2011-11-27, 18:47 | Link #10063 |
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@ Senpai - By the way, Dan was one of the only guys there. The narration for it says that there was only him and Ichika around since he was the only one to invite a guy to the festival. In doing so, he sparked the Utsuho/Dan ship
Side note - The IKaron in Shadow is more of a traditional romance. Irish is told to meet his contact during a st@rs concert. The contact tells him some info and then disappears. Irish is about to leave but he's one of the few random who gets chosen to go backstage and meet the idols. Once backstage, he, along with a few other males, meet the st@rs cast. Irish doesn't really care till a drone attacks the backstage area looking for something (Karon's IS, which she left somewhere else). Irish saves Karon (Ba-dump) and distracts the drone so the civilians can get away. Karon then get's her IS and shoots down the drone before Irish gets killed. Start of friendship from there.
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2011-11-27, 19:12 | Link #10065 |
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@ Meister - The skull suits killing him with the constant usage he does of it. The human body can't handle the spikes in pressure too much so he'll die before he reaches 18 if he doesn't stop using it or gets treatment. Unfortunately, Irish is a stubborn little bugger and refuses to stop using it so Karon's gonna be stuck on a loop.
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2011-11-27, 19:26 | Link #10066 | |||
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2011-11-27, 19:26 | Link #10067 |
~ Your Smile ~
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Then failing which she's off to Max and Ange to see if something can't be done about that.
The rest is how you intend it to unfold. Even something like that can be fixed in my campy world.
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2011-11-27, 19:44 | Link #10070 |
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@ Senpai - Irish is so Out of Place because the other boys there are the stadard idol fanboys. He's the only one there not itching for a chance to meet the idols. Karon takes notice of the fact that he's passive and doesn't attempt to ask questions which she finds a bit odd.
Side note - Dan and Ichika being the only males also bug me. Is the author seriously telling us none of the girls have Dad's or brothers? @ Meister - Ange would probably be able to help them, too bad they'll basically have to strip Irish and hold him down to get him to agree.
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2011-11-27, 19:49 | Link #10071 | ||
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But it's even more staggering that Dan only gets ONE girl that's curious him.... which basically impossible considering that the justification about Ichika's sheer amount of fangirl is that he's the only guy in I.S.A. I's not like Dan will have 100+ fangirls in one swoop, it's just that one girl simply not good enough! At the very least, Mayuzumi (the resident newshound) will interview Dan about Ichika and/ or vice versa. And the students will get to know about Dan.
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2011-11-27, 19:55 | Link #10072 |
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@ Senpai - The Idols really shouldn't have left their IS in their dressing rooma They could've shot down that drone if they had it with them.
Side note - They did notice Dan. They just thought Ichika looked more handsome and was more their type or something. Then again, it's probably because he can't pilot an IS since the main point of Ichika being there was because he was unique from other males. Besides, he did get ONE admirer, our very own Utsuho-san!
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2011-11-27, 19:58 | Link #10073 |
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Hey Zero, how are you doing in your program? I have my last exam on Dec. 14. So I'll go full force on Sacred Twins and Red Rain afterwards. And frankly, it's about time I got back to these. xD
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2011-11-27, 20:00 | Link #10074 | ||
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Well, if we get Dan Took a Level of Badass (I'm not certain, maybe a BFG-using sniper or something... but no Armor Stratos certainly), we'll get another one, with so much foeyay. Enough to power entire academy. Aye, long time no see. My exam just finished last week. Feel free to share if you have a problem
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2011-11-27, 20:09 | Link #10075 |
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@ Senpai - Dan's the Sunohara in my fic, but he's the one with the most NORMAL relationship among all the males. No broken psyche or stunted emotions, just a bit of an age gap problem.
Side note - Karon's flat, right? When Irish saves her his head lands on her chest so she hopefully she's not very endowed Also, what role do you think Ran should play in Shadow? Originally, she was the "just friends" with Irish but I replaced her with Laura to mess with Kyuukai.
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2011-11-27, 20:12 | Link #10076 | |||
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Anyway, fic related.
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2011-11-27, 20:20 | Link #10077 |
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@ Zero - Hahahahaha! That comic sounds like something that propoganda would include. The castration shop looks nasty though
I meant Ran, as in Dan's little sis, not her older bro. She'll be in IS academy come second year or earlier as a test student due to her high grades. Side note - Rin level flat? Then there's no problem. She'd get mad when Irish says she has the "perfect body for combat" and that she must've trained hard to reduce her chest size by that much.
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2011-11-27, 20:35 | Link #10080 |
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Irish: What's wrong? I'm merely complimenting you on the fact that the results of you're training were perfect. Your body is thin, your hair is short, and your chest is almost non-existant. In fact, some would mistake you for a boy if you wore the right clothes. On the other hand, my chest seems to be getting bigger if the tightness on the chest area when I wear a disguise is any indication. Can you give me advice to make my chest as small and flat as yours?
@ senpai - No prob, it's Meister's idea anyway. Just don't make Irish OOC.
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