2012-01-04, 22:39 | Link #16402 |
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Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Eratas: Lemme channel my friend Jordan here...
Ahem... "You wanna know how to write fluff and WAFF? You have to think of all the things that are good in this world, the things that touch your heart, and try to convey them in your story by having your characters experience said things, things like them, or the emotions connected to them. Odds are, if you're touched by what you wrote, the chances are that others shall be too. But if you just wanna give them so much sugary goodness that it gives them cavities, then do this. Take all the goodness you know, sugar it up to a diabetic level, then cram it down your reader's throat that it induces delightful constipation and makes them shit technicolor rainbows! And if you did a good job, you can see those rainbows from space. SPACE. What the hell do you think caused the double rainbow? What the hell are the odds of two rainbows appearing naturally in the same place? I belive it was caused by WAFF overdose. Or aliens. Or the Illuminati. Either one." The exact words of my friend Jordan. Also, Kyuukai's got slight agateophobia. And VERY slight Anglophobia. There's the Autophobia he shares with Canan. There's also severe cases of Necrophobia and Thanatophobia. |
2012-01-04, 22:41 | Link #16405 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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@Eras
Depends on talent, really. Usually took few months to be a decently good chef (like Houki for example), some can take few weeks. Experiment could screw it up of course (I look at you Cecilia...) @Rain That Jordan... he's really God of Fluff, and he was right. HAIL JORDAN @Jak Then it's a go.
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2012-01-04, 22:52 | Link #16408 |
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@ Senpai - Alright then I have another segment planned She lives at the school dorm, right?
@ Rain - Kyuukai won't have as much screentime anynore and neither will Irish. I should probably focus on Ichika and the cast as well.
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2012-01-04, 23:08 | Link #16412 |
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Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Eratas: I'm sure everyone in the IS-verses have a case of Chifuyuphobia.
In the cases of fears, I'm planning for the fears to get to Kyuukai so badly, that it's hard to tell whether he's sane or not at the moment on some days. Actually, Chifuyu will constantly question whether he's honestly mentally stable at all. Spoiler for Chifuyu's opinions of Koneko:
It's understandable, but remember, it's your story, with limits only set by you. You could have them equally share spotlight, or have Ichika do it all. But Irish is a fantastic character who needs more light shed upon himself. I'm fine with Kyuukai not having as much spotlight, but his scenes should at least share the same impact, and should be written with a decent amount of care. Not to mention that he has a fic almost fully dedicated to him. @ Zero: I had the same reaction. After thinking about it in awkward silence for a while. |
2012-01-04, 23:12 | Link #16415 |
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Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Eratas: He doesn't have to go to the academy, to be honest. He could be elsewhere, travelling around and showing glimpses of the Shadow-verse world to the readers.
It's either that, or he's illegally there, spying on the IS and making sure his mother's other "babies" (Byakushiki and all related tech) are okay. He'll be living and helping out at an orphanage across the river, but spends quite a bit of the day at ISA, scoping around, training, flirting, and trying to convince an adamant Chifuyu to visit Tabane. His presence is technically illegal, but since Chifuyu's fine with it, everyone else is. |
2012-01-04, 23:15 | Link #16416 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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@ Jak - Then make your own choice. I don't know about your characters since you always keep their backgrounds secret.
@ Rain - I'll probably not include Koneko in Shadow since she seems out of place. That draft of yours proved it. The reason I'm turning down their screentime is because they're foreigners to the IS verse so they shouldn't hog the spotlight. Also, as you said earlier, Kyuukai has his own fic and I'm not dedicating fics to OC's. Irish is an Accelerator copy so he's not unique either. EDIT: All of them have to be at the Academy. Sorry, but I don't want to play favorites to anyone. Even Irish is at the academy and he's out of place there. There's a reason for him being there, though.
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2012-01-04, 23:23 | Link #16420 |
Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Eratas: That was one option, but I'd like to keep my review count where it is now rather than starting it over with a sequel fic. I'll just organize them through seasons under the banner and page organization of Heart of the Machine.
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