2013-11-12, 22:53 | Link #48342 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Odd whmsical idea. IS and TWEWY
Laura's rampage puts Rin and Cecilia on life support. The two are thrust into a deadly game for their lives. Learning to trust each other, learning to work with one another. The two must learn that the powers to be mastered in order to survive go much farther than anything the IS is capable of. Beyond even their imagination. |
2013-11-13, 00:44 | Link #48348 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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> Grammar: better than me
> Opening: Too short, plot excuse to the max > Content: Kamen rider OST, ARE YOU SHITTIN ME?! You retard and your shitty soingfic > Format: Paragraph too sparse. That spacing man. > Overall: Better than Sacred Twins' first three chapter... which itself a shitty ripoff of the novel. Also, more minus due to marty stu.
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2013-11-13, 00:50 | Link #48349 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 18
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Hmm... Maybe I should have put that kidnapping idea above into motion. But how would Madoka fool Ichika?
- Acting. - Re-edited newspaper, program, news,... - A fake diary, result of years watching him. - Making him busy. -> Forget that he is an Orimura. Any suggestion? |
2013-11-13, 01:17 | Link #48351 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Pins are art. The idea that each contains a thought/emotion is based on the artist's work. So the idea that the motion of slashing the soul of the sword, the essence of fire. Those things are contained in the pins. In the way they are the ultimate hammer space, storing an unlimited source of the imprinted essence. The only thing consumed is the psyche user's stamina to call on them.
By this definition, neither of the girls can call their IS. because neither know the true essence or construction of what they pilot. |
2013-11-13, 03:02 | Link #48356 | |
Fear the Spear
Join Date: Oct 2013
Location: Osaka Castle
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2013-11-13, 08:40 | Link #48359 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 18
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No, no, what is the fun in that? What Madoka really wants is a family, and she will do almost anything to fufill it, even manipulating her older twin brother. But then the line of Brother, Lover, Father,... Soon went blurred...
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2013-11-13, 09:18 | Link #48360 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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Now I have only been skimming through OC stories in the database and... well... I don't know. Never thought of making comparisons, but what is it about my OC that you seem to demand? And if I may ask the community here, where and how do I tell the various levels of romance in a story? Like the lemon lime thingy, is there like a chart for it? Because I could use a gauge at the moment.
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fanfic ideas, fanfiction, ff.net, harem, is fanfic, warning fanfic spoilers, wincest |
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