2013-04-24, 23:53 | Link #3284 |
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While building up Tarou further, to make him his own 'rider', I analyzed what works and discarded what doesn't. In doing so...
...he ceased to be a Kamen Rider. Wearing nothing but Obsidium, building gadgets and fielding the latest in misappropriated technology, Tainaka is a different kind of hero. Spoiler for Tarou's real catchphrase!!:
Toaru Chounouryouku no Tantei Steel (ESP Detective Steel), tadaima SANJOU!!
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2013-04-25, 09:59 | Link #3287 |
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*facepalm*
*double facepalm* If you could only see that one freak out scene. Oh yeah, so does the character I posted have too much magic at her disposal? |
2013-04-25, 10:11 | Link #3288 | |
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Personally, I thot magic people were just crazy. You'd need to pass it by someone else, but for me she's okay.
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2013-04-25, 10:17 | Link #3289 |
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I'll stick to kamen rider. Gavan was cool and all but... yeah. KR still has the better bikes.
Plus the cool thing about W and TAMNI xover is the fact Kamen Rider in W-verse is specifically regarded as a hero, a title given by the people to its champion. God knows AC needs a hero |
2013-04-25, 10:25 | Link #3290 | |
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Nevertheless, Metal Hero and Kamen Rider have merged so much they are really quite similar these days. And because Tainaka has a bike, is going to get a better one, keep upgrading it, and in return the bike upgrading his armor once the database got advanced enough. Is he a Metal hero with a cool bike, or a Kamen Rider with an iron mask? It is the duality of the two that makes Tarou Hardboiled. :3
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2013-04-27, 00:52 | Link #3292 | |
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Spoiler for All hands, TRANSFORMATION!:
Henshin KITAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ...across the planet... ...across the stars... ...and back again. ...AAAAAAAA!!
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2013-04-27, 01:13 | Link #3293 |
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That was crazy O.o
I found another reference. Kaitou... And he still uses a gun XD does it indicate her as overpowered if I say that the Church doesn't want to tangle with her because they've made an estimate that they would lose at least a quarter of their forces to kill her? Name: Doti Age: 42 Gender: female Alignment: "Malefic" mage mercenary troop, Description: wears a white dress with a red sash and a white cardiggan over them. An eyepatch covers her right eye while her left eye resembles fake glass like a doll. On her feet are a curious pair of slippers colored silver. In battle she uses an axe and a sword. For accessories she keeps a silver whistle around her neck. Looks 14. History: Doti is a witch. She is well known within circles of magic as the predator witch. The reason for this is her active hunting of witches despite being a witch herself. Shes kills them to consume their magic as well as their life. This increases her power and allows her to retain her youth. It is easy for her to kill, as she treats the existence of everyone as merely a tool or material for prolonging her life or entertaining her. Born a witch in a secluded town of America, she grew up in a closed society raised by a witch mother but no father. She was taught all outsiders were of evil descent. But she witnessed her own people perform unspeakable acts of cruelty. She eventually began to take on their personalities. They would kill animals and even people, take their innards, use them for their magics and ceremonies. She was instilled with the ideals that humans were less than witches and witches could do as they pleased with people as one would with cattle to increase their power. This combined with being the strongest in their coven, Doti wondered what would happen if she used witches as her own material? That same night, she killed everyone including her own bloodmother. she continued her witch hunts and suffered many losses for every gain she obtained, her eyes, her feet, her heart. Her hunts eventually brought her to Lise in whom she found an equal, someone who was more than just material for herself. Thus she was brought into the Malefic fold. Magics: overlooking eye: this spell is affected to Doti's left eye. It's glass and enchanted to act as Doti's left and only functional eye. It affords her vision with greater clarity than 20:20 vision. Her vision extends to kilometers in its scope and focus. Her range extending to 20-30. There is no problem in removing this eye and leaving it with another person or elsehwere. eye of oblivion: the covered right eye is actually a mouth. It's filled with fanged teeth that seals it shut. When open it will seek out all living things in the area. It's function is to consume souls and magic. It is a power demonic in nature even capable of harming those existing beyond the boundaries of humanity. placebo craft: Doti is innately skilled in forging idols, fetishes and magic tools. She can even enchant objects which look nothing like to original to even fool adepts at appraising the supposed product of their craft. false heart: Doti's heart is a fake of her own design. It is nothing special but it does not tire. If she ever becomes winded it's due to her lungs and muscles which are still flesh. enchanted slippers: the silver slippers were Doti's first attempt at idol craft. She succeeded in a partial recreation of the silver shoes of the tale the Wonderful World of Oz. It retains the original spells of the silver shoes, granting the ability to travel anywhere in three paces. However it grants more abilities like increased speed and leg strength and the ability to walk on any space of any state. It was eventually cursed by one witch that Doti killed so it will turn red hot and burn whoever touches it. After losing her feet once and replacing them. Doti re-enchanted the shoes to take advantage of the curse instead. silver whistle: a whistle which temporarily calls animals into Doti's service. They act similarly as familiars would. tin arms: the axe and sword Doti wields are both cursed, always seeking blood. They will swing in the most effective way to rend as much flesh as they can, even if it means striking the wielder themselves. Doti has tamed them and uses them due to their bloodthirstiness. Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2013-04-27 at 09:48. |
2013-04-27, 16:23 | Link #3296 | |
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Speaking of the story... you talk about it a lot on here, how far along in the story are you? What's it called? Normal hearts don't tire either, they are made of a special kind of tissue that can perform constantly without caving into the stress. |
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2013-04-27, 19:20 | Link #3298 | |
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In the words of a wise russian man: "I have yet to meet man who can outsmart bullet" |
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2013-04-27, 20:53 | Link #3299 |
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well she does it with an axe and sword
Doti and Lise are partners in Malefic which takes contract work from Necessarius and anyone willing to pay the needed amount, which isn't really much. To speak they are cheap but very effective in what they do. Does it fit well into the canonverse that instead of power levels, power/ability types decide who wins? well not really decide but there are decidedly good match-ups and bad ones? |
2013-04-27, 20:59 | Link #3300 | |
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