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Eratas123 · 2011-12-06, 06:29

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Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

"Embarassing words are forbidden"

???

There wasn't any embarassing word in the draft

Anyway, why were you asking the heat question?

demino_hellsin · 2011-12-06, 06:31

If Rong is in close contact with 3 monopole engines at once I think that I might write a part that he could overload them and kill himself in the process. The engines aren't supposed to produce high temperatures but they do produce a tremendous amount of energy. The other 2 are for post upgrade, Astra Exodus only has 1.

Hazukashi = embarassing

Seirifu = words, lines, one-liners

Kinshii = deriving it from the word "kin" which I believe is forbidden.

Not really a translator but took a shot at it.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-06, 06:32

Quote:

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

If Rong is in close contact with 3 monopole engines at once I think that I might write a part that he could overload them and kill himself in the process.

You're killing him off? Anyway, I'm not good with temperature science so I'm no help.

demino_hellsin · 2011-12-06, 06:35

Well I don't plan to actually. But if the masses demand his blood, then his blood they shall have

Though I could just troll them and make him survive it anyway.

Saint X · 2011-12-06, 06:36

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Riz: Hazukashii seirifu kinshiiiii!!

*Stabs Kha with an oar*

NO U

Eratas123 · 2011-12-06, 06:38

Quote:

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Well I don't plan to actually. But if the masses demand his blood, then his blood they shall have

Though I could just troll them and make him survive it anyway.

So much for that lecture of "You're not treating the characters as individual beings" you gave me before

Looks like you're not too different in that regard after all.

demino_hellsin · 2011-12-06, 06:41

Read "could just" as "definitely will". I like Rong too much to kill him off.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-06, 06:43

Quote:

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Read "could just" as "definitely will". I like Rong too much to kill him off.

I also said I "might" kill of Irish, didn't stop you from lecturing me even though I said multiple times that it's dependent on the story progression.

demino_hellsin · 2011-12-06, 06:45

Difference of the matter era-era "I won't kill Rong off, ever."

EDIT: In other words, I was joking

Eratas123 · 2011-12-06, 06:50

@ demino_hellsin - You still need to lessen his stu abilities if you want to get more positive views. OC fics are already discriminated against in the archive, males even more so due to the high amount of sues the archive had. Did you remove some of the sue traits?

demino_hellsin · 2011-12-06, 06:54

Dunno yet. My writing has frozen for some reason. I'm stuck between writing Rong out as he's supposed to be and writing Rong with fixes.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-06, 06:58

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Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Dunno yet. My writing has frozen for some reason. I'm stuck between writing Rong out as he's supposed to be and writing Rong with fixes.

We're not asking you to ax his character, we're asking you to tone down his knowledge and some of his overpowered skills. If you choose to keep them, just prepare for the consequences of what'll happen.

@ Box - Still a downer ending? I hope not

HasuMasu · 2011-12-06, 07:01

I don't know, maybe I'm under the influence of exams, or the manga I've recently gotten into.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-06, 07:04

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Originally Posted by Detective-san

I don't know, maybe I'm under the influence of exams, or the manga I've recently gotten into.

Please~ I'll do a daydream of a girl you like in "Daydreams" if you do it

You won't be disappointed

HasuMasu · 2011-12-06, 07:06

I wonder why you're so against downer endings.

Though I think what I have in mind is more appropriately called a bitter-sweet ending, yeah, I think I probably should've used that from the beginning.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-06, 07:09

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Originally Posted by Detective-san

I wonder why you're so against downer endings.

Though I think what I have in mind is more appropriately called a bitter-sweet ending, yeah, I think I probably should've used that from the beginning.

What? Ichika confesses and she says no? If that's the case, that's more of a case of blueballs rather than bittersweet ending.

HasuMasu · 2011-12-06, 07:16

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

What? Ichika confesses and she says no? If that's the case, that's more of a case of blueballs rather than bittersweet ending.

Nope, Ichika acts like a tsundere for most of the story, then starts to open up, but ofcourse Tatenashi goes missing, and upon solving the case...

~~...she gets killed off...by herself.~~

Eratas123 · 2011-12-06, 07:25

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Originally Posted by Detective-san

Nope, Ichika acts like a tsundere for most of the story, then starts to open up, but ofcourse Tatenashi goes missing, and upon solving the case...

~~...she gets killed off...by herself.~~

........Nothings changed. I guess i won't be looking forward to this as much as I thought I would. Good luck though.

Side note - I'm not against downer endings since I write about POV characters who get killed off for real. I just don't like endings that are both Shoot the Shaggy Dogs and The Hero Dies since that means I just watched for nothing.

Compare:

Saw - Saw has endings where the heroes die, I still watch them since they do end up achieving what they tried to do or as much as they could. Saw 6 was a good example of this.

Final Destination - I know they're going to die accomplishing nothing so why bother watching? Everyone's dead with no sense of accomplishment at all.

StratoSpear · 2011-12-06, 07:25

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Thanks, those cores supposedly sealed/ destroyed, but actually 'refurbished' by using various method, often dangerous/ harmful to the pilot even though the reactivation process was successful. The only one that actually achieved reactivation without such drawback is Iori Senbei, even then the result are much weaker than the original and it's evolving capability is severely limited. However, it also has advantage being usable by anyone regardless of aptitude level or gender.

This kicked the plot of To-Love-Ru Stratos

And maybe some sort of support for me fic. I don't recall saying explicitly what is the Iwaki core is derived from aside from the blunt "Outdated IS Tech".

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Jak - Not sure about Stratos, but I think Rain will think it's good. Still, a badass old man is new and refreshing which is good enough for me.

Badass grandpas are always good since they're usually in for moral support and ocassionally combat support (And they tend to kick ass when they do).

Thumbs up.

HasuMasu · 2011-12-06, 07:27

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

........Nothings changed. I guess i won't be looking forward to this as much as I thought I would. Good luck though.

Side note - I'm not against downer endings since I write about POV characters who get killed off for real. I just don't like endings that are both Shoot the Shaggy Dogs and The Hero Dies since that means I just watched for nothing.

Compare:

Saw - Saw has endings where the heroes die, I still watch them since they do end up achieving what they tried to do or as much as they could. Saw 6 was a good example of this.

Final Destination - I know they're going to die accomplishing nothing so why bother watching? Everyone's dead with no sense of accomplishment at all.

Hmm, I'm not sure about the died for nothing part, her death has some meaning to it, ne?

"Ichika-kun, I'm sorry you only had half of me."

2011-12-06, 06:50	Link #11510
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ demino_hellsin - You still need to lessen his stu abilities if you want to get more positive views. OC fics are already discriminated against in the archive, males even more so due to the high amount of sues the archive had. Did you remove some of the sue traits? __________________

2011-12-06, 07:01	Link #11513
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	I don't know, maybe I'm under the influence of exams, or the manga I've recently gotten into. __________________

2011-12-06, 07:06	Link #11515
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	I wonder why you're so against downer endings. Though I think what I have in mind is more appropriately called a bitter-sweet ending, yeah, I think I probably should've used that from the beginning. __________________

2011-12-06, 06:31	Link #11502
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	If Rong is in close contact with 3 monopole engines at once I think that I might write a part that he could overload them and kill himself in the process. The engines aren't supposed to produce high temperatures but they do produce a tremendous amount of energy. The other 2 are for post upgrade, Astra Exodus only has 1. Hazukashi = embarassing Seirifu = words, lines, one-liners Kinshii = deriving it from the word "kin" which I believe is forbidden. Not really a translator but took a shot at it.

2011-12-06, 06:35	Link #11504
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Well I don't plan to actually. But if the masses demand his blood, then his blood they shall have Though I could just troll them and make him survive it anyway.

2011-12-06, 06:41	Link #11507
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Read "could just" as "definitely will". I like Rong too much to kill him off.

2011-12-06, 06:45	Link #11509
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Difference of the matter era-era "I won't kill Rong off, ever." EDIT: In other words, I was joking

2011-12-06, 06:54	Link #11511
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Dunno yet. My writing has frozen for some reason. I'm stuck between writing Rong out as he's supposed to be and writing Rong with fixes.