2012-01-30, 21:14 | Link #20181 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Do I want to change the summary?
Nah. 願者上鉤 Instead, I just work on a trap.... (I am evil that way) I will just work on another story using 3rd person perceptive, with Ichika as lead character then introduce the OC. Darkness version. The original is about Love, school life and crazy Antic. Males in school are mentioned in the story due it being a plot point as they out-of-place. The Darkness variant is about unrequited love, forbidden experiment and madness... Males are not really that important hence excluded from the summary. The only male that really matter (plot dude) is the Crow Mage *(read that fairytale). This version give the explanation of why the males can pilot IS and revelation of Yuulin is actually a girl.... (I think I forgot to mention that in the original)
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2012-01-31, 02:07 | Link #20184 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Umm, canonically yes.
Probably to counter recoil. It was shown that PIC aren't perfect DESPITE Charl's claim about it, which means that I.S. are still affected by Kinetic energy, including recoil.
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2012-01-31, 02:16 | Link #20187 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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@ Demi
Maybe Okiura or the anime illustrator's fault, they might not know Rail cannon require both of the rails in contact with the projectile. That's where the friction issue came from. :| EDIT: Then again that rail gun STILL use starter charge and casing, what the hell.... Side note - I'M NOT GOING TO GIVE TATENASHI UPGRADE AND THATS FINAL! Because she already good enough to kick some sorry ass without it.
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2012-01-31, 02:20 | Link #20189 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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I'm not being biassed, I'm making a balance here. Tatenashi with an upgrade will cause the plot to collapse inward. :|
EDIT: And once again, only Rin and Cecily got Second Shift after Ichika, Gospel doesn't count.
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2012-01-31, 02:28 | Link #20191 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Inside I.S., she's kicking the same amount of ungodly ass, it's just that the villains and heroes around her are better than Canon (I look at you, Autumn).
Meanwhile, due to the lack of "Rule of Funny", her super strength are greatly downplayed, instead I'll portray her as uber-skilled fighter. Side note - I keep Houki's inferior performance consistently because Synchronization is serious business.
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2012-01-31, 02:30 | Link #20192 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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The beauty of railguns is the fact that the slug doesn't come in contact with the rails at all. It's suspended in the air by the intense magnetic forces between the two rails on opposing sides of the barrel(in this case above and under). However the design seems to be wasteful as the launcher looks like it could launch a 3-4 inch slug but only fires .8's. The fact that it's hollow is just insult to injury because most railguns require a very solid structure due to the intense force/stresses applied to the barrel during firing.(imagine the barrel trying to rip itself apart everytime it shoots)
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2012-01-31, 02:37 | Link #20193 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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Doing the same thing for Shadow (As seen on the Autumn draft), but rule of funny still applies here. Houki, Laura, and Tatenashi seem to have super strength as long as the scene isn't serious.
Side note - How old do you think Ichika was when he got kidnapped?
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2012-01-31, 02:38 | Link #20194 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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BUH. Rail gun requires contact between the conductive rails and ferromagnetic projectile. Therefore, stress, friction and temperature issues follows.
I agree that being hollow is a little stupid though, if they contains some kind of recoil dampening mechanism I'm not complain, still... @ Eras I certain it's when he's 12-13 based on a calculated timeline with Jak.
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2012-01-31, 02:48 | Link #20199 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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The sheer damage cause by the contact is the main hindrance, so far there's no material strong enough to sustain repeated fire. Power can come second, but wasn't infuriating as the durability issue.
@Eras Maybe he isn't when he's 15, but who knows when he's older (if he's not killed/kidnapped/turned evil that is).
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