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Old 2016-10-16, 19:56   Link #58761
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Infinite Stratos Athena

The original has been lost forever I'm afraid.
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Old 2016-10-16, 20:00   Link #58762
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Well at least there's this one. To be honest it was your latest chapter that got me back into IS fanfic writing. will you be contining your story?
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Old 2016-10-16, 20:19   Link #58763
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If I have time yes

Recovering from quarterlife crisis might help with that
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Old 2016-10-16, 20:25   Link #58764
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I hope everything goes ok for you. Meanwhile I'm going to rewrite the first few chapters of my story before adding anything new.
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Old 2016-10-17, 06:12   Link #58765
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I feel like I made the same mistakes with Rong that I tried to correct using Brave. I want to rebeuild his character as more human but at the same time keep the whole former child terrorist angle with a self-induced obssession to avoid complete indoctrination.
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Old 2016-10-17, 06:39   Link #58766
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I don't remember too much about Rin's guardian. She was only in a phonecall with no physical description.

The OC can also believe in the positive if the protagonist is a grim anti-hero type. Again there is contrast but not exactly complete opposite. It could be that the hero is kind but straight-forward but his foil is just as kind but more careful and mindful of the things he does. Like if a violent solution or just giving things up is the best path.

I'm guessing he'll pick Houki.
The one who only appeared in the phone call is Clarissa, Laura's 2nd-in-command. Miss Yang Lili really appeared in person in Chapter 2 of Vol 6. She was in her late 20s, wears glasses, and looks quite strict, making Rin somewhat fear her.
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Old 2016-10-17, 06:51   Link #58767
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I can't imagine why I didn't add her to the elder harem then...
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Old 2016-10-17, 06:54   Link #58768
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Too little character to expand?

I mean at least we get appearance and personality of Natasha in one scene, easily.
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Old 2016-10-17, 06:56   Link #58769
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Nagisako and Chelsea had some decent character too. Also everyone's favprite deviant right after Tabane. Klarissa!
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Old 2016-10-17, 07:05   Link #58770
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Well I'm specifically referring to Rin's handler.
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Old 2016-10-17, 07:10   Link #58771
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I blame the fact the LN was so bad I practically skimmed the thing.

Apologies zero but what do you think of a reboot of Rong? Isit possible to humanize a former child terrorist that escaped indoctrination by self induced obsession?
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Old 2016-10-17, 07:23   Link #58772
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I'll need more context than that lol.

There's nothing impossible, it's a matter of difficulty making it believable.
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Old 2016-10-17, 07:38   Link #58773
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Well that's currently the major thing I want to keep about him. The whole obssession as his way of escape. I want him to be ruthless but capable of empathy. How should I say... showing no restraint for violence but also no retraint for kindness. But he's odd in his expression because his late childhood and onwards is built on violence and his own self-induced insanity. I wanted his escape to be math, warping his mind so he sees things in terms of numbers. How he weighs values. Other than his own safety he calculates his options by the number.
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Old 2016-10-17, 07:40   Link #58774
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That's a sign of sociopathy, but before you freak out, Soociopaths can be normal person with proper guidance.

All he need is someone who can translate moral into logic.
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Old 2016-10-17, 07:44   Link #58775
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I think he should be a kind of twitchy mess? Like he feels easily threatened? Btw, keeping the chinese background and being trained by the terrorists that killed his parents.
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Old 2016-10-17, 08:38   Link #58776
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Well I'm specifically referring to Rin's handler.
No worries mate, I've been working on expanding that character into a semi-OC in my story:
Spoiler for character bio:

Also a seperate entry for her personal IS:
Spoiler for IS info:

As for her appearance--imagine her as an adult version of the civilian identity of this particularly badass magical girl warrior:
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Old 2016-10-18, 07:01   Link #58777
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demino, are you going to write another Fire Emblem fic?
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Old 2016-10-18, 07:07   Link #58778
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Dunno. I have a story in mind but I have to play awakening first. It's pretty messed up.
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Old 2016-10-18, 10:14   Link #58779
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No offense but... dude, you have, like, 40+ stories on hold?

But then again, I myself am yet to write any. Woe is me.
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Old 2016-10-18, 10:16   Link #58780
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Aye. But only a few of them are really worth continuing. And a series of one-shots doesn't necessitate finishing.
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