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Eratas123 · 2012-04-13, 05:53

Some members of the cast can do without the turning up part. Tatenashi would turn into a maniac and Honne would be a sloth if they get amped up at all.

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-13, 05:57

I still think they'd be better for it :|

Eratas123 · 2012-04-13, 05:58

Oh really? I don't think a character who does broderline sexual harassment or another that barely moves and talks like a snail is gonna get much good feedback.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-13, 06:01

You mean BLOXs? Yeah, I hate them... individually, and then I roll out Gojulox (6 Blox zoid combined) in the VSIII game and roll everyone with it. And Yeah, Gaizryuki is sleek and cool, but Grandpa Geno is badass.

Back to topic, the easiest way to develop them would be reducing "Ichika this and Ichika that" which makes them seemingly shallow. Have them interact with each other or secondary characters WITHOUT involving Ichika somehow. But for some reason it's hard to do it myself :|

Eratas123 · 2012-04-13, 06:05

Rin and Cecilia, Tatenashi and Kanzashi, Honne and Utsuho, and Charlotte and Laura already do this.

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-13, 06:07

In my version, Tate is perfect to the point of insane and her acts of delinquency make her feel human instead of godlike which everyone else sees her as.

Honne would be mostly asleep... until whenever she wakes up and does something either A) eccentric B) pure genius C) Both

Eratas123 · 2012-04-13, 06:09

You're saying they don't already do this in canon? She's already insanely perfect and treated as such by the cast, and Honne's just barely awake most of the time.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-13, 06:12

Yeah, I'm still trying to improver it, whether I can succeed or not, really doesn't matter.

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-13, 06:12

Tate barely shows herself to be unbalanced and may or may not be aware of exactly how "perfect" she is. My version has her so awesome that not only does everyone else hate her for it, she's starting to hate herself for it as well.

Honne Is sleepy in canon, but in mine. Her quirk is borderline narcolepsy... But it's mostly going to be due to abnormal sleeping habits or something else. Her really slow way of doing things and my-pace style will also be highlighted.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-13, 06:20

Hate herself for it? okay, that's really not going to get much sympathy. Many sue's always say "Why am I so perfect bitch bitch moan moan." This is usually used by authors to try and make the characters likeable or sympathetic, and it never succeeds.

Agree with Honne, though.

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-13, 06:22

She's not hating her own abilities perse... more of she hates the fact that her abilities are isolating her from others and by extension, she begins to hate her own abilities as well.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-13, 06:24

^ LOL at the undeniable truth

Mine is less hating herself and more like trying too hard to prove she's normal. Even Ichika calls her out for not admitting her own extraordinary talents.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-13, 06:27

This still gets flack. Common logic dictates that if you feel you're too good, why not just lower the ante down? If they whine about it and still keep doing it, it just looks annoying. Raven Dementia whatsherface was a prime example of this.

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-13, 06:29

That's why my version of Tatenashi acts like a delinquent and barely does anything unless absolutely has to or someone has found a way to force her into it via circumstance or some other underhanded way. Mostly she just does things as she pleases, hanging around an abandoned building of ISA, performing a prank without anyone being the wiser, taking tea time in the student council office during meetings.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-13, 06:31

Okay, if she's a delinquent, why would people resent her? people only hate individuals who flaunt their abilities, not hide it.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-13, 06:31

... gah, I'm confused now.

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-13, 06:37

Because the damage was already done. People know her as "that Tatenashi". The invincible one who no one could ever make budge, ever. The one no one besides teachers could even come close to besting in IS combat and even then it would probably be down to the wire.

With her current lifestyle, Tatenashi has no complaints because nobody is hating her. Practically no one knows she exists... at least for the first years. Second year and up though, her rep is probably broken beyond repair except for a few people who still see her as a good friend without somehow becoming jealous.

When her over perfection and past is brought up, she breaks down... not into tears... she practically shatters like a mirror, explosively, and it would be best to be very far away from the shards when that happens.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-13, 06:39

What story is this again?

demino_hellsin · 2012-04-13, 07:34

An AU of infinite stratos that I may never write :|

Connect Disconnect--Possibility of a Future

Also the same AU I'm working all of those second shifts for.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-13, 07:52

Would the harem still continue if he doesn't choose anyone after he graduates?

2012-04-13, 05:53	Link #29221
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Some members of the cast can do without the turning up part. Tatenashi would turn into a maniac and Honne would be a sloth if they get amped up at all. __________________

2012-04-13, 05:58	Link #29223
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Oh really? I don't think a character who does broderline sexual harassment or another that barely moves and talks like a snail is gonna get much good feedback. __________________

2012-04-13, 06:01	Link #29224
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	You mean BLOXs? Yeah, I hate them... individually, and then I roll out Gojulox (6 Blox zoid combined) in the VSIII game and roll everyone with it. And Yeah, Gaizryuki is sleek and cool, but Grandpa Geno is badass. Back to topic, the easiest way to develop them would be reducing "Ichika this and Ichika that" which makes them seemingly shallow. Have them interact with each other or secondary characters WITHOUT involving Ichika somehow. But for some reason it's hard to do it myself :\| __________________

2012-04-13, 06:05	Link #29225
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Rin and Cecilia, Tatenashi and Kanzashi, Honne and Utsuho, and Charlotte and Laura already do this. __________________

2012-04-13, 06:09	Link #29227
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	You're saying they don't already do this in canon? She's already insanely perfect and treated as such by the cast, and Honne's just barely awake most of the time. __________________

2012-04-13, 05:57	Link #29222
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I still think they'd be better for it :\|

2012-04-13, 06:07	Link #29226
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	In my version, Tate is perfect to the point of insane and her acts of delinquency make her feel human instead of godlike which everyone else sees her as. Honne would be mostly asleep... until whenever she wakes up and does something either A) eccentric B) pure genius C) Both

2012-04-13, 06:12	Link #29228
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Yeah, I'm still trying to improver it, whether I can succeed or not, really doesn't matter. __________________

2012-04-13, 06:12	Link #29229
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Tate barely shows herself to be unbalanced and may or may not be aware of exactly how "perfect" she is. My version has her so awesome that not only does everyone else hate her for it, she's starting to hate herself for it as well. Honne Is sleepy in canon, but in mine. Her quirk is borderline narcolepsy... But it's mostly going to be due to abnormal sleeping habits or something else. Her really slow way of doing things and my-pace style will also be highlighted.

2012-04-13, 06:20	Link #29230
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Hate herself for it? okay, that's really not going to get much sympathy. Many sue's always say "Why am I so perfect bitch bitch moan moan." This is usually used by authors to try and make the characters likeable or sympathetic, and it never succeeds. Agree with Honne, though. __________________

2012-04-13, 06:22	Link #29231
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	She's not hating her own abilities perse... more of she hates the fact that her abilities are isolating her from others and by extension, she begins to hate her own abilities as well.

2012-04-13, 06:24	Link #29232
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	^ LOL at the undeniable truth Mine is less hating herself and more like trying too hard to prove she's normal. Even Ichika calls her out for not admitting her own extraordinary talents. __________________

2012-04-13, 06:27	Link #29233
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	This still gets flack. Common logic dictates that if you feel you're too good, why not just lower the ante down? If they whine about it and still keep doing it, it just looks annoying. Raven Dementia whatsherface was a prime example of this. __________________

2012-04-13, 06:29	Link #29234
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	That's why my version of Tatenashi acts like a delinquent and barely does anything unless absolutely has to or someone has found a way to force her into it via circumstance or some other underhanded way. Mostly she just does things as she pleases, hanging around an abandoned building of ISA, performing a prank without anyone being the wiser, taking tea time in the student council office during meetings.

2012-04-13, 06:31	Link #29235
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Okay, if she's a delinquent, why would people resent her? people only hate individuals who flaunt their abilities, not hide it. __________________

2012-04-13, 06:31	Link #29236
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	... gah, I'm confused now. __________________

2012-04-13, 06:37	Link #29237
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Because the damage was already done. People know her as "that Tatenashi". The invincible one who no one could ever make budge, ever. The one no one besides teachers could even come close to besting in IS combat and even then it would probably be down to the wire. With her current lifestyle, Tatenashi has no complaints because nobody is hating her. Practically no one knows she exists... at least for the first years. Second year and up though, her rep is probably broken beyond repair except for a few people who still see her as a good friend without somehow becoming jealous. When her over perfection and past is brought up, she breaks down... not into tears... she practically shatters like a mirror, explosively, and it would be best to be very far away from the shards when that happens.

2012-04-13, 06:39	Link #29238
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	What story is this again? __________________

2012-04-13, 07:34	Link #29239
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	An AU of infinite stratos that I may never write :\| Connect Disconnect--Possibility of a Future Also the same AU I'm working all of those second shifts for.

2012-04-13, 07:52	Link #29240
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Would the harem still continue if he doesn't choose anyone after he graduates? __________________