2012-04-01, 10:25 | Link #27922 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Palm strike allows less injuries but more impact sometimes, so it's understandable (though just like what we discuss, it's hyped up for the rule of cool)
Yeah, except Ran, poor girl insist that real Ichika wouldn't be so serenely brutal. Her subsequent development will be expanded in spinoff but for now will be left hanging. (Also, that purple haired chick is Aikawa, and she's throwing a softdrink to distract a yankee girl, so Rin can get close) Fanon: Ichika, Canon: Probably Chifuyu, or Tabane.
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2012-04-01, 20:37 | Link #27930 |
Awe of She
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Orlando
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People like Chifuyu and Ichika can supercede physics for a while to pull off awesome stuff. Tabane just flat out ignores physics...
And fanboyism aside, I think that Chifuyu is the strongest on ISA's side since, well, she did wield an IS Katana without the benefit of an IS suit that we've seen, but then again, Ichika almost repeated that same feat against Laura, but he did have a partial deploy so...
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2012-04-01, 20:42 | Link #27931 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Partial deployment negated it true, but still quite a feat considering most of the time, you have four limbs generating a suspension field rather than one (at least according to my & Box's theory)
Besides, bladed weapon don't have recoil issues, so I though it's plausible (given that Chifuyu is strong and Ichika is a muscular guy)
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2012-04-01, 20:48 | Link #27932 |
Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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I MISSED SO MUCH!
Way too lazy to sweep through all the pages I've missed. Absurdly long list of things needed to be taken care of and done: 1. Heart of the Machine Redux (the rewrite) 2. Across the Multiverse Chapter 3 3. Dancing in the Rain (Rafael Dunois Oneshot) 4. On The Winds of Change Chapter 4 (HoA fanfiction) 5. Find the will in me to painlessly euthanize adorable plot bunnies 6. Pamper Chiyo 7. Deal with school 8. Deal with work 9. To Hell and Back Chapter 3 10. Kill people over video games 11. Cut back Minecraft addiction 12. Push away the attractive game that is LOL 13. Stress 14. Try to cope with expensive new hobby that is anime figurine collecting 15. Kill more people over video games 16. Euthanize more plot bunnies 17. Pamper Chiyo some more while she trolls the world by faking a few things about herself 18. Save potentially dying fanfics 19. Keep up with this site 20. Try not to get myself killed during things #1-19 ... That's my life from now until September. Any recommendations on things to do first? |
2012-04-01, 20:54 | Link #27933 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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You want to try to cope with this site? Try not to die
On a more serious note, everyone resumed their writing just now after being idle for 1 month, more or less. I think we can have quality-talk again. Author outside Animesuki also rather prolific (4-5 fic shown up last week alone) As for which fic you want to write, it's depend on your mood.
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2012-04-01, 21:18 | Link #27935 |
Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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Well, I'm in a writing mood, my girlfriend's in a trolling mood. I believe she changed her gender on the sites we both frequent together to male, just to troll me... Man, that was an embarrassing explanation to people.
But I'm in the mood to get Dancing in the Rain (first oneshot ever) completed in about 17000 words, and have it be an utter emotional rollercoaster from beginning to end. Here's my current timeline and location in order of written events in Rafael's point of view: -Rafael's childhood on a rural farm in France -Going to a boarding school in Paris for his elementary to high school years, having earned a fully paid scholarship from a long time family friend -Life on his own as a university student, meeting Arianne (the name of the oneshot plays big parts here) -Marriage -Graduation, simple family life -Career in military opens up, offered a job in weapons programming/design -Charlotte's born -Torn between loyalty to country, and loyalty to family -Made worse when IS is introduced to the world, and it becomes his task to produce France's first IS -Divorce, Arianne claims rights to Charlotte without a fight, and they leave without a trace -In his grief, he dives into work -Rafael Revive released due to his constant effort -Years later, Rafael finds Charlotte, with Arianne dying of illness. -Manages to reconcile with Arianne, a short marriage ceremony later, and she dies happily as Rafael's wife as custody of Charlotte transfers to him -Takes an increased effort to connect with his daughter, only to find that he can't even look her in the eye without guilt overtaking him -The distance between the two drives them apart, and he takes an increased effort to avoid her, but still trying to make sure she had the best of everything and the happiest life possible from behind the curtains -Life as the CEO of Dunois Corp, intense amount of technobabble, daily life, and awkward attempts and planning to get to know his daughter. -Present Day, after Charlotte reveals her gender, Rafael reviews his life, has an intense emotional resolution, and decides to put his all into getting to know the most important person in his life -Extreme spoiler that shall not be spoiled. And that's my quickly rushed through plans. Anyway, I've got a ZnT fic put on hold, a Persona fic, and my original story ideas that I have wanted to write forever. Only the first two are scheduled for the chopping block, but the latter are on life support until I can find a cure for them. |
2012-04-01, 21:37 | Link #27937 |
Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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So? Heart of the Machine was my third story ever, and the first to get more reviews than 7. It starred a Gary Stu who was practically a robot who played off whatever the other person wanted, and then kicked ass with half assed logic and overpowered weapons. Then, it turned into an emotional whirlwind. Then it's popularity rose into the sky, and hit space. Now it's stuck there, slowly dying in the cold... It pains me to read some of the earlier chapters, and compared to the quality both my readers and I have gotten used to, they are now subpar...
But still, your story is great. Don't put your efforts down, and just keep working at it. |
2012-04-01, 21:40 | Link #27938 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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My Beta just graduated so I think I can resume kicking myself on the brain.
Anyway, need some idea: Can you please postulate PT objective besides the classic world domination and women conquer? With juicy detail if you can.
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2012-04-01, 21:49 | Link #27939 |
Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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I'm not too sure about canon but for HotM and HotMR, I've got the organization as one who likes manipulation in general. Since they've existed since WW2, I have them as an organization that works to pull the strings in the background.
They manipulate everything, from the economy, to politics, to military endeavors, to ensure the profit of everyone in their organization, from the grunts up to the Chairman/Chairwoman. They don't want world domination, but for a matter of fact, they have quite a large chunk of the world already under their control. All they do is turn a few things in their favor, so they can continuously prosper in abundance and survive in the long run. That's my idea. |
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