Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

Not TOO alone? You're lucky, I'm pretty much alone this Valentine's, like all the 15 others I've bothered to notice.

Maybe that's because I have Unlimited Harem Works no vested interest in members of the fairer gender.

But Ashcroft seems to think differently about your little idea...

"No vested interest", that's a nice way of denial and self-assurance

Originally Posted by Ashcroft

I support your motion

Clyde: "Of which, you must have a certain someone to speak of first "

[AdmiralTigerclaw]

@ Saint X. Ignore it. I probably deleted the wrong tag when working on the texts.


Now, about those marines... if someone makes them, we need a Solid Snake.

Spoiler for SNAAAKE!!! -AAAAKE-AAAKE...:

-CACKLE-

There's no place he can't sneak into.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Kha

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HOLY SHYT COLWELL BUILT SOUTHFORT?!?!?!

*crack builds about hidden command rooms, transforming dormitories and sunken shipyards*

Gosh and I thought hiding the Asura underground was crack!!!



*runs*

Why not? Asagi is IN CHARGE of the construction...

Asagi: Would you like hidden hatches with that? Secret entrances maybe? Long conveyor corridors with internal wall lighting? I can also do hydraulically transforming hallways and rooms... How about a rotating hangar bay, or retractable launch runway by the waterfront? Or maybe...

Hayate: I think regular would be fine

*imagines Donna doing a Haro imitation*

Gosh I can't stop laughing...

[Sure Nanoha, Sure Nanoha]

Originally Posted by Kha

I'm not sure if that's the same thing, but yes Alicia will have a role to play in Rebuilt. How is that possible? We'll see.

I'd like to see how much of a role Alicia T. will be playing in Rebuilt

But... me and Saint X were talking about The Goddess of the Neo-Venezian waterways, the White Fairy, Snow White, hailing from Aqua, aka the planet formerly known as Mars...

ALICIA FLORENCE

Spoiler for Behold!:

Originally Posted by Kha

Eiiiiiiii~~~~

Ouch.

I wish he were funnier... Then I could make him Patrick.

Just have Regius as Regius, then we can have the Thrones sic him with no ill feelings

Originally Posted by Kha

But with Graham in charge of Frame Fighters, there's that crack which sees one of the Lieze twins being Howard'd.

NOT THAT!

Originally Posted by Kha

That's more like Hiro and Mai tangled up in a hot tryst.



*RUNS*

...

Der Kleriker has been identified as a source of conflict.

Beginning intervention.

Mai Enna, exterminating target.

*Mai pwns Kha for 9999999 damage*

Originally Posted by Kha

~~~Artei complaining about the overpoweredness of the Aces~~~

Artei: Don't you find it all so strange? They could fly from the moment they picked up their wands, throw nukes like they were banana bombs, becoming senior commanders before 20 when people usually hit that rank at 30...

Kha: Why is that strange?

Artei looks around him.

Kha: <---- Matured at 8 years old.
Sof: <---- First crush at 6 years old.
Caren: <---- Was the most well-endowed girl at 5th elementary.
Erio: <---- Loli-killer at 10.
Caro: <---- Mad about Erio.
Allie: <---- Already learning nukes from Hayate.

Artei: ...so I'm the strange one?

He should just think he's... unique

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Compared to the crack of turning Hayate into a raccoon during the raccoon's mating season with ferret!Yuuno in the surroundings, or even maybe~ Aurion as a cat?


I'd say...

*runs from Diabolic Emission + Astra*****t*

No, I'm not into bestiality thanks

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Genya has a new nickname for Aurion.

Genya: That sneaky little cat with his bag of magic tricks.

Aurion the Wonderful Cat?

*runs*

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Likewise.

Then again, I'm without any girlfriend. Last one broke up long time ago.

Same here

Originally Posted by Nightengale

I'm actually thinking of doing some changes to Kira and Canard, personally.

Depending on which, I may even combine Rozen with one of them, making a revamp, both visually and profile-related... like changing him to look like this.

That's... quite the change

Originally Posted by Nightengale

His roots? You mean... this?

Spoiler for Graham 50 years ago...:

...



Take note Setsuna F. Seiei, THAT's how you use SEVEN SWORDS

Originally Posted by Kha

Feito-chaaan~~~ <3

LIGHTNING-01
Rebuilt of Fate

Spoiler for Fate, the Lightning that Cleaves Evil:

Fate, the Lightning that Cleaves Evil

There’s a saying that great power comes with sad pasts. And without doubt, Fate’s young life has been riddled with heart-rending challenges as Destiny toyed with her again and again. She had been brought into the world thinking only of her mother, but was later betrayed by that very same person; she had found Precia’s diary, but was forced to choose a friend over the book that could lead her to her mother; despite saving the lives of many, she had to face death before she was 16 to gemi-stigma, and after that she struggled against the death of a loved one when everyone else was holding her back, fearing that Fate could turn into another Precia.

But unlike Precia, Fate was surrounded by friends. Nanoha brought her in from the cold; when she could not go on, Keroko pushed from behind; Hayate and her Knights protected her as much as she did them; Chrono, Amy, Lindy gave her the warmth of family; Aurion taught her that it was okay to laugh and cry when she had to; and in a way, Kha and Fate each gave the other the strength they needed.

On the field, Fate is a confident warrior, moving in and out of spellfire and gunfire alike without fear or hesitation, able to deliver precise and crippling attacks to enemy positions with her unparalleled speed and Lightning prowess.

But off the field, Fate is haunted by her troubled family history, and while she has a big heart for children who were in similar circumstances to her before, she is afraid that she isn’t good enough to be a guardian.

In due time, Fate, aided by Kha in the Grade Frame Exia, would rescue Erio and Hiro (then called Null) from an illegal super soldier facility before they were culled. Erio would be transferred to Lindy’s care, and Fate tried her best to care for the little boy, but that shadow of doubt continued to plague her.

Soon, Allison and Caro would join her family, and Fate’s burden grew…

About Bardiche...

Bardiche may seem reserved and stoic, cited by Arisa as the perfect cookie-cutter butler of old, but only few know another side to Bardiche. It seems that Bardiche has a hidden hotblooded side that came to light in only a few occasions, most remarkable being when he chose to sacrifice himself for Fate’s happiness. A barrier was keeping Fate from completing the Tome of Devotion and thus reviving Kha.

At first, he egged Fate on to take the shot, insisting that [there was nothing he could not cut]. Then, when both mage and device were being overwhelmed by the stubborn defense, he brazenly broke through by not only chewing through all 6 cartridges and routing all the extra power to his cracking blade against Fate’s will, but accompanied that with a loud roar of [CHESTOOO!!!]

That suicidal attempt smashed the barrier as much as the stress rendered Bardiche all but unserviceable. The gamble ultimately paid off, and Kha returned Bardiche intact, prompting the device to comment that [there’s still more fight left in this old man] before reverting to his normal self.

This event and the previous encounters that Fate had, including the discovery of a wedding photo of Precia and a tall gold-haired but unnamed man sealed in Bardiche’s ROM, led Aurion and the Aces to believe that Bardiche must’ve been programmed in Mr Testarossa’s image.

And considering that Kha learnt the Zamber sword from the masked Wodan Ymir, “Mr Testarossa” might be nearer to the Aces than they’d believe...

Rebuilt for StrikerS

Now, Fate is a 19-year-old commissioned officer of the TSAB. She lives on Earth in Uminari City with Lindy, who has retired from her position as Admiral, having had too much excitement and seeking a desk job. Fate has been going to school with Nanoha, Hayate, Suzuka, Alisa, and Sophia, and met many memorably whacky characters like the infamous Belkarengers. Her senior at Gakutenoh Academy Himawari Nissan left a lasting impression on Fate, and she aspires to be an all-rounded person like Hina.

She is now the head of the Lightning Squad, and an S+ mage without limiters, an AA mage with. Showing great concern for her squad, particularly Erio (she is his guardian) and Caro, a child that she took in when no one else would, Fate takes her position as leader very seriously. She also feels obliged to look out for Allie, who is a Forward of the Drake Squad led by Keroko despite the Takamachi sibling's teasing protests.

For the most of StrikerS, as Kha was busy managing Church affairs and coordinating interventions, Fate struggles with the double duty of leading her squad to battle and taking care of the children in her care, sometimes bothering with much more that there really was. It is through Fate that I will get a chance to explore with the thread the various issues that Asian working mothers have to face, especially with a husband that is never around due to work, and remain true to my promise of giving the story greater depth than before.

Powers

Fate's magical abilities developed at an astonishing rate, according to Linith. She learned electricity-based attacks faster than other magical types, something that her mother Precia also specialized in. At the age of seven, she had already mastered several abilities to the point of not requiring the incantations. Behind her tutor Linith's back, she also studied how to create and handle familiars, and Arf was the result. Her command phrase for her shooting abilities is "Fire!"

Fate specializes in mid-range and melee attacks, preferring speed to power and endurance. This was a result of the training that her mother demanded, which sacrificed the flexibility of a wide range of abilities for raw speed. After the events of Nanoha, she trained with Chrono to address the gaps in her initial training.

Transformation — Fate transforms Bardiche into Device Form and her Barrier Jacket is activated as well.

Arcus Cultus Aegeas — This is Fate's personal incantation for Bardiche. Generally she uses this to concentrate her energies, especially before unleashing a powerful attack.

Jewel Seed Seal — Used to seal the Jewel Seeds so they will not fuse with anything.

Lightning Bind — A powerful, but difficult to maintain, spell that prevents its target from moving.

Recovery — Fate can restore Bardiche in seconds, even after he is heavily damaged.

Redemption — A skill that can recover Bardiche from any state of damage as long as his consciousness is intact. This ability is spoken by Fate and is evidently taught to her by Kha, who has the Belkansh version of the spell.

Defensive Abilities

Barrier Jacket — Fate activates her defensive outfit. This armor was originally selected by Arf.

Lightning Form — This is similar to her original Barrier Jacket, with more protective power and some armor plates on her shoes and left glove.

Sonic Form — This lighter variation of Fate's Barrier Jacket dispenses with the cloak and instead puts Sonic Sails, Flier Fin-like wings on Fate's boots and arms, greatly increasing her movement speed.

Sonic Drive — Fate activates this variation of Sonic Form after breaking free from the Dream of Infinite Desire. Her speed and magic powers greatly increases in this form. Incantation to activate this form is "Jacket Purge!" followed by "Sonic Form, Overdrive!"

It is revealed in a pre-StrikerS arc that Sonic Drive was created from Sonic Form, as Fate tore up her fringe skirt to use as bandages for Kha during an intermittent bout against an Armor Slave on another Non-Administered World. Subsequently, Hayate made further adjustments for aethetic and strategic value, resulting in the lightweight and swimsuit-like Sonic Drive.

Impulse Form — The new Barrier Jacket variation seen in StrikerS, it sports a complete new design that holds little resemblance with any of the other variations seen until then. It’s design is akin to a “working attire”, able to be used both in the office and out in the field. Even though she does not show it, the extra cloth does weigh her down a lot as compared to her Sonic Drive form.

Blitz Action — Fate's movement speed is increased dramatically (if temporarily), to the point where human eyes cannot track her easily. In A's, this is upgraded to Sonic Move; in Sonic Form, she does not need to activate the ability.

Defenser — Bardiche's Auto-Guard magic. It can guard in every direction, but can be broken easily.

Defenser Plus — It is essentially a more powerful form of Defenser, and capable of being cast over a larger area to protect more than one person. This technique was refined by Kha as he is specialized in the creation of barriers and shields.

Bind Break — Attempts to deactivate a binding or imprisoning spell. The amount of time required to deactivate depends on the complexity of the target magic.

Jacket Purge — Fate "unravels" the magic power that comprises her Jacket, causing it to explode. This has significant attack power, and can disrupt binding magics. However, she is vulnerable for a few moments after purging the Jacket, and she requires magic power to recreate a new one. It is this command that begins the system's preparation for Sonic Drive.

Thunder Arm — A lightning defense on her left arm that attacks whoever strikes it with lightning unleashed from one of the orbs around her arm. After such an attack, an orb is consumed. Fate can create 5 orbs at once.

Dynamic Thunder — A variation of Thunder Arm that consumes all 5 orbs at once and launches an electrical impression of Fate’s arm up to the base of the elbow to act as a mid-ranged attack.

Offensive Abilities

Arc Saber — Fate's melee attack, consisting of a blade of light from the Bardiche in Scythe form. It is powerful enough to neutralize Nanoha's Divine Shooter missiles. The blade itself can be thrown, spinning it much like a shuriken.

Scythe Slash — A variation of the Arc Saber where the blade is enhanced in order to penetrate barrier-type magics such as Barrier Jackets.

Haken Saber — As Arc Saber, except with Bardiche Assault in Haken form.

Haken Slash

— The Scythe Slash-like variation of Fate's Haken Saber.

Plasma Blaster — Fate launches two beams of yellow plasma from the two orbs by her shoulders as a sword-cross countermeasure. As such, this skill can only be used in the heavier but better-equipped Impulse barrier jacket form.

Photon Lancer — Fate's basic ranged attack, fired from a small collection of energy called a "Photon Sphere". Fate's shots are faster, but unlike Nanoha's Divine Shooter, they are unguided. Because of their ease and speed of casting, Fate now uses them like Nanoha uses Divine Shooter as blindfire "Head Vulcan" attacks.

Photon Lancer Phalanx Shift — A variation of Photon Lancer (and Fate's most powerful attack in season 1), this spell amasses several large Photon Spheres and unleashes a storm of Photon Lancer shots on the target.

Plasma Lancer — A more powerful version of Photon Lancer, with increased attack power and the ability to turn at Fate's command should it miss.

Thunder Smasher — Fate's siege-type attack, analogous to Nanoha's Divine Buster.

Plasma Smasher — Thunder Smasher's upgrade, used when Bardiche Assault is in Assault Form.

Trident Smasher — The third upgraded magic of the Thunder Smasher line, three beams are shot simultaneously from the same firing-point, creating the illusion of a trident's blade.

Thunder Rage — Fate's multitarget attack, activated with Bardiche in Sealing Form. Together with Nanoha's Divine Buster, Fate used this to seal six Jewel Seeds at once.

Thunder Blade — An enhanced version of Thunder Rage, Fate focuses each attack into individual swords that can detonate on the command "Break!". Chrono Harlaown has a similar attack called Stinger Blade.

Blitz Rush — Fate can increase the speed of her magic missiles such as Plasma Lancer.

The Zamber: The Blade of Testarossa

This style of magical sword creation has been passed down over centuries, surviving even the selection pressure for ranged Midchilda schools of magic. The basic Zamber was programmed into Bardiche right from the start, but it was only when Bardiche was upgraded with the CVK system and Fate grew stronger that she was able to wield the family’s sword for the first time.

Ever since then, Fate has been working with what secrets she could unlock from within Bardiche, and with pointers from the mysterious Wodan Ymir, has been discovering old Zamber swords and creating new ones for herself.

Riot Zamber — Bardiche Assault in a sabre-like form, replacing the basic Zamber as Fate’s main Zamber sword. Riot Zamber is much sharper and has a more refined shine when compared to the basic Zamber, and is a testament of Fate’s mastery of the Zamber, much like Kha’s own Zamber variant, Gotteliches Zamber, or G-Zamber for short.


When Fate performs attacks with Riot Zamber, she sometimes uses differ ritual shouts to trigger different effects.

Itouryoudan! - This strengthens Fate's swing, allowing her to deliver a clean slice through the midsection.

Denkōsekka! – Fate uses the Riot Zamber with a swift swipe in the air to create a strong enough wind to cut the enemy.

Daisharin! – Fate uses additional mana to enlarge the Riot Zamber into a larger katana-like blade. She then swings it, releasing what seems like a giant version of the ranged mode of Haken Saber.

Raikō Giri! – Fate first enlarges the Zamber into a large broadsword, if it isn’t already in that mode. She then uses it to perform a giant vertical strike from below the opponent and then performing a swift horizontal strike almost simultaneously, then finishes with a strike of lightning from above or from her hand for a good measure.

Shippu Jinrai! – Fate would perform a series of rapid slashes, before ending with a clean, vertical cut.

Un'yō no Tachi, Kenzan! – Fate enlarges the Zamber to such a point that it's almost too large for her arms to even handle. Straining under Bardiches weight, she lifts the weapon high above her head and proceeds to take to the sky. She then drops down with a single bisecting slash as a finishing attack, yelling KENZAN!

The following changes the sword blade, and can be used with the above shouts.

Sprite Zamber — This sword is designed to destroy force fields, binding magics, and illusions. Fate, after transforming Bardiche Assault to Zamber form, uses this to break out of the Book of Darkness' prison.

Jet Zamber — Fate's ultimate melee attack, she first throws a shockwave at the target, then swings Bardiche Assault in Zamber form. The energy blade of the Zamber grows to many times its typical size, so Fate can slash through a target that would ordinarily be out of range. This is analogous to Vita’s Gigantform.

Plasma Zamber Breaker — Bardiche Assault in Zamber form unleashes a powerful energy blast with a cricket-type swing. Functions as an even longer-ranged particle assault bombardment.


Hurricane Zamber


An extremely powerful combination attack between Fate and her familiar Arf that uses almost all types of spells, from ritual magic to weather-control to mass-bombardment to binds.

Arf transform into her largest and most powerful form Dire Wolf, and lets Fate hitch a ride. Charging towards the enemy like a magical samurai on horseback, Fate then strikes with the Hurricane Zamber in various fashions and power levels depending on the coordinated mana burst delivered.

Cat One - a high-speed horizontal slash, then Fate cleaves the enemy vertically afterwards.

Cat Two - Hurricane Zamber spins very rapidly to generate a whirlwind that carries the bisected enemy mage up into the air before Fate adds a final horizontal slash upon the enemy.

Cat Three – This is where it starts getting ridiculous. Fate and Arf mount up on any conveniently available raised platform like a telephone phone or building or cliff with a sharp fall or just float in the air very much higher than the opponent amid torrents of rain and lightning. Arf then pushes off the raised point and charges down the raised platform, sometimes almost vertically, using gravity to gain additional momentum. Fate directs several lightning bolts to strike down and bind the enemy mage as they close, and once they do proceed with a cricket paddle swing knocking the mage off his/her feet then finishing with a horizontal slashing as they ride pass.

Cat Four – Fate and Arf mount up on any conveniently available raised platform like a telephone phone or building or cliff with a sharp fall or just float in the air very much higher than the opponent amid torrents of rain and lightning. Arf then pushes off the raised point and charges down the raised platform, sometimes almost vertically, using gravity to gain additional momentum. This variation pumps a lot of mana into Hurricane Zamber’s spin, creating a vortex that sucks the enemy mage towards the sky and be struck repeatedly by lightning as they charge at the target. And when then close with the target mid-air, Fate finishes the target off with a clean slice.

Cat Five – The most awesome, borderline-ridiculous and overwhelmingly powerful version of Hurricane Zamber. Using Kha’s Reality Marble idea, Fate projects a false reality that traps the target within a realm that obeys only her own rules. As such, there is always a high cliff shrouded in enormously violent lightning storms for her to mount on. Arf then pushes off the raised point and charges down the raised platform, sometimes almost vertically, using gravity to gain additional momentum. The reality created is that, as the enemy tries to run, lightning from above will repeatedly strike them no matter what they do, and no matter how they try to escape, Fate and Arf will always catch up. Fate then performs a flurry of slashes before leaping into the air after the hapless target, striking down with a clean vertical cut and stopping a safe distance away before the target explodes.

As cool as it sounds, this skill is so taxing that it is damaging to one‘s magical potential. However, due to the way the Master-Familiar mana link is established, Arf has a trick that causes only her Linker Core takes the bulk of the strain and leaving a manageable amount for Fate, leaving herself completely drained and near death when they used that attack once. As a familiar, Arf’s Linker Core and magical potential can recover eventually over a long period of time, but because of that taking such a big hit at once can kill her.

Even in StrikerS, 1 year after the incident, Arf is still in like power-saving form. And Fate has practically sworn off ever trying Cat 5 again.

Riot Zamber II


With Sonic Drive Form active, Bardiche Assault split into two Riot Zamber, much like how Kha can split Tausend Kreuz’s greatsword-like Kreuzfahrer form into two falchions. In fact, Fate thanks Kha for letting her borrow his idea after defeating Jail.

But unlike Kha, a magical string at the end of each hilt connects both of halves of the Zamber. This additional feature, while it restricts the throwing capacity of RZ2, proves to be very nifty. The string allows RZ2 to be used like sword-chucks, with Fate able to perform the mind-boggling nunchaku dance made famous by Bruce Lee. The enforcer demonstrates that the string can be set to cutting strength and blunt strength rapidly, as she used the string to damage Tre then grabbing the same portion with her bare hands to swing the two Zamber blades at Jail and Sette. The strings can also extend, allowing Fate to throw one half like a dart and retrieve the blade like a yoyo. And since it can extend, it can also retract fully, holding both Zambers end to end like a massive double-edged beam saber, allowing her to face off the combined attacks of Tre and Sette at once while avoiding Jail’s laser whips.

Fate can also combine both Riot Zamber halves to form an even bigger version, and split them at her command even with the blades embedded in solid material, causing it to be cleaved from within. Visually, the rejoined Riot Zamber II resembles the ZXO Sword from the Super Robot Wars series.

I tried to be fair to all my characters...

But sadly...

Fate got the most so far.


I am not Asagi I am not Asagi I am not Asagi I am not Asagi I am not Asagi ...

I am...

Not...

...

...

CHESToOoOoOoOoOo!

*runs*

MUCH APPROVED WINNER!!!!!!!!!!!



I'm sure Papa Testarossa is going to be proud...

*cries manly tears*

And nice explanation for why we haven't seen Arf out of being loli for the while now

More Rebuilts please

Originally Posted by Tormenk

*staggers in with an old raggedy cloak and leaning on a old wooden staff*

Much activity this past two days and I can see the the thread's plenty healthy with new crack and ideas being injected in. Though frankly, I'm much too tired to comment on the new stuff but rest assured I have read(or going to read) them all. That said, let me rest.

*falls over dead from Triple All-Nighter Breaker*

I told you so, backlog's being injected with much Crack at Zenryoku Zenkai

Originally Posted by USB500

You just made me go and cry hotblooded tears of manliness at this Fate remake.

TADASHI!!

Did I just see the infamous ZXO Sword???? In before....

HISSATSU!!!!

TENJOU TENGA!!! N***** M**** KEN!!!!

This reminds me to do remake as well, although...

*imagination goes wild over Signum Loveless remake*



I leave it to you, Kha.

*runs*

Yes, we're waiting for Rebuilt of Lamia Signum

*runs*

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Please, o' Mighty God, give me courage and wisdom to face the enormous crack in this thread, lest I perish from hideously laughing myself silly and rolling on the floor clutching a damaged tummy due to muscular cramps. Amen.

AMEN

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

*pats* Some shafts shouldn't be depressing. You should be proud.

Spoiler for Like this?:

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

[Bob]Only when they involve a female, yes? *wink*[/Bob]

Very True

*runs faster*

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

On the bright side, at least I won't be TOO alone tonight...


... Wanna make our characters do something awkward for this day ?

Smith: Only if it ends up with good things in the end!
Wesson: Yeah, like in bed!

*both sulk in corner*

*Mr. Lonely plays on the radio*

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

Not TOO alone? You're lucky, I'm pretty much alone this Valentine's, like all the 15 others I've bothered to notice.

Maybe that's because I have Unlimited Harem Works no vested interest in members of the fairer gender.

But Ashcroft seems to think differently about your little idea...

Excuses excuses

*RUNS*

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

On the bright side, at least I won't be TOO alone tonight...


... Wanna make our characters do something awkward for this day ?

*contemplates the idea of writing in something about certain CCs or OCs*

*decides to leave it to another time*


Not too much to do with V. Day but here's something nice.

Spoiler for Size:

[Wild Goose]

Originally Posted by Kha

Well... Blame Ginga then. I've always believed siblings share many traits, and I felt Drills were appropiate...

...

....drills that pierce their heavens?

No wonder. I went and made Marines out of the Enforcers, especially since technically both Enforcers and Marines like you said "deploy from ships". I forgot about the combat specilization and thought investigations were only because of the idea that TSAB was an internal affairs department, and forgot that I dumped the idea aeons ago.

Looks like the Frame Fighters will be a subset of the TSAB Marines. Complete with personal assault suits and airborne insertion in the humble Frame. I'll just remove their investigative duties so as not to mix it up with the other elite group Enforcers.

To be honest, until Alpha came about, I just couldn't see any reason for the TSAB to have Marines. COIN operations in Iraq notwithstanding, Marines are basically used to hit hard and fast, deploying from sea as an invasion force, storming the beachheads (or flying past the beachheads and landing en masse) and kicking ass, blowing up crap, and taking names.

Let me put it this way: Marines, especially US Marines, are concentrated badass.

Enforcers.... not so.

Frankly, Marines are anathema to the TSAB's policy. COIN in Iraq to the contrary, you don't use Marines for soft operations, you use them to kick doors down, shoot crap, and kill people. (although Army officers are surprised and amazed at how good the Marines in Iraq are at COIN, which was never a part of Marine syllabus.)

...but if you want to make them, go right ahead. Just remember that they'll be viewed with much WTF since they're shock troops. (Also, Marines tend to emphasise speed over armor/firepower. Marines will drop armor and go for speed and firepower.) That means plenty of movement, supression fire...

When Kagerou and I reveal our version of the TSAB Marines, the TSAB will be screaming bloody murder, because the Marines are pissing all over the Air Force and Army.

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

Man, it sucks to be a TSAB Marine.

Especially since TSAB Marines won't exist for quite a while.

I Lol-ed at the "arrest" part.

Well, she was still trying to arrest them. "You're under arrest for magical discharge etc etc."

Franz/Ivanovich/Chief: *snipes Quattro & Deici*

There's really so little info on SI? *rubs hands with evil glee*

Then I'll get writing quick before there is...

But, um, what's a BUMMER?

Bummer is a guy who just bums around doing nothing, ala beach bum.

Originally Posted by Kha

Spoiler for Fate, the Lightning that Cleaves Evil:

CRACK

Great crack. Overload. Will comment tomorrow. Too tired.

But...jesus, Kha, there's so much Zengar there. *shakes head* Although I loled at the tongue in cheek descriptions of the Catagories of Tatsumaki Zanber. (Tatsumaki is Tornado. Unless you deliberately wanted Hurricane instead.)

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

To make it easier, why not just say that his "official rank" in the TSAB would be Chief Librarian (which would have bestowed no particular honorific as far as I can see, except maybe Mr.), whereas if you were to refer to him in other circumstances as -sensei or Professor? Professorship should be his academic title, I agree with you, not the title of his rank.

Or to put things into context/perspective: When Yuuno is in the Infinity Library, he's the Chief Librarian. But outside, when discussing/lecturing on archaeology, he's Professor Scrya.

Damn. I was seriously laughing myself silly over this ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL piece. Never did I imagine it to be so appropriate and masterfully done.

I think I'm going to copy-pasta it and send it through e-mails to my friends, so that lo, they too doth laugh and becometh silly.

Whoops, the influence is certainly fast.

Ehehehe.... I blame Mike Doyle, former Marine and retired Chicago cop, who sent this to me. This chapter was the whole reason Kagerou decided that the Air Wing would use 1911s.

Originally Posted by AdmiralTigerclaw

@ Saint X. Ignore it. I probably deleted the wrong tag when working on the texts.


Now, about those marines... if someone makes them, we need a Solid Snake.

Spoiler for SNAAAKE!!! -AAAAKE-AAAKE...:

youtube.com/watch?v=9eU0kXhL5k0

-CACKLE-

There's no place he can't sneak into.

Wrong Marines. You're thinking in lines of US Marines, Kha's thinking of Enforcers with mecha armor and investigations and slow moving hammer blows (Marines - especially the Royal Marines and US Marines - are big proponents of manuver warfare).

Kagerou and I.... well, let's just say that where he is, you'll find them.

And at this point, I really don't see a need or role for Snake.... of course, i'm worn out, recovering from sickness.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

*Gasp* I think this is the first time I've quoted you.
Yeah I remember Aurion being mentioned once... I don't know how Aurion's works so I can't really comment on how more fluent and/or natural Rune's is in comparison.

Well so far the only issue I have is with her Bankai-esque spell... Here lemme show you...

Spoiler for Arc-en-Ciel: Rune notes:

As a comparison I've "built" Rune as a B+ rank mage.

Banaki-esque spell: Her "ace in the hole" that makes her powers increase immensely. Essentially a sort of "release" on her rare trait that both accelerates and improves it. Not only does mana collection and conversion improve but the mana is drawn into her as well improving her magically-enhanced physical power. During this "release" Rune has been rated as high S- but AAA is far more common. However if the "release" lasts longer then five minutes her body begins to break and she would likely last for up to eleven minutes. By then her body would likely stop functioning.

I think it might be a bit of a HUGE increase. Not to mention I have some spells floating around that are only available when the "release" is in effect...

So basically a temporal state in which Rune increases her physical and magical powers. I dont see any problems, especially with the restrictions you've set already. The only thing is, it might be a bit hard to explain how this release works...

Originally Posted by dkellis

Can someone please give me a quick run-down of the ranks and proper form of address for all the characters in StrikerS as of the end of the series?

Hopefully someone will make a table with this information. We could add it to the front page too.

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Actually, I do have a little time everyday. Its just that since its a lot less than what I used to have, I rather read fanfics/mangas or watch anime, rather than break backlogs. I haven't even touch my PS2 for over a month, and anyone who knows me knows that's not normal. Then there's the eroge that I have piled up and not finished. *cough cough*

I can relate to that, actually. I only come to these forums while I am at work, when there is not much work to do. At nights, I'd rather watch animes or else.

And eroge huh? Nice that you can read some Japanese.

I'll just refer to that if they added into their archive post. I'm having a lot of problems trying to navigate through all the posts.

At least I can say, not much has changed since you "left". Of course, there are some nice new OCs to read about.

I think the name sounds cool.

Excellent. The name is getting more and more official everyday.

Zomg, one less possible love interest for my OC. I'm starting to think I'll have to make my own one.

Wait, you were planning to make your OC Teana's boyfriend or something? With this new OC in the works, Lowe and I are just planning to make Teana have a schoolgirl crush on him...nothing else. Your OC can also join in the fun if you want.

Oh, and Teana will also be gaining a love rival...

Hmm...mana absorption in small amounts sounds okay, and as long as it doesn't drain a person dry like in seconds.

I think krisslanza's skill only absorbs the mana in the environment.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Well, she's unofficially part of the Ravens afterall. Not that Gwen and the others will object to it

I would say she is as good as officially part of the Ravens, just that she did not partake in the... not-so-legal activities of the group...

And even more nuts, with a penchant of blowing up things just for the hell of it?

Just the type of enemy we're missing, huh?

Actually Subaru has the Drill

For limit break, Teana needs guns named Ebony and Ivory

*runs*

I see, so Teana will bind the enemy and Subaru will Ginga Drill Breaker him?

And Ebony and Ivory?

...Maybe Lockon gave them to her as a present...?

Oh my, the dorama that will come from this...

Collectively they're called the Belkarangers, my Super-Sentai inspired female trio

Currently, only Asagi has a complete profile. The other two, Mayura Labatt's and Julie Liu Ming, coming up soon

• Asagi Colwell [Fiery Adventurer BelkaRed]
  
  
  
  • Main Profile
  • Spells and Abilities
  • Special Moves and Techniques
    

I missed the Spells and Abilities part... It is indeed MASSIVE! I'll finish reading it in a bit...

Originally Posted by Kha

Sou... Setsuna (Yui Hiro as you guys know him) and Lockon have been OCfied. Who's gonna do the gender-confused cyborg and the schizo pilot, or are both of them combined into one neat package called Rebuilt of Keroko?!

*RUNS DAMN FAST*

And I thought you already ported the entire 00 cast... at least we got Lockon.

Yeah I'll be needing them to fit everything together properly. Cos after the 912 incident, we can call it Nanoha 00.

Just a bit more details here and there and I'll be releasing Gwen's profile. So far, my ideas dont seem to conflict with yours. And I think you will like some of the ideas.

The only request I can think of is to give them a Frame each. :3

*runs*

lol I thought you'd say that. If you want to give them frames, go ahead. I am not good at creating that kinda thing, so they are all up to you.

...
...
...

Alright where's my little emo king Shinnji... I hear he's got a date with one of the second gen ERW...

*runs*

So now even Shinnji will make an appearance...

Haha, I guess we do have to create this second gen ERWs now...

It all happened one day...

[Crack for Nanoha 2nd GiRLfriENd]

Sophia: Wh-why are you apologizing to me?! You set this up?! What do you want to do with me?!

*trips over sponge mat and hastily curls up*

Y- you already got Hayate, why...

Kha: W-WAIT A MINUTE!!!

[/Crack for Nanoha 2nd GiRLfriENd]

...another timeline. :3

And so, the KhaXSophia timeline has finally been created... Who's gonna die in this one?

*runs*

It was the best thing to hit me, since I remembered that Kha also has boomerang blades. That sets up the 2x Boomer Final nicely.

I forgot Kha had boomerang blades, but they are a nice ranged alternative for him.

...
...

Shall I invoke Touya!Artei in response to the new Gakis?

But go ahead; Teana's not booked by me anymore.

*runs*

Gotta give Teana some love.

But who are you referring to as "Gakis"?

Nikoru: AHOU!

(smacks Erio with Harisen)

Isn't Subaru there?

And yes, Arisa's comedian cousin is coming soon.

Why does this bit here remind me of Sakuya from Hayate no Gotoku?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

PM me if you need any help with the ideas.

Will do, but this time I will be releasing complete profiles before any scenarios, so will have a better idea of what's going on.

Originally Posted by Kha

~~~Artei complaining about the overpoweredness of the Aces~~~

Artei: Don't you find it all so strange? They could fly from the moment they picked up their wands, throw nukes like they were banana bombs, becoming senior commanders before 20 when people usually hit that rank at 30...

Kha: Why is that strange?

Artei looks around him.

Kha: <---- Matured at 8 years old.
Sof: <---- First crush at 6 years old.
Caren: <---- Was the most well-endowed girl at 5th elementary.
Erio: <---- Loli-killer at 10.
Caro: <---- Mad about Erio.
Allie: <---- Already learning nukes from Hayate.

Artei: ...so I'm the strange one?

lol at this.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I'd like to see how much of a role Alicia T. will be playing in Rebuilt

But... me and Saint X were talking about The Goddess of the Neo-Venezian waterways, the White Fairy, Snow White, hailing from Aqua, aka the planet formerly known as Mars...

ALICIA FLORENCE

Spoiler for Behold!:

*saves*

Erhm... More please?

*runs*

[FieryAeon]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And for the final part of Asagi Colwell's FIERY ADVENTUROUS profile ( ), here's Part V: Trivia

Spoiler for length:

*snip*

A jack of all trades who's also a stalker. Hmm...ME LIKES!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And for some bonus extras

Spoiler for Asagi Colwell: Various Expressions:

*taken from Gate of Magus*

Next Profile in line: "Honest Heart" Mayura Labatt

Who is Asagi actually referencing too? Can't say I know.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Oh don't worry, she'll be well taken care of

Just making sure Artei's treatment of Teana doesn't go beyond sisterly love lest he's sincere, or he'll have Unlimited Sniper Works siced at him

So... Keroko-chan will have a deep connection to VEDA now?

*RUNS AT LUDICROUS SPEED*

And we know Sis-cons are frowned upon, no?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Spoiler for This Guy...:

Agent 47 from the Hitman games

I see...never played the game so I wouldn't know.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And she'll be part of Chrono Harlaown's Numbers

*runs*

There'll be the Number VII flirt, and the Number X trap. Then also the Number I onee-sama.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I learn from thy master

Don't you mean "mine"? I don't recall acknowledging him as my master.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Exactly the point

*runs*

Alternatively, you could probably have the version of the gun Dante has when he's in demon form.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Red particles and Blue particles...

Violet?

Right! ....why do I feel a deathly chill all of a sudden?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Ware the insane chick and the pyscho brother.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I'm using an Image Rotator site for it, changing images each time the page refreshes

Ahhh...I recall C2F uses that as well.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*plays catchy GunxSword theme*

*Sees giant satellite landing in the distance*

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

A Happy Valentines Day to everyone!!!

I don't celebrate it really. So in the words of my friend, for people like me, its "Singles Awareness Day". Though to be honest I wasn't really conscious that Valentines was today. Just because I rather not have people bug me for the thousandth time whether I've found a girlfriend or not.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Welcome back!

Tadaima!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

And as far as GenerationS is going, she's having a rough time with Aurion in the mock battle.

Spoiler for ACTUAL PART!:

"Oji-chan was handling me roughly~!"

*runs!*

Approved!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Then tell me why I haven't use a single one in GenerationS as of late.

You haven't?! Nooooooooooo~~~~~~~~~~~~

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

It would have worked... Maybe...

(That scene TOTALLY cranked up Kyou's MOE! rating in my meter...>_< XD)

I must admit I can't decide who I like better now after the recent episodes. I didn't like Nagisa at first, but she's definitely the more developed character in the story, and is racking in the points. That scene with Kyou was hella funny, but didn't really tickle my interest that much. Kotomi is still number 1 for me really. Anyway back on topic.

Originally Posted by Kha

Neither does Gimmy's Night and Gale revolver tonfas. Besides, the limit then falls on the Knight and not the device, so no h4xx there.

Actually, the reasoning is if you have a gun that doesn't need reloads, that'd be haxxed. I don't think Gimmy's device is under the same category.

Originally Posted by Kha

Watch the next episode. :3 I do hope the Thrones don't suddenly putter out Zeta Zed-style, especially after noting that they all are missing the proper PD Blanket.

Btw, I hope no one mind's my Trek-kenese whenever the mana furnaces and artificial Linker Cores come into focus.

Next episode as in episode 19? I'm only up to 17 really.

Originally Posted by Kha

?

You know we Chinese like to use the term "muddying the waters"? Yeah throwing irregulars into an equation does that.

Originally Posted by Kha

The same one. Sophia technically is a character taken from Fate Stay Night then dumped into the Mai series and later I dragged her out and into the Nanohaverse.

And by doing so, I dragged her "senior" Natsuki into the thread as well. She makes a few cameos in the Rebuilt timeline, but most of the time will be devoted to the nameless Canoness of the Adeptae Belkarum who really is Maria from the Otome timeline as well.

Of course we don't need to watch either Fate Stay Night or Mai Otome to understand or enjoy Sophia.

I'd actually like to see more appearances then. And Shizuru as well, just not the Mai Hime version.

Originally Posted by Kha

It worked for Kyou, so why not Sophia, who's character is rather similar to Kyou?

And 2nd GiRLfriENd is a non-magical AU where all OCs and CCs are studying at the same school, leaving room only for high school mayhem. It really resembles Chrono's POV of Keroko's great work in the FF threads, Raising Heart.

Do check it out and vote! Reality Reading has never been more fun!

Sophia is based on Rin, no? Actually its my believe that many people misunderstand Rin as being bipolar, as in a tsundere. But anyway, I see Sophia giving the person the 1000 harisen hit treatment rather than lay there going all dere-dere.

Well, its your OC though so you know best. Just thinking out loud.

Originally Posted by Kha

"Don't pour cold water on a hot man."

Originally Posted by Kha

Waaay off. I'm gonna love the looks on everyone's faces when I pull that twist off.

Sounds interesting.

Originally Posted by Kha

That's more like Hiro and Mai tangled up in a hot tryst.




*RUNS*

Your life expentancy just got lower.

Originally Posted by Kha

For me it was at first sight, then that scene went and blew a hole in my head causing my brain to go running off through the gutter.

But the one who amp'd MOE for me was definitely Kotomi's arc. Somehow ever since CCS I loved the concept of childhood sweethearts. It reminded me of Kha and Alicia's love story too.

One can't forget the scene where she defeated many with her violin. "Her weapon is the violin. It takes 0.2 seconds to propagate, and has defeated many."

Originally Posted by Kha

Which brings me to another crack exchange:

~~~Artei complaining about the overpoweredness of the Aces~~~

Artei: Don't you find it all so strange? They could fly from the moment they picked up their wands, throw nukes like they were banana bombs, becoming senior commanders before 20 when people usually hit that rank at 30...

Kha: Why is that strange?

Artei looks around him.

Kha: <---- Matured at 8 years old.
Sof: <---- First crush at 6 years old.
Caren: <---- Was the most well-endowed girl at 5th elementary.
Erio: <---- Loli-killer at 10.
Caro: <---- Mad about Erio.
Allie: <---- Already learning nukes from Hayate.

Artei: ...so I'm the strange one?

Think of yourself as the normal one, you'll feel better.

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

There's really so little info on SI? *rubs hands with evil glee*

Then I'll get writing quick before there is...

But, um, what's a BUMMER?

Sorry, I meant a bum. As in lazy bum. Anyway...no, we don't know much about SI, and we don't really have much info on the enforcers for that matter.

Originally Posted by Kha

Feito-chaaan~~~ <3

LIGHTNING-01
Rebuilt of Fate

Spoiler for image:

Spoiler for Fate, the Lightning that Cleaves Evil:

*snip*

I tried to be fair to all my characters...

But sadly...

Fate got the most so far.

Firstly, the GAR part feels...unnecessary. I like Bardiche the way he/it is.

Reality marble again?

Armor Slave? The kind of slave from Otome? =O

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Please, o' Mighty God, give me courage and wisdom to face the enormous crack in this thread, lest I perish from hideously laughing myself silly and rolling on the floor clutching a damaged tummy due to muscular cramps. Amen.

Well, I'm sure nothing is worse than that bout of sickness you had awhile back.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

*pats* Some shafts shouldn't be depressing. You should be proud.

Some shafts are standing proud you know. *whistles*

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

I'll try and see if I get any more strange working ideas. If not, this one goes into publication.

Carpet bombing FTW!

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

And you called me a stalker.

I did?

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

I think it's still the same.

Guess that's the one thing that didn't go and change on me while I was absent.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

Sunday?

Considering I have to go to Church in the morning, and since my dad is a Church worker and has to stay back, this means I usually don't get home till earliest at 1pm and we usually take lunch outside on Sunday, so that means I sometimes don't get home till 3pm. Add in the fact I actually have to work half day even on Sunday, and Saturday becomes the only off day I have.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

[Bob]Only when they involve a female, yes? *wink*[/Bob]

Why yes. Incidentally it seems to be that way. I wonder why now...

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

You talking about me? Actually, I was hesitant at first about double-posting (well, that's because our previous forum forbade it), but I checked the rules around and did not find anything relevant to it, so I just posted.

AFAIK double posting with valid reasons are usually accepted. Seeing as this is a thread that does have a focus on writing, we shouldn't have any problems.

Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare

I've finally done dumping at least five scenes to other Chapters. That leaves me about five more scenes to complete before the release, and the words are building rather rapidly. If anything, it might rival Chapter Four in length, so brace yourself. >.>

Mine getting on msn sometime and pass it to me when you're done? Whats the estimated word count anyway?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

On the bright side, at least I won't be TOO alone tonight...

Hmm...alone as in? In any case its past midnight here. So much for Valentines.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

... Wanna make our characters do something awkward for this day ?

A Keroko-chan esque day? I'm game!

Originally Posted by Tormenk

*contemplates the idea of writing in something about certain CCs or OCs*

*decides to leave it to another time*


Not too much to do with V. Day but here's something nice.

Spoiler for Size:

Awwww.... C.C FTW!!

[Wild Goose]

on the subject of Rin and tsundereness, it's my interpretation that Rin is bipolar/tsundere due to:

- Father dying at young age

- growing up alone

- being forced to put up the false refined front of the neat, calm, beautiful school idol when she would really like to just kick back and be a slacker

- financial worries. Rin is rich, but she has to live frugally to save up her money, and she blew around 2-20 million US dollars during the Grail War on her jewels.

[Ryand-Smith]

Kha

Spoiler for Cleaved!:

Rebuilt Fate

You have given me a morning of GAR, Guts, and hotblood for the last, 3 days now? I mean, its like a breakfast of Champion*is shot by lawyer*. JHow long untill Rebuild 1, 3 years shakes fist at Ganiax Ginga, at least in my story, is more based on Getter Robo/early GGG, but I'm saving the hotblooded fights for later. Now for Arado... Oh what would a bunch of girls do to a captured guy...

runs into VF-111

LoweGear

Spoiler for Rangers, Go!:

HENSHIN

This is going to be an intresting OC. Henshin in Nanohaverse, with background of humor? Do like!
ALICIA FLORENCE, where is she from. My crack-dar has no file of reference for this one?

Aura: "Maybe you should use Wikipedia, Master-Smith?"

Eh, I'll google it later...

Nightengale
What the devilry is this? Furries? Oh no, the crack is too much... Systems formatin...

PhoenixFlare
This is stage 2, doubt, but you will be restored by the Internets, as the pure win flows over you like light in fiber optics, Ahmen




AdmiralTigerclaw

Snake? How did he sneak here? We must have too much Crack piles by the doorway!

Tormenk
Nom nom Nom? Where is the source of that 4-koma?

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Actually, I do have a little time everyday. Its just that since its a lot less than what I used to have, I rather read fanfics/mangas or watch anime, rather than break backlogs. I haven't even touch my PS2 for over a month, and anyone who knows me knows that's not normal. Then there's the eroge that I have piled up and not finished. *cough cough*

I think everyone wished they had more time . We can never seem to have enough...

Originally Posted by Keroko

Oh, and I know certain people here are going to have a field day with this, but I decided I've had enough Kamen Rider references I couldn't possibly understand thrown at me and decided to dive head-first into Kamen Rider Den-O (why Den-O? Dunno, that last youtube looked sweet)

Ah, Den-O (which just finished actually. I still need to finish the other half of the series and wait for the movie to be sub'd ). I will say that Den-O is quite a bit different than previous Kamen Rider series because its a lot more comical and light-hearted rather than dark, drama, and filled with character deaths. But it's still fun to watch . I'll probably end up watching Kabuto next as well as keeping up with Kiva...

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

The "Collective" is about to get a MAJOR OVERHAUL!!

<whips out Rocket Launcher>

A rocket launcher? Is that all?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Actually Subaru has the Drill

For limit break, Teana needs guns named Ebony and Ivory

*runs*

That would be...interesting...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Asagi: Wakata Mayura

Belkarangers, ATTACK

*Belkarangers >>> Ryotaro*

Mayura: *pulling Ryotaro gift-wrapped in ribbons*

You're gonna get taken home

Asagi: Yes Mayura, that's the way!



And nope, Julie and Mayura don't have profiles yet, though they will soon

Ryotaro: Mmm? Mmph! *stuggles but gives up, chalking it up to his bad luck*

Originally Posted by Kha

Mach: [Let's do this, my Master.]
Subaru: Tousen da! DRILL OFF!

Cross: [My turn!]
Teana: Draw! Mode Two, full power!

All 4: DOUBLE BOOMERANG!

Teana throws.

All 4: FINAL!!!

So much...HOT BLOOD

Originally Posted by Kha

Sou... Setsuna (Yui Hiro as you guys know him) and Lockon have been OCfied. Who's gonna do the gender-confused cyborg and the schizo pilot, or are both of them combined into one neat package called Rebuilt of Keroko?!

*RUNS DAMN FAST*

Hmmm....

*runs*

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Worry not of the pirated version! *sprays blue GN particles* Speaking of which, what happens if the 2 kinds of particles overlap?

Maybe the same thing like when you cross beams (Ghostbusters)

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And for the final part of Asagi Colwell's FIERY ADVENTUROUS profile ( ), here's Part V: Trivia

Spoiler for length:

Miscellaneous Trivia:
*snip*

And for some bonus extras

Spoiler for Asagi Colwell: Various Expressions:

*taken from Gate of Magus*

Next Profile in line: "Honest Heart" Mayura Labatt

Love the trivia . She's like our resident OC otaku (kinda like Konata)...except rich and able to actually afford it

Originally Posted by USB500

Note: just to say here that I'm finally continuing Tears of Northern Wind after almost two months of absence. Well, it almost reaches the finale, so stay tuned.

Yay!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

now that I think about it, FELIX THE CAT DID HAVE SUCH A BRIEFCASE!!!!

Wait...Felix the Cat used Pandora's Box?!

Originally Posted by Kha

And 2nd GiRLfriENd is a non-magical AU where all OCs and CCs are studying at the same school, leaving room only for high school mayhem. It really resembles Chrono's POV of Keroko's great work in the FF threads, Raising Heart.

Do check it out and vote! Reality Reading has never been more fun!

All the OCs?! DO WANT!!

Originally Posted by Kha

Feito-chaaan~~~ <3

LIGHTNING-01
Rebuilt of Fate

Spoiler for Fate, the Lightning that Cleaves Evil:

*snip*

...FATE-CHAN!!
And sword-chucks FTW

Originally Posted by Kha

I tried to be fair to all my characters...

But sadly...

Fate got the most so far.

Absolutely nothing wrong with that...nothing at all...

*cough*

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

On the bright side, at least I won't be TOO alone tonight...


... Wanna make our characters do something awkward for this day ?

Silly Chaos . But they do say people tend to do strange things when love is in the air

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

I don't celebrate it really. So in the words of my friend, for people like me, its "Singles Awareness Day". Though to be honest I wasn't really conscious that Valentines was today. Just because I rather not have people bug me for the thousandth time whether I've found a girlfriend or not.

Well then, Happy Singles Awareness Day everyone .

*sulks on chair playing WoW late into the night...*

[LoweGear]

Zone Operations Command [ZOCOM]: Operation Start

Backlog Clearing Commencing

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Spoiler for Size:

Lelouch = 1
Cheese-kun = 0



I wish I could huggle with C.C. like that

*runs*

Originally Posted by Erio

I would say she is as good as officially part of the Ravens, just that she did not partake in the... not-so-legal activities of the group...

Yep Though she'll still participate in some of their... no-so-legal activities later

*runs*

Originally Posted by Erio

I see, so Teana will bind the enemy and Subaru will Ginga Drill Breaker him?

And Ebony and Ivory?

...Maybe Lockon gave them to her as a present...?

Oh my, the dorama that will come from this...

OH SHI-

*feels dark aura surrounding him*

If this happens, things are gonna get REALLY UGLY REALLY FAST for the Ravens

Originally Posted by Erio

I missed the Spells and Abilities part... It is indeed MASSIVE! I'll finish reading it in a bit...

Don't forget the Trivia

Originally Posted by Erio

*saves*

Erhm... More please?

*runs*

You need to watch Aria to see more of her

I can give you her protege though, and main character Mizunashi Akari

Spoiler for Hohe!:

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Who is Asagi actually referencing too? Can't say I know.

She's actually referencing two characters: by name, Asagi Caldwell from Gundam SEED, and by appearance Festenia Muse from Super Robot Wars J

Personality and History-wise, she's all mine

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

And we know Sis-cons are frowned upon, no?

In most circumstances yes

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

I see...never played the game so I wouldn't know.

You really should Start with Hitman: Blood Money

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

There'll be the Number VII flirt, and the Number X trap. Then also the Number I onee-sama.

OH YEAH for Sephiria

*runs*

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Don't you mean "mine"? I don't recall acknowledging him as my master.

No, THY Master, for his influence is great

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Right! ....why do I feel a deathly chill all of a sudden?

Ah, I think that's just the airconditioner acting up agai-

*blood curdling scream*

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Ahhh...I recall C2F uses that as well.

He does? Don't remember his ava/sig changing that frequently

If you're interested, just take a look at AzUpload

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

*Sees giant satellite landing in the distance*

Wake Up, Dann

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

on the subject of Rin and tsundereness, it's my interpretation that Rin is bipolar/tsundere due to:

- Father dying at young age

- growing up alone

- being forced to put up the false refined front of the neat, calm, beautiful school idol when she would really like to just kick back and be a slacker

- financial worries. Rin is rich, but she has to live frugally to save up her money, and she blew around 2-20 million US dollars during the Grail War on her jewels.

Yup, someone would really become tsundere from that kind of history

Originally Posted by Ryand-Smith

ALICIA FLORENCE, where is she from. My crack-dar has no file of reference for this one?

Aura: "Maybe you should use Wikipedia, Master-Smith?"

Eh, I'll google it later...

She's from the Aria series, currently in its 3rd season, and one of the main characters, along with the 5 others you'll see in my sigs

And... do I need to tell you to watch it?

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Ryotaro: Mmm? Mmph! *stuggles but gives up, chalking it up to his bad luck*

Creator-san: You consider getting gagged and taken home by a pretty young girl Bad Luck? No wonder

*Watches Ryotaro happily dragged away by Mayura*

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Love the trivia . She's like our resident OC otaku (kinda like Konata)...except rich and able to actually afford it

Yup, the perks of being filthy rich

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Ah, I think that's just the airconditioner acting up agai-

*blood curdling scream*

You really should get someone to fix that. And it looks like someone spilled ketchup on the floor...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Creator-san: You consider getting gagged and taken home by a pretty young girl Bad Luck? No wonder

*Watches Ryotaro happily dragged away by Mayura*

Ryotaro: *shrugs, wondering what this cute (now that he actually had time to look) girl was going to do with him...*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Yup, the perks of being filthy rich

I bet...as well as enough space to store it all

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

You really should get someone to fix that. And it looks like someone spilled ketchup on the floor...

Also, someone seems to have left his hand over here...

Wait a minute...

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Ryotaro: *shrugs, wondering what this cute (now that he actually had time to look) girl was going to do with him...*

Seems I'll have to preview Mayura now:

Spoiler for Mayura Labatt:

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

I bet...as well as enough space to store it all

... including the Belkaranger's... catches...

*watches Ryotaro get thrown into vault*

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Also, someone seems to have left his hand over here...

Wait a minute...

*blinks* Thing?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Seems I'll have to preview Mayura now:

Spoiler for Mayura Labatt:

Preview is good preview

Originally Posted by LoweGear

... including the Belkaranger's... catches...

*watches Ryotaro get thrown into vault*

Ryotaro: *yelps* Where...? What are you planning on doing with me..?

(Hmm...and it IS Valentine's Day... )

[krisslanza]

I discovered using the "Search" option to scan each page for my name is helpful. XD
So uh if you directed a comment at me but didn't put 'krisslanza' in it I'll miss it. Gomen.

Originally Posted by Ryand-Smith

krisslanza. Does the release make the character glow and use the power of their emotions?

SHINING FINGERR

*Is destroyed by the Shining Gundam*

Naw.
Well maybe some glowing depending on how I do this... I had the idea floating around of her getting some cool glowly dragon skeleton wings...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

When you've been buried in the compost pit for a few weeks

Aw man that sounds... Dirty

So they're essentially external magical battery reserves so to speak? Simple yet novel concept I must say

Essentially, it made a lot more sense this way

A magical black hole of power. Simple, yet effective, and with enough nerfs to warrant its power. Just add a few more details, and you're set

Well that was a unique way of putting it... Next thing you'll know this song will play when she uses it:

Spoiler:

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

True.

Darn elusive original

No complaints here. That was one hell of a fight!

Aye it was. Quite EPIC!

It's quite good.

Danke! I have my good ideas from time to time

Yes. Here's details on Aurion's skill. It's much more artificial when compared to kriss' idea.

Spoiler for details:

Magical Field Manipulation:
*snip*

Whiffy.

Aaaah I see, I see. Yes that is a lot more artificial compared to Rune's. Aurion's seems to have more uses then hers but Rune's also has no drawbacks (as long as she isn't released).

One thing you can factor is time. Give her LOTS of time to charge all those energy between every use. That should help a bit.

Time eh? Hmmmm... I'll keep that in mind.

Originally Posted by Erio

So basically a temporal state in which Rune increases her physical and magical powers. I dont see any problems, especially with the restrictions you've set already. The only thing is, it might be a bit hard to explain how this release works...

Thanks
But yeah that is the problem I have atm I have to think exactly how one releases a Rare Skill...

I think krisslanza's skill only absorbs the mana in the environment.

Aye that is correct.
Rune can't suck mana out of living creates So she's not a TRUE black hole. :P
...
Although that does give me an interesting idea.

*Wipes hands*
Phew that was fun.

And before I forget...

Happy Valentine's Day everyone!
*Throws chocolates everywhere*

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

The power of OC compels you

Just As Planned

*runs*

There's no way you're going to get me to watch sentai, Though.

Originally Posted by Kha

Sou... Setsuna (Yui Hiro as you guys know him) and Lockon have been OCfied. Who's gonna do the gender-confused cyborg and the schizo pilot, or are both of them combined into one neat package called Rebuilt of Keroko?!

*RUNS DAMN FAST*

.... Explain. Now.

Originally Posted by Kha

Not really a lot, as GF hardly has any of them, and any other force combines the expensive suits with unsuited mages like how tanks and infantry are mixed in our world.

But when come the Capture Numbers attempt, it'll comprise of over 1000 Frames, as Frames work better under AMF, and they have to flood the Numbers with resources in order to.

The political set up happened as Chrono and Yuuno decided to lay a trap for Regius, by making it look like they decided to snatch the Numbers, and so force his hand to catch him red-handed.

I know this looks nothing like StrikerS, but I already said before, after 912, this OVA's new ending shall begin.

I'll just wait for the PM before crying havoc, then.

Originally Posted by Kha

Yeah... What other canon info are there am I missing?

You mean apart from the fact that Quint didn't know that Ginga and Subaru were based of her genetic data? Or the fact that Jail knew next to nothing about Type-0?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And for the final part of Asagi Colwell's FIERY ADVENTUROUS profile ( ), here's Part V: Trivia

Spoiler for length:

Miscellaneous Trivia:

- Asagi IDOLIZES Mitsuomi Takahashi, who plays Satoru Akashi aka BoukenRed, to the point where she gets really shy in his presence, something she rarely does to anyone. In fact the she once stalked the 28-year old veteran actor when she visited Earth 6 years ago, tailing him for days before getting over her shyness and eventually getting her much coveted autograph on the first thing she could get him to sign: a fastfood napkin.

Said napkin is now kept in a golden hermetically-sealed picture frame in her manor.

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“Rich people…”

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- As consequence of her love for everything BoukenRed, Asagi has copied just about many of his mannerisms, including his trademark finger-snapping “Attack!” line, and the use of the word “Precious”, most often when referring to Lost Logia. She’s also adopted his strange like for peas.

- An avid collector, Asagi keeps most of her collection of Super Sentai paraphernalia and merchandise in a special area of the Tripartite Avenue Museum of Midchildan History jointly owned and maintained by Colwell Industries and Labatt Enterprises.

Unfortunately she has a habit of… “collecting” anything remotely related to Super Sentai – including people, whom she frequently poses as models for her various Sentai costumes and props.

Thankfully no one is “taken home” by force, and the subjects are well-compensated monetarily for their troubles.

… unless she specifically exclaims “Omochikaeri”, in which case you’re in deep trouble…

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“… I don’t want to remember…”

“Me neither…”

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- Due to her close relation with vehicles and engineering equipment, Asagi is quite adept at operating heavy construction vehicles, and is a Licensed Operator of multiple vehicles including cranes, bulldozers and excavators. She is also proficient in their repair and maintenance, having been taught by company’s Engineering Corp of whom she is quite friendly with.

Asagi has a collection of company vehicles for her own use, her favorite being a large red mining dump truck appropriately named the “GouGou Dump”, which she uses in long-hauls and off-road adventures. For situations where the GouGou Dump is too large, like in city travel, she uses a white police cruiser named the “GouGou Police” and a white van called the “GouGou Aider”.

- The Search Guard Successor Foundation headquarters, located underneath the Tripartite Avenue Museum of Midchildan History, is aesthetically and functionally similar to its inspiration, right down to the design of the Lounge and the so-called “Makino” Workshop, very much due to Asagi’s insistence. The only thing missing would be the vehicle hangers and launch bays, with GouGou Dump, Police and Aider stored on a massive garage at the back of the museum.

- Despite being the 2nd youngest of the Belkarangers, Asagi is frequently called “Sempai” by the older Mayura: This was originally a teasing gesture by Mayura due to Asagi’s position as their ‘leader’. Nowadays, Mayura affectionately uses that name by force of habit.

- By Asagi’s involvement, Colwell Industries is one of the primary sponsors for a Super-Sentai style live action show by local television station RBC-7 entitled “Wing Force Delta-V”, providing the necessary props, equipment and vehicles. Asagi has justified her investment in the venture as “product placement”.

- Colwell Construction Works, a company subsidiary, was heavily involved in the construction of the Riot Force 6 headquarters, including the main dormitory structure, CIC and the holographic training area. The contract was signed under Carim Gracia and the Saint Church. 20% of the funding for the facility was taken from the Colwell family’s wealth, and Asagi personally oversaw construction on-site.

- Related to the above, Asagi’s Search Guard Successor Foundation had anonymously provided tips and leads to RF6 on Lost Logia reports and sightings. With the S.G.S. being a civilian archaeological foundation on paper, Asagi and the Belkarangers legally can’t perform direct action on the discovery of Over S-Class Lost Logia, such as Jewel Seeds and Relics.

With the recent disbandment of Riot Force 6, Asagi has tried to acquire TSAB approval for the SGS to take direct action on Over S-Class Lost Logia. So far, she has only been approved to take action in the presence of a TSAB Enforcer.

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“Will this be all on her?”

“That’ll be all.”

“Who’d have thought I’d need to write my future bosses' bio as a resume?”

“You have four more bios to write before Asagi considers hiring you Kay.”

“I know Glock. Getting a real job’s quite difficult…”

“Tell me about it…”

And for some bonus extras

Spoiler for Asagi Colwell: Various Expressions:

*taken from Gate of Magus*

Next Profile in line: "Honest Heart" Mayura Labatt

Obsesive fan is obsesive.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

So... Keroko-chan will have a deep connection to VEDA now?

*RUNS AT LUDICROUS SPEED*

Translation for the non-Gundam watcher? (still have to maraton anything beyond episode 5, which was watched months ago)

Originally Posted by Kha

Well... Blame Ginga then. I've always believed siblings share many traits, and I felt Drills were appropiate...

But... but... The drill is what made Ginga unique!

Originally Posted by Kha

Well I...

*looks around for Keroko-kun*

It's been a while, but I realize that we may have a forum trap. But what the heck WoW is full of Traps.

*sweet face* You called?

Originally Posted by Kha

*runs*
I realized I left the Keroko-adolation bits though.

The most confusing part for me was that from reading the profile, it had seemingly been redirected towards Artei.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

His roots? You mean... this?

Spoiler for Graham 50 years ago...:

Must... have...

Originally Posted by Kha

Feito-chaaan~~~ <3

LIGHTNING-01
Rebuilt of Fate

Spoiler for Fate, the Lightning that Cleaves Evil:

Fate, the Lightning that Cleaves Evil

There’s a saying that great power comes with sad pasts. And without doubt, Fate’s young life has been riddled with heart-rending challenges as Destiny toyed with her again and again. She had been brought into the world thinking only of her mother, but was later betrayed by that very same person; she had found Precia’s diary, but was forced to choose a friend over the book that could lead her to her mother; despite saving the lives of many, she had to face death before she was 16 to gemi-stigma, and after that she struggled against the death of a loved one when everyone else was holding her back, fearing that Fate could turn into another Precia.

But unlike Precia, Fate was surrounded by friends. Nanoha brought her in from the cold; when she could not go on, Keroko pushed from behind; Hayate and her Knights protected her as much as she did them; Chrono, Amy, Lindy gave her the warmth of family; Aurion taught her that it was okay to laugh and cry when she had to; and in a way, Kha and Fate each gave the other the strength they needed.

On the field, Fate is a confident warrior, moving in and out of spellfire and gunfire alike without fear or hesitation, able to deliver precise and crippling attacks to enemy positions with her unparalleled speed and Lightning prowess.

But off the field, Fate is haunted by her troubled family history, and while she has a big heart for children who were in similar circumstances to her before, she is afraid that she isn’t good enough to be a guardian.

In due time, Fate, aided by Kha in the Grade Frame Exia, would rescue Erio and Hiro (then called Null) from an illegal super soldier facility before they were culled. Erio would be transferred to Lindy’s care, and Fate tried her best to care for the little boy, but that shadow of doubt continued to plague her.

Soon, Allison and Caro would join her family, and Fate’s burden grew…

About Bardiche...

Bardiche may seem reserved and stoic, cited by Arisa as the perfect cookie-cutter butler of old, but only few know another side to Bardiche. It seems that Bardiche has a hidden hotblooded side that came to light in only a few occasions, most remarkable being when he chose to sacrifice himself for Fate’s happiness. A barrier was keeping Fate from completing the Tome of Devotion and thus reviving Kha.

At first, he egged Fate on to take the shot, insisting that [there was nothing he could not cut]. Then, when both mage and device were being overwhelmed by the stubborn defense, he brazenly broke through by not only chewing through all 6 cartridges and routing all the extra power to his cracking blade against Fate’s will, but accompanied that with a loud roar of [CHESTOOO!!!]

That suicidal attempt smashed the barrier as much as the stress rendered Bardiche all but unserviceable. The gamble ultimately paid off, and Kha returned Bardiche intact, prompting the device to comment that [there’s still more fight left in this old man] before reverting to his normal self.

This event and the previous encounters that Fate had, including the discovery of a wedding photo of Precia and a tall gold-haired but unnamed man sealed in Bardiche’s ROM, led Aurion and the Aces to believe that Bardiche must’ve been programmed in Mr Testarossa’s image.

And considering that Kha learnt the Zamber sword from the masked Wodan Ymir, “Mr Testarossa” might be nearer to the Aces than they’d believe...

Rebuilt for StrikerS

Now, Fate is a 19-year-old commissioned officer of the TSAB. She lives on Earth in Uminari City with Lindy, who has retired from her position as Admiral, having had too much excitement and seeking a desk job. Fate has been going to school with Nanoha, Hayate, Suzuka, Alisa, and Sophia, and met many memorably whacky characters like the infamous Belkarengers. Her senior at Gakutenoh Academy Himawari Nissan left a lasting impression on Fate, and she aspires to be an all-rounded person like Hina.

She is now the head of the Lightning Squad, and an S+ mage without limiters, an AA mage with. Showing great concern for her squad, particularly Erio (she is his guardian) and Caro, a child that she took in when no one else would, Fate takes her position as leader very seriously. She also feels obliged to look out for Allie, who is a Forward of the Drake Squad led by Keroko despite the Takamachi sibling's teasing protests.

For the most of StrikerS, as Kha was busy managing Church affairs and coordinating interventions, Fate struggles with the double duty of leading her squad to battle and taking care of the children in her care, sometimes bothering with much more that there really was. It is through Fate that I will get a chance to explore with the thread the various issues that Asian working mothers have to face, especially with a husband that is never around due to work, and remain true to my promise of giving the story greater depth than before.

Powers

Fate's magical abilities developed at an astonishing rate, according to Linith. She learned electricity-based attacks faster than other magical types, something that her mother Precia also specialized in. At the age of seven, she had already mastered several abilities to the point of not requiring the incantations. Behind her tutor Linith's back, she also studied how to create and handle familiars, and Arf was the result. Her command phrase for her shooting abilities is "Fire!"

Fate specializes in mid-range and melee attacks, preferring speed to power and endurance. This was a result of the training that her mother demanded, which sacrificed the flexibility of a wide range of abilities for raw speed. After the events of Nanoha, she trained with Chrono to address the gaps in her initial training.

Transformation — Fate transforms Bardiche into Device Form and her Barrier Jacket is activated as well.

Arcus Cultus Aegeas — This is Fate's personal incantation for Bardiche. Generally she uses this to concentrate her energies, especially before unleashing a powerful attack.

Jewel Seed Seal — Used to seal the Jewel Seeds so they will not fuse with anything.

Lightning Bind — A powerful, but difficult to maintain, spell that prevents its target from moving.

Recovery — Fate can restore Bardiche in seconds, even after he is heavily damaged.

Redemption — A skill that can recover Bardiche from any state of damage as long as his consciousness is intact. This ability is spoken by Fate and is evidently taught to her by Kha, who has the Belkansh version of the spell.

Defensive Abilities

Barrier Jacket — Fate activates her defensive outfit. This armor was originally selected by Arf.

Lightning Form — This is similar to her original Barrier Jacket, with more protective power and some armor plates on her shoes and left glove.

Sonic Form — This lighter variation of Fate's Barrier Jacket dispenses with the cloak and instead puts Sonic Sails, Flier Fin-like wings on Fate's boots and arms, greatly increasing her movement speed.

Sonic Drive — Fate activates this variation of Sonic Form after breaking free from the Dream of Infinite Desire. Her speed and magic powers greatly increases in this form. Incantation to activate this form is "Jacket Purge!" followed by "Sonic Form, Overdrive!"

It is revealed in a pre-StrikerS arc that Sonic Drive was created from Sonic Form, as Fate tore up her fringe skirt to use as bandages for Kha during an intermittent bout against an Armor Slave on another Non-Administered World. Subsequently, Hayate made further adjustments for aethetic and strategic value, resulting in the lightweight and swimsuit-like Sonic Drive.

Impulse Form — The new Barrier Jacket variation seen in StrikerS, it sports a complete new design that holds little resemblance with any of the other variations seen until then. It’s design is akin to a “working attire”, able to be used both in the office and out in the field. Even though she does not show it, the extra cloth does weigh her down a lot as compared to her Sonic Drive form.

Blitz Action — Fate's movement speed is increased dramatically (if temporarily), to the point where human eyes cannot track her easily. In A's, this is upgraded to Sonic Move; in Sonic Form, she does not need to activate the ability.

Defenser — Bardiche's Auto-Guard magic. It can guard in every direction, but can be broken easily.

Defenser Plus — It is essentially a more powerful form of Defenser, and capable of being cast over a larger area to protect more than one person. This technique was refined by Kha as he is specialized in the creation of barriers and shields.

Bind Break — Attempts to deactivate a binding or imprisoning spell. The amount of time required to deactivate depends on the complexity of the target magic.

Jacket Purge — Fate "unravels" the magic power that comprises her Jacket, causing it to explode. This has significant attack power, and can disrupt binding magics. However, she is vulnerable for a few moments after purging the Jacket, and she requires magic power to recreate a new one. It is this command that begins the system's preparation for Sonic Drive.

Thunder Arm — A lightning defense on her left arm that attacks whoever strikes it with lightning unleashed from one of the orbs around her arm. After such an attack, an orb is consumed. Fate can create 5 orbs at once.

Dynamic Thunder — A variation of Thunder Arm that consumes all 5 orbs at once and launches an electrical impression of Fate’s arm up to the base of the elbow to act as a mid-ranged attack.

Offensive Abilities

Arc Saber — Fate's melee attack, consisting of a blade of light from the Bardiche in Scythe form. It is powerful enough to neutralize Nanoha's Divine Shooter missiles. The blade itself can be thrown, spinning it much like a shuriken.

Scythe Slash — A variation of the Arc Saber where the blade is enhanced in order to penetrate barrier-type magics such as Barrier Jackets.

Haken Saber — As Arc Saber, except with Bardiche Assault in Haken form.

Haken Slash

— The Scythe Slash-like variation of Fate's Haken Saber.

Plasma Blaster — Fate launches two beams of yellow plasma from the two orbs by her shoulders as a sword-cross countermeasure. As such, this skill can only be used in the heavier but better-equipped Impulse barrier jacket form.

Photon Lancer — Fate's basic ranged attack, fired from a small collection of energy called a "Photon Sphere". Fate's shots are faster, but unlike Nanoha's Divine Shooter, they are unguided. Because of their ease and speed of casting, Fate now uses them like Nanoha uses Divine Shooter as blindfire "Head Vulcan" attacks.

Photon Lancer Phalanx Shift — A variation of Photon Lancer (and Fate's most powerful attack in season 1), this spell amasses several large Photon Spheres and unleashes a storm of Photon Lancer shots on the target.

Plasma Lancer — A more powerful version of Photon Lancer, with increased attack power and the ability to turn at Fate's command should it miss.

Thunder Smasher — Fate's siege-type attack, analogous to Nanoha's Divine Buster.

Plasma Smasher — Thunder Smasher's upgrade, used when Bardiche Assault is in Assault Form.

Trident Smasher — The third upgraded magic of the Thunder Smasher line, three beams are shot simultaneously from the same firing-point, creating the illusion of a trident's blade.

Thunder Rage — Fate's multitarget attack, activated with Bardiche in Sealing Form. Together with Nanoha's Divine Buster, Fate used this to seal six Jewel Seeds at once.

Thunder Blade — An enhanced version of Thunder Rage, Fate focuses each attack into individual swords that can detonate on the command "Break!". Chrono Harlaown has a similar attack called Stinger Blade.

Blitz Rush — Fate can increase the speed of her magic missiles such as Plasma Lancer.

The Zamber: The Blade of Testarossa

This style of magical sword creation has been passed down over centuries, surviving even the selection pressure for ranged Midchilda schools of magic. The basic Zamber was programmed into Bardiche right from the start, but it was only when Bardiche was upgraded with the CVK system and Fate grew stronger that she was able to wield the family’s sword for the first time.

Ever since then, Fate has been working with what secrets she could unlock from within Bardiche, and with pointers from the mysterious Wodan Ymir, has been discovering old Zamber swords and creating new ones for herself.

Riot Zamber — Bardiche Assault in a sabre-like form, replacing the basic Zamber as Fate’s main Zamber sword. Riot Zamber is much sharper and has a more refined shine when compared to the basic Zamber, and is a testament of Fate’s mastery of the Zamber, much like Kha’s own Zamber variant, Gotteliches Zamber, or G-Zamber for short.


When Fate performs attacks with Riot Zamber, she sometimes uses differ ritual shouts to trigger different effects.

Itouryoudan! - This strengthens Fate's swing, allowing her to deliver a clean slice through the midsection.

Denkōsekka! – Fate uses the Riot Zamber with a swift swipe in the air to create a strong enough wind to cut the enemy.

Daisharin! – Fate uses additional mana to enlarge the Riot Zamber into a larger katana-like blade. She then swings it, releasing what seems like a giant version of the ranged mode of Haken Saber.

Raikō Giri! – Fate first enlarges the Zamber into a large broadsword, if it isn’t already in that mode. She then uses it to perform a giant vertical strike from below the opponent and then performing a swift horizontal strike almost simultaneously, then finishes with a strike of lightning from above or from her hand for a good measure.

Shippu Jinrai! – Fate would perform a series of rapid slashes, before ending with a clean, vertical cut.

Un'yō no Tachi, Kenzan! – Fate enlarges the Zamber to such a point that it's almost too large for her arms to even handle. Straining under Bardiches weight, she lifts the weapon high above her head and proceeds to take to the sky. She then drops down with a single bisecting slash as a finishing attack, yelling KENZAN!

The following changes the sword blade, and can be used with the above shouts.

Sprite Zamber — This sword is designed to destroy force fields, binding magics, and illusions. Fate, after transforming Bardiche Assault to Zamber form, uses this to break out of the Book of Darkness' prison.

Jet Zamber — Fate's ultimate melee attack, she first throws a shockwave at the target, then swings Bardiche Assault in Zamber form. The energy blade of the Zamber grows to many times its typical size, so Fate can slash through a target that would ordinarily be out of range. This is analogous to Vita’s Gigantform.

Plasma Zamber Breaker — Bardiche Assault in Zamber form unleashes a powerful energy blast with a cricket-type swing. Functions as an even longer-ranged particle assault bombardment.


Hurricane Zamber


An extremely powerful combination attack between Fate and her familiar Arf that uses almost all types of spells, from ritual magic to weather-control to mass-bombardment to binds.

Arf transform into her largest and most powerful form Dire Wolf, and lets Fate hitch a ride. Charging towards the enemy like a magical samurai on horseback, Fate then strikes with the Hurricane Zamber in various fashions and power levels depending on the coordinated mana burst delivered.

Cat One - a high-speed horizontal slash, then Fate cleaves the enemy vertically afterwards.

Cat Two - Hurricane Zamber spins very rapidly to generate a whirlwind that carries the bisected enemy mage up into the air before Fate adds a final horizontal slash upon the enemy.

Cat Three – This is where it starts getting ridiculous. Fate and Arf mount up on any conveniently available raised platform like a telephone phone or building or cliff with a sharp fall or just float in the air very much higher than the opponent amid torrents of rain and lightning. Arf then pushes off the raised point and charges down the raised platform, sometimes almost vertically, using gravity to gain additional momentum. Fate directs several lightning bolts to strike down and bind the enemy mage as they close, and once they do proceed with a cricket paddle swing knocking the mage off his/her feet then finishing with a horizontal slashing as they ride pass.

Cat Four – Fate and Arf mount up on any conveniently available raised platform like a telephone phone or building or cliff with a sharp fall or just float in the air very much higher than the opponent amid torrents of rain and lightning. Arf then pushes off the raised point and charges down the raised platform, sometimes almost vertically, using gravity to gain additional momentum. This variation pumps a lot of mana into Hurricane Zamber’s spin, creating a vortex that sucks the enemy mage towards the sky and be struck repeatedly by lightning as they charge at the target. And when then close with the target mid-air, Fate finishes the target off with a clean slice.

Cat Five – The most awesome, borderline-ridiculous and overwhelmingly powerful version of Hurricane Zamber. Using Kha’s Reality Marble idea, Fate projects a false reality that traps the target within a realm that obeys only her own rules. As such, there is always a high cliff shrouded in enormously violent lightning storms for her to mount on. Arf then pushes off the raised point and charges down the raised platform, sometimes almost vertically, using gravity to gain additional momentum. The reality created is that, as the enemy tries to run, lightning from above will repeatedly strike them no matter what they do, and no matter how they try to escape, Fate and Arf will always catch up. Fate then performs a flurry of slashes before leaping into the air after the hapless target, striking down with a clean vertical cut and stopping a safe distance away before the target explodes.

As cool as it sounds, this skill is so taxing that it is damaging to one‘s magical potential. However, due to the way the Master-Familiar mana link is established, Arf has a trick that causes only her Linker Core takes the bulk of the strain and leaving a manageable amount for Fate, leaving herself completely drained and near death when they used that attack once. As a familiar, Arf’s Linker Core and magical potential can recover eventually over a long period of time, but because of that taking such a big hit at once can kill her.

Even in StrikerS, 1 year after the incident, Arf is still in like power-saving form. And Fate has practically sworn off ever trying Cat 5 again.

Riot Zamber II


With Sonic Drive Form active, Bardiche Assault split into two Riot Zamber, much like how Kha can split Tausend Kreuz’s greatsword-like Kreuzfahrer form into two falchions. In fact, Fate thanks Kha for letting her borrow his idea after defeating Jail.

But unlike Kha, a magical string at the end of each hilt connects both of halves of the Zamber. This additional feature, while it restricts the throwing capacity of RZ2, proves to be very nifty. The string allows RZ2 to be used like sword-chucks, with Fate able to perform the mind-boggling nunchaku dance made famous by Bruce Lee. The enforcer demonstrates that the string can be set to cutting strength and blunt strength rapidly, as she used the string to damage Tre then grabbing the same portion with her bare hands to swing the two Zamber blades at Jail and Sette. The strings can also extend, allowing Fate to throw one half like a dart and retrieve the blade like a yoyo. And since it can extend, it can also retract fully, holding both Zambers end to end like a massive double-edged beam saber, allowing her to face off the combined attacks of Tre and Sette at once while avoiding Jail’s laser whips.

Fate can also combine both Riot Zamber halves to form an even bigger version, and split them at her command even with the blades embedded in solid material, causing it to be cleaved from within. Visually, the rejoined Riot Zamber II resembles the ZXO Sword from the Super Robot Wars series.

I tried to be fair to all my characters...

But sadly...

Fate got the most so far.

You tried, and you failed.

But... easy of on the Zengar, please? I mean... her background is great, but once we get to the spells, we get Bardiche going 'chestooo' which is just wrong on so many levels. The whole connection to Wodan makes me twitch, and Fate and Arf climbing any conveniently placed high spot gives me Amelia vibes.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

*blinks* Thing?

You mean, "The Thing"

*looks suspiciously at people around him >_>*

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Ryotaro: *yelps* Where...? What are you planning on doing with me..?

(Hmm...and it IS Valentine's Day... )

Let's just say, what's gonna happen next will be a whole lot different than it actually sounds...

Mayura: Ryotaro-kun... please go easy on me

*Creator-san runs*

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Well that was a unique way of putting it... Next thing you'll know this song will play when she uses it:

Spoiler:

OH SHI-

SHOKUTAIHOU, HASHA!!!!

Originally Posted by Keroko

There's no way you're going to get me to watch sentai, Though.

Not asking you to

Originally Posted by Keroko

Translation for the non-Gundam watcher? (still have to maraton anything beyond episode 5, which was watched months ago)

Spoiler for Gundam 00:

Tieria seems to have a special connection to VEDA, Celestial Being's "leader" supercomputer network, which he accesses from the Ptolemy terminal (the red-orange glowing room he was floating in on episode one).

From his statements, it seems Tieria reveres VEDA to an unusual level

[Erio]

Whoa, Lowe is still up!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And for the final part of Asagi Colwell's FIERY ADVENTUROUS profile ( ), here's Part V: Trivia

Spoiler for length:

snip

And for some bonus extras

Spoiler for Asagi Colwell: Various Expressions:

*taken from Gate of Magus*

Next Profile in line: "Honest Heart" Mayura Labatt

Just finished reading everything I had missed about Asagi. Just gotta say: I loved it. And of course, I also love Asagi... her mature!template is HAWT!!

*runs*

BTW, do you have a full pic of 23 year old Asagi?

Asagi's fighting style when she is serious closely resembles what I have in mind for Gwen, as Gwen also becomes unnervingly calm, cautious, and calculating against tougher opponents. But of course, Gwen does not have any finishing moves.

Nice Device/Gadgets you got there, too. Also, those finishing move names... "Lightning Gravity Fall" was one that made me go, "whoa".

As for Asagi's trivia, maybe Fate owns a Colwell Ferrari...


After reading the missing bits, and re-reading some parts, depending on how involved Asagi's S.G.S. foundation is with searching for Lost Logia, the Belkarangers may have met the Ravens in the past... though not in the battlefield. I am thinking maybe Gwen has contacted them in the past, for information about Lost Logia and the like... Hmm... *mindburst starting* but I need more information.

Originally Posted by Kha

Feito-chaaan~~~ <3

LIGHTNING-01
Rebuilt of Fate

Spoiler for Fate, the Lightning that Cleaves Evil:

[SIZE="5"]snip

I tried to be fair to all my characters...

But sadly...

Fate got the most so far.


I am not Asagi I am not Asagi I am not Asagi I am not Asagi I am not Asagi ...

I am...

Not...

...

...

CHESToOoOoOoOoOo!

*runs*

Everything was going smoothly until... Bardiche's hotblooded side?! WHAT THE.

It made me lol, though.

And that's an interesting thing you mentioned, about the issues of Asian working mothers when their husbands are never around due to work... but... husband?! I thought I didnt miss anything... when did they get married?!

*runs*

Also the new attacks are BTW, just wondering, why "Cat One ~ Five"? Are those a reference for something?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Lelouch = 1
Cheese-kun = 0



I wish I could huggle with C.C. like that

*runs*

Me too.

*ahem*

Yep Though she'll still participate in some of their... no-so-legal activities later

*runs*

You mean... illegal activities such as this...?

Spoiler for illegal?:

*RUNS*

OH SHI-

*feels dark aura surrounding him*

If this happens, things are gonna get REALLY UGLY REALLY FAST for the Ravens

...Or rather, really ugly really fast for poor Lockon...

It would be logical if he gave the pistols to Teana after RF6 was disbanded... so I guess whether it happens or not will depend on Lockon's relationship with *radio static*...

Don't forget the Trivia

I didnt.

You need to watch Aria to see more of her

I can give you her protege though, and main character Mizunashi Akari

Spoiler for Hohe!:

Nice!

I had actually been planning to watch Aria for some time, especially since I had the chance to visit Venice. Too bad, though, that the gondoliers were not as HAWT and SEXY as Aria's...

*runs*

She's actually referencing two characters: by name, Asagi Caldwell from Gundam SEED, and by appearance Festenia Muse from Super Robot Wars J

Personality and History-wise, she's all mine

Ah, I thought I'd seen an Asagi before... that's where.

And didnt you also want to add "bodily-wise" to that list...?

*runs faster*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Seems I'll have to preview Mayura now:

Spoiler for Mayura Labatt:

Want. Full. Pic.

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Aw man that sounds... Dirty

But dirty can be a good thing sometimes...

*runs*

Originally Posted by Keroko

There's no way you're going to get me to watch sentai, Though.

Well, Kamen Rider is a start and better than nothing

Originally Posted by LoweGear

You mean, "The Thing"

*looks suspiciously at people around him >_>*

Nope, just...Thing.

*snap* *snap*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Let's just say, what's gonna happen next will be a whole lot different than it actually sounds...

Mayura: Ryotaro-kun... please go easy on me

*Creator-san runs*

Ryotaro: Er....um...but I'm a little...tied up at the moment...

Originally Posted by Erio

You mean... illegal activities such as this...?

Spoiler for illegal?:

*RUNS*

Illegal should be legal.

*runs*

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

OH SHI-

SHOKUTAIHOU, HASHA!!!!

Off-hand during some writings Code: ATA was playing during Rune note time...

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

But dirty can be a good thing sometimes...

*runs*

...
Perhaps.