2012-09-05, 22:54 | Link #36423 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
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It's a grimdark but otherwise optimistic anime, Symphogear. It has all the element I like, which overall 100% fitting with the themes I intended for my fics... and then WHAM a certain character's backstory is revealed.
It's not even graphic, just narrated with implications, and yet I didn't survive the impact after freaking three days. Not that I'm traumatized, but I got headache trying to resist the temptation not to overdo the dark elements (which turned out corny because of my deadpan narrative)
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2012-09-06, 00:38 | Link #36428 |
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Nothing better than anti-hero deliver a subtle yet potent "you suck" speech I guess.
Spoiler for TLR Stratos Chapter 3 Part 3:
Why I have this feeling that as Charles, Charlotte is more of a recurring extra. :|
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2012-09-06, 01:48 | Link #36430 |
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No emphasis put on 'his' character, at all. 'He' is constantly overshadowed. Putting this 'he' was equal to people such as Kiyoka, Nohonhon, Risa or Mio.
The sad thing, if I try to think what to do with 'him' as of now, my finger stop writing altogether and I hit a virtual brickwall.
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2012-09-06, 03:14 | Link #36434 |
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That label went to Dunois twin, when they're at the worst condition though (and for the fun of it), just think of Charlotte in novel, but times two.
Len and Lun comes of as weird at first: they're fiercely competitive and sort of pragmatic, and different take on certain elements of sexuality. This is why at first they come of as creepy jerkass, especially to mostly polite Japanese. After cultural contact things went better either way, they began to respect each other finely.
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2012-09-06, 04:38 | Link #36437 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Nah, just talking about pages.
Oh yeah... is it creepy if the MOTW's from the IS crossover with kamen rider can't turn back? EDOT: Would it convey how powerful they are when they are described as walking stars? Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2012-09-06 at 04:50. |
2012-09-06, 05:11 | Link #36439 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Yeah, it's the creature. I've just decided to call the IS infused with cosmic energy as IS, though the badguy would refer to it as a nebula or crutch at times. Mostly because the purpose is to infuse the pilot with enough cosmic energy to force a permanent evolution.
The pilots may possibly be referred to as stars... and fully developed stars will probably explode or implode on death/defeat on a scale relatively smaller of blackhole or supernova. |
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