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darkalpha · 2007-05-29, 22:54

Considering that Hayate is my favorite character from Lyrical Nanoha series, I'd love to keep her around in the fic (and yes, despite the ominious nature of my earlier statements, there IS a possibility for me to keep her around - just not in the way readers would expect, as I had mentioned earlier). :P

But the premise I am working has intrigued me so much that I don't want to leave it alone, regardless of what happens to other characters as result in the fanfic. Enough to drag me out of fic-writing hiatus.

An Hero in Disguise · 2007-05-29, 23:03

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Originally Posted by Liingo

Just a side note. Chapter 5 of Satashi's story 6th divsion is up on ff.net link below

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3502592/5/

Interesting chapter indeed.

A cool one, sadly reminded me of the lack of real action in StrikerS though.

Kha · 2007-05-30, 12:07

Reposted from OC Thread because this is also a ficlet:

For the first time in Animesuki's history, I present to you, a trailer for the upcoming release of Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha - The Chronicles of New Velka: CrosyS...

The OP!

Spoiler for Destiny - Chiyo:

Text-based opening theme ficlets were one of my most daring but successful experiments in FF.net. But this was a remarkable challenge because of the sheer number of characters to consider. The chorus changes ever episode (There's that many OCs to feature) so even if they aren't in this one they'll be in the next, or the one after that.

I chose Destiny for its great beat. This video on j00t00b helped me get started. Hope you guys like it!

darkalpha · 2007-06-01, 11:04

I know I had planned to work on a new version of the prologue for my story concept and link it for further discussion, but it seems that won't be possible as I'm considering scrapping it, or at least put it on hold.

Ever since I came up with the premise, I can't seem to get a solid idea of what I want to do with it. Right now, I have story elements that I want to work with (I.e., certain events that makes the idea develop or unfold), but I can't come to a settlement of what to use to make those elements happen. Its possible that the idea I have is too broad, which would explain why I've revised the premise 3 times already. I'm trying to keep the story focused and simple, but I keep on adding more elements that only makes the story more complicated and so on until its too long or complex that I end up discarding it in favor for more simpler focus.

I'm at loss of how to handle this problem. I just keep coming up with ideas, but nothing solid enough to make a solid story to work with.

S_K · 2007-06-01, 18:36

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Originally Posted by darkalpha

I know I had planned to work on a new version of the prologue for my story concept and link it for further discussion, but it seems that won't be possible as I'm considering scrapping it, or at least put it on hold.

Ever since I came up with the premise, I can't seem to get a solid idea of what I want to do with it. Right now, I have story elements that I want to work with (I.e., certain events that makes the idea develop or unfold), but I can't come to a settlement of what to use to make those elements happen. Its possible that the idea I have is too broad, which would explain why I've revised the premise 3 times already. I'm trying to keep the story focused and simple, but I keep on adding more elements that only makes the story more complicated and so on until its too long or complex that I end up discarding it in favor for more simpler focus.

I'm at loss of how to handle this problem. I just keep coming up with ideas, but nothing solid enough to make a solid story to work with.

How about you make one solid version that you would like, and then let the people read it to give you some feedback.
I'm really not a good writer myself so just a little advice

USB500 · 2007-06-01, 20:54

Yezzah! I have finally returned from 3 days of absence, and I am now off to kill backlogs! *equips rocket-propelled chainsaw*

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Originally Posted by Kha

Holds up smelly glowing blue gunk.

Bluecheesium.

The full range of spoofs from Epic Movie? Spider-Nano? VA jokes? Lucky StrikerS? Fate Stay Night? Bleach? Dragonball?

Naruto?

Pokemon?

X-rate Barrier Jackets would be the best!

Audience: Yeah! Birthday suits!

(Runs from Triple Breaker Shoo-to and watches it tear up the audience.)

Its soo easy to get them killed... Talk about people dying to see something.

VA jokes? I think that would be awesome XD XD Let's see.... Nanoha cosplays as Mai (Kanon), Fate as Hinata (Naruto), Hayate as Yumi (Maria-sama), Vita as Dejiko, Signum as Noriko (Maria-sama), Shamal as Eruru, Reinforce Zwei as Aruru, Reinforce Original as Madlax....

Woops, I said too much.

Audience: VA JOKES FOR THE WIN!!!!!!

*Vita kills audience with Raketen Hammer*

Anyway, thanks for the suggestions. Really appreciate it

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Von Himmel · 2007-06-03, 14:50

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Another WIN!

Only chapter 6 and the epilog are left.

I need more more angsty, tragedy, and after that, a happy end =)

Saludos, Haru

OMG SKEITH 0.0;
Maybe it'll end after defeating Corbenik LoL
Edit+
Just reading chapter 6. . . The author is. . .Genius. . . --;

USB500 · 2007-06-04, 21:51

Hurray! The Sleeping Lyrical finally ends! Officially! You can check the final chapter here.

Phew, that was worth the hard works. Hope everyone's happy with the presentation.

Kha · 2007-06-05, 10:52

Aw... The fun's over. But it was good while it lasted. And +50 with the Shamal doujin line ref.

See ya in Lyrical of Time!

Btw, if you really need Rein 1 to be around, remember you can always call Sophia to summon her from the Unlimited Imperium Vault.

BPHaru · 2007-06-05, 13:59

Finally, epilogue of Satashi's fic 6th divsion is out:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3502592/7/

Bon Appétit

Saludos, Haru

Fuyu no Sora · 2007-06-05, 22:45

Another story by Satashi: Peachy Keen.

Sort of OOC and to top it all, its a Yuunoha ><.

USB500 · 2007-06-06, 05:10

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Originally Posted by Kha

Aw... The fun's over. But it was good while it lasted. And +50 with the Shamal doujin line ref.

See ya in Lyrical of Time!

I know, I've always wanted to use the doujin line (Shamal FTW

)

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Originally Posted by Kha

Btw, if you really need Rein 1 to be around, remember you can always call Sophia to summon her from the Unlimited Imperium Vault.

That would be interesting, but having two Reinforces at the same space--- OMG TIME PARADOX!

Kha · 2007-06-08, 13:38

I just added the next Track of the CrosyS SS here. Enjoy!

USB500 · 2007-06-09, 01:25

This has been posted at the OC thread, but I'll just post it here since it will eventually lead back to all events in Lyrical of Time.

Be warned that it contains spoiler of future events.

DIARY OF A WIND TALKER

*deleted; will be Blogged sometimes*

The Windtalkers' profile page can be found here.

Fuyu no Sora · 2007-06-10, 13:28

New story from Satashi: 6th Division: Reminisce

Enjoy!

USB500 · 2007-06-12, 04:34

Part 2, First Half of Diary of a Wind Talker is up. Unlike the last time, I'll be Blogging this one. So everyone and anyone can reach it through here.

Several things to be noted:

There are going to be two first-person POVs: Elisa's and Nanoha's.
Nanoha, Fate and Hayate address Armstrong as Ojiichan.
Divine Voltage assumes the form of a gigantic thunder blade; think of it as a mirror copy of Bardiche Assault Zamber Form.
Warning; this may not look pleasant for you.

Anyway, enjoy.

BPHaru · 2007-06-13, 16:44

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Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

New story from Satashi: 6th Division: Reminisce

Enjoy!

6th Division: Reminisce chapter 2 is out:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3585048/2/

Bon Appétit! C_C

Satashi · 2007-06-13, 19:07

Um... I randomly stumbled upon this thread and saw a few of my fanfics posted here so I thought it would be polite to say thank for you reading. *bow* I hope you enjoyed my works. If you'd like to suggest anything for improvements I'm very willing to listen. ^///^ Nice to meet you all

BPHaru · 2007-06-13, 20:06

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Originally Posted by Satashi

Um... I randomly stumbled upon this thread and saw a few of my fanfics posted here so I thought it would be polite to say thank for you reading. *bow* I hope you enjoyed my works. If you'd like to suggest anything for improvements I'm very willing to listen. ^///^ Nice to meet you all

Welcome to the Jungle, Sa-Nyan

Just don't spend too much time here, the people in this forum are a bad influence xD

Saludos, Haru

USB500 · 2007-06-13, 20:23

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Originally Posted by Satashi

Um... I randomly stumbled upon this thread and saw a few of my fanfics posted here so I thought it would be polite to say thank for you reading. *bow* I hope you enjoyed my works. If you'd like to suggest anything for improvements I'm very willing to listen. ^///^ Nice to meet you all

*imitates Sean Connery* Welcome to the club. Have fun and happy surviving the madness that is Nanoha Party.

2007-05-30, 12:07	Link #243
Kha ~ I Do ~ Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00" Age: 31	Reposted from OC Thread because this is also a ficlet: For the first time in Animesuki's history, I present to you, a trailer for the upcoming release of Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha - The Chronicles of New Velka: CrosyS... The OP! Spoiler for Destiny - Chiyo: Dawn breaks over Mid Childa... Hanarete ite mo zutto Chikaku ni kanjite unmei dakara A black feather drifts out of the sky and lands on the tarmac of Velka SAR Yzak Air Base. Two gray-booted feet krumps to a stop next to it, and their owner picks it up. The camera follows the feather until Kha's face is seen, and he looks into the brightening morning sky... [Rock Guitar Instrumental] With a bang, the music starts. The background is a high speed running shot of MC Downtown’s skyline framed against the brightening horizon, while the title “Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha” in one line phases in. At the first drum crash, Keroko leaps past, adding “The New Velka Chronicles” in big letters under the small title. On the second crash, Hikki jumps down from the top of the screen and punches, flashing it back to the title, which has now appended “: CrosyS” to the right of the “Chronicles”. Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha The New Velka Chronicles: CrosyS The images hangs around for a bit, then Kha’s Firehawk Stratofighter tears across, whiting out the screen with its afterburners as the last drum climax ends the instrumental. *Osanai mune no naka de* From left to right: Artei, Sophia, Kaempfer and Allison march out of the hangar and they meet their captain who greets them with a nod. *Tooku wo koto shiri sugita? Fuan da yo* We teleport to MC Honor’s Hold Air Base where the Rogue Squadron is based. Keroko, Wes and Tyco in tow, adjusts the straps on her half-finger gloves as activity goes on all around her. The camera cuts to her sealed device, which glints in reply. *Yukikau hitobito no* Blink and we’re in the Riot 6 lounge, where Shin-chan is enjoying his morning coffee with Hikki, Alexandra and Anna, who then wave at the camera. *Kao sae mienai kodoku doushite?* Phwing! We’re now aboard the “Gladius”, where Lucas, Angela, Rika and Hiro are discussing plans over a holographic war table, and Cassandra listens closely. At the “Doushite?” the image is overlaid on the left with a side profile of Cassandra’s face looking forlornly into the distance and Alex’s taking the split screen on the right. *Massugu na hitomi ni...* Shinji, Asuka and Rey in the hologram forms float behind their mother as Kaylin runs fruitlessly on the stop towards a shadowed profile of Glock in the foreground. *Tsubasa hiroge tabitatou* There is long trail of foot prints on a bright desert, and the camera pans until it shows David Brown, Bronzion Hammer on shoulder, soldiering on in the blazing heat. He’s not even bothered by the weather. But the sand shifts, and the Hammer comes off… [Ascending music] In rapid succession as the beat changes, Carim looks up from a video call, Kyla throws her hand out as she commands the Silvana ahead, and the 21st Trinity Optimus Velka Carryall soars into the stars. [Chorus] Asu e to te wo kazashita Shinjite mite you are my precious Hanarete ite mo zutto Chikaku ni ite I miss you from my heart Hikari michibiku hou e Kimi to nara I'll be with you forever [Destiny] Vocals by: CHiYo Originally From: Giniro no Olynssis OC mad fight! Every single OC ever created in this thread darts left right center, hurling spells everywhere as the camera spins perspectives through dizzy curves, as the endless Necron hoard surge in the battlefield. But sometimes, something can be made out of the chaos. The Blue Flame Squad and Alex’s team combine attacks and combos the stiff Necron to pieces. There’s enough time for husband and wife to exchange glances, hook each others arms and Alex anc Cass lash out in a two-sided spin kick that crushes the skulls of two Necron Immortals. Alexandra slices through two Warriors, then sends a blast into a Flayer just as Anna throws a Meteor into an advancing platoon. Keroko and Kyla stand back to back unleashing rain of fire from their respective devices as Kaempfer, Gard Redel and his Zakum Troopers try and win air superiority against the black storm of Wraths. Artei holds his own dismembering another troop of Destroyers. Sophia launches Excalibur into the plague, then follows with an optic blast from her cyber scan unit. Arnie is behind her, both Gauss Flayers on full auto as the Friendly Necron tears through his former brethren with ease. Allie throws several fireballs, then makes quick work of her feet dodging a rabid Flayer, then spots an opening for her to tumble in and stab the machine with Parang, the magical dagger instantly dispelling all magic within the Necron and excising its soul in the process. Then David jumps in and slams the Bronzion hammer into the ground, rippling a massive shockwave throughout the desert. Special Thanks Skyfall LoweGear Aaron800R Nightengle USB500 Keroko Fuyu no Sora Ratler Saint X KBTKaiser Erio stormturmoil Darkalpha and many others... Kiseki no naka ni yadoru Chikara shinjite unmei dakara Kha stands alone, eyes closed, listening to the howls of machines everywhere, camera spinning around and around at the closing horde. The camera stops, and he opens his eyes; The Necron Lord steps up and raises his staff. The Cleric-knight shifts his stance such that his spear points forward, the Gotteliches Rapier buzz on, the Velka triangle spring out from underneath him, exploding with blue maryoku as the camera zooms into his eyes which go black from Avenging Zorn… [Closing guitar instrumental] Even more battle, this time with grainy images, of random moments taken from the OCs’ collective pasts. Then just as the stanza closes, we flash back to Kha, who swings Tausend Kreuz back and fires thrusters to charge, freezing the image with the guitar strum with a crammed watercolor of him in his charging pose, his Trinity charging out from the flanks, and all over Ocs burst out from the crowd behind him. Original Production Animesuki OC Thread Project Text-based opening theme ficlets were one of my most daring but successful experiments in FF.net. But this was a remarkable challenge because of the sheer number of characters to consider. The chorus changes ever episode (There's that many OCs to feature) so even if they aren't in this one they'll be in the next, or the one after that. I chose Destiny for its great beat. This video on j00t00b helped me get started. Hope you guys like it! __________________

2007-06-05, 10:52	Link #249
Kha ~ I Do ~ Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00" Age: 31	Aw... The fun's over. But it was good while it lasted. And +50 with the Shamal doujin line ref. See ya in Lyrical of Time! Btw, if you really need Rein 1 to be around, remember you can always call Sophia to summon her from the *Unlimited Imperium Vault.* __________________

2007-06-08, 13:38	Link #253
Kha ~ I Do ~ Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00" Age: 31	I just added the next Track of the CrosyS SS here. Enjoy! __________________

2007-06-09, 01:25	Link #254
USB500 facepalm.jpg Author Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Gensokyo Age: 33	This has been posted at the OC thread, but I'll just post it here since it will eventually lead back to all events in Lyrical of Time. Be warned that it contains spoiler of future events. DIARY OF A WIND TALKER deleted; will be Blogged sometimes The Windtalkers' profile page can be found here. Last edited by USB500; 2007-06-12 at 04:41. Reason: deleting contents

2007-06-12, 04:34	Link #256
USB500 facepalm.jpg Author Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Gensokyo Age: 33	Part 2, First Half of Diary of a Wind Talker is up. Unlike the last time, I'll be Blogging this one. So everyone and anyone can reach it through here. Several things to be noted: There are going to be two first-person POVs: Elisa's and Nanoha's. Nanoha, Fate and Hayate address Armstrong as Ojiichan. Divine Voltage assumes the form of a gigantic thunder blade; think of it as a mirror copy of Bardiche Assault Zamber Form. Warning; this may not look pleasant for you. Anyway, enjoy.

2007-05-29, 22:54	Link #241
darkalpha Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: United States	Considering that Hayate is my favorite character from Lyrical Nanoha series, I'd love to keep her around in the fic (and yes, despite the ominious nature of my earlier statements, there IS a possibility for me to keep her around - just not in the way readers would expect, as I had mentioned earlier). :P But the premise I am working has intrigued me so much that I don't want to leave it alone, regardless of what happens to other characters as result in the fanfic. Enough to drag me out of fic-writing hiatus.

2007-06-01, 11:04	Link #244
darkalpha Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: United States	I know I had planned to work on a new version of the prologue for my story concept and link it for further discussion, but it seems that won't be possible as I'm considering scrapping it, or at least put it on hold. Ever since I came up with the premise, I can't seem to get a solid idea of what I want to do with it. Right now, I have story elements that I want to work with (I.e., certain events that makes the idea develop or unfold), but I can't come to a settlement of what to use to make those elements happen. Its possible that the idea I have is too broad, which would explain why I've revised the premise 3 times already. I'm trying to keep the story focused and simple, but I keep on adding more elements that only makes the story more complicated and so on until its too long or complex that I end up discarding it in favor for more simpler focus. I'm at loss of how to handle this problem. I just keep coming up with ideas, but nothing solid enough to make a solid story to work with.

2007-06-04, 21:51	Link #248
USB500 facepalm.jpg Author Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Gensokyo Age: 33	Hurray! The Sleeping Lyrical finally ends! Officially! You can check the final chapter here. Phew, that was worth the hard works. Hope everyone's happy with the presentation.

2007-06-05, 13:59	Link #250
BPHaru Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006	Finally, epilogue of Satashi's fic 6th divsion is out: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3502592/7/ Bon Appétit Saludos, Haru

2007-06-05, 22:45	Link #251
Fuyu no Sora Mistress of Impatience Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a place of extremes. From below freezing to above boiling.	Another story by Satashi: Peachy Keen. Sort of OOC and to top it all, its a Yuunoha ><.

2007-06-10, 13:28	Link #255
Fuyu no Sora Mistress of Impatience Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a place of extremes. From below freezing to above boiling.	New story from Satashi: 6th Division: Reminisce Enjoy!

2007-06-13, 19:07	Link #258
Satashi Vividly Vivio Author Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Over there Age: 33	Um... I randomly stumbled upon this thread and saw a few of my fanfics posted here so I thought it would be polite to say thank for you reading. bow I hope you enjoyed my works. If you'd like to suggest anything for improvements I'm very willing to listen. ^///^ Nice to meet you all