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Old 2011-04-11, 14:01   Link #30361
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I vote Yuuno and Hayate share the position of leader of the harem.
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Old 2011-04-11, 15:44   Link #30362
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Haven't written in a loooong while, and especially not for Nanoverse. But as things tend to go...

I don't think anyone here remembers my very old fic (and crappy stylistically) "Fate of the Reapers". For some reason it was quite popular. In either case, what is below is its spiritual retcon sequel. I have deleted the old fic, so details are murky, hence the retcon.

But what can be said is it's CC-focused, in a Terminator-ish post-apoc setting, without being grimdark, without excessive gore and with a special focus on Hayate.

If it's something worth continuing, lemme know. Note of caution: Chapter 1 is extremely jumpy. It's just to get up to speed. The rest of the chapters will focus on one character at a time.


Reapers Revolution
Spoiler for Prologue:


Spoiler for Chapter 1: The Current Situation:
I find the Terminator ideas interesting here, especially since we already have some characters who are partially cyborg/not human (Subaru and family, and Wolkenritters, etc) that could lead into interesting "prejudice against non-humans" issues--at least, some was hinted at already with Hayate's distrust of the reverse-engineered Reapers.

And where is Fate now, I wonder...having her be against, or maybe against, the other Aces could only lead to some interesting drama .
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Old 2011-04-11, 18:55   Link #30363
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Spoiler for Extra MD before I go back to regular grind:
To be honest, I hope it's the last pit stop before they reach Mid. I for one am tired to wait longer and longer for the Seikou/Nanoha confrontation.
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Old 2011-04-11, 20:29   Link #30364
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After the arc on this current world concludes, things will start moving forward to Mid.
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Old 2011-04-12, 04:07   Link #30365
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[...]that could lead into interesting "prejudice against non-humans" issues--at least, some was hinted at already with Hayate's distrust of the reverse-engineered Reapers.
Ack, you just gave me a subplot bunny. God dammit. Now I need to evolve that.
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Old 2011-04-12, 20:20   Link #30366
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I vote Yuuno and Hayate share the position of leader of the harem.
Well, now I have a feeling when we get there, the vote will be terribly one sided.
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Old 2011-04-12, 20:57   Link #30367
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Well, now I have a feeling when we get there, the vote will be terribly one sided.
At least I'm honest.
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Old 2011-04-12, 21:04   Link #30368
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Ack, you just gave me a subplot bunny. God dammit. Now I need to evolve that.
Go, bunnies! *feeds plotbunnies carrots*

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Well, now I have a feeling when we get there, the vote will be terribly one sided.
It was called Hayate's Lesbian Army for a reason .
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Old 2011-04-13, 05:25   Link #30369
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Haven't written in a loooong while, and especially not for Nanoverse. But as things tend to go...

I don't think anyone here remembers my very old fic (and crappy stylistically) "Fate of the Reapers". For some reason it was quite popular. In either case, what is below is its spiritual retcon sequel. I have deleted the old fic, so details are murky, hence the retcon.

But what can be said is it's CC-focused, in a Terminator-ish post-apoc setting, without being grimdark, without excessive gore and with a special focus on Hayate.

If it's something worth continuing, lemme know. Note of caution: Chapter 1 is extremely jumpy. It's just to get up to speed. The rest of the chapters will focus on one character at a time.


Reapers Revolution
Spoiler for Prologue:


Spoiler for Chapter 1: The Current Situation:
Spoiler for Hey, I think I remember this one!:


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Well, now I have a feeling when we get there, the vote will be terribly one sided.
Chrono's?

...what? Isn't that the reason he hasn't showed up yet? Busy maintaining his ever-growing harem?
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Old 2011-04-13, 05:42   Link #30370
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Yes, yes it is~~
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Old 2011-04-13, 07:06   Link #30371
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Yes, yes it is~~
Now that's a familiar read. It doesn't have the old dry feel of the original, though. Plaudits for that - but now that we've come to some sorta post-apocalypse conflict, I can't help but feel that I'm not really in a post-apocalyptic conflict: the mood making could improve somewhat beyond giving us an order of battle (the whole deal with Subaru and Teana is a fair attempt. I'd personally have preferred to see it longer though).

Otherwise, the whole situation occasionally feels like a cross between Transformers 2 and Terminator. But nevermind, I put that down to your ever spare style, and to the fact that this is what, Chapter 1?

Now let's see if my schedule will let me continue glassing this fic. And hopefully your schedule holds up enough for it to get somewhere.

P.S: Beware the subplot bunny: unless you're prepared to go places with the theme...
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Old 2011-04-13, 17:39   Link #30372
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Hello folks!

Horribly late to join the Nanoha train, I am. But what do you know? The write strikes anyway, hard and pitilessly and turned me into a writing drone.

Fate-centric x Nanoha with the rest of the cast in dashes here and there, taking everyone's favorite enforcer through the small and big moments of life, love and everything in between. Pretty long piece, which turned out rather well. Hope you enjoy!

p.s Fighting Fate is an awesome write ^^.

When I Think About Flying


Spoiler for Excerpts: Where Yagami Hayate begins devolving Investigator Harlaown by knocking back drinks. In. spades.:
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Old 2011-04-14, 01:33   Link #30373
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Hello folks!

Horribly late to join the Nanoha train, I am. But what do you know? The write strikes anyway, hard and pitilessly and turned me into a writing drone.

Fate-centric x Nanoha with the rest of the cast in dashes here and there, taking everyone's favorite enforcer through the small and big moments of life, love and everything in between. Pretty long piece, which turned out rather well. Hope you enjoy!

p.s Fighting Fate is an awesome write ^^.

When I Think About Flying


Spoiler for Excerpts: Where Yagami Hayate begins devolving Investigator Harlaown by knocking back drinks. In. spades.:
I usually spend my time lurking on AnimeSuki recently. Very tentatively lurking on this very particular fanfiction thread though, ever since Satashi posted stories here.

Anyway, I wanted to spend my time to applaud this particular piece. I loved how you portrayed Fate and how you expanded on certain various important aspects of her life.

And of course, I sniggered a few times at work. Hayate's antics is awesome.
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Old 2011-04-14, 12:20   Link #30374
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Hello folks!

Horribly late to join the Nanoha train, I am. But what do you know? The write strikes anyway, hard and pitilessly and turned me into a writing drone.

Fate-centric x Nanoha with the rest of the cast in dashes here and there, taking everyone's favorite enforcer through the small and big moments of life, love and everything in between. Pretty long piece, which turned out rather well. Hope you enjoy!

p.s Fighting Fate is an awesome write ^^.

When I Think About Flying


Spoiler for Excerpts: Where Yagami Hayate begins devolving Investigator Harlaown by knocking back drinks. In. spades.:
The small mention of Vivio and Lutecia made me squeal like you would not believe.

Beyond that, though, this story left me with warm fuzzies. I'm not usually a big fan of NanoFate family stories, for some reason or another, but this one hit me in the right place and left me with a happy smile.

*adds to favorites*

Also, if you expand on Shamal and Signum's backstory, I will love you forever and ever.
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Old 2011-04-14, 13:34   Link #30375
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Well that got longer than intended.

Reapers Revolution
Spoiler for Chapter 2: Operation Capital Void:



Spoiler for Weapon and Suit Extras: Because the author sucks at description. Also, he loves infodumps.:
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Old 2011-04-14, 16:17   Link #30376
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Hello folks!

Horribly late to join the Nanoha train, I am. But what do you know? The write strikes anyway, hard and pitilessly and turned me into a writing drone.

Fate-centric x Nanoha with the rest of the cast in dashes here and there, taking everyone's favorite enforcer through the small and big moments of life, love and everything in between. Pretty long piece, which turned out rather well. Hope you enjoy!

p.s Fighting Fate is an awesome write ^^.

When I Think About Flying


Spoiler for Excerpts: Where Yagami Hayate begins devolving Investigator Harlaown by knocking back drinks. In. spades.:
Oh my god, I just squealed XD. Signum x Shamal, and Vivio x Lutecia? Sooooo cute .

*agrees with RB* I will worship you if you do more around Signum and Shamal's backstory .

It was a different kind of "NanoFate family" fic than others I've read, and it's not in anything big, just little things in many places that just made this story so awesome for me.

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Well that got longer than intended.

Reapers Revolution
Spoiler for Chapter 2: Operation Capital Void:

Spoiler for Weapon and Suit Extras: Because the author sucks at description. Also, he loves infodumps.:
LOL, Teana's little solo mission was pretty exciting and fun to read.

Hm, I wonder who saved Teana? And initially, right after Teana blacked out then woke up disorientated, I wondered if she had been secretly cyborg-ified more during that time XD.....

I do have to say though, while I think it's interesting how you indent in your fic posts this time it was far too narrow for me to read comfortably . I'm used to skimming for a certain horizontal width, so the narrowness made me gloss over the lines as I read.

How long are you thinking this story will run?
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Old 2011-04-14, 18:03   Link #30377
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Well that got longer than intended.
Spoiler for Weapon and Suit Extras: Because the author sucks at description. Also, he loves infodumps.:
I haven't got the time to read the story yet, but the above magitech porn made me giddy . Especially Teana's Battle-rifle/shotgun/sniper weapon - that idea had haunted me for a long time but I never know what to make of it
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Old 2011-04-15, 03:57   Link #30378
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LOL, Teana's little solo mission was pretty exciting and fun to read.

Hm, I wonder who saved Teana? And initially, right after Teana blacked out then woke up disorientated, I wondered if she had been secretly cyborg-ified more during that time XD.....

I do have to say though, while I think it's interesting how you indent in your fic posts this time it was far too narrow for me to read comfortably . I'm used to skimming for a certain horizontal width, so the narrowness made me gloss over the lines as I read.

How long are you thinking this story will run?
*slaps self* OK, the indention will be gone henceforth.

I'm not really sure. I'm writing on the fly, stuffing a lot of good and bad ideas I've had in the past to make it fun to write. Can't be much longer than 8 chapters or so.

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I haven't got the time to read the story yet, but the above magitech porn made me giddy . Especially Teana's Battle-rifle/shotgun/sniper weapon - that idea had haunted me for a long time but I never know what to make of it
Excellent. I think I made the right choice not to stuff it in the fic itself. I just love doing encyclopaedia-like entries with stuff that takes too much space to explain/show.
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Old 2011-04-15, 07:47   Link #30379
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I'm thinking of making a Steins;Gate/Nanoha fict...
The problem is the resources of Nanoha and Steins;Gate materials (S;G is not yet finished anyway...)
can you guys give me links?
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Old 2011-04-15, 22:49   Link #30380
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And here, we have a piece inspired by DezoPenguin's "I Didn't Know You Could Take It Literally". It feels a bit iffy to me, but maybe I'm being too critical of it. Might be because I'm not used to writing Lutecia post-Shadow arc.

In any event:

Spoiler for Growing Pains:


The title is kind of a pun, mostly on the fact that even though Lutecia is starting to get better, she still has a ways to go yet. Poor Cia, she just can't win.
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