Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Umm I can only see Yuunoro working out either in a crack fic or an angsty fic (because as Keroko mentioned, Chrono is married).. *thinks of possible scenarios* Yuuno could be angsting over a Nanoha rejection and Chrono could be.. well.. getting too stressed over work problems like all the high expectations and pressure is catching up to him..
they get in each other's throat but they find a common ground in their knowledge and experiences in the battlefield or behind the action as support to the team or in solving problems and strategizing where they both try to forget their heartaches and frustrations.. they then also find some sort of comfort with each other and begins spending a lot of time together..
they still butt heads but along the way a romance slowly develops between the two of them.. thereby creating more angst because: Chrono is married and is having an affair with a man who gets under his skin but who also is someone he can't get out of his head, and both he and Yuuno know they're both guys and the forbidden love is weirding them out.. but their developing feelings for each other is getting harder and harder to ignore..
*insert plot device like: a drunken night out to drown their sorrows that may end up in a smex scene they'll regret later on*.. and-- ok I'm weirding myself out so I'll just stop. LOL

Originally Posted by kasu1127

I immediately thought of angst. Chrono and Amy share a long-distance relationship, which is rather hard to maintain. Put the two of them in a serious argument the night before Chrono has to go out for another one of his many long-term missions, have him run into Yuuno (such as Yuuno bringing Chrono information for the latest mission), and go from there.

I can't really see the angsting/afair working myself, though that is mostly because I refuse to see it. After all, not only is Chrono married, but he also has two kids. Him leaving Amy means him abandoning his kids, which draws huge red flaring signs of Does Not Compute! with me.

Originally Posted by Kha

I feel like dying ><

Just rushed a 2000 critical appraisal last night, and I don't recall doing anything else, but I woke up at my computer with 2250 words of essay and 1000 words about how Kha met the Aces...

Now as I recover my strength, I'm left with the @_@ dilemma of going with my current OC project, or go with finishing this chapter of A's Destiny. And I swear before I finish that chapter another round of drunken writing will start me on a Nanoha/Cente Gravia shot.

Doshiyo?! Doshiyo?!

You know that I'll poke you for more Cente Gravia shots, right?

Originally Posted by Kha

I think it's because Yuuno computes as a Genderbent, and people mistake that for being gay.

Ah, that would explain why I don't see the gayness, I'm used to traps. (<-- has recently decided to continue watching Otome wa Boku ni koishiteru).

Originally Posted by Kha

And please, apart from jokes, keep non-trap Yaoi away from Nanoha; I have enough in the Gundam SEED and Code Geass threads tyvm.

Wuss.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*clears throat*

Spoiler for Yuunoro FTW:

Chrono sighed, paper work sucked. The only thing that sucked more then paper work was three piles of paper work the size of him. Being an admiral was going to be the death of him.

Chrono groaned, finishing up one paper only to start on another. It was endless. At least the pile wasn’t getting any bigger…

Plop! Nope that wasn’t true either.

“Hey! What’s with the papers?” Chrono shoved aside the pile to see the offending party. Whoever had dared give him more work was in for a nasty surprise.

“Sorry Chrono,” Yuuno looked sympathetic as he scratched his head and looked down at the ground. “But it just keeps getting delivered.”

“It’s your fault I have this work.”

Yuuno winced.

“After all if a certain librarian hadn’t used magic without authorization I wouldn’t have to fill out all this,” Chrono tried to look as pissed off as possible.

Yuuno rubbed the back of his head, “Well I couldn’t exactly let him rob the library.”

“Then said librarian destroyed a row of blocks to get a single book back. Said librarian seems to want to be the bane of my existence.”

Yuuno chuckled and leaned over the desk. “Sorry about that.”

Chrono leaned forward, tapping Yuuno’s chin with his index finger. “You are are not good for my health.”

Yuuno grinned. “Well I've got to say I-"

Chrono didn't let him finish.

There wasn't much talking after that.

*tilts head* So whats the Yuunoro, all I'm seeing is two.... good... friends?

*brain calculates how Chrono kept Yuuno quiet*

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for Shiny Yuunoro Crack:

Bounty Hunter!Yuuno: *embrace embrace* Why can't I quit you?
Sidekick!Chrono: D: Say what?

Chrono+Yuuno: *Love time*
Arf: *Walks in* ... wth.
Chrono: O.O It's not what you think!
Yuuno: Yeah I just had an itch and ... Chrono was scratching it.
Arf: With his-
Chrono: YES!
Arf: But why aren't you two wearing clothes
Yuuno: ಠ.ಠ um... well you see...
Chrono: It was a really bad itch.
Arf: Mm kay.

Nanoha: *Walks in* Ne Yuuno I need that book fo- WTF!
Chrono: Sh!t
Nanoha: *pouts* Why didn't you invite me?
Chrono+ Yuuno: *eye twitch*

Amy: Yuuno we need to talk.
Chrono: oh snap
Yuuno: *gulp*
Amy: We need to set up a schedule.
Yuuno: Huh?
Amy: I'm thinking I get every other weekend, Thursdays and Fridays
Yuuno: Ah I see *nod nod*
Chrono: What is this joint custody?

Please forgive me orz

Massive free for all harem?

Originally Posted by markesellus

Hehe this was good. Griffith and Tesla are cute. Vita is quite the evil schemer in this isn't she.

Normally Vita doesn't stand a chance, since Tesla is the brains of the Wolkenritter, but right now Tesla is showing way too many openings that Vita is all to happy to jump.

[Dr_Tom]

Finished up watching Mai Otome the other night...I must say it's probably the worst show I've ever enjoyed. Anyways, after finishing it I remembered what actually made me watch it(downloaded it a while ago just never watched it), what's going on with Dream Wing?

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Keroko

I can't really see the angsting/afair working myself, though that is mostly because I refuse to see it. After all, not only is Chrono married, but he also has two kids. Him leaving Amy means him abandoning his kids, which draws huge red flaring signs of Does Not Compute! with me.

I forgot about the kids...LOL Didn't even cross my mind. It's like I forgot he has kids. *mind was too busy thinking about Yaoi in Nanoha* heh now I'm really weirded out..

Ah, that would explain why I don't see the gayness, I'm used to traps. (<-- has recently decided to continue watching Otome wa Boku ni koishiteru).

Half of the time I was convinced that he wasn't a guy. It's like it doesn't even count. LOL Hrrghh too much yuri potential lost. *goes to watch I My Me Strawberry Eggs* "Trapssssss!!!!" I can't help it there isn't much yuri this season. ;_;

Normally Vita doesn't stand a chance, since Tesla is the brains of the Wolkenritter, but right now Tesla is showing way too many openings that Vita is all to happy to jump.

That's the power of love/crush!!.. Even Tesla isn't spared. Aww Tesla

edit:

Spoiler for pic from the image thread:

*My NanoFate senses are tingling* (but in truth my yuri goggles are just set impossibly high )
*daydreams about possible scenarios like weddings and stuff.. then looks at Fate's hand where there is a ring*
-squeals-
*but then sees Nanoha's hand that is devoid of any rings* ;_; damnit..
LOL

[Dr_Tom]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Spoiler for pic from the image thread:

*My NanoFate senses are tingling* (but in truth my yuri goggles are just set impossibly high )
*daydreams about possible scenarios like weddings and stuff.. then looks at Fate's hand where there is a ring*
-squeals-
*but then sees Nanoha's hand that is devoid of any rings* ;_; damnit..
LOL

there is a version of this picture where Nanoha has a ring as well...not sure which is the real version and which is shopped, but I have my guess's. Either way, it's not like Fate's ring is symbolizing she's married...it's on her middle finger, not her ring finger.


I found the one where they're both wearing rings but apparently freeimagehosting doesn't like cooperating with these forums.....

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Dr_Tom

there is a version of this picture where Nanoha has a ring as well...not sure which is the real version and which is shopped, but I have my guess's. Either way, it's not like Fate's ring is symbolizing she's married...it's on her middle finger, not her ring finger.


I found the one where they're both wearing rings but apparently freeimagehosting doesn't like cooperating with these forums.....

Haru made the ones where they both have rings :3 I can't find it currently ><

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Dr_Tom

there is a version of this picture where Nanoha has a ring as well...not sure which is the real version and which is shopped, but I have my guess's. Either way, it's not like Fate's ring is symbolizing she's married...it's on her middle finger, not her ring finger.

you're right.. ;_; *goes to a corner and proceeds to draw circles on the floor with her index finger while mumbling incoherent words*
on another note, where is Fate-chan's hand going?.. What is it doing?.. oO!! Maybe Nanoha's blushing because--*is bopped on the head* "Ecchi!!" Uguu~ @.@
Dang, I really need to watch anything yuri now to stop these thoughts.. (sadly there seem to be none..Mnemosyne is teasing the nerves out of me and Penguin Musume is just weird..and short..Candy Boy on the other hand--"twincest!!" @.@ But I like Candy Boy.. -cries-) I guess I'll just read fanfics for now.. *heads over to FF.net*

[Sam the Onion]

Hourglass of Summer sure was long and so I ended up with 20 pages of backlog

Well, it was worth it

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for Epic in training:

From The Shiny Sword (because I just need more stories going) comes a tale of epic proportions.

Spoiler for Trailer:

*snip*

Coming
Sometime after Phantom of the Lyrical

And so the actual canonverse was completely forgotten in the FF

Originally Posted by kasu1127

Finally decided to get myself an account after lurking around here for a month. I visit this place everyday for the past month to feed my hunger for Nanoha fics, so I thought... Maybe it's about time I came out and said hi?

So hi! *waves*

You can never have enough people here Late but still viable welcome

Originally Posted by Satashi

I think you need to spice it up......

movie theater preview voice: One town... one way.

Yuuno: *western accent*Get a'long thar little doggy

movie theater preview voice: Where others fail to tred

Chrono: *hiding behind a water barrel as bullets fly over him* No one said he was packing!

movie theater preview voice: Two unlikely heros join forces for the summer opening even that will leave you reeling.

Yuuno: These are my panties and I'm not giving them up!

Chrono:...

Yuuno:... Let me rephrase that.

movie theater preview voice: Double the excitement

Chrono: GET DOWN! *dives for cover outside a saloon and falls into a water trough for horses*

movie theater preview voice: Triple the shoot downs!

Yuuno: *tips hat up and smiles at Nanoha* What say you, pretty lady?

Nanoha: You're standing in horse manure.

Yuuno:...*looks down*

movie theater preview voice: More of the excitement

Chrono: GET DOWN AGAIN! *trips and falls face first at Yuuno's feet*

Yuuno:.... *looks up* so, a date?

movie theater preview voice: Coming soon, to a forum near you...

BOUNTY HUNTER YUUNO!

this movie not rated by the ESRB

Originally Posted by markesellus

I could just hear the movie theater preview voice in my head. That was awesome.

Spoiler for Try again after this:

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Let's do this 4chan style:

Old habits are hard to lose

Originally Posted by DaftEnigma

Coming out of lurking in hopes that Nanoha will be seen with bite marks and the Paladins would attack her since Fate sees Nanoha as a special person and then Fate would have to protect her. Or is it possible to have Nanoha turned?

I'm running out of different ways to say welcome But that doesn't mean you'd be unwanted in any ways

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for micro fic! choose your own characters!:

*snip*

Syn x Vivio

Originally Posted by illidan182

Hmm... Ok, well this my first time actualy throwing one of my Nanoha fics up, didn't turn out quite like I wanted but still suitable.

I gotta thank TSS, for readin' his Bountyhunter!Yuuno teaser gave me the kick in the butt to finish mine which has been collecting dust on the hardrive for a while haha xD

Spoiler for Outlaw! Fate:

*snap*

This is only prologue, and I have it on FF.net also lol

Yup. No canonverse or anything closeby anymore I have no complains. Each is very interesting

Originally Posted by Satashi

Lunch time~ but not enough votes so no update for now

Hayate/Fate........

Hmmm....

Nope, I can't see it. Dunno why, but that's just one I can't do. That and Fatenum, I just can't grasp it O.<

Which is weird 'cause I did Hayate/Yuuno out of the blue.

Spoiler for someone needed insulin? Better get your supply restocked 'cause this is insane fluffy waff that makes your teeth rot just reading it.:

*snip*

Ah... Hayate x Yuuno

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

I was going through my files and lo and behold I found an unreleased completed short and it has something like minor romance in it XD.

Spoiler for ErioxCaro: Gift giving is never easy:

*snip*

'Subaru smiled mischievously. “The younger the better.”'

What did you do to Subaru?!


Yes, I know I cut about 90% of the backlog but a new VN is waiting for me Friends with similar interests are a blessing

[Satashi]

New numbering system.
pt.1=Monday
pt.2 =Tuesday
pt.3 =Wednesday
ect.

a=first post of day
b=second post of day
ect.

This will help me keep track of my parts so I can find them easier.

Fate

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.5a (Fate):

She was late.

The thought came over my head mind again, looking at the clock. My hands were almost shaking, a feel of adrenaline coursing through me. My head was filled with doubts and a small fear that I couldn't place.

I was worried about her.

It started small at first, a weird feeling in the top of my spine. It grew quickly, though, and soon I was pacing. Was it my mark? That first night we met... I decided not to bite her but instead drew a symbol on her neck with my own blood... A mark, a warning to others, a tracer that allowed me to find her.

That was it!

"Erio, I'm going for a walk." I shouted to the boy I was taking care of. He waved over his shoulder, eyes focused on the at-home studies he was currently doing.

I left my loft quickly, running down the small hallway and to the elevator. I have only marked a few people in my life, but they never lasted long. It was more of a "I can't drink now so I'll find you later" and a one-time- only deal. To have Nanoha make me this nervous could only mean that she was currently having a small panic attack.

The doors opened and I ran through the lobby. The sidewalk hit my boots and I stopped holding back. My speed was something that I never took for granted. I was fast, very fast.

Jumping up, I landed on top of a building and leapt a few more times to start making a bee-line for the scent of myself placed on Nanoha. It was close...

I saw her. Back pressed against the wall, sitting down with wide eyes and gasping breath. She was scared, and I felt every panicked thump of her heart pulsate through me. My mark was in danger, my donor was threatened.

My girlfriend was in trouble.

I jumped down quickly, landing on a lower building and eyes going wide as a girl knelt in front of Nanoha, speaking to her. An oxygen mask was placed over my friend's mouth and white mist filled it.

Then the girl struck Nanoha hard in the stomach, making her inhale it.

The ground cracked as I landed, the alleyway illuminating as my eyes glowed yellow. Nanoha's body slumped forward slowly and I ignited my scythe.

Four females and a wolf turned to look at me as I exhaled slowly, fangs exposed and snarling.

"Kill her." The one who punched Nanoha said softly...

...And they lunged for me as I shot forward, ready to strike.

(You are locked in Fate's POV)

What's a cliffhanger?

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Satashi

New numbering system.
pt.1=Monday
pt.2 =Tuesday
pt.3 =Wednesday
ect.

a=first post of day
b=second post of day
ect.

This will help me keep track of my parts so I can find them easier.

Fate

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.5a (Fate):

She was late.

The thought came over my head mind again, looking at the clock. My hands were almost shaking, a feel of adrenaline coursing through me. My head was filled with doubts and a small fear that I couldn't place.

I was worried about her.

It started small at first, a weird feeling in the top of my spine. It grew quickly, though, and soon I was pacing. Was it my mark? That first night we met... I decided not to bite her but instead drew a symbol on her neck with my own blood... A mark, a warning to others, a tracer that allowed me to find her.

That was it!

"Erio, I'm going for a walk." I shouted to the boy I was taking care of. He waved over his shoulder, eyes focused on the at-home studies he was currently doing.

I left my loft quickly, running down the small hallway and to the elevator. I have only marked a few people in my life, but they never lasted long. It was more of a "I can't drink now so I'll find you later" and a one-time- only deal. To have Nanoha make me this nervous could only mean that she was currently having a small panic attack.

The doors opened and I ran through the lobby. The sidewalk hit my boots and I stopped holding back. My speed was something that I never took for granted. I was fast, very fast.

Jumping up, I landed on top of a building and leapt a few more times to start making a bee-line for the scent of myself placed on Nanoha. It was close...

I saw her. Back pressed against the wall, sitting down with wide eyes and gasping breath. She was scared, and I felt every panicked thump of her heart pulsate through me. My mark was in danger, my donor was threatened.

My girlfriend was in trouble.

I jumped down quickly, landing on a lower building and eyes going wide as a girl knelt in front of Nanoha, speaking to her. An oxygen mask was placed over my friend's mouth and white mist filled it.

Then the girl struck Nanoha hard in the stomach, making her inhale it.

The ground cracked as I landed, the alleyway illuminating as my eyes glowed yellow. Nanoha's body slumped forward slowly and I ignited my scythe.

Four females and a wolf turned to look at me as I exhaled slowly, fangs exposed and snarling.

"Kill her." The one who punched Nanoha said softly...

...And they lunged for me as I shot forward, ready to strike.

(You are locked in Fate's POV)

What's a cliffhanger?

Spoiler:

GAaahhhHH!!! CLIFFHANGERRRRR!!!!
-faints-
Oh my god this is so exciting!! oO;;

[iGreen]

*un-lurk mode* What a nice cliffhanger lol...anyway, just wanted to say that I love the way the story is progressing ^^ *lurk mode*

[Plain Crackers]

Originally Posted by Satashi

New numbering system.
pt.1=Monday
pt.2 =Tuesday
pt.3 =Wednesday
ect.

a=first post of day
b=second post of day
ect.

This will help me keep track of my parts so I can find them easier.

Fate

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.5a (Fate):

She was late.

The thought came over my head mind again, looking at the clock. My hands were almost shaking, a feel of adrenaline coursing through me. My head was filled with doubts and a small fear that I couldn't place.

I was worried about her.

It started small at first, a weird feeling in the top of my spine. It grew quickly, though, and soon I was pacing. Was it my mark? That first night we met... I decided not to bite her but instead drew a symbol on her neck with my own blood... A mark, a warning to others, a tracer that allowed me to find her.

That was it!

"Erio, I'm going for a walk." I shouted to the boy I was taking care of. He waved over his shoulder, eyes focused on the at-home studies he was currently doing.

I left my loft quickly, running down the small hallway and to the elevator. I have only marked a few people in my life, but they never lasted long. It was more of a "I can't drink now so I'll find you later" and a one-time- only deal. To have Nanoha make me this nervous could only mean that she was currently having a small panic attack.

The doors opened and I ran through the lobby. The sidewalk hit my boots and I stopped holding back. My speed was something that I never took for granted. I was fast, very fast.

Jumping up, I landed on top of a building and leapt a few more times to start making a bee-line for the scent of myself placed on Nanoha. It was close...

I saw her. Back pressed against the wall, sitting down with wide eyes and gasping breath. She was scared, and I felt every panicked thump of her heart pulsate through me. My mark was in danger, my donor was threatened.

My girlfriend was in trouble.

I jumped down quickly, landing on a lower building and eyes going wide as a girl knelt in front of Nanoha, speaking to her. An oxygen mask was placed over my friend's mouth and white mist filled it.

Then the girl struck Nanoha hard in the stomach, making her inhale it.

The ground cracked as I landed, the alleyway illuminating as my eyes glowed yellow. Nanoha's body slumped forward slowly and I ignited my scythe.

Four females and a wolf turned to look at me as I exhaled slowly, fangs exposed and snarling.

"Kill her." The one who punched Nanoha said softly...

...And they lunged for me as I shot forward, ready to strike.

(You are locked in Fate's POV)

What's a cliffhanger?

What a tease!! Now I can't sleep until I read partB. Oh God. Exciting!

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Satashi

New numbering system.
pt.1=Monday
pt.2 =Tuesday
pt.3 =Wednesday
ect.

a=first post of day
b=second post of day
ect.

This will help me keep track of my parts so I can find them easier.

Fate

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.5a (Fate):

She was late.

The thought came over my head mind again, looking at the clock. My hands were almost shaking, a feel of adrenaline coursing through me. My head was filled with doubts and a small fear that I couldn't place.

I was worried about her.

It started small at first, a weird feeling in the top of my spine. It grew quickly, though, and soon I was pacing. Was it my mark? That first night we met... I decided not to bite her but instead drew a symbol on her neck with my own blood... A mark, a warning to others, a tracer that allowed me to find her.

That was it!

"Erio, I'm going for a walk." I shouted to the boy I was taking care of. He waved over his shoulder, eyes focused on the at-home studies he was currently doing.

I left my loft quickly, running down the small hallway and to the elevator. I have only marked a few people in my life, but they never lasted long. It was more of a "I can't drink now so I'll find you later" and a one-time- only deal. To have Nanoha make me this nervous could only mean that she was currently having a small panic attack.

The doors opened and I ran through the lobby. The sidewalk hit my boots and I stopped holding back. My speed was something that I never took for granted. I was fast, very fast.

Jumping up, I landed on top of a building and leapt a few more times to start making a bee-line for the scent of myself placed on Nanoha. It was close...

I saw her. Back pressed against the wall, sitting down with wide eyes and gasping breath. She was scared, and I felt every panicked thump of her heart pulsate through me. My mark was in danger, my donor was threatened.

My girlfriend was in trouble.

I jumped down quickly, landing on a lower building and eyes going wide as a girl knelt in front of Nanoha, speaking to her. An oxygen mask was placed over my friend's mouth and white mist filled it.

Then the girl struck Nanoha hard in the stomach, making her inhale it.

The ground cracked as I landed, the alleyway illuminating as my eyes glowed yellow. Nanoha's body slumped forward slowly and I ignited my scythe.

Four females and a wolf turned to look at me as I exhaled slowly, fangs exposed and snarling.

"Kill her." The one who punched Nanoha said softly...

...And they lunged for me as I shot forward, ready to strike.

(You are locked in Fate's POV)

What's a cliffhanger?

That. was downright cruel. -grins-

[Enraptured]

Originally Posted by Satashi

New numbering system.
pt.1=Monday
pt.2 =Tuesday
pt.3 =Wednesday
ect.

a=first post of day
b=second post of day
ect.

This will help me keep track of my parts so I can find them easier.

Fate

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.5a (Fate):

She was late.

The thought came over my head mind again, looking at the clock. My hands were almost shaking, a feel of adrenaline coursing through me. My head was filled with doubts and a small fear that I couldn't place.

I was worried about her.

It started small at first, a weird feeling in the top of my spine. It grew quickly, though, and soon I was pacing. Was it my mark? That first night we met... I decided not to bite her but instead drew a symbol on her neck with my own blood... A mark, a warning to others, a tracer that allowed me to find her.

That was it!

"Erio, I'm going for a walk." I shouted to the boy I was taking care of. He waved over his shoulder, eyes focused on the at-home studies he was currently doing.

I left my loft quickly, running down the small hallway and to the elevator. I have only marked a few people in my life, but they never lasted long. It was more of a "I can't drink now so I'll find you later" and a one-time- only deal. To have Nanoha make me this nervous could only mean that she was currently having a small panic attack.

The doors opened and I ran through the lobby. The sidewalk hit my boots and I stopped holding back. My speed was something that I never took for granted. I was fast, very fast.

Jumping up, I landed on top of a building and leapt a few more times to start making a bee-line for the scent of myself placed on Nanoha. It was close...

I saw her. Back pressed against the wall, sitting down with wide eyes and gasping breath. She was scared, and I felt every panicked thump of her heart pulsate through me. My mark was in danger, my donor was threatened.

My girlfriend was in trouble.

I jumped down quickly, landing on a lower building and eyes going wide as a girl knelt in front of Nanoha, speaking to her. An oxygen mask was placed over my friend's mouth and white mist filled it.

Then the girl struck Nanoha hard in the stomach, making her inhale it.

The ground cracked as I landed, the alleyway illuminating as my eyes glowed yellow. Nanoha's body slumped forward slowly and I ignited my scythe.

Four females and a wolf turned to look at me as I exhaled slowly, fangs exposed and snarling.

"Kill her." The one who punched Nanoha said softly...

...And they lunged for me as I shot forward, ready to strike.

(You are locked in Fate's POV)

What's a cliffhanger?

ROAR YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT.
do it again do it again!!
I demand part b!! (and c and d and e omggg)

>: (

[illidan182]

NOOOOOOooooOOOOOO~

Evil, evil cliffhangers! Great... now I don't know what to do untill part B comes out... time to re-read and re-read part A it seems >.>

[Satashi]

@Thread: Oh yes, I went there! 0: D *has Angel's halo currently*

Originally Posted by iGreen

*un-lurk mode* What a nice cliffhanger lol...anyway, just wanted to say that I love the way the story is progressing ^^ *lurk mode*

Welcome! Don't forget to vote next update!

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@Thread: Oh yes, I went there! 0: D *has Angel's halo currently*

Its like the end of Halo 2 all over again!
*Attempts to steal halo...*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Its like the end of Halo 2 all over again!
*Attempts to steal halo...*

*snarls* mine! <.<

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Satashi

New numbering system.
pt.1=Monday
pt.2 =Tuesday
pt.3 =Wednesday
ect.

a=first post of day
b=second post of day
ect.

This will help me keep track of my parts so I can find them easier.

Fate

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.5a (Fate):

She was late.

The thought came over my head mind again, looking at the clock. My hands were almost shaking, a feel of adrenaline coursing through me. My head was filled with doubts and a small fear that I couldn't place.

I was worried about her.

It started small at first, a weird feeling in the top of my spine. It grew quickly, though, and soon I was pacing. Was it my mark? That first night we met... I decided not to bite her but instead drew a symbol on her neck with my own blood... A mark, a warning to others, a tracer that allowed me to find her.

That was it!

"Erio, I'm going for a walk." I shouted to the boy I was taking care of. He waved over his shoulder, eyes focused on the at-home studies he was currently doing.

I left my loft quickly, running down the small hallway and to the elevator. I have only marked a few people in my life, but they never lasted long. It was more of a "I can't drink now so I'll find you later" and a one-time- only deal. To have Nanoha make me this nervous could only mean that she was currently having a small panic attack.

The doors opened and I ran through the lobby. The sidewalk hit my boots and I stopped holding back. My speed was something that I never took for granted. I was fast, very fast.

Jumping up, I landed on top of a building and leapt a few more times to start making a bee-line for the scent of myself placed on Nanoha. It was close...

I saw her. Back pressed against the wall, sitting down with wide eyes and gasping breath. She was scared, and I felt every panicked thump of her heart pulsate through me. My mark was in danger, my donor was threatened.

My girlfriend was in trouble.

I jumped down quickly, landing on a lower building and eyes going wide as a girl knelt in front of Nanoha, speaking to her. An oxygen mask was placed over my friend's mouth and white mist filled it.

Then the girl struck Nanoha hard in the stomach, making her inhale it.

The ground cracked as I landed, the alleyway illuminating as my eyes glowed yellow. Nanoha's body slumped forward slowly and I ignited my scythe.

Four females and a wolf turned to look at me as I exhaled slowly, fangs exposed and snarling.

"Kill her." The one who punched Nanoha said softly...

...And they lunged for me as I shot forward, ready to strike.

(You are locked in Fate's POV)

What's a cliffhanger?

Fate to the rescue!

And "What's a cliffhanger?", well a cliffhanger is a break in a story right when something good is about to happen, there made by mean authors to torture eager readers.

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Satashi

*snarls* mine! <.<

>_>

<_<

*trips Satashi with the Lance of Longinus*

*snatches the halo and send back to Angel via Sea of Dirac*

:3

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

>_>

<_<

*trips Satashi with the Lance of Longinus*

*snatches the halo and send back to Angel via Sea of Dirac*

:3

*ogles the might Lance of Longinus* 8O

Pretty....

:bows: