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gizmo · 2004-02-22, 13:41

I'll post only one this time, so i won't be overloading you guys with drawings.
I'll post some more tomorrow, and the day next etc. etc.

Here's the first one, my first pen drawing:
http://home.hetnet.nl/~andrewr98/dsci0019.jpg

Instead of givin' you folks an image, i thought a link would be better since it's a little big.

Mr_Anonomis · 2004-02-22, 15:07

it's a little big, but it looks pretty good

gizmo · 2004-02-22, 15:30

I just gave the link now. Yes it's a bit big cause i'm running under a resolution of 1600x1400. So i guess it looks kinda big for ya. I'll make a 800x600 of it next time.

Tboz · 2004-02-22, 19:01

There is sort of a protruding ridge running from her nose to the top of her forehead. It looks very odd. I think she has a very broad forehead, maybe you could reduce that and move up the placement of her mouth and nose. Her left shoulder is too high and you could move her head a little towards her right.

Btw, I'm using IE, so I just let my browser do an automatic resize.

daliinn · 2004-02-22, 21:24

I think it looks very good but just some small errors with the forehead and such. Also her ear is kinda weird looking. I expect to see more works from you hopefuly.

gizmo · 2004-02-23, 04:37

Yeah, the face is kinda weird now i look at it. But i have a new one for ya, check it out:

Ow, and an smaller version of the last one:

http://home.hetnet.nl/~andrewr98/pentekening.jpg

As you can see ears are my weak point. I just can't draw them like they are, maybe i'll use a model next time

gizmo · 2004-02-23, 08:52

Ok, I must agree with that the last picture wasn't that good.
Ears, yes I know...

This is one i scetched today in class.
Not much though, but maybe nice to look at.

ss_goku4 · 2004-02-23, 15:16

on the first pic---

Quote:

here is sort of a protruding ridge running from her nose to the top of her forehead. It looks very odd. I think she has a very broad forehead, maybe you could reduce that and move up the placement of her mouth and nose.

Tboz said it, not me. But I agree. It looks almost un-natural.

second pic- Not bad. The ear looks funky tho.

third pic - something looks off, but I can't put my finger on it. Can someone point it out?

daliinn · 2004-02-23, 15:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by ss_goku4

third pic - something looks off, but I can't put my finger on it. Can someone point it out?

The proportions look a little unnatural.

gizmo · 2004-02-24, 04:42

here's the new one. It's sephiroth of final fantasy 7, draw it in school today (as you can see i've not much else to do here

)

gizmo · 2004-02-24, 11:42

There is something wrong with the mouth though, now i look at it.
Can't really place it. Any suggestions?

Demon_Spawn67 · 2004-02-24, 14:25

the fore head looks a bit big and the mouth is crooked

also it looks more like Kain from Legacy of Kain than sephiroth

gizmo · 2004-03-09, 06:59

Here is Cloud:

I think it turned out pretty well

Comment please

Shinobu_Maehara · 2004-03-09, 07:42

I see you have a Sony Cybershot digital camera right?

Neat drawings BTW,,, but make them a little smaller, that'll be easier to see.

Mockingbird's pilot · 2004-03-09, 08:40

Nice scetch. Really.
There is a lot of good books how to draw a man in motion and atlases of man's anatomy. I learned to paint according to such books (writed by one italian professor of painting). There were few useful adwices about a proportions and poses...
One of the best russian painters - Anry. May be you will be interested to look his artworks: http://www.anry.ru/rus/gallery/gallery.htm

gizmo · 2004-03-09, 12:32

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shinobu_Maehara

I see you have a Sony Cybershot digital camera right?

Neat drawings BTW,,, but make them a little smaller, that'll be easier to see.

No i've scanned these pictures at school with a HP scanner.
I have an Orite Digital Cam PRO at home, a 3.1mpix digicam.
The one with purple hair is taken with that cam, the rest is scanned in.
But nice that you like the picture, i've a better one of sephiroth aswell, but i'll post that later on. Nice pictures of the russian dude btw, thanks for the link. There are some pretty disturbing images among them... Nice for everybody to check out.

Demon_Spawn67 · 2004-03-09, 13:42

WOAH

that artwork is good ((the russian guy))

wat umm pics did u mean were disturbing they all look okay and not exactly disturbing the art work and such is quite full of emotion from teh half life to the dragon all of his pics are full of emotion and quite well portraied...

anyways nice work on ur pics...

gizmo · 2004-03-09, 16:01

Quote:

Originally Posted by Demon_Spawn67

WOAH

that artwork is good ((the russian guy))

wat umm pics did u mean were disturbing they all look okay and not exactly disturbing the art work and such is quite full of emotion from teh half life to the dragon all of his pics are full of emotion and quite well portraied...

anyways nice work on ur pics...

with ((the russian guy)) you mean that my pics aren't good?
Anyway, desturbing i mean quite emotionally hard pictures.
These for example

http://www.anry.ru/gallery/snowdrop/snowdrop_rus.htm
http://www.anry.ru/gallery/pain_kill...killer_rus.htm
http://www.anry.ru/gallery/i%60m_hom...m_home_rus.htm
http://www.anry.ru/gallery/fast_forg...veness_rus.htm

Especially the last one, that one got me chills you know?

Demon_Spawn67 · 2004-03-09, 17:08

sorry ur art is good just i am not used ta seeing such damn good artwork like anry
as for the paintings they all have such emotion in them^^ man he very good...
a good drawing or painting always has an emotion u can feel with out having to read about it... a sort of soul to the picture..

all his work show this "soul" so well i have not seen an artist like him in quite sum time

as for ur pics they great^^ but i mean i would never be able to match anry's style or detail..
thats all i am just amazed at how amaazing his work is...

as for the *creep Facor* i guess to most normal people not looking for the "soul" in his art can be disturbed by such things... the last one... truly a very umm how do i put this...

Sorrowfull yet happy work^^

gizmo · 2004-03-09, 19:00

I just mean with disturbing (sorry for my bad english) that it makes something lose inside me. I think i misplaced the word here, i think the word shocking is more in place, but it doesn't goes that far.. well i'm not sure how to say it, but just looking at those pictures make me think about things ya know.. well that's how i ment it.
I must agree that that bloke is really good, i'm sooo yelous at him... GRR but o well, i'll keep on trying to improve myself.

2004-02-22, 13:41	Link #1
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	My own artwork I'll post only one this time, so i won't be overloading you guys with drawings. I'll post some more tomorrow, and the day next etc. etc. Here's the first one, my first pen drawing: http://home.hetnet.nl/~andrewr98/dsci0019.jpg Instead of givin' you folks an image, i thought a link would be better since it's a little big. Last edited by gizmo; 2004-02-22 at 15:19.

2004-02-24, 04:42	Link #10
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	here's the new one. It's sephiroth of final fantasy 7, draw it in school today (as you can see i've not much else to do here ) Last edited by gizmo; 2004-02-24 at 11:42.

2004-02-22, 15:07	Link #2
Mr_Anonomis El Diablo Blanco! Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Chicago, Il Age: 35	it's a little big, but it looks pretty good

2004-02-22, 15:30	Link #3
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	I just gave the link now. Yes it's a bit big cause i'm running under a resolution of 1600x1400. So i guess it looks kinda big for ya. I'll make a 800x600 of it next time.

2004-02-22, 19:01	Link #4
Tboz Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003	There is sort of a protruding ridge running from her nose to the top of her forehead. It looks very odd. I think she has a very broad forehead, maybe you could reduce that and move up the placement of her mouth and nose. Her left shoulder is too high and you could move her head a little towards her right. Btw, I'm using IE, so I just let my browser do an automatic resize.

2004-02-22, 21:24	Link #5
daliinn Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Age: 35	I think it looks very good but just some small errors with the forehead and such. Also her ear is kinda weird looking. I expect to see more works from you hopefuly.

2004-02-23, 04:37	Link #6
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	Yeah, the face is kinda weird now i look at it. But i have a new one for ya, check it out: Ow, and an smaller version of the last one: http://home.hetnet.nl/~andrewr98/pentekening.jpg As you can see ears are my weak point. I just can't draw them like they are, maybe i'll use a model next time

2004-02-23, 08:52	Link #7
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	Ok, I must agree with that the last picture wasn't that good. Ears, yes I know... This is one i scetched today in class. Not much though, but maybe nice to look at.

2004-02-24, 11:42	Link #11
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	There is something wrong with the mouth though, now i look at it. Can't really place it. Any suggestions?

2004-02-24, 14:25	Link #12
Demon_Spawn67 Kain Join Date: Jan 2004	the fore head looks a bit big and the mouth is crooked also it looks more like Kain from Legacy of Kain than sephiroth

2004-03-09, 06:59	Link #13
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	Here is Cloud: I think it turned out pretty well Comment please

2004-03-09, 07:42	Link #14
Shinobu_Maehara eternal Shinobu lover Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Netherlands (EU) Age: 41	I see you have a Sony Cybershot digital camera right? Neat drawings BTW,,, but make them a little smaller, that'll be easier to see.

2004-03-09, 08:40	Link #15
Mockingbird's pilot Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Russia, Moscow Age: 43	Nice scetch. Really. There is a lot of good books how to draw a man in motion and atlases of man's anatomy. I learned to paint according to such books (writed by one italian professor of painting). There were few useful adwices about a proportions and poses... One of the best russian painters - Anry. May be you will be interested to look his artworks: http://www.anry.ru/rus/gallery/gallery.htm

2004-03-09, 13:42	Link #17
Demon_Spawn67 Kain Join Date: Jan 2004	WOAH that artwork is good ((the russian guy)) wat umm pics did u mean were disturbing they all look okay and not exactly disturbing the art work and such is quite full of emotion from teh half life to the dragon all of his pics are full of emotion and quite well portraied... anyways nice work on ur pics...

2004-03-09, 17:08	Link #19
Demon_Spawn67 Kain Join Date: Jan 2004	sorry ur art is good just i am not used ta seeing such damn good artwork like anry as for the paintings they all have such emotion in them^^ man he very good... a good drawing or painting always has an emotion u can feel with out having to read about it... a sort of soul to the picture.. all his work show this "soul" so well i have not seen an artist like him in quite sum time as for ur pics they great^^ but i mean i would never be able to match anry's style or detail.. thats all i am just amazed at how amaazing his work is... as for the creep Facor i guess to most normal people not looking for the "soul" in his art can be disturbed by such things... the last one... truly a very umm how do i put this... Sorrowfull yet happy work^^

2004-03-09, 19:00	Link #20
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	I just mean with disturbing (sorry for my bad english) that it makes something lose inside me. I think i misplaced the word here, i think the word shocking is more in place, but it doesn't goes that far.. well i'm not sure how to say it, but just looking at those pictures make me think about things ya know.. well that's how i ment it. I must agree that that bloke is really good, i'm sooo yelous at him... GRR but o well, i'll keep on trying to improve myself.