Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Keroko

You mean Teana beating up Subaru style? Show!

If I do that, a lot of people will die...

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

KhaAliciaFate should belong to NBC

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Seconded! This is pure GOLD if the ION CANON gives another luck shot!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@An Hero: The AO plan could work. That is unless Twist's Fate universe is actually a parallel instead of a precedent Multiverse...

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

That's exactly the question in need to be cleared

Well let's hope for canon miss then.

Originally Posted by Wibbles

Dunno. Oh, and Hikaru is a guy, though Doppleganger thinks he's a failure as a man.

Well... shouldn't it be Hikari, as that's the masculine form of the word? Hikaru is feminine.

[Wibbles]

Originally Posted by Keroko

You mean Teana beating up Subaru style? Show!



Heeh, so he is a backup RF6 member? And Doppleganger, does he remember devices he copied, or does he need to copy them on the spot (would be awesome if he does need to, way more tension that way ).

Doppleganger can remember up to five forms at a time. Any more and he has to switch them out. Also, he has his limits. He can't store Raising Heart or Bardiche due to their insane power (he can copy them, but can't hold their form for too long), and he can't copy unison devices at all.

[Dream_Traveller]

9 pages of backlog.

CURSE my not being on the comp for some time!

@Kha: To your question waaaaaaaay back, the Letters would probably be called Onii=chan by the Numbers, though some might just adress them by name.

@USB: Yup, the Letters make an entrance at last. Nice eighth cahpter, by the by.

@Keroko: Quite the Star Wars fan...lightsabers as a weapon for your character or so? Forgive me if I misread it, I'm exhausted.

And, to Gale...got any more crack pairings for us? And I know the interaction there was a tad one-sided in my segment with E and Cinque, but that it mainly because they contrast in character. Cinque is stoic, whereas E is more talkative. But, the interaction scale will be evened out.

I'll try to post another thing relating to the Lettermen, or V, if I can.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Wibbles

Doppleganger can remember up to five forms at a time. Any more and he has to switch them out. Also, he has his limits. He can't store Raising Heart or Bardiche due to their insane power (he can copy them, but can't hold their form for too long), and he can't copy unison devices at all.

The post I was waiting for With such kind of limitations the ability is perfectly acceptable.

- - -

@Kha: So what's with "Nanoha must die" Universe? Was it decided whether it'll be a completely alternate one or it's a predecessor of the current one?

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Wibbles

Doppleganger can remember up to five forms at a time. Any more and he has to switch them out. Also, he has his limits. He can't store Raising Heart or Bardiche due to their insane power (he can copy them, but can't hold their form for too long), and he can't copy unison devices at all.

Ah, I see. He won't be able to copy Artherion then either. Not that it matters, it wouldn't do him any good anyway.

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Keroko: Quite the Star Wars fan...lightsabers as a weapon for your character or so? Forgive me if I misread it, I'm exhausted.

Tycho Chelchu has a lightsaber (and Force-like powers, for that matter ) He's ripped "based" on Darth Vader's aprentice from the "The Force Unleashed" game.

And yes, I do pride myself in being a star wars fan.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Wibbles

Doppleganger can remember up to five forms at a time. Any more and he has to switch them out. Also, he has his limits. He can't store Raising Heart or Bardiche due to their insane power (he can copy them, but can't hold their form for too long), and he can't copy unison devices at all.

I see... There's quite a lot of OC devices that can't be copied well in that sense, like Artherion, Tausend Kreuz, Swertkreuz, Kaleidostick, Jeweled Sword of Zelretch, Apalis and A-something, the Zestro-devices, the Intel Dept's, LineBacker L & R, Sofia...

I quoted, to the best of my ability, all the Rank S devices in the thread. Apologies if I missed anyone's.



@An Hero: I intended it to be the predecessor, thus creating the Time Paradox situation as Kluize, being the destroyer of the last multiverse, persists as predicted by AO. That is Kha's suspicion at the end of Dance of Demons, and would be confirmed when Kluize fades away.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Hmm, might as well add my devices to the list :

Doppelganger certainly won't be able to copy AO, and probably Sarah's device Nebel too (though it may be arguable).

He'll be able to copy Anatoly's Kaiser, Ramsus' Gram and Mirian's Kaleidoscope (the latter will be pretty much useless for non-summoner though, and I'd say he won't be able to store them for long like it was mentioned).

EDIT:

Originally Posted by Kha

@An Hero: I intended it to be the predecessor, thus creating the Time Paradox situation as Kluize, being the destroyer of the last multiverse, persists as predicted by AO. That is Kha's suspicion at the end of Dance of Demons, and would be confirmed when Kluize fades away.

Great Shall AO have negative feelings towards Kha then?

[Aaron008R]

RE: Videos of Gunbuster and Diebuster: Pretty awesome! Talk about total disregard of size.

@Keroko: Have you read my drama chapters yet?

It's here: Counseling: Resolve
and here:
Counseling: Uncle and Niece

Hope they're up to standards.

Originally Posted by Kha

I just had a Mindburst!

Continuation of SophiaHayate:

Hayate: Wagateru, O-nee-chan! (hugs from behind)
Sophia: (blush) H-hey what are you doing?
Hayate: Thanking my onee-chan properly desu~
Sophia: But your hands--! (moan) Ahh~~!
Hayate: Onee-chan is very soft and cuddly desu~~



Cue Teana-style beat up of Hayate-chan perhaps?

Depends on how Toh-Sophia plays.
Talk about cute OOC speech pattern...
And judging by what you said that people would die, she plays like Hayate, huh?

Originally Posted by Wibbles

Yeah, Axl is who I based Hikaru on, sort of. I pre-ordered Megaman ZX Advent, so I have to compensate. I'm at school now (and shouldn't be on this site now), so I can't put much data down, but here's some pre-profile data:
-Hikaru is male, as is Doppleganger.
-Doppleganger's normal form is a gun, and is about as strong as Teana's gun from the first episode of StrikerS.
-Hikaru is a member of Section 6, codenamed Riot-3. The Riot team is a reserve force. If Fate or Nanoha need more forwards, they call in a member from the Riot team.
-Doppleganger is fully sentient (as a result of so much copying) and can hold a conversation with a human, but he's something of a jerk (or a dick, according to Vita).
-Hikaru is half Japanese, half German.

I see... Interesting so far. And the limitations seem to be fine...




Regarding my devices, it's completely useless trying to copy Reishiki. You need to NOT have a left arm to use it. Almaria is too advanced. And Tyrfing has something unique.

But Beowulf, Weiss Teufel, SeiryuuOh and ByakkoOh are possible. But not their eventual upgrades.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Great Shall AO have negative feelings towards Kha then?

Hmm... AO never talked to Kha... Could be hinted?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Depends on how Toh-Sophia plays.
Talk about cute OOC speech pattern...
And judging by what you said that people would die, she plays like Hayate, huh?

Seeing that that speech type completely disarms Sophia, Hayate moves in for the kill.

More like Hayate's a lot more unstoppable than Subaru. She's SS ranked after all.

But if Sophia decides to fight fire with fire (and very likely too)...

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

RE: Videos of Gunbuster and Diebuster: Pretty awesome! Talk about total disregard of size.

@Keroko: Have you read my drama chapters yet?

It's here: Counseling: Resolve
and here:
Counseling: Uncle and Niece

Hope they're up to standards.

Yup I can remember commenting on the first. As for the second, read it, but never comented on it. It made me go aaaw. Hayate has a father figure now.

Hmm... With Auron being the father and Shamal at times being refered as a mother...



AuronXShamal!

*ducks*

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yup I can remember commenting on the first. As for the second, read it, but never comented on it. It made me go aaaw. Hayate has a father figure now.

Hmm... With Auron being the father and Shamal at times being refered as a mother...



AuronXShamal!

*ducks*

Not to mention his character has single parent qualifications (Kiritsugu).

Yan-papa FTW!

AurionXShamal FTMWTFWin!!!

(tapdances around A********* shots)

[Wibbles]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

RE: Videos of Gunbuster and Diebuster: Pretty awesome! Talk about total disregard of size.

@Keroko: Have you read my drama chapters yet?

It's here: Counseling: Resolve
and here:
Counseling: Uncle and Niece

Hope they're up to standards.



Depends on how Toh-Sophia plays.
Talk about cute OOC speech pattern...
And judging by what you said that people would die, she plays like Hayate, huh?



I see... Interesting so far. And the limitations seem to be fine...




Regarding my devices, it's completely useless trying to copy Reishiki. You need to NOT have a left arm to use it. Almaria is too advanced. And Tyrfing has something unique.

But Beowulf, Weiss Teufel, SeiryuuOh and ByakkoOh are possible. But not their eventual upgrades.

Hehehehe... actually, Doppleganger CAN copy Reishiki. Here's the scenario (if you approve):
Hikaru: Doppleganger, Copy Shot!
Doppleganger: Copy Shot... Succesful! Reishiki, copied!
(special effects occur. when the light dies down, Hikaru is in his standard barrier jacket, holding a prosthetic left arm in his still-intact left hand)
Everyone present: .....
Doppleganger: .... I'll kill anyone who takes a picture of this, you hear?

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Kha

Seeing that that speech type completely disarms Sophia, Hayate moves in for the kill.

More like Hayate's a lot more unstoppable than Subaru. She's SS ranked after all.

But if Sophia decides to fight fire with fire (and very likely too)...

I knew it... Imagine what would happen to the majority of the male population upon hearing the cries and moans from that kind of bout!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yup I can remember commenting on the first. As for the second, read it, but never comented on it. It made me go aaaw. Hayate has a father figure now.

Hmm... With Auron being the father and Shamal at times being refered as a mother...



AuronXShamal!

*ducks*

Thanks.
And no thanks for the pairing.
Aurion stays a bachelor. And if he ever gets paired off. It's with a female OC of mine. I NEVER pair my OC's with CC's, even if I have my OC's flirting with CC's on occation.

Originally Posted by Kha

Not to mention his character has single parent qualifications (Kiritsugu).

Yan-papa FTW!

AurionXShamal FTMWTFWin!!!

(tapdances around A********* shots)

Then I guess I should place some inhibitions from others trying to use Aurion for that kind of scenes in a serious scenario. Don't even try it, or I'll sue you for copyright infringement. I still remember Nighty's Signum moaning(loudly) like a damsel in distress in Aurion's mechanical hold crack pseudo-scenario. (Admittedly, It gave a shockwave of WIN AND GOLD responses.)

First, Signum(Kha's idea), then Hayate(Erio's idea) now Shamal(Keroko's idea)? Who's next? Reinforce 1? Tesla?

Originally Posted by Wibbles

Hehehehe... actually, Doppleganger CAN copy Reishiki. Here's the scenario (if you approve):
Hikaru: Doppleganger, Copy Shot!
Doppleganger: Copy Shot... Succesful! Reishiki, copied!
(special effects occur. when the light dies down, Hikaru is in his standard barrier jacket, holding a prosthetic left arm in his still-intact left hand)
Everyone present: .....
Doppleganger: .... I'll kill anyone who takes a picture of this, you hear?

Possible!
But only the device components. Not the mechanical ones. So no copying the energy blades and the railgun.
I like your device's attitude!

That has got to look weird.

[Dream_Traveller]

Right, I've decided to post another snippet. This one is highly unlikely to be present in the finished work, but I'm posting it for the heck of it.

Spoiler for 'Ello, Fawkes:

"Penny for the Guy?"

It was at this voice that the three cybernetic warriors, Nove, Cinque and Uendi, about-turned. What they saw, at first, was simply the darkness stretching on ahead of them, but upon closer inspection the rustling of a jet black cloak could be seen.

Grimacing, Nove readied herself, bringing her fist back. Taking no heed to this action, the unknown figure waled forward, until the light came upon him.

And what the trio saw was an odd sight indeed.

The figure was a man dressed in all black- his cloak, tunic, boots, trousers and whatever else- with a top hat to boot, along with a sole distinguishing feature. That feature was a white mask with an odd face drawn upon it, concealing his face.

The Numbers present were, of course, startled by the sudden appearance of an eccentric-looking stranger, but when he spoke it jolted them out of their reverie. His voice was cold, but held a well-educated tone to it.

"I don't need to wonder why you are here...all the chaos explains it. I don't suppose you know who I am, but, for you two.." He looked left and right at Uendi and Nove, respectively. "That doesn't matter. You, however..." He glanced at Cinque. "I'm sure you recognise me."

The next words to fill the hallowed hallway were those from an enraged Nove. "You...you wouldn't dare harm her!" The gears on her blades started spinning.

"I can assure you, I do not intend to harm her...yet. Now..." His tone shifted to one of seriousness. "I advise you step aside."

Listening not to the masked opponent, Nove charged forward, yelling out a battle cry and swinging her fist forward to connect with the man's face.

It was then that she stopped dead in her tracks, not of her own accord, but due to the figure in front of her. She couldn't believe her eyes as she examined what he had done- in one swift motion he had moved forward and stopped her strike with his palm alone. He spoke again, and this time around his voice was bitter, deathly, even.

"Step aside."

Much to the red-head's shock, a blood red IS circle formed around the man's hand. He took her completely by surprise as he spun round on his heel, still holding onto her arm, and released her, sending the Number hurtling back into a wall.

As if nothing had happened, he continued pacing forward, heading for Cinque. The latter figure opened up a comms window, showing E on the other side.

"Sis? Something wrong?"

"There's an...intruder. Further assistance is required."

E understood perfectly. "On my way, Hang in there."

The window closed, just as the man had finished walking up to her.

"I suppose you know who I am?", he inquired.

Cinque only looked up at him in reply, pulling out a set of knives and preparing herself. Her voice had a tinge of uneasiness in it.

"...Who are you? Another one of the Bureau's group?"

A silence fell, only quashed when she yelled out: "Answer me!"

Taken aback by this, the man paced back a step, but quickly regained his composure. "Fine. That I shall do, duly." He cleared his throat.

And the reply he gave made Cinque's blood turn to ice.

"You may remember me as...well...'Codename V'...'The Experiment'...

'Project No. 5.'

Eh, tell me what all of you think. As said, it's very, very doubtful this will be in the final product.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Kha

Hmm... AO never talked to Kha... Could be hinted?

Heh, I still don't know what's happening during the part of Dance of the Demons after evacuation Does AO do much talking there at all? Also Serge is going to be awake.

I suddenly got more interested in this - are some of the other injured people also conscious by that time? I'm curious about the interactions there

[Wibbles]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I knew it...



Thanks. And no thanks for the pairing.
Aurion stays a bachelor. And if he ever gets paired off. It's with a female OC of mine. I NEVER pair my OC's with CC's.



Then I guess I should place some inhibitions from others trying to use Aurion for that kind of scenes. Don't even try it, or I'll sue you for copyright infringement.



Possible!
But only the device components. Not the mechanical ones. So no copying the energy blades and the railgun.
I like your device's attitude!

That has got to look weird.

That was the point. In the end, half of those present took pictures. Dopp is still plotting his revenge.

Also, I plan to create Riot-1 (name: Isaac Scaglietti), Riot-2 (name: Miria Hasser), Riot-4 (name: Taiga Aizen)

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Right, I've decided to post another snippet. This one is highly unlikely to be present in the finished work, but I'm posting it for the heck of it.

Spoiler for 'Ello, Fawkes:

"Penny for the Guy?"

It was at this voice that the three cybernetic warriors, Nove, Cinque and Uendi, about-turned. What they saw, at first, was simply the darkness stretching on ahead of them, but upon closer inspection the rustling of a jet black cloak could be seen.

Grimacing, Nove readied herself, bringing her fist back. Taking no heed to this action, the unknown figure waled forward, until the light came upon him.

And what the trio saw was an odd sight indeed.

The figure was a man dressed in all black- his cloak, tunic, boots, trousers and whatever else- with a top hat to boot, along with a sole distinguishing feature. That feature was a white mask with an odd face drawn upon it, concealing his face.

The Numbers present were, of course, startled by the sudden appearance of an eccentric-looking stranger, but when he spoke it jolted them out of their reverie. His voice was cold, but held a well-educated tone to it.

"I don't need to wonder why you are here...all the chaos explains it. I don't suppose you know who I am, but, for you two.." He looked left and right at Uendi and Nove, respectively. "That doesn't matter. You, however..." He glanced at Cinque. "I'm sure you recognise me."

The next words to fill the hallowed hallway were those from an enraged Nove. "You...you wouldn't dare harm her!" The gears on her blades started spinning.

"I can assure you, I do not intend to harm her...yet. Now..." His tone shifted to one of seriousness. "I advise you step aside."

Listening not to the masked opponent, Nove charged forward, yelling out a battle cry and swinging her fist forward to connect with the man's face.

It was then that she stopped dead in her tracks, not of her own accord, but due to the figure in front of her. She couldn't believe her eyes as she examined what he had done- in one swift motion he had moved forward and stopped her strike with his palm alone. He spoke again, and this time around his voice was bitter, deathly, even.

"Step aside."

Much to the red-head's shock, a blood red IS circle formed around the man's hand. He took her completely by surprise as he spun round on his heel, still holding onto her arm, and released her, sending the Number hurtling back into a wall.

As if nothing had happened, he continued pacing forward, heading for Cinque. The latter figure opened up a comms window, showing E on the other side.

"Sis? Something wrong?"

"There's an...intruder. Further assistance is required."

E understood perfectly. "On my way, Hang in there."

The window closed, just as the man had finished walking up to her.

"I suppose you know who I am?", he inquired.

Cinque only looked up at him in reply, pulling out a set of knives and preparing herself. Her voice had a tinge of uneasiness in it.

"...Who are you? Another one of the Bureau's group?"

A silence fell, only quashed when she yelled out: "Answer me!"

Taken aback by this, the man paced back a step, but quickly regained his composure. "Fine. That I shall do, duly." He cleared his throat.

And the reply he gave made Cinque's blood turn to ice.

"You may remember me as...well...'Codename V'...'The Experiment'...

'Project No. 5.'

Eh, tell me what all of you think. As said, it's very, very doubtful this will be in the final product.

And to think their fighting styles are similar!
Intense.

Originally Posted by Wibbles

That was the point. In the end, half of those present took pictures. Dopp is still plotting his revenge.

Also, I plan to create Riot-1 (name: Isaac Scaglietti), Riot-2 (name: Miria Hasser), Riot-4 (name: Taiga Aizen)

I see. I'll be looking forward to your OC's. But Riot one is !

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Right, I've decided to post another snippet. This one is highly unlikely to be present in the finished work, but I'm posting it for the heck of it.

Spoiler for 'Ello, Fawkes:

"Penny for the Guy?"

It was at this voice that the three cybernetic warriors, Nove, Cinque and Uendi, about-turned. What they saw, at first, was simply the darkness stretching on ahead of them, but upon closer inspection the rustling of a jet black cloak could be seen.

Grimacing, Nove readied herself, bringing her fist back. Taking no heed to this action, the unknown figure waled forward, until the light came upon him.

And what the trio saw was an odd sight indeed.

The figure was a man dressed in all black- his cloak, tunic, boots, trousers and whatever else- with a top hat to boot, along with a sole distinguishing feature. That feature was a white mask with an odd face drawn upon it, concealing his face.

The Numbers present were, of course, startled by the sudden appearance of an eccentric-looking stranger, but when he spoke it jolted them out of their reverie. His voice was cold, but held a well-educated tone to it.

"I don't need to wonder why you are here...all the chaos explains it. I don't suppose you know who I am, but, for you two.." He looked left and right at Uendi and Nove, respectively. "That doesn't matter. You, however..." He glanced at Cinque. "I'm sure you recognise me."

The next words to fill the hallowed hallway were those from an enraged Nove. "You...you wouldn't dare harm her!" The gears on her blades started spinning.

"I can assure you, I do not intend to harm her...yet. Now..." His tone shifted to one of seriousness. "I advise you step aside."

Listening not to the masked opponent, Nove charged forward, yelling out a battle cry and swinging her fist forward to connect with the man's face.

It was then that she stopped dead in her tracks, not of her own accord, but due to the figure in front of her. She couldn't believe her eyes as she examined what he had done- in one swift motion he had moved forward and stopped her strike with his palm alone. He spoke again, and this time around his voice was bitter, deathly, even.

"Step aside."

Much to the red-head's shock, a blood red IS circle formed around the man's hand. He took her completely by surprise as he spun round on his heel, still holding onto her arm, and released her, sending the Number hurtling back into a wall.

As if nothing had happened, he continued pacing forward, heading for Cinque. The latter figure opened up a comms window, showing E on the other side.

"Sis? Something wrong?"

"There's an...intruder. Further assistance is required."

E understood perfectly. "On my way, Hang in there."

The window closed, just as the man had finished walking up to her.

"I suppose you know who I am?", he inquired.

Cinque only looked up at him in reply, pulling out a set of knives and preparing herself. Her voice had a tinge of uneasiness in it.

"...Who are you? Another one of the Bureau's group?"

A silence fell, only quashed when she yelled out: "Answer me!"

Taken aback by this, the man paced back a step, but quickly regained his composure. "Fine. That I shall do, duly." He cleared his throat.

And the reply he gave made Cinque's blood turn to ice.

"You may remember me as...well...'Codename V'...'The Experiment'...

'Project No. 5.'

Eh, tell me what all of you think. As said, it's very, very doubtful this will be in the final product.

It's looking good so far, though.

[Dream_Traveller]

Well, V, despite being shown to have IS powers seen by what he did to Nove, obviously doesn't have what Cinque has, namely, splodey knives. Their fighting styles are similar, indeed, though...so expect a battle of somewhat epic proportions.

@Keroko: Well, it is good...but, as said, its future is in doubt. The piece's, that is.

I need to get round to writing more Letters stuff...expect pieces on the Numbers' reactions to having brothers, and the full version of E vs. Cinque soonish.

[Keroko]

Ahh, the dreaded Ion Canon. Okay, I understand. Looking forward to the 3pic battle.