Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Kagerou

lol stupid taimu.

Note: Syn Virage is property Keroko-kun of Outer Cadia

Spoiler for Valentine's Day:

Cranagan City, Midchilda - February 14th, MC0082, late afternoon

"This is too embarrassing,"
"Oh, come on, it'll be fun!"
"Mou... why do you always convince me to do these things?"
"Oh come on, it's a day about you, V."

Vivio Takamachi flushed and looked away. "I-it's not about me, Syn..."

The day was called Sankt Kaiser Day, a holiday celebrated on Midchilda that served as an analogy to Earth's Valentine's Day. Though the myths and legends surrounding it were different, the concept remained the same: to give someone you love something special. To Vivio, who had never even had a boy look at her in a way that suggested attraction, coupled with the focus on her - that is, the Sankt Kaiser - caused her to simply despise this day.

Her best friend and companion, Syn Virage, decided to change that. Thus, the two were on a date. Not a "real" date, per se, but more of a girl's night out. Though if you listened to Syn's offhand comments as they got off the bus, it was a date date. "For real," even.

"Sure it is!" Syn smiled and punched her friend lightly in the arm. "Now come on, cheer up! There's this place I wanna take you!"

"Where is it?" Vivio asked, sounding completely unenthused.

"Oh, it's mega-cool!" Syn exclaimed, smiling brightly at the blonde. "You'll love it!"

"Somehow, I doubt that,"
"Oh, just come on!" Taking Vivio by the hand, Syn took off, running as if on fire. Vivio had no choice but to follow, Syn's grip too strong and possibly, just maybe, that she wanted to see what this was that Syn was so excited for.

Their adventure began this way.

Together, the two girls ran, barely holding on to their satchels as they weaved in and out of pedestrian movement. As if life itself was trying to impede them, everyone they encountered was going the opposite direction of them, and none of them bothered to move. As the tall blue-haired girl pulled Vivio through the crowd, she had to force people out of the way. None of her usual aggressiveness was there though; instead, she was laughing and smiling as she pulled the her friend along, the very image of a happy girl who had a good life.

In essence, the total opposite of Vivio. In practice, something else.

"I don't like this!" Vivio shouted as she was pulled along, nearly losing her grip on Syn and, oddly, not wanting to lose that grip. She tightened her hand on Syn's as they ran, finding her own two feet catching up to Syn's slowly.

"You will, I swear!" Syn said to her as the two burst out of pedestrians, onto the crosswalk. The same crosswalk with was currently not accepting pedestrians, and the same one that a car was about to pass, bearing down on the two. The car slammed on its brakes, but it was too little.

All Syn could think of to say was, "Oh shi-" as she stared wide-eyed at the car before slamming her eyes shut. An impact never came though, only the feeling of going up, and her arm being pulled up as well. When Syn opened her eyes, she found herself hanging a few dozen meters from the ground. Looking up, she saw that Vivio had grabbed Syn's hand with both of hers and pulled them straight up, leaping into the sky as easily as her mothers.

"..." Syn was actually quite amazed. She didn't think Vivio could react that quickly. "Vivio..."
"You're going to get us killed," The blonde replied, her face twisted in annoyance and relief. Syn just smiled up at her, the tension gone suddenly. "What?"

"...I can see up your skirt, and I see aoi no pantsu," Syn said, grinning.
Vivio dropped Syn. The blue-haired girl caught herself and touched down gently as Vivio began to fly off, paused, then landed as well.

"...sorry," Vivio muttered, looking away.
"Hey, it's okay," Syn took Vivio's hand again. "I shouldn't have said that. I know you're in a bad mood,"
"I just... really, really, hate this day."
"I know," Syn replied. "But I'm going to make you like it, at least for one night, okay?"
"I don't know what you could possibly do," Vivio said, her eyes still averted.
"I'll show you,"

Syn led Vivio down the sidewalks of Midchilda silently, hand in hand, on a mission of the most important sort, at least to her. She ignored the looks - well, the mean ones, anyway - that the two received, while Vivio ignored everything but her own footsteps altogether, trying to forget that she had just let go. If she couldn't fly...

Syn had already forgotten about it. She worried instead on her directions. The city was big, and the two had gotten as close as Syn wanted to from her destination. The idea was to get where she wanted to go, just in time for the big event. Well, possibly the big event. But this was the year. This was the day. This was their adventure, and she wanted to share everything about her half of it.

As Vivio spaced out, Syn led her to a place that was sacred; a Saint Church-run park that served as one of many Sankt Kaiser monuments. This one was special, in that only members of the church could attend, and so as the two stepped on the hallowed ground, everything was suddenly quiet; this place was rarely populated this time of day. Syn continued to lead Vivio to a place, a special place, and one that she had secured earlier. It was a lake, in the center of the park, and the place was a certain spot, secluded from everyone and everything, except the moons, the sky, the stars...

"Hey, V," Syn began as she led them to the area. Sure enough, no one was around. "Can I ask you something?"

"What?" Vivio looked up at Syn, seemingly unaware that they were somewhere else.
"If we had never met, where would you be right now?"

"..." Vivio scrunched the bridge of her nose and thought. Syn leaned up against the railing and watched the lake, staring at her watch occasionally. "I would... I don't know. I don't like to think about it. Without you... I guess I'd be either dead or... worse off."

"You think so?" Syn asked, not looking at her. "Come stand next to me,"
Vivio did as Syn suggested, assuming a similar stance on the railing. "Why do you ask, Syn?"

"Because... I don't think I'd be dead... but I can't..." Syn paused, unsure. "I don't think I'd be happy. V, I can't really imagine a world without you." She smiled at her friend. "I like life the way it is, I think, because you're here to do it with me."

"...really?" Vivio's eyes wandered up to Syn's own. "You... like life because of me?"
"Of course!" Syn answered, confident. "V, I... I'm happy you're around. Really." That was lame. "I can't really express it."

"..." Vivio went silent as she stared out over the lake. "Syn, really... without you, I don't think I'd be alive... you keep me going. I mean, some of my family does, too... but..." she paused. "I couldn't do it without you. Living, breathing, if you weren't here... I couldn't do it. No one would be there to help me back up when I fall past the point where I can get up on my own." she looked down at the lake. "Syn... I think..." she shook her head. "No, that's silly."

Syn simply chuckled and looked out over the lake. As the sun disappeared under the horizon, the moons' light reflected into the lake. As if alive, small motes of magic energy began to flow up from the lake. Vivio's eyes widened at the spectacle, while Syn's simply narrowed slightly, not out of confusion, but because she was smiling.

"W... wow..."
"This place, is infused with magic." Syn told Vivio. "They say here is where the Sankt Kaiser declared that Belka's heart would be open to all." As Vivio's eyes stared at what could only be described as stardust, Syn's hand moved atop of Vivio's, while her other reached for her eyepath. Slowly pulling it off, she sat it in her satchel. With both eyes opened, she took a deep breath, and looked at Vivio.

"Hey, V..." She began. "I need to tell you something..."
"...me, too." Vivio nodded. Without a word, she lifted both hands and put them on Syn's shoulders, turning her around and facing the taller girl. Closing her eyes and leaning up on her tip-toes, Vivio pulled Syn into a neck hug and pressed their lips together. Syn's eyes widened, amazed, but not confused, or unhappy. Syn leaned back into the kiss and put her arms around Vivio, holding the two of them tightly together.

When the two parted lips, a single tear made its way down Vivio's cheek. Gently, Syn wiped it away, and embraced Vivio tightly.

The two were silent, the rest of the night. No words needed to be said because it had all been said with a single action.

I love you.

No matter how many times I read it, its still adorable. <3

Like I said, Vivio's 'Fate'. WAFF included.

Once again I created a character that is used more by other authors then me.

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Guys.....you're not supposed to scare the FF-ers... It'll give them the wrong impression about Outer Cadia ()

And.....could anyone explain this to me?

?

Long story short: Kha's girl managed to track him here.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Once again I created a character that is used more by other authors then me.

Is it me or is that your trademark Keroko-kun?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Long story short: Kha's girl managed to track him here.

Kha's....girl...

0_0!

I demand details! ()

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Is it me or is that your trademark Keroko-kun?



Kha's....girl...

0_0!

I demand details! ()

Holy hell, Kha has a girlfriend!?

To make this on topic:

Nanoha: Oh my GOD, Kha has a girlfriend?
Fate: LIES!

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Holy hell, Kha has a girlfriend!?

To make this on topic:

Nanoha: Oh my GOD, Kha has a girlfriend?
Fate: LIES!

But wasn't Kha's girlfriend Fate?

*runs*

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Holy hell, Kha has a girlfriend!?

I find it hard to believe too...

Originally Posted by Satashi

To make this on topic:

Nanoha: Oh my GOD, Kha has a girlfriend?
Fate: LIES!

LOL!

Good one Sata-chan

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

But wasn't Kha's girlfriend Fate?

*runs*

Precisely why I find it difficult to believe he has another girlfriend

.....



Or perhaps Kha believes in....POLYGAMY?!?! ()

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Is it me or is that your trademark Keroko-kun?

It seems so. I wonder if I can make her as loved in the fanfiction thread as well.

Gotta start writing first though.

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Kha's....girl...

0_0!

I demand details! ()

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

But wasn't Kha's girlfriend Fate?

*runs*

We've often reffered to her as 'Kha's real life Fate' so, yeah.

[Satashi]

SbtB update
1.4k words (to be honest I just started writing past the teaser today >.<)

small teaser:

Bending over, Fate moved her computer chair out of the way and pulled out her empty keyboard drawer. 'That's odd, where is it?' Getting on her hands and knees, she peeked under her desk and moved her hand under the covered sides. 'I've never taken it out of my room...' Moving to her bed she checked under the pillows and around the sides, even peeling her water filled mattress away to see if it fell down there after a long night. 'Oh my goodness, where is it!?'

*halo* we all know what she keeps on her keyboard drawer....

[Kirika-chan]

Originally Posted by Satashi

SbtB update
1.4k words (to be honest I just started writing past the teaser today >.<)

small teaser:

Bending over, Fate moved her computer chair out of the way and pulled out her empty keyboard drawer. 'That's odd, where is it?' Getting on her hands and knees, she peeked under her desk and moved her hand under the covered sides. 'I've never taken it out of my room...' Moving to her bed she checked under the pillows and around the sides, even peeling her water filled mattress away to see if it fell down there after a long night. 'Oh my goodness, where is it!?'

*halo* we all know what she keeps on her keyboard drawer....

I want to read the chapter XIII ... Y.Y (it'll be posted before monday no? Or monday?) XD I hope is that

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Keroko

It seems so. I wonder if I can make her as loved in the fanfiction thread as well.

Gotta start writing first though.

Then start writing As for me (since I'm still technically an Outer Cadian) I'm sure I'll love her I like her already, ha ha ^^.

Originally Posted by Keroko

What?

Originally Posted by Keroko

We've often reffered to her as 'Kha's real life Fate' so, yeah.

Ohoh... so that's why..... *nods head*

Originally Posted by Satashi

SbtB update
1.4k words (to be honest I just started writing past the teaser today >.<)

small teaser:

Bending over, Fate moved her computer chair out of the way and pulled out her empty keyboard drawer. 'That's odd, where is it?' Getting on her hands and knees, she peeked under her desk and moved her hand under the covered sides. 'I've never taken it out of my room...' Moving to her bed she checked under the pillows and around the sides, even peeling her water filled mattress away to see if it fell down there after a long night. 'Oh my goodness, where is it!?'

*halo* we all know what she keeps on her keyboard drawer....

I have a small idea of what happened. I'd share but if I'm right I'd ruin a very amusing scene

@Kha: Congratulations ^^

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Satashi

SbtB update
1.4k words (to be honest I just started writing past the teaser today >.<)

small teaser:

Bending over, Fate moved her computer chair out of the way and pulled out her empty keyboard drawer. 'That's odd, where is it?' Getting on her hands and knees, she peeked under her desk and moved her hand under the covered sides. 'I've never taken it out of my room...' Moving to her bed she checked under the pillows and around the sides, even peeling her water filled mattress away to see if it fell down there after a long night. 'Oh my goodness, where is it!?'

*halo* we all know what she keeps on her keyboard drawer....

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

I have a small idea of what happened. I'd share but if I'm right I'd ruin a very amusing scene

I can only think of one thing that could happen, and it coming to reality will probably make me break something while falling on the ground laughing.

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

SbtB update
1.4k words (to be honest I just started writing past the teaser today >.<)

small teaser:

Bending over, Fate moved her computer chair out of the way and pulled out her empty keyboard drawer. 'That's odd, where is it?' Getting on her hands and knees, she peeked under her desk and moved her hand under the covered sides. 'I've never taken it out of my room...' Moving to her bed she checked under the pillows and around the sides, even peeling her water filled mattress away to see if it fell down there after a long night. 'Oh my goodness, where is it!?'

*halo* we all know what she keeps on her keyboard drawer....

I have feeling that someone other (maybe Nanoha) has it.... I only hope we will find out soon.

@Thread - OCand related stuff - I'm lost again about what is going on except Kagerou's words that he/she (I'm not enought sobber to find solution) will post something related to MSLN Alpha.

[Satashi]

I did it again *sighs* I wrote 4.5k words about random things and haven't even BEGAN to dive into what I wanted to happen this chapter..... I'll see what I can come up with.

Edit: 5.5k words, kind of moving along...

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Stop that Kha-chama

Mental slip out of sheer reverence.

Originally Posted by Kagerou

I love these two, it's like an anime in progress.

So I heard...

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Smith: "What is Outer Cadia?"
Wesson: "It's the home of PURE HOTBLOODED SPIRIT!
Franz: "It is the place of one's MAGMA OF THE HEART, THEIR BURNING IGNITION!

Asagi: "The home of Madoushi Sentai, Belkaranger!
Emili: "The birthplace of Super Sentai, Lancenger!!"
Ryo: "Where Kamen Rider exists!!!"

Erick: "Th' home o' magic gunslingers!"
Kha: "Of holy warriors!"
Keroko: "Of dogfighting aces!"
Aurion: "Of legendary heroes!"

All: "THIS! IS! OUTER CADIA!!!!!!!!!!"

"ORE TACHI WO, DARE DA TO OMOTTE YAGARU?!"

Last time I tried that, Satashi went and burrowed into a hole...

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Guys.....you're not supposed to scare the FF-ers... It'll give them the wrong impression about Outer Cadia ()

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

And.....could anyone explain this to me?

...
...

?

Well erm eeeeeer...

Originally Posted by Keroko

Long story short: Kha's girl managed to track him here.

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Kha's....girl...

0_0!

I demand details! ()

Ano...

Originally Posted by Satashi

Holy hell, Kha has a girlfriend!?

To make this on topic:

Nanoha: Oh my GOD, Kha has a girlfriend?
Fate: LIES!

Fate, matte!

*dodges Riot Zamber*

I can explain!

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

But wasn't Kha's girlfriend Fate?

*runs*

Anita: Khaaa~~~

Kha: Mommy.

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Precisely why I find it difficult to believe he has another girlfriend

.....



Or perhaps Kha believes in....POLYGAMY?!?! ()

He always has remember? I said before Kha's character model falls into the Harem Hero archetype.

*swamped by dark aura*

Originally Posted by Keroko

We've often reffered to her as 'Kha's real life Fate' so, yeah.

Looks like I have to quote Chaos here:

[AsakuraYoh]

"Well... Yeah, like I said, she's not my girlfriend she's my--"

[/AsakuraYoh]

[Anna]

"...I'm his fiancee."

[/Anna]

*RUNS HOLY DAMNED FAST*

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Ohoh... so that's why..... *nods head*

~~~~~~

@Kha: Congratulations ^^

This is reminding me of the time my guild was having its AGM in Ironforge when a lowbie NE hunter dropped by and asked me to stop /dancing.

No prizes for guessing who did that.

[Reiji Tabibito]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Or perhaps Kha believes in....POLYGAMY?!?! ()

Well, you know...

Originally Posted by Satashi

SbtB update
1.4k words (to be honest I just started writing past the teaser today >.<)

small teaser:

Bending over, Fate moved her computer chair out of the way and pulled out her empty keyboard drawer. 'That's odd, where is it?' Getting on her hands and knees, she peeked under her desk and moved her hand under the covered sides. 'I've never taken it out of my room...' Moving to her bed she checked under the pillows and around the sides, even peeling her water filled mattress away to see if it fell down there after a long night. 'Oh my goodness, where is it!?'

*halo* we all know what she keeps on her keyboard drawer....

Oh Khem...I wonder who took it...Nanoha perhaps?

Originally Posted by Kha

Well erm eeeeeer...

I can explain!

PLEASE DO...

Originally Posted by Kha

Anita: Khaaa~~~

Kha: Mommy.

Looks like I have to quote Chaos here:

[AsakuraYoh]

"Well... Yeah, like I said, she's not my girlfriend she's my--"

[/AsakuraYoh]

[Anna]

"...I'm his fiancee."

[/Anna]

*RUNS HOLY DAMNED FAST*

Kha in trouble at long last...

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Kha

So I heard...

From my new-to-this-matter POV, it really is like an anime in progress

Originally Posted by Kha

Last time I tried that, Satashi went and burrowed into a hole...

Wrong

The FF-ers (all of them, lol) were scared with the amount of Crack that your post contained They're not used to things like Crack and Bluecheesium

Ah, I miss the good old days when Outer Cadia was young *sigh* ()

Originally Posted by Kha

I think it was Liingo that told you "You're not supposed to scare them away" or something of the sort.

Originally Posted by Kha

Well erm eeeeeer...

I'm all ears

Originally Posted by Kha

Ano...

Yes? ...

Originally Posted by Kha

Fate, matte!

*dodges Riot Zamber*

I can explain!

Too late

Originally Posted by Kha

Anita: Khaaa~~~

Kha: Mommy.

Originally Posted by Kha

He always has remember? I said before Kha's character model falls into the Harem Hero archetype.

*swamped by dark aura*

Eh, I've forgotten quite a bit. It has been more-or-less half a year since I left...

Originally Posted by Kha

Looks like I have to quote Chaos here:

[AsakuraYoh]

"Well... Yeah, like I said, she's not my girlfriend she's my--"

[/AsakuraYoh]

[Anna]

"...I'm his fiancee."

[/Anna]

*RUNS HOLY DAMNED FAST*

So...you're quoting him eh?

No wonder things are going wrong for you *pats*

[Anita]

Originally Posted by Kha

Mental slip out of sheer reverence.

So I heard...

Last time I tried that, Satashi went and burrowed into a hole...



Well erm eeeeeer...



Ano...

Fate, matte!

*dodges Riot Zamber*

I can explain!

Anita: Khaaa~~~

Kha: Mommy.

He always has remember? I said before Kha's character model falls into the Harem Hero archetype.

*swamped by dark aura*



Looks like I have to quote Chaos here:

[AsakuraYoh]

"Well... Yeah, like I said, she's not my girlfriend she's my--"

[/AsakuraYoh]

[Anna]

"...I'm his fiancee."

[/Anna]

*RUNS HOLY DAMNED FAST*

This is reminding me of the time my guild was having its AGM in Ironforge when a lowbie NE hunter dropped by and asked me to stop /dancing.

No prizes for guessing who did that.

Anita: Excuse me, while I go settle this... -_-

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Anita

Anita: Excuse me, while I go settle this... -_-

Oh please do

Don't mind us, we'll just turn around and go away



Ken: Chief, is it really alright to just leave him alone with her?

Cass: Why not?

Ken: *Looks at Anita* She seems dangerous...*sweatdrops*

Cass: Maa, it'll be okay

*OC retires whistling innocently, completely ignoring the scene happening in the background*



EDIT:

AAAARGH!!!! Outer Cadia has invaded FF!!!

[ghazghkull]

Oi, oi, oi! *Pulls out a few hand cuffs*

Do I need to charge you Outer Cadians with 'Disturbing the peace'?!

[Satashi]

SbtB:
length:6.8k words without diary entries or card.

I'm not sure if I want to end this here or not... I really screwed up this chapter. It's 80% mindless fluff. I wanted it to be plot moving but I just couldn't do it for some reason. I may end it here and add diaries and stuff, but I may go on. I really want to get to the part where my other half drew her picture >.<

Going to bed for now, it's past 1 AM haha

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Oi, oi, oi! *Pulls out a few hand cuffs*

Do I need to charge you Outer Cadians with 'Disturbing the peace'?!

You won't be able to get us all