2015-05-26, 10:56 | Link #1 |
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A Hero's War [Web Novel]
Original Title : A Hero's War
Author : jseah Publisher : Fictionpress Status : Ongoing (updates every 10 days or so) jseah's fictionpress acount Sinopsis: Morey is summoned to a fantasy world under seige by the forces of darkness, called a Hero by the natives. Unknown to them, they got two 'Heroes' for the price of one. Dumped into a strange and dangerous fantasy world, Cato struggles to find out what happened to him and where he is. And perhaps there are advantages to not being a Hero. And perhaps not all the legends are true... MC: hes the resouceful kind (MacGyver xD), not that dificult given their low lvl of tech. plus: there is fluffy girls =D (a fenec-like race and a winged one so far, but there got to be more right?) |
2015-05-26, 11:24 | Link #4 |
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hahahaha well...
hes capable of sensing magic force but hasnt learned any so far, hes at farmer power lvl so far and there are lots of girls around but hes not getting any atention xD but hey! there is only 23 short chaps so far, despair not! |
2015-05-31, 04:26 | Link #7 | |
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Hi, I'm the author of this story. I was wondering why my traffic suddenly jumped and did a bit of googling...
I'm flattered that someone thought it was worth recommending! You can also find the story on Archive of Our Own with a longer summary: (FFnet has too low character limit) Quote:
AO3 has better presentation and formatting but FF.net is more popular, so take your pick. I'll follow this thread so any criticism or suggestions can be received here or on the FF.net review system. I'm curious about these obligatory questions but to answer them with my author's cap on would be spoilers wouldn't it? =P FYI, I'm shooting for a more MaoYuu / Log Horizon / Ring of Fire style feeling than Shield Hero. The MC has no need for magic or even to be powerful at fighting. Morey's side is more like a traditional "Hero" route (and hence why he's not the MC). |
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2015-05-31, 08:30 | Link #10 |
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If I was writing a character description... note that most of this refers to MC before he arrives in the fantasy world. Some parts of this information may take many chapters before it gets introduced (the engineer bit only comes up in ch26)
Cato Lois Age: 21 Male Short black hair and medium height (for Earth). A thin unmuscular young man with too pale skin from staying indoors. Likes to wear loose and unfitting clothing, sees fashion as unnecessary. Cato was studying to be an engineer before he suddenly awoke in a fantasy world. While not shy, he remains aloof and finds it hard to form emotional connections. Reads widely, not just fiction but also reference books and wiki-walking. Not lazy but also not too hardworking, has no strong passions to drive him. Anti-social hobbies and not afraid to speak his mind, he makes few friends due to reclusive personality. Has a highly analytical mind and finds it hard to leave something unknown. "Things Man was not meant to know" irritates him to no end. After arriving in the new world, he's already begun to take notes and muses about what he sees and learns. ---------------- As for examples, I'll say you could summarize the entire first arc with the quote: "Know Thy Enemy". |
2015-05-31, 08:33 | Link #11 | |
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i see... i expect him to have howitzers as the story goes on... after all Bonaparte said "God fights on the side with the best artillery" He doesn't need to be a hero... he can be a legion |
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2015-06-09, 03:17 | Link #18 |
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Despite the increase in readership, I still receive almost no criticism or comments. >.>
So, I would like to ask a few questions regarding the writing. Note that not everyone likes the same sort of story, while a vehement... discussion over my story would be all kinds of flattering, I wouldn't like to see forumites kill each other over these differences. Spoiler for Questions:
Of course, you may not have any specific comments. That's fine too. In which case, I would like to ask you which chapter was your favourite. That's also useful in aggregate. I also expect any answers/opinions to change over time so feel free to re-answer them as the story progresses. |
2015-06-09, 11:10 | Link #19 | |
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the tone... we still have no idea about the overall tone of the novel so, no idea how to reply xD, i mean, does he get emotionally scarred in the story, does he get to feel the wrongness of medieval zoociety? does he get grudges? someone tries to erradicate him? etc etc, thats on the dark side, now on the bright side, does he makes life better for ppl somewhere? (this already happened once to the fukas so far) does he impact communities where he goes? does his researchs spread to the world? he makes friends? does he grows a party? does he develops romantic relationships? etc etc i dont know what to say about side chars, after all there are temporal n permanent side chars, usually u only explain the past n reasons of the permanent ones, usually, as for screen time, thats up to their roll in the novel =P, no good writer is gonna scarcely mention someone impactful for the MC n his life, unless its about someone neglected by the picted environment who accidental n surprisingly affect the story. setting... discusing that with the target public could be very bad, how about a senior writer, do u have or could u get one to try? same for the plot, they are practically siames with the setting |
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alternate universe, harem, scientific magic, web novel |
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