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Old 2009-09-28, 08:23   Link #8321
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What's that soun-? *is hit by car*
Random thought:

A Dedication to Keroland - lyrics by Lamb

What is that sound
Ringing in my ears
The strangest sound
Ive heard for years and years
The sound of two hearts
Beating side by side
The sound of one love
That neither one can hide-

*Is run down by a subway train for amazing off-topicness*

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... Vivio as Yamato Maihime!!!!!

*RUUUUNZ*
*aims with his sniper rifle on a random rooftop*

No, Mr. Gear.

*BANG*

I expect you to die.
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Old 2009-09-28, 10:19   Link #8322
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Random thought:

A Dedication to Keroland - lyrics by Lamb

What is that sound
Ringing in my ears
The strangest sound
Ive heard for years and years
The sound of two hearts
Beating side by side
The sound of one love
That neither one can hide-

*Is run down by a subway train for amazing off-topicness*
Kaon: oops. My subway slipped.
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Old 2009-09-28, 10:24   Link #8323
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That look... That selection of outfit... Why does it look so familia-.....
Wait for it....

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KEROKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

@__@
Perfect. Now you know why I was so amused during our Nadeshiko chat.

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PS: Syn's VA isn't going to be Chiba Saeko... is she?
*shrug* Haven't settled on her VA yet. What does the thread think?

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Teenage Syn reminds me of Beat Jumper... does that make Syn a tra-

*IS SHOT*
*Reloads Rail Rifle* No.

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I did a scan and the image IS Beat Jumper

What's next, Yamato Mai- *shot*
*nods* Beat Jumper was the base. It fits Syn's rebellious spirit.

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Maybe she's going for reverse trap!



What's that soun-? *is hit by car*
Don't even go there. *circles around for another run*

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Random thought:

A Dedication to Keroland - lyrics by Lamb

What is that sound
Ringing in my ears
The strangest sound
Ive heard for years and years
The sound of two hearts
Beating side by side
The sound of one love
That neither one can hide-

*Is run down by a subway train for amazing off-topicness*
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Kaon: oops. My subway slipped.
*looks at the pulped remains* Brutal.
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Old 2009-09-28, 13:11   Link #8324
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Wait for it....

Perfect. Now you know why I was so amused during our Nadeshiko chat.

You are EVIL.
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Old 2009-09-28, 13:25   Link #8325
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You are EVIL.
Oh you noticed?
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Old 2009-09-28, 13:32   Link #8326
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You are EVIL.
patience...

you need more of it

just a bit more...

:3
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Old 2009-09-28, 17:35   Link #8327
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Things really get out of hand when I don't have an internet connection at home, I see. @.@
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Old 2009-09-28, 17:42   Link #8328
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WARNING: ELEMENTS OF CROSSOVER

Spoiler for sheer length:


Compliments, MINOR nitpicks, constructive criticism accepted; NO FLAMES PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE BE NICE I’M NEW HERE

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Old 2009-09-28, 17:51   Link #8329
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I'll refrain from discussing your post because I hate Halo and therefore am unfairly biased. =P
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Old 2009-09-28, 17:57   Link #8330
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And I'll refrain from reading it because it's 3 mins to midnight (tired -_-) and because it's too darn long...

...and it's not wrapped in spoiler tags.
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Old 2009-09-28, 17:59   Link #8331
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Likewise, use the format mentioned in the first post and use spoiler tags.

Also, if we're nice to you, that actually means we're being mean to you. No sense soft balling concepts when the goal is to improve it. Doubt anyone will be rude, we tend to yell at each other when that happens then no critique is actually levied and then.

Hmm, welcome to the OCT
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Old 2009-09-28, 19:44   Link #8332
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Okay; look up as I am about to shorten it with a spoiler; still don't know how to accurately get the info across with the "proper format", though.
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Old 2009-09-28, 19:47   Link #8333
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I feel charitable, let's see what i can do.

Spoiler for OC list:


Actually many of these appear to be adaptations and not original characters. One is filling in for an existing canon character, which is fine, but is not an OC. We've done things like that before, but it tends to be Touhou or Gundam or whatever. I blame kha. Actually, ask meisterbabylon for his tutelage.

As for profile structure, use this as an example
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Old 2009-09-28, 20:41   Link #8334
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Is there a separate forum for fulling in existing canon characters that there is no official data on? Or is this forum the closest we're gonna get?

'Sides that; what do you guys think of them?
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Old 2009-09-28, 20:48   Link #8335
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Yeah closest it'll get, just keep working on them, make them your characters more than just mere adaptations. I'm sure people are reserving opinions on them because of their source inspirations.
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Old 2009-09-28, 22:26   Link #8336
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It's much better to write and describe, and then let us make the connection, than to ruin the fun outright. Just my $0.02.

But now that you've started, welcome to Outer Cadia.



By the way, in case you've haven't heard:
Spoiler:

...Games Workshop made a certain announcement.
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Old 2009-09-29, 00:34   Link #8337
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I'm not really the best person to do reviews here (quite the contrary, actually, since I'm a very silly fellow), but do allow me to voice my views on your characters =3

Spoiler for My 2 cents:


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Compliments, MINOR nitpicks, constructive criticism accepted; NO FLAMES PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE BE NICE I’M NEW HERE
I would suggest putting some more effort in these characters to weed out the excessive cross-over parts. And please get some original names for your characters instead of directly carrying over from whatever source they came from. If there's one thing that ports irritate me, that'll be direct rip-offs of names, places, skills. Give your ported characters some pride by giving them a name that truly belongs to them! Also, I will advise including abilities (if any) and character (very important) to flesh them out (and for us to chop off any haxx before it gets a chance to grow =3). As of now, these profiles don't really tell us much about who they are and how they will impact your story.

Also, please do not expect us to go too easy on you when the need arises. We can and should be civil in our criticisms, but I am told that medicine works best when it's bitter, and the best lessons are taught with both the carrot and the stick.

And please write your profiles in proper paragraphs. Right now, it's not easy to read what you're writing, with everything all mashed up @______@

My 2 cents =3
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Old 2009-09-29, 03:02   Link #8338
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. We've done things like that before, but it tends to be Touhou or Gundam or whatever.e[/URL]
I beg to differ. In the order of obvious or most seen, it is Type-Moon > WH40k + Warcraft > Kamen Rider > Gundam > Cool anime of the season (1) > Cool FPS of the season >>>>>>>>> Touhou >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The others.

I would note about Touhou that the more known fans in this thread had been less obvious about their ports, not to mention that mentioned ports are few.

Spoiler for note (1):
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Old 2009-09-29, 10:17   Link #8339
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...You know, maybe I should have just kept them to myself, never introducing them to the public eye and keeping them for the mega-crossover fanfics I write for myself that are never posted on the web, remaining in my computer's documents for my eyes alone. I'm getting the vibe that it would've been best at this point.
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Old 2009-09-29, 10:19   Link #8340
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I dunno, I'd be flattered to get reviews at all. To think one was a non magical, non combatant lawyer. :P

My original attempts are pretty flat out ignored, but alas I keep working on them and plan on re announcing them once I have a full grasp of them. You are getting more positive attention than many of us here ^^;
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