Kurokami no Ou ~Mahou no Tsukaenai Makenshi no Nariagari~

[wuhugm]

Well well, someone's gonna die

[wuhugm]

New chapter

Spoiler:

Miscarriage

Shit...

[Mirable]

New Ch.

as expected MC is fuck up one way or another.

[wuhugm]

^Muscle-Brained MC

What the hell did he think would happen lol

[Darkwolf907]

So what happened after that ?

Please tell me that mc killed him in the brutal way

[Mirable]

^Instead of worry about how scum prince gonna die, we should worry about the king may exile MC from Kingdom as punishment for hurt scum prince.

[Darkwolf907]

Dont care about that. Just make that scum prince taste the hell

Im feeling dark right now after read what happened and cant feel easy until i know what will happened to scum prince

[wuhugm]

Originally Posted by Darkwolf907

Dont care about that. Just make that scum prince taste the hell

You, Ruki, and many others really like brutal revenge

I really hate over the top revenge plot

Just kill the guy and be done with it
Like Vahn in Gun X Sword
No torture no nothing, just kill and go

[Darkwolf907]

@wuhugm its not about like or not. I just thought thats the best way to erase his anger

Even without that as long as something bad happened to scum prince then i already statisfied

[wuhugm]

Originally Posted by Darkwolf907

@wuhugm its not about like or not. I just thought thats the best way to erase his anger

Even without that as long as something bad happened to scum prince then i already statisfied

You mean YOUR anger

Scum prince will die in the end
But see in latest chapter, his half-assed revenge caused the situation to turn for the worse

[Breimn]

Originally Posted by wuhugm

You, Ruki, and many others really like brutal revenge

I really hate over the top revenge plot

Just kill the guy and be done with it
Like Vahn in Gun X Sword
No torture no nothing, just kill and go

This. No delaying, better get rid of the problem as soon as possible.

[wuhugm]

Duuuuuuuoooooooooiiiiiiiiii

The previous chapter was revised

Spoiler:

The miscarriage is undone

[Mirable]

^I have a mixed feeling about this, while i'm glad that miscarriage got revised, i worry author may lose confidence in writing the story he want.

[wuhugm]

^Well, following readers is also a choice

Miscarriage is better than NTR so it was fine pushing on with that imho

But author chose to revised it

Might be a wiser choice though, since that event will make 1 heroine suffering immensely for the rest of the series
So many time would be needed to make her recover
Even then, the heavy feelings would probably still remain

[Mirable]

^I understand that.

Author's word makes me worry. Author implied that miscarriage was important event for story but since miscarriage is undone now, the story may take a different path.

感想でも予想がついていた方はいらっしゃいましたが、このまま進めて行きたいと思います。
私自身、本当にどうしようか悩んだのですが、物語にはこの事が大きく関わって来ますので、この通りにしまし た。
これからも何度か山場を迎える事はありますが、最後に笑顔を迎えるための布石だと思って、許し てください。

追記
内容を変えました。お許しを。

Now i'm thinking if author chose to stick with Aneue's amnesia route, Aneue might have more screentime and possible took the main heroine position, not disappeared like this.

[wuhugm]

^Well, that's the thing

Both Aneue's Amnesia and Victoria's Miscarriage would make them stand out too much
I mean, completely overshadowing other heroines
That would be bad since this is harem
The harem increase might be stopped altogether to care the "pitiful heroine"
I mean, how could MC court another girl when his first wife just lost her child?
That's true dead end there

And honestly, those events are just too soap opera

[Darkwolf907]

I can understand many reader disagree with miscarriage thing.
Especially this is harem novel so its become dark story(my opinion)
Thats why i also got angry and type rage comment before.

Maybe if authot give some explain about what happened to the story after miscarriage then reader gree to continue it

[Valky]

Rather than some overdramatic shit, I'd prefer if the author increase the details and add some backstory to the characters .. since it is lacking.

[wuhugm]

^You got it, in the form of NTR attempt!?

[Mirable]

^

Originally Posted by New Chapter

「ああ、さっき領地を見回っていたんだけど……ロナが男と歩いてたんだよ！」

What do you think? Start of Rona's heroine or distribute by MC cause so far MC doesn't see her as romance interest.