2009-02-01, 05:24 | Link #1062 |
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This thread is getting so off-topic so fast (and plus, I feel so old seeing all these cute kids here )
So I've been practicing my manga coloring and I wanna see what you guys think. Any constructive criticism would be great. I still need to work on shading and light sources and such. ;A; Spoiler for Shannon:
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I made icons out of these and you can find them here.
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2009-02-01, 09:26 | Link #1063 |
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The colored panels looks really good. I'm not sure whether or not I'm right, but for constructive criticism, would the clothing cast any shadows?
Also, do you have any pictures (doesn't have to be in color) that show more of Beato in the manga (like the rest of her head (and/or her body)? Have the Stakes or Bern-chan appeared yet?
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2009-02-01, 16:37 | Link #1065 |
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OTZ for any repeats. Just picking out the things I've randomly uploaded already. Spoiler for Been a while since I've criticized someone else's art stuff other than my own.:
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2009-02-01, 20:36 | Link #1066 | |
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2009-02-01, 22:06 | Link #1069 | |
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I'm not wanting to make this post an completly off topic, so here one new image that I've found
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Bern and the Stakes haven't appeared in the manga yet. Beato has a lot of appearances in the EP02 manga Quote:
As for the colors I used, I will try out using different shading/highlighting colors other than purple/light blue (respectively). I like using that combination becomes it generally comes out well when I add in some Selective Coloring Layers (That sounds like something a novice would say, right? ) Same goes with the skin tone. For me, it all looks better when I size it down to icon size and add Selective Coloring but to be good, the coloring has to look nice even without SC, right? Yeah, I was going for the soft style shading but I guess gratuitous use of Gaussian Blur ruined it (actually I only used it for shading the skin, but stilll...). I am trying out the 'blocky' style of coloring (you can find some examples here; concrit on that is welcome too) but I generally switch between that and soft shading. I can't decide which I prefer more. Once again, thanks for the concrit. This is the best way I can try to improve~ It's okay, onee-san. You don't have to defend me (b-but thank you for your concern <3 <3 <3). I did ask for constructive criticism and this way, I'll learn how to improve~
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2009-02-01, 23:02 | Link #1071 |
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Btw, since Unasuvas posted it here, I want to talk about... HOW UGLY IS BEATO IN THE SECOND EPISODE! No, really, the art itself is ugly, but beato...she looks like a man o_o" ..run, Battler, she's not what you're thinking...
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2009-02-01, 23:36 | Link #1072 | |
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And Beato does look ugly...actually more like...they exaggerated a bit too much with her expressions...or at least that's my opinion. Same with Eva. She was pretty evil-like in some parts...but isn't that an exaggeration? Although I like how George looks. ^^ Though....I'm afraid of how Battler will be drawn like... ·_·'' Spoiler for To save space:
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