2013-10-15, 10:38 | Link #5521 |
Takao Tsundere Cruiser
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I had a weird dream. An erotic dream.
It was about my fanfic idea that all the known Level 5s are female and fall in love with Touma. In this dream, the six girls agreed that three of them will spend a week with Touma while the other three get their turn next week. So the dream went normal where the girls (Mikoto, Mugino and Misaki) doing couple stuff with Touma. And then things went steamy........Very steamy. Words cannot describe what i dreamt so i can only give you these clues. A King size bed. The girls in erotic nightwear and lingerie. Lots of moaning and sweating. Five or possibly six times being satisfied. And it ended with a four way kiss. ........ I have no idea how i came up with that.
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2013-10-15, 15:34 | Link #5526 |
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Hey, Demino. I remember that you were fascinated with Vento of the Front for some reason and found some pics of her without all of the piercings and make-up. See them for yourself and check whether or not you can make another Vento snippet.
Spoiler for Vento without make-up and piercings:
Interesting, aren't they?
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2013-10-15, 19:10 | Link #5527 | |
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2013-10-15, 19:59 | Link #5529 | |
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It's to help with her magic.
Here's an excerpt from the wiki explaining why she looked so.... well, the way she did. Quote:
@demino_hellsin: I take it you liked the images? Personally, I like the second one better.
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2013-10-15, 22:23 | Link #5531 |
Of Infinite Resignation
Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Canada
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Eh, been a while since I last posted here. So, besides real life coming up to keep me occupied, I decided to stop procrastinating and started working on this. I guess my major motivation was the fact that fanfiction admin finally added ''Saronia A. Irivika'' and ''Kihara Enshuu'' to the list of characters available for the tags following an email I sent them. Only problem, Misaka 10777 is not there and I remember asking for her! Ugh, such misfortune, guess I have to send them another email, huh?
(on a side note, Aureolus Izzard, Himegami, Sasha Kreutzev, Ollerus and Othinus have been added thanks to me, and Arisa, Shutaura, and Leivinia have been ignored ) Anyway, bottom line is, I need some feedback. Harsh criticism is highly appreciated, so don't hold back. Without further ado: Spoiler for Winter of the World:
Heavy Object-style title, plus reference to a song of one of my favorite band . Hope you like the COD MW-style timestamp. Thought I'd use it for this fic. A couple of head ups: SAR — Special Administrative Region R&D program — Research and development program And before someone point it out, yes, Clement XVI is the name of the Pope in Mass Effect, I figured that I should give the Pope an official and appropriate name since Kamachi-sensei didn't bother So yeah, exposition. That's the main reason I am kinda unsatisfied with this, too much words and description all over the place, and not that much dialogue. I have difficulty seeing what I should and what I should not expose and describe, so I end up pouring too much. After this, Jonah speaks to Kasper Hekmatyar and the discussion serves to do more exposition (principally AC and Russia's military might but also a bit about the September Space race, might as well try to fit the Endymion bit), albeit in a more relaxed way. I tried to put all the extra info in the discussion as to not render the intro too heavy, but I obviously failed. I want to desribe how much of a Crapsack world it is and try to put some reality in the politics because, let's be honest, Kamachi-sensei seems to have no idea how real-world politics work. By the way, the depressing state of the world? Most of it comes from the final episode of Jormungand The only things I added was the destruction of Tel Aviv (but not the war in the Middle East) and the EU having petrol platforms in Antartica, that's it. I even left some of the more over-the-top stuff, like Big Ben being blown up (I kid you not) and Russia changing into the NUSSR, the New Soviet Union, and starting the Cold War yet again. Anyway, you get the drill, like they say on FF.net, please review! I also decided that I too will announce when my favorite fics update: Suzumiya no Index chapter 23 up since the 11th. A crossover (by now, you should know my love of those) One of my top favorites, it has my full approval and recommendation. And this is not because, fun fact, it is actually the first fanfic I read, 2 years ago. It's because it is one of the few crossovers I read that was actually done right, the two universes mesh so well together this fic might as well have been canon. You might get confused by the timeline though, all I can say is that it takes place after Shiage joined ITEM, but in a timeline when the 0930 Incident didn't occur, yet Accelerator mentions fighting the Hound Dogs, and the Skill-Out uprising obviously happen even without the circumstances surrounding it. Confusing, but you can manage. Be warned though, this is more of a fic focusing more on the Suzumiya cast rather than the Raildex cast, but it's still enjoyable, look forward to the character interactions, the main good point of this fic. And if Ferret reads this...wait till you see Mugino, who is...yeah, can't really reveal anything, too spoilery Oh, and the fic is on TvTropes. With its own page. Anecdote: by looking at the archives, it seems the author, Hyakimaru, used to be a member of the forums before his/her hiatus (when I saw that the fic updated in my Alerts, I screamed like a little girl) Other fic of interest: He Will Surely Save, chapter 5 is up. Highly recommended, if only because Beetle 05 is the MC. Funny at first, but now a plot seems to slowly form. Also, everyone falling prey to the Kami-yan disease, and when I say everyone, I mean everyone.
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2013-10-16, 00:22 | Link #5532 |
That one guy
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What if... Kamijou-san is already going in his thirties. Still feeding the freeloading Index and working a boring desk job that offers below average wage? Add his misfortunes and he honestly has no time for anything else. Both Mr. and Mrs. Kamijou are quite eager to meet their grandchildren so one day Kamijou-san got a large crate on his 31st birthday. He opened it and found it stuffed with folders upon folders upon folders of information and pictures of... women. He quickly called his parents to see what was going on and they explained that they had put up a public ad for an omiai with their son. So begins open season on a certain unfortunate soul.
------ "This is the time." "Uwaaa!" "That girl is the dragon priestess. She governs the shrines of north, east, south and west." "Dragons are the same as angels, just masses of telesma given definite form." "We must keep a new angel from being born." "What will you do? If she joins with the dragon or if you destroy the dragon, she dies either way. The two are intrinsically linked as one yet separate existences." "I-" "Onii-chan I'm scared!" "I-" "Touma-onii-chaaaaan!" "OTOHIMEEEE!!!!" -------------------- Sorry AF, I can't touch Jormungand just as you can't touch SMT Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2013-10-16 at 01:24. |
2013-10-16, 04:16 | Link #5534 | |
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2013-10-16, 11:41 | Link #5536 | |
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@SmokinFerret: That was a good chapter, are you actually planning on having Touma join judgment? @demino: AIM Touma?
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2013-10-16, 11:49 | Link #5537 |
That one guy
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my version of dark Touma a few dozen pages back. An AIM being that is the coalescence of all ESPERS that have experienced the worst end of the darkside. Child errors, underground hit teams, skill outs, everyone. AIM Touma is composed of their powers and their memories of suffering. He is the crystallization of their hopes and dreams and his right arm simulates the rumored "negating" effect of a certain level 0. This is done by reverse engineering supernatura phenomena caused by espers and applying it across the board.
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2013-10-16, 12:26 | Link #5538 | |
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2013-10-16, 21:17 | Link #5540 | ||
Comrade Ferret
Join Date: May 2013
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Maybe, should I ever see an end of my Darkness Project, then I may do a Judgment Touma story. Can't promise nothing, but I can't deny that he would be a great candidate...especially if I were to have Gunha as his partner. Quote:
Your last attempt at Mugino was well within the range of believability considering it was only your second attempt at writing her(from what I've seen at least). It wasn't a bad interpretation of her, it worked, and you have this Ferret's support; since I'm apparently the Mugino expert in terms of writing. So don't get all depressed, give yourself more credit, and remember you can always ask me for help if you have problems or questions in regards to how to write her. It's why I'm here, after-all; for this Ferret is more than happy to lend a hand(paw) to anyone who asks.
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