2014-09-27, 08:29 | Link #21 |
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So there are many girls in love with him but he doesnt do anything to them because he`s loyal to the childhood friend? Please dont tell me that the MC is like Ichika from IS? Btw,is the childhood friend even in love with him?
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2014-09-27, 10:08 | Link #26 | |
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They're separated for so long but love each other dearly |
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2014-09-27, 10:18 | Link #27 |
Shi(n)mai
Join Date: Aug 2009
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heeh~ there's thread of this... sadly my incompetency is enough to produce only inadequate works~
Rather than indecisive, Haruto is the same as Hajime from Arifureta, a flag breaker. Spoiler:
@nineC Spoiler:
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2014-09-27, 10:49 | Link #31 | |
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Great, an OP MC right near the start. Don't get me wrong, though, I definitely am interested in the premise, but isn't it getting kinda repetitive?
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Side note: Anyone know of a series where the MC is a Badass Normal instead of OP or super weak with conditions to be OP?
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2014-09-27, 14:06 | Link #32 | |
the show must go on
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call me a cynic, but i think the main hero is too clingy of a man. |
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2014-09-27, 16:11 | Link #33 |
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A male version of a mary-sue. An idealized perfect character who is pure wish fulfillment by being handsome/cool/good at everything. Although its usually called a Gary Stu.
Lio/Rio wasn't a stalker, but he is definitely obsessed. He learned martial arts to protect her, cooking to spend time with her, and spent years with all his free time being spent on finding her when she went missing. It's clearly written to come across as devoted, but he literally didn't seem to have any hobbies of his own. His entire character was based on being the superman to the childhood friend, which can be kind of awkward to the reader. Last edited by bludvein; 2014-09-27 at 17:23. |
2014-09-27, 16:50 | Link #34 |
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yeah, the shogun is kind of rival with his father[the shogun is battle maniac and only Lio father can fight on par with him]
this bring us to another prediction Spoiler for prediction:
-yeah, Lio mother is a daughter of the king[his grand mother[from mother side] is an exact copy of his mother[she look very young despite her age]. -his grandfather[king]and grand mother[queen] give their blessing to Lio father and mother relationship |
2014-10-04, 15:29 | Link #36 |
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Time to revive this thread
I don't understand a few things from that synopsis... When he was riding that bus, something happened? What happened o.O Did he die? It's said that he woke up as a 7 year old boy called Rio/Lio, so he reincarnated into 7 year old, not like Ruedus who was reincarnated into literally into a birth? Did he reincarnate into the same world!?!?!?!? Is that childhood friend of his really his sister/half-sister o.O Do people know that Rio/Lio is Haruto o.O And i've got so many more question...
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2014-10-04, 17:28 | Link #37 | |
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2014-10-04, 22:57 | Link #38 |
The Shrouded Lonebrave
Join Date: Sep 2012
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Glad to see someone care about this beside me.... Make me want to cry the tears of happiness T.T. ANyway for your last question serbian, Rio had told his loli teacher Celia, childhood friend Miharu, fox girl Latifa, half sister Sendo Aki and her little borther Sendo Masato the fact he is a reincarnated person from Earth but he didn't tell them deirectly about the fact he IS Haruto ! (Only Latifa is able to figure out because back in the Earth she kind of loves him and follows him in the same bus everyday which ironically dragged her to death along with him..... There is also his contracted spirit girl Aiscia who seems to have know everything single thing about his part due to her sleeping inside of him since he was young.....)
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2014-10-05, 02:49 | Link #39 | |
Shi(n)mai
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Arifureta no Sekai, Yuragi no Senjou
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poor little girl is happy now T^T |
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2014-10-05, 06:09 | Link #40 | |
The Shrouded Lonebrave
Join Date: Sep 2012
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Well good thing is she got rescued by Rio in the end...... |
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beta mc, cunning mc, harem, reincarnation, shoujo, smart male lead, tragic past, webnovel |
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