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*giggles incoherently* Awesomeness.
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Alternatively, as early as possible to make a side-fic of Nanoha and Fate's elaborate punishment for Hayate (and more serious one for Vivio). And yes. I exist. I'm just dead tired from my vacation away from internet. I hope to have edited chapters soon to show for it, though.
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2011-08-15, 18:22 | Link #33782 | |
Forever a Journey
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2011-08-15, 18:26 | Link #33783 | |||
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
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The Saint's Armour, by my understanding, is a natural shield that Vivio can form around herself when she gets attacked? She apparently lost this ability after StrikerS, but it could be interesting to have in the Files. I don't know enough about it though, to really judge on how to use it properly and such . Dezo did a good job of explaining a version of it in his MagicalLibrarian!Vivio story... How I see it possibly coming in this fic is that Vivio wouldn't need a pre-set shield spell (I noted that Hayate had given that necklace to her, a nice gesture that's both general "I love my girlfriend" sweet, and "I know what danger my girlfriend gets into on a daily basis so I want to keep her safe" sweet ), but just simply putting herself bodily between Hayate and the explosion would protect them? No, Hayate is not a fool! Bwahaha, if me writing depressing Hayate stories results in more of these awesome shorts from you, then I'll have to whip out more! More commentary on the fic: I realize that part of the reason why Sacred Heart set off a defensive explosion was unclear--I remember you mentioning that Hayate lets off magical energy when she's aroused in "Things We Tame", but maybe dropping a mention of that in this fic will make the mechanism of the accident more obvious? Quote:
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*Hayate gives a friendly, defeated wave* Fate: ... Nanoha: ... Raising Heart: Count 20, 19, 18...
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2011-08-15, 18:43 | Link #33787 | ||
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2011-08-15, 18:50 | Link #33789 | |
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Added the story to the Files Chronology in my signature, btw ^^. (Note, Shigan: You missed the link to Part 4 in "Things We Tame" in the post of the final part =O).
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Ah, I see! I think I was confused at how the foreplay had affected it--did Hayate's hand slip and cause a streak, or did she hit the wrong Rune to close the program, etc? XD Not a big deal, but I'm curious!
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2011-08-15, 18:58 | Link #33791 | |
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I imagined it being Hayate drawing a wrong line somewhere, and this either altering a rune or simply triggering something in SH's programming that made the device think it was being manually hacked, thus triggering a defensive attack-spell. Also, I've tried and tried and tried to get chapter 4 to show in that dratted post. It won't for some ungodly reason. I'll look into it. *sigh* |
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2011-08-15, 19:30 | Link #33794 |
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Ehh. I might get there following the last chapter of the A's arc, the events of the PSP game come after A's.
Sadly, the lack of response for the last two Food For Thoughts make me feel there's a lack of interest in it, so finding more motivation to write it is proving difficult.
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2011-08-15, 19:34 | Link #33795 | |
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I barely get any responses to my stuff around here at times. People still read it though.
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2011-08-15, 19:52 | Link #33799 |
Test Drive
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Jeez, disappear from the forum for one night and the thread grows several pages while you're gone. Reminds me of the good old days
When I write long stories (mostly in the case of Rain, since I can't really cite Shadowverse considering how that all turned out) I tend to make notes of certain things I want to happen, and try to include them in specific chapters. That way I know what points I've hit and where I need to go from there.
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