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Old 2010-01-09, 00:09   Link #41
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@Rika: oooo yeah the without the white looks better. ^^ great job :'D
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Old 2010-01-09, 01:18   Link #42
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Old 2010-01-09, 03:11   Link #43
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ayu-smepai the text over the renders is bugging me
xxBANGitsaly as said before the renders seem defformed to me
Furude Rika it look better without it
Cyz good looking, I just have a little hesitatioin about the white areas around the render.

I reworked my first try: C&C would be welcome.





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Old 2010-01-09, 03:26   Link #44
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Thanks, ch3i anh ganbaru ^^

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Old 2010-01-09, 04:55   Link #45
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Cant think of anything else that needs doing so this is my final entry

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Old 2010-01-09, 12:57   Link #46
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Second Draft :3 I like this one much better^^. I need help choosing >.< Oh, and I hope GIF's are allowed :') (of course abiding the size rule).

Ver. 1,2


The efects is not bad, having all the lights glowing at the same time makes it a bit unrealistic though, so, I would go with V2

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Heres V3.

The font is a LOT better, I still think that those white line below the render look a bit out of place, just think about this, if the lights are glowing, the light source should be coming from below, but in the render, the light comes from above, you can still fix that by working a filter/lighting efect on the render, just have in concideration that the glow should be coming from the moon.

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Looking great ayu-chan. Like the idea of the transparency. I can't think of anything that needs to be changed to be honest

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This is V3;



Spoiler for V2:


Any thoughts?
I like the colors better on V3, can't think in anything else it needs.

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Im going to change my entry

The smudge efect is really good, not sure about that border tough.

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So no glow then.

Version 4!

No text is okay, place a text here would be a bit hard.

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V2:



got it jussssst under the limit
ready for a regular c&c now (:
Is it me or does the Harui render looks quite squished? Try to keep proportion when resizing it.

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My take on the theme.

I like how does it looks, the render looks a bit pixelated (specially in her face) but it still looks like a great sig.

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ayu-smepai the text over the renders is bugging me
xxBANGitsaly as said before the renders seem defformed to me
Furude Rika it look better without it
Cyz good looking, I just have a little hesitatioin about the white areas around the render.

I reworked my first try: C&C would be welcome.





previous version:


New version is okay, just watch out for a couple of white lines that are visible in the transparent part.
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Old 2010-01-09, 13:51   Link #47
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Ok, here's V4. Pending on if there isn't any drastic feedback it might possibly be my Final Entry;



Spoiler for V3:
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Old 2010-01-09, 19:05   Link #48
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Old 2010-01-09, 19:21   Link #49
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@JR: Looks great! The left part of the wavy thing in the background looks too sharp compared to the rest of the background. Other than that I think it's good to go. :') Love how you did your name btw :'D

@Manju: BLUE! <3 <3 I like the glowy effects around her, but the spots and splatters behind her are too close too eachother(looks like pepper and salt xD). Another thing would be adding some depth into the background. I love the idea though. :'D
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Old 2010-01-09, 20:08   Link #50
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JR - too dark on the sides. Needs a bit of lighting.

WMB - Great! Just against those dark spots on the renders left side.
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Old 2010-01-09, 20:10   Link #51
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1st draft:

yeah, I know the left side is kinda empty
I'll fix that later XD

other than that, C&C??
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Old 2010-01-09, 20:28   Link #52
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Frailty - the blue light from the below is kind of out of place.

Heres V4:

C&C please.
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Old 2010-01-09, 21:34   Link #53
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V3

*blinks* :3 I thought the fireflies took away too much of the attention I wanted on the eyes, but now it kinda looks like a hodge podge of blinking >.< i dunno xD. C&C appreciated!

@Frail: The nice soft glow is nice. ^^ Feels warm and fluffy. :3 I'd love to see what you'd put for the empty space. :'D And I kinda like the blue down there, kinda gives it contrast.

@Kat: Also loving the soft glowyness. :3 Not rly sure what else to do with it. Lots of moon glowing going around. xD
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Old 2010-01-09, 22:09   Link #54
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Here goes my submission for this month's SOTM.



LOL, the file is 358 bytes over the 50,000-byte limit. D:

EDIT: I got it 20% smaller in dimensions. Fixed my file size problem.



Please C&C. :3
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Old 2010-01-09, 22:58   Link #55
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@Marcus: It looks nice, clean, and simple. :') The problem is the render. it's too blurred out compared to the rest of the sig. I bet it was already like that, but you should play around with some filters to make it sharper. :'D Great job and blue <3.
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Old 2010-01-09, 23:20   Link #56
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Marcus - Just like what ch3i said, the render is blurry
Ch3i - I would prefer it without the blinking eyes. O_O, it gets my attention
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Old 2010-01-09, 23:35   Link #57
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V3
attention I wanted on the eyes
@Kat: I want attention on the eyes. ^^
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Old 2010-01-10, 02:37   Link #58
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JRendell: I prefer the color of V3 but I would keep the way you writed your name on the V4.
White Manjun Bun: I would only rework the spot on the background.
Frailty: the blue light seem to be onlu on the render, I would add some on the background
Marcus H. the umbrella seem to blend too much on the background, otherwise it's good .
Ch3j You may want to draw attenetion to them, but the blinking eyes are too fast.

Now, my 3th version, I reworked my slice and some of the semi-transparency, C&C would be welcome.




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Old 2010-01-10, 04:04   Link #59
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@Gan: Maybe it's just my computer, but the whole animation is pretty slow. xD
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Old 2010-01-10, 04:14   Link #60
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Thanks for the comments, at least I know I'm not the only one to notice the umbrella blending into the background. xD I'll work on to it ASAP.

EDIT: Here's V3. I fixed the umbrella's edges and sharpened everything except the clouds.
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