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2012-01-15, 15:19 | Link #482 |
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Random idea is random.
(But maybe fruitful.) Dog Days x Nanoha crossover/ Fusion fic. Demoted Nanoha character (Yuuno, Arf and/or Zafira) being summoned and Shinku/Cinque get shafted. Merits and flaw, please?
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2012-01-15, 15:45 | Link #483 | |
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As for Zafira being demoted...he was made Vivio's teacher, so I'm not sure about using him... I think Yuuno and/or Arf could work really well in the crossover. ^^
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2012-01-15, 16:10 | Link #484 | |
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... I had a sudden image of Cinque as a dog girl traveling with Yuuno in the Dog Days world. ... ... Fund it!
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2012-01-16, 11:51 | Link #485 | |
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The Big Blue needs to be on this boat xD By the way, he's Miura's coach, not Vivio's xDU.
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2012-01-16, 12:01 | Link #488 | |
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I just prefer Arf and/or Yuuno over Zafira for this idea, maybe since he's generally well-liked and treated well. Even in the Omake...
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2012-01-16, 12:17 | Link #489 |
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I guess you're not refering to the A's Nano 4koma series where he's travested, ignored or killed at every chance by other characters(usually Hayate and his fellow Wolkneritter but Nanoha had also blasted him once xD).
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2012-01-16, 13:03 | Link #491 |
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Hey, I know you guys like Arf, Yunno and Zaffy but I think it is too much to shaft a main character from a series away just to make them shine. Since you don't like guys like Yunno get shafted, I think it is a bad ida to shaft the main character away.
Speaking of that, I just hope the original big three would stop stealing the spotlight from the younger generation. |
2012-01-16, 13:11 | Link #492 |
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Sometimes, no disrespect is meant in removing a main character from a series by replacing them with another character.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2571...rical-Twilight This right here is a fanfic that completely replaces Takamachi Nanoha by asking the question, "What if the Jewel Seeds fell on Equestria instead of Earth?" Chrono: "I feel like I've stepped into a girl's cartoon show." Fate is still front and center, Yuuno and Chrono get plenty to do, and Arf is really given moments to shine. Even if it's a My Little Pony crossover, none of Presea's abuse is sugarcoated. It's not that the author disliked Takamachi Nanoha, but that this is a story that could not be told with Nanoha in it. Not unless Nanoha was a pony, but if it was just the original season with all the original Earth characters as ponies, there wouldn't have been much of a point in writing this story. A story that explores what it would really mean to have figures like Celestia and Luna and a magical planet of talking ponies in the same universe as the TSAB. Also, even though Zafira isn't Vivio's coach as of ViVid, that doesn't mean she never learned from him personally. And I think he also taught Nove, so he's like the teacher of Vivio's teacher. Anyway, I think Zafira or Yuuno would be a better choice than Arf for a summoning, unless something is done about Arf's dependence on Fate. |
2012-01-16, 13:11 | Link #493 | |
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The Aces always do that. Why are you so surprised? @Sunder: Mostly agreed, yeah.
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2012-01-16, 18:36 | Link #496 |
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Okay, I knew that's bad indeed. I wasn't supposed to think about this but..
Yuuno Scrya (14) was sent to Flonyard due to teleportation accident when he was digging some artifact. When he was awake, he ended up in unsafe area i.e. not protected by Flonyard magic and is infested with monsters and demons. And then a yellow flash saved him just in time, stumbled in weird but otherwise interesting place, Yuuno stick to Brioche and Yukikaze's group. Yuuno meet Ricotta and after digging through the library with the speed of a dozen people and do some field research, figured that Flonyard is isolated from TSAB reach due to massively powerful dimensional barrier that prevent teleport except for summoning (and latter un-summoning) ceremony. Shinku's portal of arrival remedied it somewhat, he contacted Nanoha and tell her that he was okay. I think about YuunoxRicotta or YuunoxYukikaze. Want to insert Arf and/or Zafira, but once again, Arf is dependent on Fate (unless the portal allow mana link), and I haven't think about why Zafira is summoned :| (yeah, this was supposed to happens just before he's put on a bus... sorry, put on Infinity Library's charge. And at the same time, before Brioche's arrival to Biscotti. And how about a twist about Graham and the Liese Twins being summoned to Gallente? XD)
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2012-01-16, 18:48 | Link #497 |
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My Dog Days xover was more actiony. Flonyard is an old world of the Saint Church and followed them into the TSAB. For most parts, the TSAB just observes them. Then, when pursuing smugglers, Cinque is summoned. As an Aligned Territory, the Church scrambles their knights first. It is Sein's first infiltration mission. It is the disillusioned Woolf's last. And there are secrets on the planet the Church would rather remain buried. Time is of the essence; the Prime Directive prevents the Bureau forces from revealing their intentions. History limits the operatives' hands. But the task force under Schach must track down the daemon cult smugglers, before an eldritch evil escapes the dimension!
Has gratuitous OC and CC usage.
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2012-01-16, 21:52 | Link #499 |
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The Dog Days cross overs would be interesting for sure. I think the one season has enough material to flush out character interactions.
On that note I was watching parts MYLP eps with Discord (ie Q). I was thinking what if you let Q play around in the Nanoha universe. I was thinking, make it like how Q always is: Giving the cast unusual challenges, riddles, witty irritating phrases, play around with them, hell even teach them a lesson to expand their horizon like he did with Picard. I think it would take a bit more creative writing to do because Q is not a traditional adversary that you would write a traditional style battle for. And given Q's quirks, it is not his nature to destroy what he has a curiosity in. |
2012-01-16, 23:22 | Link #500 | |
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...though I would kind of want some, if only a little, YuunoxBrioche in there... /kicked XP
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