Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[RadiantBeam]

I thought we'd already established that Hayate was married to everybody.

EDIT: Oh snap, I started a page! Pageclaim for Hayate and her harem!

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I thought we'd already established that Hayate was married to everybody.

It *WOULD* explain why she gets away with all the groping that she does.

*Goes off to read the Sound Stage where Hayate comments that Caro's almost at groping age.*

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Have a short short :3

Spoiler for Doujinshi Troubles:

"Hayate-chan!" Nanoha's loud voice echoed through the halls of section six, despite coming from behind the closed door of Hayate's office. "What is this!?" The teen threw down a magazine showing herself and Fate in a procative pose.

"Ah!" Hayate's eyes lit up as she grabbed the doujinshi, flipping through it with eyes of a wolf stalking it's prey. "The new NanoFate by Kama-sama!"

"Don't give pet names to hentai doujin circles!" Nanoha screamed, face red. "I thought they quit making these!"

"But, it's C76! I have five new ones already, they're really good... Cept I havn't seen any Cyclone ones, I wonder if they're late because they released the remakes of-"

"Hayate-chan!" Nanoha leaned forward, making the short girl sink back in her chair. "I can nuke their building can't I? Can't I?"

"Well, technically, they aren't doing anything illegal... see, your name is misspelled..."

Nanoha shook in both anger and embarrassment before giving up and hanging her head down. "...Fine..."

"Hayateeee!" Fate came in the room quickly, stumbling over herself in her rush. "Wha, wha, wha-what is this?" Her shaking hands held out a magazine.

Hayate got stars in he eyes. "whoa, Fate-chan you're super cute right now!"

"Tha-that's not the point!" Her dark red face flushed even more and she pushed the magazine into Hayate's face. "They drew my breasts too large, I look FAT!"

Nanoha fell over in shock while Hayate simply observed. "Ah, you're right."

"Waahhhhhhh!" Fate fell to her knees and let loose the waterworks. "I'm faaat!"

Nanoha hung her head and looked at the ground with wide eyes. 'What kind of friends do I have...?'

One word: Hilarous.

[deathcurse]

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

What, precisely, is stopping you from just adding her instead?

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I thought we'd already established that Hayate was married to everybody.

<.<

>.>

Wow...brings back the Parents day fic I don't think that there's a geometric shape to explain all that

[Nanya01]

Well, I can't say Hayate's married to everyone, but she is definitely involved with them somehow...

Anyway...

RadiantBeam and myself have done another session.

Zafira, Rein and several others get their debut!

Day in the Life

Chapter 8

"Saint Church"

Spoiler for Saint Church:

It was a slightly over-cast day on Midchilda, the sun was out, but there was a fairly thick covering of clouds in the sky.

At least it doesn't look like rain. A girl with long brown hair sighed as she walked next to three people she was rather surprised to see. "Hayate-san..."

"Hmm?" The short woman blinked at the cyborg. "What is it, Dieci?" Hayate was dressed in her military uniform, so Dieci doubted that she was there for fun.

Fidgeting, the cyborg, dressed in blue jeans and a green t-shirt continued to walk. Hayate was an incredibly nice person, but she still was nervous about talking to her. "Well, I know it's not my place to really know what's going on with the military, but I was wondering why you're going to the church today."

Hayate smiled and chuckled lightly at the nervousness that the cyborg had radiating off of her. "I'm just going to go see Knight Carim and discuss a few things." What they were, she wasn't going to tell.

"Rein wants to just see Carim-nee!" The small white-haired unison device smiled happily as she floated next to Hayate, also dressed in a brown outfit like Hayate. On the ground under her, plodding along silently was a large blue wolf, which was probably the real reason for Dieci's nervousness.

"What about you, Dieci? What brings you out to the Saint Church?" Hayate smiled softly as they got close to the building.

Chuckling, the cyborg waved at the people coming to see her. "Well, I wanted to see my sisters." She smiled lightly and walked forward on her own. "Deed, Otto, Sein!" She called out to her three sisters.

"Sister Schach." Hayate greeted the nun, who smiled and bowed to her. "Carim's waiting for us, I believe."

"Of course." She smiled and led the three into the church.

Sitting down at a table, Dieci smiled as her sisters sat down with her. "Dieci, what brings you here? Where's Wendi, Nove or her majesty?" Sein asked in curiosity.

"Wendi and Nove are playing games with Subaru, Ginga and Cinque-nee." Dieci pouted lightly, she wanted to keep playing with those paintball guns, they were fun! "And Vivio... She got sick."

At the mention of Vivio being sick, Deed, Otto, and Sein all seemed to stiffen.

"Her Majesty is ill?"

Dieci had to resist the urge to chuckle at the identical worried expressions on the faces of her three sisters.

"She's fine. I spoke to Yuuno before I headed over here, and he said according to Shamal she just has a mild case of the stomach flu. All she needs is some rest, and she'll be good as new in no time."

For a father with a sick child, Yuuno had looked unusually cheerful; but Dieci knew when to not ask questions she wouldn't like the answers to.

Otto blinked and looked at Deed, both of them nodded. "In such a case, we should get her some gift cards to let her know we are worried."

Dieci smiled softly. "She'll be happy. Yuuno said that she's been sleeping soundly since last night."

"I do hope her majesty will feel better soon." Deed said softly, "I rather miss talking to her when she's not here."

"Shamal said more than likely she picked the bug up at school, and it should pass quickly." Dieci smiled. "She'll be fine in a few days if she rests."

Otto nodded quietly to herself, seeming to think about this deeply.

After a moment, Sein spoke up again. "So how are Yuuno and the two Aces?"

"They're doing fine, Yuuno's still alive at any rate." Dieci shared a laugh with her sisters.

"Do you know what genders of their babies the two Aces are going to have?" Deed asked, her eyes betraying how calm her words were.

"I wasn't told." Dieci pouted slightly, well, she didn't ask either, so it was partly her fault.

Sein snapped her fingers. "Drat." She had wanted to know. "So, how are things with the rest of our sisters?"

"Pretty good, actually, Nove especially." Dieci had to admit, ever since Nove had that talk to Lindy, she seemed a lot less stressed out and calm.

"Has she gotten more excited about the babies?"

At that, Dieci had to chuckle. "She's warmed up to the idea," she confessed, "but she isn't half as excited about it as Wendi and Subaru."

"How about you? Have you finally calmed down at the thought of Nanoha-san having children?" Otto asked, blinking as Dieci suddenly twitched and fell over. "Dieci! Are you okay?"

"No... Pink beams... City-destruction... Everything goes boom!"

Sein groaned as she, Otto and Deed tried to calm down their sister. "Darn it, Otto, and I thought she was doing so well too."

The boyish cyborg blushed as she tried to sooth her sister. "I didn't know that she was still this bad."

(---)

"Hayate." The blond leader of the Church smiled as she saw the younger woman. "How are you?" Behind her, Zafira and Rein came into the room as well. "Rein! Zafira! It's good to see you."

"Hi, Carim!" Rein was quick to fly up to the blonde woman, while Zafira merely nodded a greeting. "We came because we have big news! Really big news!"

"Oh?" Carim lifted a brow, looking at Hayate curiously. "Is it good news or bad news?"

When Hayate simply smirked, Zafira sighed. "It's good news," he rumbled. "Hayate just enjoys being a tease."

"Mou, Zaffy, you're no fun," Hayate muttered.

"How many times have I told you not to call me that?"

"You never complain when Vivio calls you that."

"She's a little girl." The wolf said as he sat on the floor. "You're an adult."

"You still love me." Hayate smiled at him and gave him a hug. Zafira didn't say anything but he leaned into the hug a little.

Carim coughed lightly, smiling at the two. "Hayate... What is the news?"

Smiling at her older sister-figure, Hayate giggled and let go of Zafira. "Well, I know what children Fate-chan and Nanoha-chan are going to have."

"Oh?" She smiled at the brunette who had the largest smile on her face. "So, do I lose another bet?"

Hayate giggled and nodded. "Fate-chan's going to have a little girl and Nanoha-chan's going to have twin boys."

Carim sighed. "Darn it, I was hoping Nanoha would have girls too. Pretty much anyone who knew Fate called for a girl."

"Yep. So you know what that means." Hayate smirked and held out her hand. "Pay up."

Grumbling, Carim reached into her pocket. "Are they healthy?"

"Perfectly healthy and developing normally, according to Shamal. There's no way of knowing how strong they'll be yet." Hayate's smirk became a smile. "Signum and Vita are going to be godmothers."

Carim covered her mouth, holding back a laugh. "Oh my, I bet they were surprised to be offered the chance."

Hayate nodded with a small laugh. "Yes..."

"Rein was hoping that Hayate would get the role." The small unison device pouted. "But she didn't want it."

Hayate giggled at her Unison Device. "I'll have more fun as an aunt than a godmother."

Carim giggled at Hayate. "Oh, please don't tell me that you're going to be designing clothes for them."

"She already made clothes for their children." Zafira chimed in, getting a small blush from Hayate as Rein and Carim giggled.

"Zafira..." Hayate pouted at her Guardian Beast.

"What? They look rather cute, you just can't wait to be their aunt, can you?"

Hayate shrugged sheepishly.

"What can I say? They'll be adorable kids. And I can't help being happy about it! So many people thought they wouldn't last..."

"I'm honestly surprised it took them so long." Zafira muttered, causing the three to look at him in surprise. "What?"

"When did you notice?" Hayate asked him, still surprised that he said that as though it was obvious.

He seemed to shrug and smirk at the same time, despite not doing either. "Looking back, it's pretty obvious. Plus the greatest love comrades can have for each other is to jump to the other one's rescue."

"But I called it," Hayate said smugly. "I saw it coming from a mile away."

Carim and Rein both blinked as Zafira sighed.

"She did," the guardian beast muttered. "It was amazing to hear the theories she came up with to get them together."

"What theories?" Carim blinked as Zafira groaned.

"Now you did it."

"Well," Hayate started, her eyes practically sparkling in mischievousness, "I was tempted to use binds on the three, throw them into a room with one door, naked for a weekend and see what would happen."

Carim and Rein sweat-dropped as Hayate giggled. "I was thinking of finding an excuse to get the three on a long mission together, deep space, by themselves... Or maybe I would just play porn while they were together."

Both Carim and Rein face-faulted, it was more painful for Rein, since she was in mid-air.

"Getting them drunk didn't even enter my mind."

Zafira blinked.

"Wait... you had nothing to do with it?"

"Absolutely nothing." Hayate shrugged. "I mean sure, it was my party, but I didn't throw it with the intention of getting them together."

"But you saw them leave!"

"So? It never occured to me that they'd finally do something. I just thought they were drunk and helping each other home, they've done that a million times before." She smirked. "Imagine my surprise when I finally got a call through Raising Heart to ask why Nanoha-chan had missed her training session..."

"What did Raising Heart say?" Carim was curious, she didn't know too many of the details involved.

"She said, and I quote, "Master is busy with Fate and Yuuno". I asked her what she meant and she said "My master is having sex with Fate and Yuuno"."

Carim laughed slightly. "Oh my." Leave it to an Intelligence Device to speak so bluntly.

Hayate giggled and nodded. "Yeah, Vita was shocked stupid when she heard."

Carim giggled. "She was?"

"Stupid and silent. I think she spent at least a half hour just staring at the screen, trying to process what she'd just heard, while Signum and Shamal were trying not to laugh."

Hayate laughed as she recalled that day. "I had to go ahead and cancel the classes for everyone that day."

"Should I go and spread the word to everyone about the news?"

Shaking her head, Hayate winked at her older sister-figure. "No. I think that it would be better for Nanoha-chan, Fate-chan and Yuuno-kun to tell people."

"Of course. Now, Hayate..."

"Yes?"

"We need to discuss choosing clothes for the babies." Carim smiled in such a way that Hayate couldn't help but grin.

Zafira groaned and slipped out the door. The last thing he wanted was to be pulled into a discussion about clothing. What did they call it on Earth again? Oh yeah, cosplay.

[hideki101]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Well, I can't say Hayate's married to everyone, but she is definitely involved with them somehow...

Spoiler for Saint Church:

"How about you? Have you finally calmed down at the thought of Nanoha-san having children?" Otto asked, blinking as Dieci suddenly twitched and fell over. "Dieci! Are you okay?"

"No... Pink beams... City-destruction... Everything goes boom!"

Sein groaned as she, Otto and Deed tried to calm down their sister. "Darn it, Otto, and I thought she was doing so well too."

The boyish cyborg blushed as she tried to sooth her sister. "I didn't know that she was still this bad."

[/i]

Heh, Dieci has PSTD?

EDIT: Hi all, new blood here.

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by hideki101

Heh, Dieci has PSTD?

EDIT: Hi all, new blood here.

Ha ha ha! Yeah, something like that. Take a blaster buster from Nanoha and let's see how YOU like it?

And, welcome.

[RadiantBeam]

Hello, new blood.

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by hideki101

Heh, Dieci has PSTD?

EDIT: Hi all, new blood here.

Wow. I love this rash of new people. *happy dance* Welcome! Sit! Relax! Now, if I manage to write something Nanoha that doesn't suck by the end of the day, everything will have gone right today.

[Satashi]

Fate: Did someone say blood!?

Nanoha: calm down, honey. *offers cinnamon roll*

Fate: *happy face, sparkles*

Nanoha:... *pulls roll back*

Fate: *sad face, gloom lines*

Nanoha: *offers roll again*

Fate: *happy sparkles!*

Nanoha: *pulls back*

Fate: *sad, gloom*

Nanoha:... this is fun.

*tape swaps to side B*
Hayate: *guitar play* V-Fate!


~~~~

We all know that Hayate keeps a photo album in her desk. I wonder what other images she has in there? Snap shots through blinds in Nanoha/Fate's room that is contently across from hers. Doujin circles have to have reference images sometimes, afterall.

Welcome new people *confetti* join our chatroom, links under signature!

[deathcurse]

Originally Posted by hideki101

Heh, Dieci has PSTD?

EDIT: Hi all, new blood here.

New Blood: Hi! *waves*

About Hayate...are there any fics where she's, well, relatively serious? Most of the stuff you read about her are cracky

[hideki101]

Woah, that's a lot of welcome. Um, I'm not really a writer (actually, I don't like writing at all, I prefer math and science, but I'll write a lot when I feel like it. And(not or) when plot bunnies strike.) but I've been brainstorming sort of a Negima/Nanoha crossover starting at about the Mahora festival arc. Nothing really committed to bytes though.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by deathcurse

About Hayate...are there any fics where she's, well, relatively serious? Most of the stuff you read about her are cracky

There are a few lurking around here, but it's so much fun to write her all cracky and perverted.

Originally Posted by hideki101

Woah, that's a lot of welcome. Um, I'm not really a writer (actually, I don't like writing at all, I prefer math and science, but I'll write a lot when I feel like it. And(not or) when plot bunnies strike.) but I've been brainstorming sort of a Negima/Nanoha crossover starting at about the Mahora festival arc. Nothing really committed to bytes though.

Ooooh, a Nanoha/Negima crossover?

Consider me interested!

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by deathcurse

New Blood: Hi! *waves*

About Hayate...are there any fics where she's, well, relatively serious? Most of the stuff you read about her are cracky

Well, I know of one... She's slightly insane in it though. (Fits for the context tho...)

[Kurush]

Originally Posted by hideki101

Woah, that's a lot of welcome. Um, I'm not really a writer (actually, I don't like writing at all, I prefer math and science, but I'll write a lot when I feel like it. And(not or) when plot bunnies strike.) but I've been brainstorming sort of a Negima/Nanoha crossover starting at about the Mahora festival arc. Nothing really committed to bytes though.

Really? I've been thinking the same of a Negima/Nanoha crossover, but at a different time.

But it's either that, or that idea that I once submitted to someone, because I was too busy with another story I'm working on right now.

[Arkeus]

Originally Posted by Kurush

Really? I've been thinking the same of a Negima/Nanoha crossover, but at a different time.

But it's either that, or that idea that I once submitted to someone, because I was too busy with another story I'm working on right now.

a few of us have thought about a negima/nanoha crossover (me included) because the series have a lots fo similarities.

Mine was more of a tohara/negima cross though (TSAB didn't exist, etc).

[TheShinySword]

Why hello new blood. Or should we call you fresh meat?

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Why hello new blood. Or should we call you fresh meat?

I think fresh meat would be more accurate You're the best for pointing it out, Shiny (Weren't you promoted to Deity status, btw? )

[Re-Hikari]

Originally Posted by deathcurse

New Blood: Hi! *waves*

About Hayate...are there any fics where she's, well, relatively serious? Most of the stuff you read about her are cracky

Check out Himura Kiseki's Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha BetrayerS. We got a rather serious... if not gloomy, Hayate there ^^ And yes, there's a scanlation around the net somewhere

And Re-Hikari approves of Nanoha/Negima crossover!! I believe there's one around somewhere already no? Or am I imagining stuff

EDIT: Bleh, misread. Didn't see the "fics" part >.< Erm, in that case, there used to be one called MSLN Genesis, but it got removed another version got put up, but I think the new version got kinda abandoned after the second chapter >_>; Such a pity, I really liked the previous version >.<

[TheShinySword]

Not here but there might be one on FF.net