2012-09-08, 08:39 | Link #36605 | |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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If it comes to lime then...
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2012-09-08, 09:19 | Link #36610 | |
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Join Date: Dec 2011
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Baka, Nii-nii no ecchi.
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2012-09-08, 09:22 | Link #36611 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Can you imagine your fic characters playing tanto cuore?
Yeah, I think it is the system. Think I should reload it or something? |
2012-09-08, 09:32 | Link #36613 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Dec 2011
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Heee~
At least I don't whine about writing quality and whatnot, you're good when you're putting effort in it. Look at your own draft, Baka. Stop writing new draft and let's fix the earlier chapter, grammar can go to heck, amirite~? When in doubt, make it purple |
2012-09-08, 09:54 | Link #36614 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Actually grammar does matter but that will grow as you continue to write. I used to not care about grammar and punctuation... but that's just painful to the eyes. But you'll eventually fix it on your own. And if anything passes then the editor can fix it.
EDIT: BTW I actually played Tanto Cuore. At first I didn't really get it and was disinterested due to the art. But as the game progressed and you realize that there are various strategies and how heavily each move counts, it becomes more than just a card game to show off moe maids. Though sadly you have to play it to actually appreciate it. But there are probably a lot more similar but serious themed card games that give off the same effect. I just reckoned that it'd be funny for hardened soldiers to enjoy the game XD Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2012-09-08 at 10:09. |
2012-09-08, 10:40 | Link #36618 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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I myself don't think it's a matter of qualification. Just passion. My problem was pointed out to me by the single review on "loss" by the person with many aliases. Too artistic he said. It's a consequence of the way I've been refining my writing since forever. comparing to more famous fics and personal favorites then try to assimilate similar style. As time passes you'll evemtually feel what works and what doesn't.
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2012-09-08, 10:59 | Link #36620 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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I wanna try writing cake eater again. Dinner scene just won't come to me though. How would you imagine Yamada coming into contact with Chifuyu? Try to make it as "out there" as possible.
EDIT: Now that I think about it. Everyone wonders how Yamada ended up in the Orimura house since she doesn't seem the forward type to meet-up with Chifuyu as friends. Then they each start recounting how they met Chifuyu and it entails very very embarrassing stories Chifuyu would rather not remember. But at the end of it all, Yamada's story turns out to be extremely normal that it's a letdown. :-? Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2012-09-08 at 11:09. |
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