2012-02-03, 07:41 | Link #20721 |
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Setsura actually replaces his hand when IS activates(her way of saying sorry) So setsura becomes a part of him instead of being worn and it gets a few upgrades or just described as more natural looking.
I just realized that as much as I like to keep my characters healthy, it's like they never bare any remnant of their last battle than bad memories, experience and a couple of cuts/burns. :| |
2012-02-03, 07:45 | Link #20722 |
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Why not just give him a scar or something? That's both a sign and not majorly crippling/ Also, the Setsura's the name of the cannon, so he'll have a tube for a hand if that happens.
You don't have to leave permanent injuries to leave a message. Mental scars are way more damaging than physical one's, and there are other things like showing negative effects. I do this with drug addiction and having him get withdrawal symptoms.
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2012-02-03, 07:56 | Link #20723 |
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@eras: The Setsura actually resembles a hand any way I look at it. The tube is the fore-arm and palm. There are the energy claw emitters that look like fingers and stuff... so yeah... upgrades or make it look more natural.
Though I find it odd that we're always out to hurt/maim/torture/in-born disabilities/even kill out characters but we never give them disabilities as the story goes along just sayin' |
2012-02-03, 07:59 | Link #20724 |
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@ Demi - The disabilities I do tend to be more on their performance. irish is thin in the beginning, but not abnormally so for a human being. The more the story goes on, the more corpse like he gets and he starts acting more and more tired just staying awake. He dies if he continues.
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2012-02-03, 08:26 | Link #20728 |
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Hence I said it his his self esteem more than it hurt him physically. I myself don't agree his arm cut off, just giving some hope. And frankly, Dokuganryuu Ichika would hit fridge logic if not for rule of cool....
Fangking does have an excuse about not doing his research about biotechnology level required to create Laura (it never explained THAT deep in canon). Making duplicate organ would be really easy
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2012-02-03, 09:10 | Link #20734 |
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Earlier times, he's often get beaten rather easily by numerous opponent. By the time enemies that use sharp object appears, he's pretty much already invincible. Also remember, his regeneration not only applies in term of healing speed, but also the end result (the scar is not quite visible, more like a white mark which mean the regeneration is >80% correct). On the other hand, Dan wasn't unlucky in that regard...still not as bad as Tomoki, their other friends.
It always been theorized (and so far, haven't yet disproved) that rough sport athletes has lower life expectancy due to scar piling up outside and inside their body.
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2012-02-03, 09:17 | Link #20736 |
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Yeah, Ichika's almost invisible, Dan's case is rather mild, but Tomoki has his right hand almost torn of, resulting a horrific injury even with I.S.-verse medical tech. (though with present day tech IRL, the result would be even worse).
In mine, Utusho is a Yamato Nadeshiko, her main issues is that she tend to lose her confident (though not fatal most of the time), such as when she found Dan is well two years younger than her, or that she looks herself as plain compared to the rest of the girls.
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2012-02-03, 09:23 | Link #20737 |
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@ Senpai - I meant kid as in child. Would it stand out or look overtly disturbing.
Side note - Utsuho also seems to be strict and deadpan with her sister. Proof: Honne: I'm.too.tired.to.go.on~ Utsuho: Honne, do you want me to hit you? Oh, so you do. Well, if you insist.... Honne: I didn't say anything~! I didn't say anything~!
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2012-02-03, 09:25 | Link #20738 |
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Spoiler for Scene... I long forgot!:
Regarding the last part between Kajie and the real Lee Qixiang, is it alright? Was it excessive? Any ways to improve?
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2012-02-03, 09:27 | Link #20740 |
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@ Meistah - Finally, an update! I wanna see the rest!
@ Senpai - A straight scar on the side can be excused as an accident? Side note - This is how Madoka and Chifuyu act in FI M's still psychopathic, but less so when she's surrounded by Ichika's violently protective harem Chifuyu: Do you want me to lock you in your room? Alright then. *Shoves her into room and throws away the key.* Madoka: Hey wait, what about- Chifuyu: *Shoves Kotanoha in without a word and locks the door again* Madoka and Kotanoha: .........
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