2008-10-21, 08:04 | Link #17562 | |
4koma-holix
Join Date: Oct 2008
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Please let me know where the mistakes are so I make improvements for the HQ release The good news is.. I am getting the doujinshi so I may scan it myself! *crossfingers* Seems like the seller put it in the mail yesterday :X Come get here quick! >.< |
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2008-10-21, 12:46 | Link #17563 | ||
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: フェイトの中
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Oh, dokupan, did you want more PLUM doujins? I think the only ones I didn't send you are Magical SEED No.Due, Magical SEED Galaxy, Magical SEED BIND, Magical SEED, and Magical SEED A2, so I'm not sure which ones you don't have.... Is it safe for me to assume you have Magical SEED OTHER as well? And we kind of sort of did three doujins - Lyrical Waha, Master, and I'm totally counting all those eggs as an entire entity. So, I'm a paranoid procrastinating perfectionist, eh? Quote:
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Being consistent is key. Another thing I just realized as I'm reading through, there are.... little to no contractions. I know when you're formally writing, you don't use contractions, but when we're talking about people speaking.... For example, on page eleven, someone is saying "IT... IT IS... !!!" It would flow a lot better if it was "IT'S... !!!" Besides, who'd say an extra word or syllable or something when you're seeing the White Devil who looks like she'll Starlight Breaker your rump? Spoiler for Possible mistakes:
Someone should proofread my own "proofreading". I'm kind of a comma-holic. That, and I've only completed grade ten English, lol.... dlbdsfgadfsga;f I don't know why I'm bothering. A lot of the sentences just sound weird and I don't know enough Japanese to try and help re-phrase anything. Pretty much everything else just seems to be you missing a comma somewhere, with the odd spelling mistake and subject verb disagreeing. And stuff. Bleh.
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2008-10-21, 13:58 | Link #17565 | |
なんちゃって。
Join Date: Jul 2008
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Okay, sure, we've done 3 then. Are you going to deny it? :> So does that mean you're in eleventh grade or a dropout? :O Blargh, I'm not going to be doing anymore translating until my eyes've healed. |
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2008-10-21, 23:44 | Link #17574 | |
黒猫のウィズやってます
Join Date: Mar 2008
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I'm sorry to bother you, Spoiler:
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2008-10-22, 00:18 | Link #17575 | |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2006
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Also is hard for me to translate from Spanish to English, but I'll give it a try if you want (but I can guarantee that it will sound weird, and some sentences would have to be reworded ) If I were an angel I would fly to you forever I would do it I would do anything to be by your side I would do the impossible to hold your hand You are my life my destiny, my day by day. You are what I dream what I yearn. I need you, like flowers and the waters drops in a umbrella heart in a soul I feel that way I feel something beautiful I have a feeling and tell you I tell and repeat that I just... fell in love with you. Done. I think it sounded better in Spanish, but anyway I'll be pleased if someone tells me what should be corrected (grammar, wording, spelling). It's mainly because I had some problems translating this and I want to know where are any mistakes. Cuídense y sigan sorniendo |
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2008-10-22, 08:45 | Link #17577 |
Fate x Nanoha lover
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Portugal
Age: 40
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2008-10-22, 13:49 | Link #17579 |
I'm Back
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Land of Lincoln
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I have the following Safe for work doujins:
[0422SHOP] Lyrical Nanoka [AMR] Decade Eins [Briest] LMR 02 [CHA know-me DO-JI] Lyrical Jyoutoh! [D-Cube] Fate in Stay Night [Daikakudou] Roshinante Go Ahead [Einsatz Gruppe] No.1 White Devil [Fukashigi] Nanoha no Hon [GRINP] Lyrical Bonus!!!!! [Kawaisounako] Kawauso Vol. 02 [Kikakugai.Extend] Fate Out of Standard [Kohakunosima] O Yakusoku wa Zettai! Muteki Nano~ [mstl-60997] NR-01 [Parukusu] PV6 [Parukusu] PV7 [PLUM] Magical SEED FREEDOM [Rental Senkan] Midori [Rimitubureiku + T-A-C-O] Nanoha-san no Technique [Romantic Sintai-Kensa] pop x pop [Subitan] Vivio no Oekakichou [Upagoya Endori] Standby Ready Clock Up! [Utsura Uraraka] Rein Ganbaru Desu! Already in english [RAID SLASH] Thunder Bird [GiB] Lyrical Waha [Iceky] The Same Feel [ENG] [Aterier Miyabi] Sky Colors [ENG] [MoruHouse] Koiwa Mutekinano [ENG] [Nagomutei] Sleeping Butterfly [ENG] [RAID SLASH] Fake Jewel [ENG] [UnisonBell] Nanohana [ENG] [SEA STAR] KISS [ENG] [SEA STAR] LOVE LOVE LOVE [ENG] [SEA STAR] Punyu Punyu [ENG] [SEA STAR] Sweet Home [ENG] [SEA STAR] Velvet [ENG] [Rocket Guy] Akuma demo Nanoha! nano [ENG] Anyone want me to post any of these?
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