The Genderbending of Haruhi Suzumiya [Spoilers Aplenty]

[Cat Megex]

Originally Posted by CanadaAotS

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lol at the ending.

Originally Posted by Kagedanji

I even read OST as OVA.

...XD

[shaoron]

*reaction to that h-doujin script*

face palm, shakes head, and leaves

[Kagedanji]

I'm getting rid of airsoft, it's stupid. I'll make a real part 3 this time.

[Kristen]

"Dear Diary,

No, I didn't forget about you today. You are the only one who understands me, after all, and I would never abandon you. Unlike those SOS brigade people.

Honestly, diary, why do I have to be so different from them? It's like, they're all in worlds of their own, and I'm stuck being normal. Now, it's not that I don't like being normal. It's just, why can't they be more like me! They're so unfair!

So, you know how Itsuko has power over that Student Council President? She can make sure she gets the right grades and all? It seems like that Agency could change anything... Do you think I could bribe them to fix my chest situation? They can do it, right? I mean, how could Itsuko get breasts those big otherwise... I'm sure Minoru would surely notice me if I went up a cup size or two. Or Yuuki. Honestly, I'd take either one of those guys. But, Yuuki is probably not going to notice anything and just continue to read his books...

Well, not much to write about today. Maybe I'll have more love to give you tomorrow!

Sincerely,
Kyon-ko"

[Forceflow]

Originally Posted by Kagedanji

SHIT, THE CRACK, NO, SHUT ME UP. o_o

This is happening alot lately, I even read OST as OVA.

I also still want that user title changed, it still belongs to me. You have just seen proof.

Probably now its the crack that is controlling you and not you controlling the crack. XD

[CanadaAotS]

Forceflow, that was part of my plan. Blue dango doesn't know it, but he's actually one of my minions, spreading CRACK in my name. Also, more feedback on h-koma plox.

The entire thing is here.

If anyone feels jipped at not having the actual h-scenes written out, well I can't type h-scenes out on this forum anymore then I can post pics of them on this forum (am I right RmX?).
Have patience and maybe it'll become a real doujin one day*

*Speaking of, Kang, how's that coming along anyway?

[DJ_RockmanX]

*returns to thread*

How many of pages of CRACK did I just go through...

Originally Posted by CanadaAotS

Forceflow, that was part of my plan. Blue dango doesn't know it, but he's actually one of my minions, spreading CRACK in my name. Also, more feedback on h-koma plox.

The entire thing is here.

If anyone feels jipped at not having the actual h-scenes written out, well I can't type h-scenes out on this forum anymore then I can post pics of them on this forum (am I right RmX?).
Have patience and maybe it'll become a real doujin one day

Pics are less safe than words.

[DannyCat]

Originally Posted by Cat Megex

Hm...I don't really see what the point in groping a DFC is, though. I mean...there isn't really that much there to grope.

would be one.

[CanadaAotS]

Originally Posted by DJ_RockmanX

*returns to thread*

How many of pages of CRACK did I just go through...



Pics are less safe than words.

Oh that's obvious. Besides, how the h-scenes are done is up to the artist who draws em, and that can be decided on later.
This sounds like an incredibly good excuse to go read some h-doujins haha. "Research purposes"

And Danchou, you don't have to worry about the CRACK, I have it allllll under control.

[Cat Megex]

Originally Posted by DannyCat

would be one.

...I don't think that works as well when the person doing the massaging/groping is male. X3

[Forceflow]

Originally Posted by CanadaAotS

Forceflow, that was part of my plan. Blue dango doesn't know it, but he's actually one of my minions, spreading CRACK in my name. Also, more feedback on h-koma plox.

The entire thing is here.

If anyone feels jipped at not having the actual h-scenes written out, well I can't type h-scenes out on this forum anymore then I can post pics of them on this forum (am I right RmX?).
Have patience and maybe it'll become a real doujin one day*

*Speaking of, Kang, how's that coming along anyway?

Regarding feedback one thing immediately comes to mind. That both of them at this point of time should have already kissed Haruki and haruhi in the closed world. So the lines in page 12 should be changed to something like 'its my first time'.

Spoiler for Ecchi stuff...:

Regarding the ecchi stuff, depending on the number of locations this can potentially blow up till 30-40 pages depending on how in-depth (pun very much intended) you want to be.

*rubs forehead* ...and with the number of ecchi scenes the artist will probably have to play around with different positions for each location. (I can't believe i'm saying this stuff /facepalm)

The final page... Would it be more fun if Haruki shows up as well? Its like after Kyonko comes in through the door a hand drops on Kyon's shoulder. He turns around and sees Haruki standing there with a damn evil smile saying 'lets get along well~'.

[unmoldedtruck]

Originally Posted by ChrissieXD

"Dear Diary,

No, I didn't forget about you today. You are the only one who understands me, after all, and I would never abandon you. Unlike those SOS brigade people.

Honestly, diary, why do I have to be so different from them? It's like, they're all in worlds of their own, and I'm stuck being normal. Now, it's not that I don't like being normal. It's just, why can't they be more like me! They're so unfair!

So, you know how Itsuko has power over that Student Council President? She can make sure she gets the right grades and all? It seems like that Agency could change anything... Do you think I could bribe them to fix my chest situation? They can do it, right? I mean, how could Itsuko get breasts those big otherwise... I'm sure Minoru would surely notice me if I went up a cup size or two. Or Yuuki. Honestly, I'd take either one of those guys. But, Yuuki is probably not going to notice anything and just continue to read his books...

Well, not much to write about today. Maybe I'll have more love to give you tomorrow!

Sincerely,
Kyon-ko"

No Kyonko! You must remain DFC! D:

[Kagedanji]

Spoiler for NO TSUJI 3. BEHOLD THE CRACK.:

Second day of Golden Week. The brigade receives a request.

Haruhi: So, the mission at hand-

Haruhiko: -involves an investigation of-

Haruhi: -an abando-

Haruhiko: -Shut up! We don't need two people explaining the damn assignment!

Haruhi: You were the one that butt in on me!

Haruhiko: You know what? We don't need two people leading a brigade at the same time either! I'll take the position!

Haruhi: My ass!

Haruhiko: A nice one at that. Heheh.

Haruhi: Why you! Don't change the subject!

Kyon: Ugh... Well, apparently, according to this request post on our website, we need to meet this person who's looking for a lost item within this abandoned apartment complex.

Kyonko: Why is it in there?

Kyon: I dunno, I guess it was something important that was just forgotten.

Itsuko: Why isn't this client getting it instead of asking us?

Kyon: It says that this place is locked down and off-limits. Thanks to the Suzumiyas' exaggeration on the page, saying that we are some kind of special task force able to slip through the law, we are getting these kind of requests.

Itsuki: And Suzumiya-san keeps insisting on doing these.

Yuuki: We should leave now then.

The Haruhis are still bickering at the back of the club room in front of the window, between the two danchou desks, behind the two long tables with laptop computers, half of which arranged themselves into the room when the universes collided. The two finally cease and leave with the rest of the brigade, locking all of the school entrances with the key that the Nagatos were able to create for brigade purposes as they left.



They arrive at the meeting place, a young girl waited for them.

Young Girl: Ah, you came! ...You're all high school students?

Kyon: The site didn't mention anything about that?

Young Girl: It didn't, but any help is good. It's fine.

Kyon: So, we only go in, search for the thing, and return, correct?

Young Girl: It's more complicated than it sounds. I have no memory of which room it may have been, and there is a possiblility that the building has been cleared out of everything, but this object may have been something they missed. The object is a ring. It has a blue gem, and has much importance to me. Reasons of why I couldn't merely do this myself is because the place is prone to collapsing, is locked and taped, and there are rumors of it being haunted. I'm sure that your brigade can get through those, though, right?

Kyon: Err...

Haruhi: Of course!

Haruhiko: We came here to accept to do it, we aren't changing our minds.

Young Girl: Hm. Thank you so much. Good luck.

AND SHUT UP CANADA. THE POWER IS MINE. I WILL RULE OVER YOU SOON.

[DJ_RockmanX]

Originally Posted by Kagedanji

Spoiler for NO TSUJI 3. BEHOLD THE CRACK.:

Second day of Golden Week. The brigade receives a request.

Haruhi: So, the mission at hand-

Haruhiko: -involves an investigation of-

Haruhi: -an abando-

Haruhiko: -Shut up! We don't need two people explaining the damn assignment!

Haruhi: You were the one that butt in on me!

Haruhiko: You know what? We don't need two people leading a brigade at the same time either! I'll take the position!

Haruhi: My ass!

Haruhiko: A nice one at that. Heheh.

Haruhi: Why you! Don't change the subject!

Kyon: Ugh... Well, apparently, according to this request post on our website, we need to meet this person who's looking for a lost item within this abandoned apartment complex.

Kyonko: Why is it in there?

Kyon: I dunno, I guess it was something important that was just forgotten.

Itsuko: Why isn't this client getting it instead of asking us?

Kyon: It says that this place is locked down and off-limits. Thanks to the Suzumiyas' exaggeration on the page, saying that we are some kind of special task force able to slip through the law, we are getting these kind of requests.

Itsuki: And Suzumiya-san keeps insisting on doing these.

Yuuki: We should leave now then.

The Haruhis are still bickering at the back of the club room in front of the window, between the two danchou desks, behind the two long tables with laptop computers, half of which arranged themselves into the room when the universes collided. The two finally cease and leave with the rest of the brigade, locking all of the school entrances with the key that the Nagatos were able to create for brigade purposes as they left.



They arrive at the meeting place, a young girl waited for them.

Young Girl: Ah, you came! ...You're all high school students?

Kyon: The site didn't mention anything about that?

Young Girl: It didn't, but any help is good. It's fine.

Kyon: So, we only go in, search for the thing, and return, correct?

Young Girl: It's more complicated than it sounds. I have no memory of which room it may have been, and there is a possiblility that the building has been cleared out of everything, but this object may have been something they missed. The object is a ring. It has a blue gem, and has much importance to me. Reasons of why I couldn't merely do this myself is because the place is prone to collapsing, is locked and taped, and there are rumors of it being haunted. I'm sure that your brigade can get through those, though, right?

Kyon: Err...

Haruhi: Of course!

Haruhiko: We came here to accept to do it, we aren't changing our minds.

Young Girl: Hm. Thank you so much. Good luck.

AND SHUT UP CANADA. THE POWER IS MINE. I WILL RULE OVER YOU SOON.

You need to make yourself an archive post, dango-kun.

And I will terminate you both if you guys continue to fight this drug war.

[Sterling01]

Originally Posted by CanadaAotS

Oh that's obvious. Besides, how the h-scenes are done is up to the artist who draws em, and that can be decided on later.
This sounds like an incredibly good excuse to go read some h-doujins haha. "Research purposes"

And Danchou, you don't have to worry about the CRACK, I have it allllll under control.

When I post the Sex scene I'm writing I'm going to censor all the naughty things with ひひひひひ so no one will know what the fuck I'm talking about.

Here's some of it

Spoiler for :

As I push my ひひひひひ into my other's ひひひひひ her damp wetnees engulfs my ひひひひひ. Her reddened face as she paints and bites tightly down her lips makes me want to lose all of my inhibitions and continuously violate her. Though as I try to hold back those thoughts I forget that I've already reached her last barrierr. I hesitate before roughly ramming my ひひひひひ into her. I see her clenching her teeth so she doesn't screem out, and alert the two Haruhis in the room over to our dirty deed

[Kagedanji]

This is Kagedanji's "Suzumiya Haruhi no Tsuji" which translates to "The Crossroads of Haruhi Suzumiya". This is the first and original version of the story on Anime Suki Forums, single-handedly written. This is still a work in progress, the parts may be edited from time to time. I will complete them when I get the writing in, I prefer to get everything in piece by piece. Enjoy!

Part 1: http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...postcount=5443
Part 2: http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...postcount=5442
Part 3: http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...postcount=5431

[DJ_RockmanX]

Originally Posted by Kagedanji

This is Kagedanji's "Suzumiya Haruhi no Tsuji" which translates to "The Crossroads of Haruhi Suzumiya". This is the first and original version of the story on Anime Suki Forums, single-handedly written. This is still a work in progress, the parts may be edited from time to time. I will complete them when I get the writing in, I prefer to get everything in piece by piece. Enjoy!

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On the front.

@Sterling: HeeHeeHeeHeeHee? You're dirty.

[Tunafishisgood]

With all those scripts and rewrites, and many many pictures..
Why don't we Visual Novel this? Making a good visual novel needs some work, but it is totally doable
We can use Ren'py(Visual Novel Maker)
http://www.renpy.org/wiki/renpy/Download_Ren%27Py

[DJ_RockmanX]

Originally Posted by Tunafishisgood

With all those scripts and rewrites, and many many pictures..
Why don't we Visual Novel this? Making a good visual novel needs some work, but it is totally doable
We can use Ren'py(Visual Novel Maker)
http://www.renpy.org/wiki/renpy/Download_Ren%27Py

That's... ambitious.

[Sterling01]

Originally Posted by DJ_RockmanX

On the front.

@Sterling: HeeHeeHeeHeeHee? You're dirty.

Actualy the only reason I picked ひひひひひ was because I was just playing Umineko