SOTM 2008 - April (Dress Code: Female: Elegant/Ceremonial) - Entry Phase

[genryou]

@Marina - lol, i,m sux when it comes to blur tool



any better?

[xxmimixx]

^ Thats looks much better, but no animation ><. Oh well, it is fine without it.

My second edit to my entry. And I took Sweethoney's advice about the lighting in the background.

[Ayame_]

Originally Posted by genryou

@Marina - lol, i,m sux when it comes to blur tool



any better?

border = much better

Text bottom right sounds like a good idea. And just a random notice, probably just me, but the stripe on the right side of her chest blends right up with the post. It just caught my eye, probably just me, and i bet it'll bug someone else for pointing it out. No worries? :P

[genryou]

@ayame - now that you mention it..

oh no, how am i suppose to fix that?

now you make me worried......X/

[Endrance]

Looks like im gonna have to work overtime on this sotm ..must find perfect picture....

[OceanBlue]

Originally Posted by genryou

@ayame - now that you mention it..

oh no, how am i suppose to fix that?

now you make me worried......X/

Just make the background lighter or the foreground darker or something. As long as there's a good distinction, it's fine.

You can even move the render if that works.

[Cyz]

^ My entry girl. Still on the trial and error process

[KiNA]

Originally Posted by genryou

@ayame - now that you mention it..

oh no, how am i suppose to fix that?

now you make me worried......X/

More animated sig plz .. There's a lot of room left. (kB wise)

BG change possible? If its on different layer you can change the tone too.

Source plz

[CrowKenobi]

Originally Posted by Cyz

^ My entry girl. Still on the trial and error process

Looks pretty good!

And did you get permission to use Riker's waifu?

[Ice Climbers]

Originally Posted by CrowKenobi

Looks pretty good!

And did you get permission to use Riker's waifu?

*watches Rika take out a hatchet*

[P.G.]

Is this acceptable? Still a trial sig from me. Don't know how I'll put the text thou.

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3...titled5ww3.jpg

[nammerboi]

Pretty discouraged about last month's results.
Using this one until i find a better render (maybe)
Trying a new style btw.

[KiNA]

Originally Posted by Ice Climbers

*watches Rika take out a hatchet*

Unlike a certain guy, Rika likes to see his waifu everywhere

*runs*

There seems to be a conflicting idea on the illumination on her body.. In the end, I think I'll sticked to the irregular version.. gives out the unpredictable firework effect a bit.



Now, need to hunt a BG to base on @.@ .. This gonna be "fun" -.-

[Ice Climbers]

Originally Posted by KiNA

Unlike a certain guy, Rika likes to see his waifu everywhere

*runs*

Better run fast

[Riker]

Originally Posted by Cyz

^ My entry girl. Still on the trial and error process

It's nice, but the background feels a bit empty. Are those random kanji in the background?

Originally Posted by Ice Climbers

*watches Rika take out a hatchet*

*takes out a hatchet and chase after Icy*

Gimme your hair!

Originally Posted by Ice Climbers

Better run fast

You better start running too. :3

[KiNA]

Barber si comming to town =3 Save yourself..


Total hair lost estimation .. 20%

@.@

[cicido]

Originally Posted by KiNA

Barber si comming to town =3 Save yourself..


Total hair lost estimation .. 20%

@.@

I think that it is definitely better than the last one, but I was thinking more of a "cloudless starry summer night with fireworks", or something along that line. Still good nonetheless, there just wasn't the "wow" factor.

[KiNA]

There's 6 frames.. If I add another firework in the sky I need pause to make it work.. Pause wouldnt work with the firecracker animation on her.. besides, 2 animation in 1 signature fights for focus @.@ I'll consider cloudless starry night in next version and see how it turns out..

Thanks for comment..

*No wow factor* ...

[Last_Hope]

Originally Posted by Pro Gamer

That one was indeed an elegant one. Europe style elegant.
(This one hade the "wow factor" if you ask me. )

//
Oh, Riker´s waifu. That brings out memories.



*runs*

[Spectacular_Insanity]

Originally Posted by KiNA

Barber si comming to town =3 Save yourself..


Total hair lost estimation .. 20%

@.@

I like the animation, but the BG just doesn't fit... I more or less have the same judgement as cicido. Well-done, but lacking something that really pulls you in. In a manner of speaking.

I think I've got my source image for the siggy, but I'm really not sure what the heck to do with it... I may or may not actually have a submission by the time voting begins.