2011-12-06, 04:31 | Link #11461 |
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where did this Amagami-level weird kisses come from again? I'd say weirder the better, like Amagami, so... Back of her knee!
and guys aren't we forgetting that Class 1-2 is doing an Oriental Cafe for the festival? Have Everyone in chinese dress, even Irish!!!!
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2011-12-06, 04:34 | Link #11463 |
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@ Meistah - Back of the knee? How would he pull that off? Unless he trips her and kisses her there on purpose, I doubt he could say it was an accident at all.
Asked a question in the last post of the previous page. @ Jak - No problem. Besides, having a high ranking officer who's 61 tanking with the mains too much is going to look retarded if he does it all the time. Better to limit it.
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2011-12-06, 04:35 | Link #11464 | |
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(Just have Dan dragged by Ichika, if he's present anyway, make him Shyguy!Dan) Yes, this is inspired by Ouran Host Club... EDIT: AWWW, guess we'll have to go with oriental cafe... My mind is filled with steamy Ikaron Image, so yes, the Bonfire as background. At first, Irish will assume it's "anywhere but lips" again, but then Karon wil correct him aaand... uh, excuse me.... *NOSEBLEED* (and then everyone freaked out that Karon get more hickeys )
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2011-12-06, 04:44 | Link #11465 |
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@ Senpai - Doesn't the Shota label go to Irish? That is, unless he cross dresses which makes it moot. Anyway, I'll include Dan in and have him serve Utsuho and Honne
Then how exactly does the kiss start? I planned for it to be something a bit like this. Dialogue only. Spoiler:
Any tips or suggestions?
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2011-12-06, 04:45 | Link #11466 |
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What is this that I dont
She'd notice the hicky though, in fact, the whole act of Irish kissing her anywhere should make her blush terribly. If he's fast like acting on instinct, Karon wouldnt have stopped him until mid-act.
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2011-12-06, 04:48 | Link #11467 |
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@ Meistah - Made a post above that shows how the final kiss is started. Does it look OOC?
Anyway, I thought Karon was chaste? Why would she blush about it since it's part of the play? Irish even says he's just playing along so they can finish.
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*NOSEBLEED*
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2011-12-06, 05:02 | Link #11469 |
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@ Box - How's that case coming along?
@ Senpai - So the butler cafe actually ends up making more than all the other classes despite being the smallest shop The power of Bishie's and Shota's is amazing.... @ Meistah and Senpai - Small continuation. Spoiler:
Is it okay?
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2011-12-06, 05:07 | Link #11471 |
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The difference is setting! I thot I was an accident or something.
If it were as that short you wrote, its PERFECT. But she'd still be blushing (in a good way) in private later, as its still her first kiss. Unless she was Ichika, then there'd be no afterthought. She's chaste, but she's not Ichika. And that's another reason it'll have an effect on her even if not immediately.
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2011-12-06, 05:07 | Link #11472 |
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@ Box - Why don't you let Ichika actually get any? I'm doing it in the revised daydreams drafts later.
@ Meistah - I posted a small (dialogue only) scene that leads up to the kiss. Is it okay and Karon isn't too OOC right?
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2011-12-06, 05:09 | Link #11473 | |
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2011-12-06, 05:35 | Link #11480 |
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@ Senpai - I don't understand, does that mean it's good? Also, need to figure out how to show Karon being in deliria more than I posted just now. Irish is pretty much unresponsive.
@ Box - What the fuck!? Sorry, but I might not read as much as I was supposed to. Can you PLEASE make it a happy ending? Don't make me do the tsundere act.
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