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Old 2009-06-03, 06:36   Link #41
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The file size is not AS safe but I just want to check if this entry is acceptable. If this stupid problem i have is not solved,I'm afraid i have to cancel it for this month

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Old 2009-06-03, 07:05   Link #42
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There's a green lens flare in the right bottom corner. The eyes are also a bit questionable since only one highlight color is allowed. They're that close to the coloring of the rest though that I'll allow it on account of blending. Lose the color in the flare and it's good to go.
so if I remove the flare it accepted ??
huft .. but I think I'll make another draft ..
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Old 2009-06-03, 07:17   Link #43
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so if I remove the flare it accepted ??
huft .. but I think I'll make another draft ..
Yup. You can either remove it or recolor it to match the rest of the sig or the eyes.
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Old 2009-06-03, 07:18   Link #44
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The file size is not AS safe but I just want to check if this entry is acceptable. If this stupid problem i have is not solved,I'm afraid i have to cancel it for this month

It's acceptable.
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Old 2009-06-03, 17:52   Link #45
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@ Cierra it a good animation but I wonder if , insted of a ''pulse'', the light had a more smooth animation ( going gradualy stronger and weaker)

I mostly reworked on the backgroud this time C&C would be welcome.


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Old 2009-06-03, 19:03   Link #46
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@ Faeyice It think it'S a bit too chaotic espechialy at the right
Now that I look at it, there are a bunch of things in addition to that problem that I need to fix. ;___;

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Again, C&C would be nice. 8D;;;
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Old 2009-06-04, 01:04   Link #47
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Old 2009-06-04, 07:14   Link #48
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Other draft .. :3



CnC ??
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Old 2009-06-04, 08:12   Link #49
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I finally knew how to reduce the filesize
lol I forgot that slicing cuts filesize haha
v3 AS safe:


C&C?
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Old 2009-06-04, 10:17   Link #50
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Ok here's my first draft, I did two; 1) just total monochrome bg 2) added a bit of my highlight color which is her eyes to the bg.

C&C on how the sig looks and which bg fits better please

1)


2)
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Old 2009-06-04, 10:37   Link #51
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Finaly, my first Hajime no Ippo signature completed. Go! Takamura!

C&C appreciated

@ White Manju Bun

I prefer .V2 The character's more visible with this kind of background.

@ Frailty

Hm, I'd be good if you left the character black and white and concentrated on coloring his hair only, or maybe eyes?

@ Katocchi

It's nice, although I'm not a great fan of that kind of bordering
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Old 2009-06-04, 10:41   Link #52
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I mostly reworked on the backgroud this time C&C would be welcome.
The basic design is very good. However the background really needs something else than text. I seriously suggest that you try some brushes out. Deviantart has a lot of them to choose from.

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Again, C&C would be nice. 8D;;;
Love the style. Design doesn't really work though. A bit lacking in balance, left side quite blurred and right razor sharp. Draws focal point towards the right side which is probably not the intention.

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Passes. I can't find the reason why it wouldn't.

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Other draft .. :3



CnC ??
Coloring is very nice, however liked your previous better (even though I rejected it). The background is much better in your first. Try the coloring of this second one with your first and I think it'll be really really good.

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I finally knew how to reduce the filesize
lol I forgot that slicing cuts filesize haha
v3 AS safe:


C&C?
Blending of the render at the bottom is a bit harsh and I'd use the highlight color only for the hair.

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Ok here's my first draft, I did two; 1) just total monochrome bg 2) added a bit of my highlight color which is her eyes to the bg.

C&C on how the sig looks and which bg fits better please

1)


2)
Sneaky, sneaky... Thought I wouldn't notice?
I'll have to reject both. Sorry. Orange skin tone and red eyes with the rest being black and white. Out of those two if you fix the skin tone, V2 definitely.
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Old 2009-06-04, 11:00   Link #53
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Super, duper rough first draft, posted solely to ask if it qualifies.

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Sneaky, sneaky... Thought I wouldn't notice?
I'll have to reject both. Sorry. Orange skin tone and red eyes with the rest being black and white. Out of those two if you fix the skin tone, V2 definitely.
Hold on...why the heck does it not pass? Looks pretty "mono-toned" to me...and there was a problem with even a bit of orange hue? So how come not even V1 passed?
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Old 2009-06-04, 11:16   Link #55
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this was my best I can do. only the hair and the eyes have color I think
v4:


any better?
oh yeah, the reason why I did that at the bottom is cause the render is cut, so I had to hide it so it won't look obvious
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Hold on...why the heck does it not pass? Looks pretty "mono-toned" to me...and there was a problem with even a bit of orange hue? So how come not even V1 passed?
Background isn't a problem. Gin-sama's face and hands are. They have a orange hue, eyes are fairly pure red hue and the rest of the sig is pure gray scale.
Only one color outside of the general hue scale is allowed.
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Oh .. I forgot that I made this too .. Draft 3 .. lol ..


allowed ??

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Background isn't a problem. Gin-sama's face and hands are. They have a orange hue, eyes are fairly pure red hue and the rest of the sig is pure gray scale.
Only one color outside of the general hue scale is allowed.
Looks to me like extreme pickiness here but you're the boss
*Makes note not to have more than 1 colour*
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Old 2009-06-04, 12:12   Link #59
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Sneaky, sneaky... Thought I wouldn't notice?
I'll have to reject both. Sorry. Orange skin tone and red eyes with the rest being black and white. Out of those two if you fix the skin tone, V2 definitely.
Actually I wasnt trying to be sneaky, I honestly didnt notice that her face and hands were different Scouts honor (though I was never one). Makes sense since I didnt totally desat the orginal pic, I thought it looked more white but now that you pointed it out I do see definite color. Sorry escimo! Ill fix it! Glad to hear that v2 will be okay when I fix it.

Edit: Ok orginal layer is totally desaturated, does this pass??
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Old 2009-06-04, 13:04   Link #60
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Oh .. I forgot that I made this too .. Draft 3 .. lol ..


allowed ??

Draft 2 for comparison
Yup both are OK.

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Looks to me like extreme pickiness here but you're the boss
*Makes note not to have more than 1 colour*
It's not that I get some kicks of being an asshole about it, but with this kind of technical theme allowing entries that don't follow the rules down to the teeth kind of defies the point. You can create contrast in any graphics either with color or luminosity, the point here is that you can only use luminosity which does post its own challenges. And I think there's quite a lot of room to maneuver as it is. Theme could just as well have been just black and white.

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Edit: Ok orginal layer is totally desaturated, does this pass??
Now it's OK. (I admit I didn't notice it at first, the hands were actually which eventually caught my attention.)
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