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Hmmm... hard question, I've neglected him for a while...
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2012-01-10, 05:19 | Link #17442 |
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@ Senpai - Better question: Why were they stalking the two of them anyway? It's not like they stalk Ichika on their free time.......right?
Side note - She's actualy his first female friend there Next is Kanzashi Side note 2 - You forgot!? But he's the token romance!
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2012-01-10, 05:25 | Link #17443 | ||
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Madoka is a little paranoid, she was glad that Tate can hold her words about chasing Ichika rather normally, her facepalm is aimed at Houki for act like a fool about it. Quote:
Well, considering I had to hold Dan from being too important to the plot... I tend to forget him.
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2012-01-10, 05:27 | Link #17444 | |
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- (bleeding in a drainage ditch)
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2012-01-10, 05:33 | Link #17445 |
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@ Hawke - I already made continuity errors in FI. Now I'm scrambling to fix them
@ Senpai - Remember the class' reaction when Tatenashi gave Ichika that bento? GOD IS DEAD! Side note - Then he becomes "The straight Will and Grace" with Laura leter Still, him and Kanzashi made a friendship of their one thing in common: Suffering for Tatenashi's antics. Side note 2 - He's the one thing that'll keep your fic from having a normal romance! Don't forget about him?
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2012-01-10, 05:42 | Link #17449 | |||
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@ Demi Please elaborate.
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2012-01-10, 05:48 | Link #17450 |
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Cecilia's kid would be the oppostie of her: Practical and very self reliant
Side note - Tabane wouldn't allow that. If it got away, it'd become useless and she'd shut it down remotely. @ Senpai - Does he ever meet Tatenashi's parents? I want to see that meeting Especially if the Harem comes along Side note - Would people find his appearance odd considering his background? Side note 2 - ........
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2012-01-10, 05:52 | Link #17451 | |
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Ahem. Well, the hints haven't started yet so...
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But this is just 1 chapter. 1 very long chapter. Then comes Vandam. Cue epic savior music as she is booted up for the first time. And amid the cheering staff, is someone armed with a hidden camera. All the messier when shit hits the fan.
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2012-01-10, 05:53 | Link #17452 | ||
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Believe it or not I want to feature him a lot, but considering it was set mostly either in I.S.A. or somewhere else, hard to see Dan often. I just haven't found the solution for this yet.
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2012-01-10, 05:56 | Link #17453 |
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The silver gospel was disabled after it's second engagement with the ISA personal IS squad. As it turns out, the thing was not deactivated yet. Rather than fightback, it forced its way to crawl into the water and make its escape there.
A few days later it washes up on a far isolated beach. It detects that its pilot is dying of malnutrition and the AI begins to "panic", it tries to initiate self-repair without returning to storage/close(I forget which) mode. A young boy shows up and sees the machine. This young man approaches the Silver Gospel with caution, he tries to see if it was hostile. Supposing it was offline, he went to see if there was a pilot inside. Silver Gospel reacts to the boy's presence and immediately grabs the neck. It doesn't instantly snap the person's neck because the boy looks like its pilot( he looks like a short-haired blonde girl). He asks for the Silver Gospel to stop, the IS remembers Natashia's words when it was fighting its way out of the previous test zone. The original Silver Gospel program tries to take back control from Tabane's IFF scrambler virus. It purges itself of the virus by deleting all its previous data, leaving only its bare OS and basic AI program. The boy is spared and now he has an unidentified IS on his hands, not to mention a dying woman inside. |
2012-01-10, 05:58 | Link #17454 |
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@ Meistah - That's why I want an update!
@ Senpai - Shouldn't you diverge from canon a bit? Side note - I meant Irish. They find out pretty early that he's some kind of child terrorist yet he looks frailer than most males and even some females. Side note 2 - Add Dan some more He is Ichika's best male friend. @ Demi - Is this another male IS pilot fic?
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2012-01-10, 06:00 | Link #17455 | |
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2012-01-10, 06:03 | Link #17456 |
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The AI is piloting itself, the boy is just an IS otaku. He has foreign blood in him and thus combined with his girly looks, get him into a lot of trouble with the guys. Upon finding the Silver Gospel, he decides to take care of both the unit and Natashia.
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2012-01-10, 06:04 | Link #17457 | ||
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Me too
If anything, Sacred twins is like a rubber band, plenty of things happened exactly the same as Canon, it's the non-plot important stuff that is greatly changed. Things maybe better if I CAN write proper, now I stills truck at gospel fight instead of writing chapter 12. Quote:
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@Demi For unexplainable reason I find that idea possible...
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2012-01-10, 06:11 | Link #17459 |
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I was inspired by a IS wikia entry that said that the silver gospel was somewhat "alive" in the LN, apparently showing care for its pilot. Even though I don't quite remember any part being like that. I could imagine what must have been going on in the Silver Gospel's systems. It's pilot, the only one it cares about is screaming for it to stop fighting, but its program forces it to fight, because all it sees are enemies. Units which were just listed as allies are now enemies. Tabane sends along with the virus a short encrypted message only for the IS to hear "I'm sorry my child, but do this for mommy." or something like that.
@eras: 14 or 15, which makes his condition worse since he's supposed to be in puberty already and he's still girly |
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