post the translation later... Though I figure most of you might have already heard those songs before... If not, I'll post the youtube video later as well

Yes, please. I'm not too familiar with those songs...

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Yes, please. I'm not too familiar with those songs...

Lol, kk

Spoiler for Caro is true to her heart...:

Title: "True to my heart"
Origin: H-game, "Nursery Rhymes"
Artist: Saori Sakura

Translation

True to my heart

I want to feel you closer than anyone else

Close to my love

Closing my eyes
Someday my dream will come true
So I keep cherishing my precious feelings

Heart-beatings when attracted to each other
And overflowing love
You are the person who has taught me such feelings

When I was shedding tears
You stayed by my side
Since that day, our love has started to shine

Sweet my heart

We’ve finally met
Without hesitation, I changed my life

Dreaming Lovers

We’ll never let our smiles go
I love you this much

True to my Heart

Your lips are so dazzling
My eyes are yearning

Close to my love

Leaning on your shoulder
I’m sure you fell the same way
Let me feel your heart with a gentle kiss

True to my heart! True to my heart ~!
True to my heart! True to my heart ~!

Let me feel your heart with a gentle kiss…

Spoiler for Lutecia's scarlet tainted desires...:

Title: "Scarlet"
Origin: Anime Opening, "Karin"
Artist: BRACE;d


Translation

I want to kiss you softly, so you realize my pressuring feelings
My love stains the night with a deep scarlet

The moonlight illuminates your face
You turn around with that mysterious look

It will repeat for many nights
Until our feelings are exchanged

I have a burning desire to hold you close and kiss you on the neck
Our emotions will sweetly tremble forever.

Someday i'll surely be able tell you, these feelings which faintly glitter
My love stains the night with a deep scarlet...

[Erio]

Using a compressed Backlog Zamber... cant read bigger stuff right now.

Originally Posted by Kha

Yes, but you can see I covered that up nicely, with the Frame of Reference banishment. I came to the conclusion purely from hearsay mixed with way-over-my-head scientific journals and half-hatched Bible readings.

The PERSON would find a way to his or her timeline, yes, but how could a Time Machine figure that out, huh? I guess this is where external forces comes into play...

Well she's the one who really has Spiral power...

That reminds me, Strada's spearhead in OP1 can spin like a DRILL!!!

Bastion...? HELL YEAH! Why didn't I think of that?! And the command "Divine Bastion, SHIELD ON!" makes sense now!

Doesnt Kha as well?

And I now wonder how you planned to activate Stahlmut if not with the shield...

Sophia and Hayate, in my Nanoha/Zero theory, are twins of the Tokiha/Tohkiha (whichever spelling you prefer) family, but due to different circumstances their family names got replaced.

Just for interest: my OC, the Knight-sister High Retributor Tohkiha Mai is their cousin.

I knew it was them, but I got confused with "Tohkiha"... I thought they were called "Tohsaka"

That's where Faith comes in, and all the Clerics are geared to spread the word of the Naaru so that fear and despair from such knowledge don't ever set in. Because even though they are destined to become like this, they still have to make the choices that will cause them to follow that destined timeline, if not, they will create another path, or even fall to chaos.

I guess that's the reason why I dont like the Naaruism and stuff... its way too religious. And those who dont follow the Light will be "lost" or will "fall to chaos"... If this is the case, then everyone but the Cleric-Knights are basically doomed.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Aha! So you're like that too huh? Explains the source of your BLUECHEESIUM ENGINE And a QUasi-religion based on the multiverse? Do tell

I can relate to that as well, though I dont go as far as create religions or the theory of alternate universes. You could say that my way of daydreaming is similar to Keroko's, where he includes Keroko-chan in different anime settings. However, what I do most is take stuff from different animes and worlds and integrate them somehow.

*BANG*

*Desert Eagle >>>> Kha*

"Counterterrorists Win"

*radio static*

LOL

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

It's fun seeing everyone else's reactions.
I just love it when I utilize things that seem so wrong in a colloquial sense but is perfectly innocent in the by the book sense.
Anyway, I still enjoy them in a normal healthy male teenager sense. But I tend t prioritize gentlemanly attitudes towards girls in life.

False hints are much more fun than obvious hints or the thing themselves.

And about more, allow me to think about it.

You make us look SO bad...

Originally Posted by Keroko

Technically it is Neltharion. In the fanon timeline, the the small fragment of power has no consiousness. In DragonS it gained one during a failed attempt to remove the fragment, said consiousness grew untill it returned all its meories, and eventually took control of Keroko. So it is, basically, a second Neltharion. Far weaker then the first, which is why the one inside Keroko tries to seek out himself. he can't stand being in such a weak mortal shell (Neltharion has a massive ego complex).

What's this DragonS?

*whipes the blood of Artherion* Anyway, Keroko might get vengefull if you touch her friends or familly (pre-Black Aspect corruption instinct, they used to be guardians) which mostly depends on what you did and why. Quattro, for example, would be royally screwed if Keroko got her hands on her. Graham, on the other hand, got of lightly. He screwed around with Hayate, and Keroko did not like that, but she could see logic in his reasoning. She's still a bit reluctant to be around him, but she doesn't outright hate him.

That's why Chaos specified VERY Vengeful Women, huh?

Originally Posted by Kha

Gimmy, Amuro, Foy and Hiro stare at their sempai.

Erio: ...

But in the end, I see Mai enjoying the show...

It was Lowe-aniki who wrote this hawt and steamy piece, not me!!!!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

It was my idea though...

*runs*

And that's right, she does She's still a young girl with... needs and... desires and... frustrations afterall

*distant chainsaw revving*

Why does this idea sound so... HAWT??

*chainsaw revving coming closer*

*runs*

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Technically, Keroko is already in trouble for being a women prone to anger and violence

Ooo-kay.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Actually...

Fate: *in the showers peeking out* Onii-chan, are you there?

Chrono: Actually, it's Yuuno here...

Poor Yuuno.

Originally Posted by Kha

I see... Time for Keroko to be refriended then; Blaster mode outta do the trick.

Need more sata on the blasted thing, but it does look like it.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Btw, for power comparison: I heard Nanoha's Blaster mode has 8 releases before her bodily limit is reached. So keeping that in mind, Rakael-Stahlmut is around Release 5 and under superGAR inspiration is just above 8. But Kha by himself, even with Schneiderform, Blaster Mode 3 > Kha's Gotteliches Schield with Bastion.

Kha is getting de-h4xxed in our minds a lot lately, isn't he?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You sure like pulling a Episode 3 Leeron on Bastion, desu ne...?

I'd rather have the episode 2 hot coffee, replacing the coffee with hot water, and the tremble with me.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

NOOOOO! We lost a member of the Dai-Baason Dan!

Artherion needs a robotic voice. Viral's voice loses it's awesome when you mechanize it anyhwere above Ganmen Speaker level.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Or this:

~~~~~~

Kha der Kleriker used Planeswalk. He teleports to beside the invisible Chrono.

Chrono: (thinks) Huh? What's he doing here? Does he intend to attack my dear sister? Looks like I got an excuse to be here; at least he can't see me.
Kha: (telepathy, eye aglow with Geass symbol) Well you look like a Christmas tree to me, Oni-chan.
Chrono: (telepathy) W-well... Er...

Fate: (wrapped in towel, Zamber at hand)... Kha. What. Are. You. Doing?
Kha: Ma-matte! This does not look like what it seems...! See! Look! Chrono is right here!

Casts Dispell, but he notices that the bathroom window was open.

Fate: ...Kha...?
Kha: (HALLAOUN!!! )

~~~~~~

Perils of living with the family.

Heh, at least Chrono can enjoy his victory a little while longer.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

So it would have taken Aurion a lot of time and bribery to get on Keroko's good side without discomfort, huh?

Hardly, Aurion never had any evil intent towards Hayate, and Keroko doesn't hold grudges for misunderstandings like that..

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Sounds something that you would need Blaster mode for...

Of course, wouldn't be fun if there was no drama, now would there?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Lemme show you where it came from:

Spoiler for Scrying:

*In a dark room, Creator-san watches a Glowing Scrying ball*

???: *female voice* Anata, dame... aaaaah...
?????: *male voice* Don't worry Mai, I'll be gentle.

Creator-san: So this is their future...

*hears noises*

Oh ****...

*hastily hides ball as Smith walks in*

Smith: Have you seen Mai around? I swear I heard her somewhere around here...

Creator-san: Mai? No, I haven't seen her around, haven't seen her at all

Smith: Ohkay, thanks for the he-

*sudden female yelp from Scrying ball as it glows*

???: Aaaah, chotto matte... aaah...
?????: I'll take good care of you...

Smith: Is that my voice?!

Creator-san: No it's not, it's...

*chainsaw revs*

Creator-san/Smith: *turns to see Mai*

Mai: ... kono...

---

*Several bloody moments later*

---

Mai: *in her room, lying in bed*

... Hatsudou.

*Scrying ball glows*

???: Aaaaaah, motto anata...

This spawned from discussions with a certain young Page...

Smith and Creator-san got 'revved'

And Mai is enjoying it.

Originally Posted by Erio

I can relate to that as well, though I dont go as far as create religions or the theory of alternate universes. You could say that my way of daydreaming is similar to Keroko's, where he includes Keroko-chan in different anime settings. However, what I do most is take stuff from different animes and worlds and integrate them somehow.

Great way to pass time, isn't it?

Originally Posted by Erio

What's this DragonS?

An alternate timeline in which Neltharion takes over Keroko.

Originally Posted by Erio

That's why Chaos specified VERY Vengeful Women, huh?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Erio

You make us look SO bad...

Aaron's got the right idea

Originally Posted by Erio

That's why Chaos specified VERY Vengeful Women, huh?

Jeno: "It was an accident !"

Originally Posted by Keroko

Ooo-kay.

Jeno: "There was no way I could have known !"

Originally Posted by Erio

Poor Yuuno.

Chrono: "His will..."

Jeno: "... To live..."

Clyde: "...Is strong"

...

?
?
?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Emperor: <Target Confirmed>

[Dream_Traveller]

@Chaos:

I recognize the second tune...too late, though, since the video is posted. Indeed, both songs match both characters well, I must say...

And, too add something else, here's a little snippet from the follow up of Bloody Masquerade, "Scarlet Berceuse".

Spoiler for "Scarlet Berceuse"- A Snippet:

"Shall we begin in earnest, then...my adversaries?"

Neither Number moved at first, but, after a period of dark stillness, Tre stepped forward. V was jolted out of his reverie and turned his head back to her, having previously been examining the crater in which Nove had once been.

"Ah!", he exclaimed, in an eerie sense of joyfulness. "I was wondering if another opponent would step up to the plate. Well done...Tre."

The Number didn't reply directly to V's outburst, and she tightened her first into a ball, her eyes shadowed. "You...killed her..."

Much to her barely concealed disgust and shock, the masked murderer merely nodded in apprehension of her statement. "Yes. That I did", he retorted, placidly.

Moments after V rounded off his words, a purple IS circle constructed itself around the enraged Number's clenched right fist, and wings formed of energy jutted outwards from behind her legs and elbows. V stood still, as if in anticipation of the events that were to unfold.

He still didn't flinch even after hearing the cry of tyrannic vehemence from Tre as, in one swift motion, she lifted herself only feet above the ground and rushed towards him.

You...you killed her...DIE!"

The black-garmented man raised a hand, casually, and a shield, that, too, in the form of an IS circle, was conjured up. Tre's fist connected with the barrier, the sheer ferocity of the strike causing V's feet to dig into the ground. He was still standing upright, and his defense withheld.

"Of course," he uttered, "revenge makes us all stronger..." Channeling more power into his shield, despite being forced back further, he lifted his head up at the purple-haired attacker, ignoring the cries out outrage Tre was emitting in her blood lust.

"And who knows?", he said, questioningly. "Perhaps you can finally finish me, like I did her...but at what cost-"

Out of the corner of his eye, he caught a glimpse of a glinting, that of steel, noticing the knives whistling through the air in his direction only just in time. Using Fawkes' handle, he sent Tre backwards by ramming her away from him, then wheeled to his right, erecting another shield before the projectiles slammed into it and exploded upon collision with it.

V, unusually, sounded rather surprised as the smokescreen faded. "That was a close shave there..." His eyes looked ahead of him, and he saw Cinque, the girl bearing more knives in hand, wiping away the tears from her sole eye, her look of sadness replaced by one of unbridled fury and menacing anger.

V brushed himself down as he stood up again, unsteadily. "Well, well", he mused. "Two on one, is it?" No reply answered him.

Very well.

Sandwiched in between the two opposing cyborgs, V waited, spear at the ready. He chose to bide his time, to see who would cast the die fist. But he could not help barring a single thought that came across his mind.

Will that really matter?

Pretty long snippet...

As you can see, it's the lead up to the main event, obviously- and, for all viewers, expect Cinque to, as expected, be more than just a tad riled...

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Well then, in light of the Erio/Lutecia scene I made...

Spoiler for ...Fun:

Vice: Oh, starting...

Erio: "I'm still surprise that they're actually going to do this..."

VIce: "Ah well, you're still young, you wouldn't understand..."

Erio: "Huh?"

Vice: "Nothing, pay attention to her kiddo..."

Erio: "Erm, sure..."

*Both songs have the 'techno' touch to it, though one of them is much more upbeat, 'colourful' and Energetic... While the other, powerful, deep, and poetic... *

Spoiler for Caro is true to her heart...:

True to my heart

Kimi wo chikaku de
Dare yori kanjitai

Close to my love!

Hitomi tojite
Itsuka kanau kara
Sunao na kimochi dakishime

Hikareau tokimeki toka
Afureru omoi wo
Oshiete kureta hito dakara

Namida nagashite mo
Soba ni ite kureta
Ano hi kara koi ga kirameki hajimeru

Sweet my heart!
Meguriaeta yone
Mayowanai de, change my life!

Dreaming lovers!

Hohoemi wa Kienai
Konna nimo suki dayo

True to my heart!

Mabushii kuchibiru
Setsunai manazashi ni

Close to my love!

Kata wo yosete
Kitto onaji dane
Omoir wa yasashii kiee de

True to my heart…!
True to my heart…!
True to my heart…!

Omoir wa yasashii kiee de!

Spoiler for Lutecia's scarlet tainted desires...:

Sotto kuchidzuketai shimetsukeru omoi ni kidzuite
Koi ga akaku fukaku yoru wo someteku

Tsukiakari ga terasu KIMI no yokogao
Nazomeita manazashi ni furikaeru

Ikutsumo no yoru wo kurikaeshi
Kawasu omoi kanata made

Atsuku kogare mune de dakishimete kubisuji KISU shite
Eien ni futari amaku yureugoku kanjou

Itsuka kitto ieru awaku kagayaita kono omoi
Koi ga akaku fukaku yoru wo someteku

Vice: Erio? Erio? You okay buddy?

Erio:

I'll post the translation later... Though I figure most of you might have already heard those songs before... If not, I'll post the youtube video later as well

The first song fit (Go Caro! ), but I never heard the second song before...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Lol, kk

Spoiler for Caro is true to her heart...:

Title: "True to my heart"
Origin: H-game, "Nursery Rhymes"
Artist: Saori Sakura

Translation

True to my heart

I want to feel you closer than anyone else

Close to my love

Closing my eyes
Someday my dream will come true
So I keep cherishing my precious feelings

Heart-beatings when attracted to each other
And overflowing love
You are the person who has taught me such feelings

When I was shedding tears
You stayed by my side
Since that day, our love has started to shine

Sweet my heart

We’ve finally met
Without hesitation, I changed my life

Dreaming Lovers

We’ll never let our smiles go
I love you this much

True to my Heart

Your lips are so dazzling
My eyes are yearning

Close to my love

Leaning on your shoulder
I’m sure you fell the same way
Let me feel your heart with a gentle kiss

True to my heart! True to my heart ~!
True to my heart! True to my heart ~!

Let me feel your heart with a gentle kiss…

Spoiler for Lutecia's scarlet tainted desires...:

Title: "Scarlet"
Origin: Anime Opening, "Karin"
Artist: BRACE;d


Translation

I want to kiss you softly, so you realize my pressuring feelings
My love stains the night with a deep scarlet

The moonlight illuminates your face
You turn around with that mysterious look

It will repeat for many nights
Until our feelings are exchanged

I have a burning desire to hold you close and kiss you on the neck
Our emotions will sweetly tremble forever.

Someday i'll surely be able tell you, these feelings which faintly glitter
My love stains the night with a deep scarlet...

Ah k I see now... Fits too.

Originally Posted by Erio

The PERSON would find a way to his or her timeline, yes, but how could a Time Machine figure that out, huh? I guess this is where external forces comes into play...

I thought only magic is allowed to transcend dimensions... The amount of energy to do that is way beyond scientific means, such that either you find a more efficient way to do it, or use a different energy source.

Originally Posted by Erio

Doesnt Kha as well?

And I now wonder how you planned to activate Stahlmut if not with the shield...

Before Rakael, DaiStahlMut was a prototype that used a simple, low power Gundam type cockpit transformed from Nagato's armor. BOOOOORING.

Unfortunately, there's only so much a prototype can do. Enter Rakael, one of the several Ancient Belka weapons leftover when the Cradle fell out of the sky. Stahlpreios is out there... Somewhere...

Originally Posted by Erio

I knew it was them, but I got confused with "Tohkiha"... I thought they were called "Tohsaka"

Nope they were Tohkiha.

Originally Posted by Erio

I guess that's the reason why I dont like the Naaruism and stuff... its way too religious. And those who dont follow the Light will be "lost" or will "fall to chaos"... If this is the case, then everyone but the Cleric-Knights are basically doomed.

This is where my contradiction begins. The Word of the Naaru is such that as long as one is "Ordered", ie strict moral code, religious, pious or what not, no matter the exact details of the religion, as long as it is a code to be followed, it counts as following in their Name. So be it Christian, muslim, Jew, Buddhist, Hindi, Taoist... Bushido... Erm... I only know this much... It's very hard to capture in words as saying its one thing excludes another... The general idea is "Be Ordered" for pass rate, "Be Good" for excelling. Only the "Be Saintly" is reserved for the really blessed or determined few; and then some are born divine.

Spoiler for Be Warned - Moderate Blasphemy to Terran religions:

That is what makes Naaruism seem unequal; the Clerics and the more numerous Saints (whatever religion they end up with; Jesus for one is an example of a famous Cleric according to this interpretation, while Lao Zi, or Buddha before he attained enlightenment were Saints) are almost assured divinity because they are made to be such, to spread their word. You could say the entire Terran religion is the Naaru all-you-can-eat buffet, whichever one ultimate leads to the Naaru's work.

That's why Kha may be Holy Belka, but he's still works for the Naaru. Likewise, for the Clerics before him, they never always appeared in one religion, but sprung up everywhere; there were even times when the Clerics were women; one gave birth to the Midchilda Paladins.

For it was the Naaru that showed the way, but Man who had interpreted their teachings and tried to make sense out of it that created all the variations we know.

Yeah, I tried that hard to make all religion one...

Please forgive me for any transgressions... I don't like to discuss the finer points of "naaruism" (the proper term is just "The Light") as it will cause friction for other people's beliefs and my own crack theories which are so full of loopholes... It's only meant to cater to my facination of the divine and provide a common baseline for all the Clerics I create, and hopefully include as many beliefs as possible. Even druidism and shamanism count, which clearly contradicts Christian faith.

Sometimes, the contradictions are just too many for me to do anything, and I pray that all this is just my human limitation...

hell I sound like I believe in all this crack! I do but... then again...

Originally Posted by Erio

I can relate to that as well, though I dont go as far as create religions or the theory of alternate universes. You could say that my way of daydreaming is similar to Keroko's, where he includes Keroko-chan in different anime settings. However, what I do most is take stuff from different animes and worlds and integrate them somehow.

It was a fantasy gone overboard...

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Lol, kk

Spoiler for Caro is true to her heart...:

Title: "True to my heart"
Origin: H-game, "Nursery Rhymes"
Artist: Saori Sakura

Translation

True to my heart

I want to feel you closer than anyone else

Close to my love

Closing my eyes
Someday my dream will come true
So I keep cherishing my precious feelings

Heart-beatings when attracted to each other
And overflowing love
You are the person who has taught me such feelings

When I was shedding tears
You stayed by my side
Since that day, our love has started to shine

Sweet my heart

We’ve finally met
Without hesitation, I changed my life

Dreaming Lovers

We’ll never let our smiles go
I love you this much

True to my Heart

Your lips are so dazzling
My eyes are yearning

Close to my love

Leaning on your shoulder
I’m sure you fell the same way
Let me feel your heart with a gentle kiss

True to my heart! True to my heart ~!
True to my heart! True to my heart ~!

Let me feel your heart with a gentle kiss…

Spoiler for Lutecia's scarlet tainted desires...:

Title: "Scarlet"
Origin: Anime Opening, "Karin"
Artist: BRACE;d


Translation

I want to kiss you softly, so you realize my pressuring feelings
My love stains the night with a deep scarlet

The moonlight illuminates your face
You turn around with that mysterious look

It will repeat for many nights
Until our feelings are exchanged

I have a burning desire to hold you close and kiss you on the neck
Our emotions will sweetly tremble forever.

Someday i'll surely be able tell you, these feelings which faintly glitter
My love stains the night with a deep scarlet...

Nice

I guess 'True to my heart' really does fit Maren (Someone had sugested that song for Maren before, but for some reason I didn't go with it )

Hmmm...thinking of adding a couple of new OCs to this, I'll work on their profiles, then introduce them
Though, they'll most likely will only appear after StrikerS...no worries.

[EDIT:] Might as well spoil a little

Spoiler for Conviction:

????: Yagami Hayate...I despise people like her, who become powerful without even lifting a finger...
????: Master...

Is that trouble I see in the horizon?

[Tals]

Originally Posted by Kha

Quite a lot of info here, I think Erio should link this to your earlier post.

Yeah I agree about the barrier shapes. Circles take the least energy to make and stabilize as the surface tension is all spread out and are equally strong all around. Now a spinning cone-shaped one reminds me of a drill... It's that Gwen's new shield?

But from the intro, it felt like Will Smith waking up from bed in a scene from "I, Robot". Probably just me.

Glad you liked that intro, dream sequences are fun.

A drill seems like a cool use for barriers, but I'll leave that to you, I've got enough ideas to play with, I'm not gonna hog them all

Originally Posted by Erio

Just wanted to say that I've been reading about Entropy and Guy, and the concept is really interesting. I created an Earth Mage (Gaia) that is able to do similar things, such as mass manipulation and mass shots, however your idea of using Gravity for similar effects is very sweet.

I also have to say, using "Guy" as a name is awesome. The "Guy" I'm thinking about right now, though, is the one from Tales of the Abyss.

And lastly, welcome to the thread.

Thats the same Guy I had in mind when I picked the name, still haven't gotten around to finishing ToA, but I like him as a character.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I like where this is going. Please continue.

I do as I'm told

Spoiler for Introductions: 2:

Trees flashed by the window, the train rushed down the tracks heading away from the city. Inside, Guy looked out at the world as it flashed by. Why was he on this train anyway, it’s not like he really cared about the things they taught at school. He looked up at the clouds above; they floated lazily through the sky, reds and yellows fading together in the morning light. What he wouldn’t give to be up there, the whole world splayed out below him, no deadlines or schedules to meet, free to spend his time as he liked. Guy was lost in his own thoughts when a voice broke his concentration.
“The next stop is City Outskirts, again, the next stop is City Outskirts, please stand clear of the exits.”
The train jerked and slowly came to a stop. Guy stood up. Screw it, why was he on this train, it wasn’t going anywhere he wanted to be. The doors opened and he walked out onto the platform.

The sights and sounds of nature surrounded him. He’d been riding this train to school for 10 years and he’d never gotten off at this stop.
“Guess I’ll take a walk and clear my head a bit”
As he moved along the path, taking in the colors around him, he felt his mood lift. It really did feel good to be free from the world for once. He took a turn onto a smaller path that led deeper into the woods. He smiled as he walked, why had he never done this before? It was the best he’d felt in a long time, his mind wandered, carefree, it was good to listen to his instincts for once and do what he wanted.

“Ah, hello there, I was wondering how long it would take you to get here.”

Guy jerked to halt, it was that voice again, from his dream that morning. But he wasn’t asleep, why was he suddenly hearing voices.

“H-hello,” uncertainty filled his voice, “is there someone there?”

Maybe he was just hearing things, he had had weirder dreams before, and they never tried to interrupt his life.

“Hmph! Didn’t I tell you not to call me a dream, or did you really forget? I’ve been waiting here all morning, it’s about time you got here.”

“What do you mean waiting, where are you, how’d you know I would come here?”

“I’m down here silly, I led you here, but you sure love daydreaming, so it took me a while to get your attention.”

Guy looked down at his feet and jerked back. On the ground was a small black orb, it glinted in the light and spoke.

“Good morning Meister, now that we’ve finally met, we can get started.”

“What do you mean get started-“

As he spoke the orb began to glow a deep violet and the color seemed to drain around its edges. It floated up until it was at eye level. He was already so taken aback that a talking orb that could float barely registered as out of the ordinary.

“Integrating Systems_
Successful
Releasing Seal_”

Guy’s vision turned to searing white and his head throbbed.

“Initiating Unison Protocols_
System: Set Up”

Sight returned to his eyes, he was on his hands and knees, pebbles digging into his legs. He stood up. In front of him floated an alien object, two separate halves made of a metal he had never seen before orbited the black core, which was now glowing in a triangular field covered in unknown writing.

“I’ve got a lot to tell you, Meister. We must get started at once. You wanted to be up in the sky earlier, why don’t we go there to talk?”

Guy looked up, too shocked to respond. The clouds were rushing down to meet him.

[Tk3997]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yes, please do.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

At least, it gets the job done.

Oh how SG-1 will get along with Nanoha just fine...

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

ROTFL

Jack O'Neill, huh? well, that'd be....dangerous

Screw it I’m so going to do it now… behold yee Multi-verse and despair!

Spoiler for The General:

Name: Jack O’Neil
Other names/alias: Walking Disaster Area
Age: 55
Birthday: October 20
Height: 6’ 1”
Weight: 170
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Was brown, now well on it’s way to grey.
Origin: 85th Administered world
Mage Rank: AAA-
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Color: Blue
Element Preference: none
Affiliation: TSAB
Position/rank in TSAB: Air Force General, charged with overseeing various special operations and mercenary forces.

History:
A career military man O’Neil began his career as a trooper in his teens and hasn’t left the service since. Now with around 40 years of experience under his belt he’s one of the bureaus most respected and senior active members, and still a giant pain in the ass to his superiors. Never very respectful of authority and likewise never letting his own now rather large authority go to his head he’s loved by his men and hated to vaguely tolerated by most other officers at this level. His position as a senior commander of the Special Operations and Private Contractor Command is as much to get him away from anything “important” as it an acknowledgement of his considerable skill in both areas.

He spent most of his early and middle years in the TSAB in exploration and Lost Logia cases. It was during these years various misadventures he earned his now famous reputation for being both insanely unlucky and lucky all at once. On the one hand he was constantly being taken prisoner, becoming afflicted by bizarre aliments and circumstances involving Lost Logia, and getting caught up in huge life threatening battles. On the other hand though he always lived through them and basiclly solved the problem for the best in the end. (usually with a fair amount of pyrotechnics involved.)

This propensity for getting results was enough to keep him climbing the ranks despite his behavioral issues, and a few years ago he was finally promoted to general and mostly retired from field work, much to relief of most of the staff in his former department. (That didn’t last long though as his hand picked successor proved nearly as bad…)

Having him bumming around the HQ simply would not do though and so he was quickly hustled off to a fairly remote Special Operations and Private Contractor Command that was damn across the planet from GFHQ. It had a reputation for being unruly and impossible to control and had been through a dozen commanders in as many years with half taking demotions or retiring early to escape and the other half being fired for various disasters they failed to prevent. It was assumed he’d quickly follow, he didn’t. He rather liked the atmosphere of the place and the guys working their rather liked him and thus he once more did the seemingly impossible and brought the place under control… relatively speaking.

His personal history is more muddled and uneven he was married, but after his son was killed in accident (for which he feels he was largely to blame) his marriage effectively fell apart and he’s been divorced for over a decade now. He went through a period of depression and near suicidal tendencies following this, but has since accepted the loss and moved on and is now very close to his former self. Even so despite a few on and off again flings here and there he’s not really engaged a serious relationship since, despite the fact he’s technically had two more children in the meantime. (One conceived while standard on a low tech planet, he offered to take the women with him when he was rescued but she declined. The other is acutally technically a teenage clone of him… long story that)

Personality:

Exhibit one

Beyond his vast propensity for sarcasm and total disregard for most authority O’Neil’s family has always had a strong martial bent and this too shows through in him. He’s considerably more… aggressive in his solutions to many problems then the average TSAB officer. He often has an almost wild west like “dead or alive, but preferably dead” attitude toward particularly heinous or hated criminals. He dose have a strong moral code, of a sort, though and he’s not afraid to talk down to people he sees as backwards or misguided. Given the above it’s not much surprise diplomacy is not his strong suit and that he hold a mild distain for it under many circumstances, his occasional heated arguments with his close friend Daniel on the subject have become somewhat legendary.

Science is another of his weak points as though far from stupid and sporting a college education it simply doesn’t interest him much. Unless it has applications in causing property damage in the near future in which case he’ll tend to listen somewhat more carefully and class that particular device or experiment as “cool”. Otherwise he tends to zone out during any long winded explanation and ascribe any scientific phenomenon to complex to be bothered to understand to various applications of magnets, no matter whether such an explanation makes any kind of sense.

He can be serious when the situation demands it though and you can only push so far before he comes down on you like a sack of bricks. Also don't make him angry you won't like him when he's angry.

Device details are in process but the name is selected…

Homer.

And yes as implied here the rest of SG-1 also exists...

[Dream_Traveller]

Originally Posted by Tk3997

Screw it I’m so going to do it now… behold yee Multi-verse and despair!

Spoiler for The General:

Name: Jack O’Neil Other names/alias: Walking Disaster Area
Age: 55
Birthday: October 20
Height: 6’ 1”
Weight: 170
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Was brown, now well on it’s way to grey.
Origin: 85th Administered world
Mage Rank: S-
Magic Type: Mid-Childa
Magic Color: Blue
Element Preference: Fire
Affiliation: TSAB
Position/rank in TSAB: Air Force General, charged with overseeing various special operations and mercenary forces.

History:
A career military man O’Neil began his career as a trooper in his teens and hasn’t left the service since. Now with around 40 years of experience under his belt he’s one of the bureaus most respected and senior active members, and still a giant pain in the ass to his superiors. Never very respectful of authority and likewise never letting his own now rather large authority go to his head he’s loved by his men and hated to vaguely tolerated by most other officers at this level. His position as a senior commander of the Special Operations and Private Contractor Command is as much to get him away from anything “important” as it an acknowledgement of his considerable skill in both areas.

He spent most of his early and middle years in the TSAB in exploration and Lost Logia cases. It was during these years various misadventures he earned his now famous reputation for being both insanely unlucky and lucky all at once. On the one hand he was constantly being taken prisoner, becoming afflicted by bizarre aliments and circumstances involving Lost Logia, and getting caught up in huge life threatening battles. On the other hand though he always lived through them and basiclly solved the problem for the best in the end. (usually with a fair amount of pyrotechnics involved.)

This propensity for getting results was enough to keep him climbing the ranks despite his behavioral issues, and a few years ago he was finally promoted to general and mostly retired from field work, much to relief of most of the staff in his former department. (That didn’t last long though as his hand picked successor proved nearly as bad…)

Having him bumming around the HQ simply would not do though and so he was quickly hustled off to a fairly remote Special Operations and Private Contractor Command that was damn across the planet from GFHQ. It had a reputation for being unruly and impossible to control and had been through a dozen commanders in as many years with half taking demotions or retiring early to escape and the other half being fired for various disasters they failed to prevent. It was assumed he’d quickly follow, he didn’t. He rather liked the atmosphere of the place and the guys working their rather liked him and thus he once more did the seemingly impossible and brought the place under control… relatively speaking.

His personal history is more muddled and uneven he was married, but after his son was killed in accident (for which he feels he was largely to blame) his marriage effectively fell apart and he’s been divorced for over a decade now. He went through a period of depression and near suicidal tendencies following this, but has since accepted the loss and moved on and is now very close to his former self. Even so despite a few on and off again flings here and there he’s not really engaged a serious relationship since, despite the fact he’s technically had two more children in the meantime. (One conceived while standard on a low tech planet, he offered to take the women with him when he was rescued but she declined. The other is acutally technically a teenage clone of him… long story that)

Personality:

Exhibit one

Beyond his vast propensity for sarcasm and total disregard for most authority O’Neil’s family has always had a strong martial bent and this too shows through in him. He’s considerably more… aggressive in his solutions to many problems then the average TSAB officer. He often has an almost wild west like “dead or alive, but preferably dead” attitude toward particularly heinous or hated criminals. He dose have a strong moral code, of a sort, though and he’s not afraid to talk down to people he sees as backwards or misguided. Given the above it’s not much surprise diplomacy is not his strong suit and that he hold a mild distain for it under many circumstances, his occasional heated arguments with his close friend Daniel on the subject have become somewhat legendary.

Science is another of his weak points as though far from stupid and sporting a college education it simply doesn’t interest him much. Unless it has applications in causing property damage in the near future in which case he’ll tend to listen somewhat more carefully and class that particular device or experiment as “cool”. Otherwise he tends to zone out during any long winded explanation and ascribe any scientific phenomenon to complex to be bothered to understand to various applications of magnets, no matter whether such an explanation makes any kind of sense.

Device details are in process but the name is selected…

Homer.

And yes as implied here the rest of SG-1 also exists...

Ah, the man himself enters the Nanohaverse- and he still retains his old sarcastic wit and general persona. Quite a high rank, too...and his alias is somewhat fitting.

And...Homer? Is that a reference to the Illiad-

*Remembers that O'Neil watches the Simpsons.*

Oooh, right. Stupid me.

[Tk3997]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Ah, the man himself enters the Nanohaverse- and he still retains his old sarcastic wit and general persona. Quite a high rank, too...and his alias is somewhat fitting.

And...Homer? Is that a reference to the Illiad-

*Remembers that O'Neil watches the Simpsons.*

Oooh, right. Stupid me.

Well you figure he’s almost 60 has been in the service longer then allot of OC have been alive… He’ll have some rank and skillz.

Anyway he’s a half joke character that I probably won’t really be using super seriously. He is a general after all and so he’ll tends to have stuff to do besides flying around blowing stuff up and bumming around with the troops, much as he’d love too. Mostly he’ll go around in the background pissing off other officers (Hey Furface! (Regius) how’s it hanging?), making witty remarks, and shielding the horde of ruffians under his command from retaliation for “minor” mishaps… Besides this thread needed some sarcasm, too much GAR, Drama, and Perversion going on! O’Neil knows how to keep it real and he is the damn near perfect commanding officer for the bunch of scoundrels I’m building up.

[Dream_Traveller]

And what might the names of those under his command be? "Cameron Mitchell"? "Daniel Jackson"? "Samantha Carter"?

On a side note...

9000th POST, PEOPLE! YEAH!

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