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*Sob* Back to the grind, then... Quote:
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And to be frank, I found Scaglietti and the Numbers to be underwhelming villains anyway, so I have no real problem with topping them, either. Last edited by Moczo; 2010-10-27 at 08:50. |
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2010-10-27, 09:19 | Link #27582 | |
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Two, TSAB ships can fly around planetside. This could... cause problems if the ship's habitable space was a sphere with part of its "up" pointed towards the surface of the planet. |
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2010-10-27, 09:39 | Link #27583 |
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Ah-hem.
You must have mis-read me. I didn't say 'it works because the ship is spherical and logically an AG system like the one I described requires a spherical design'. We do know what the ships look like, after all, and they're clearly not spheres. I said, 'it works because magic'. A wizard did it. He used magic, and gravity happened. ... have I sufficiently shown that my grasp of hard Sci-fi is nonexistent and I actually just included that passage as an offhanded joke? |
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2010-10-27, 17:35 | Link #27586 | ||||||
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Er...you might also want to review the inconsistent capitalization of Arc-en-Ciel throughout the scene on the Black Cats' ship. Quote:
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2010-10-27, 18:25 | Link #27588 | ||
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Hey, go ahead. Just means I managed to make the villains likable, and considering they're my OCs that makes me quite happy! |
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2010-10-27, 19:07 | Link #27589 | ||
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Hey, no worries, man. Mistakes slip in sometimes, it happens to everyone.
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2010-10-28, 09:08 | Link #27592 | |
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Umm, right. Before you start crying again, I'll inform you that this one is probably just me not understanding some parts: Spoiler for from chapter 26:
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