2009-05-14, 10:08 | Link #162 |
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@marksky: Im not loving the different colors youre using in the text. Its a bit distracting, espc since the M in Memories is the same color as Fading.
Ok took everyone's advice, made the left side a bit lighter but in keeping the depth (I hope), text is still my biggest concern... Vers 3 Ver 2 for comparision Ver 1 is still my sig C&C?
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2009-05-14, 10:36 | Link #163 | ||
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I'd go for version 2, look better without those things on the sides. BTW, which tecnique are you using for the bg? Quote:
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2009-05-14, 10:58 | Link #164 |
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To be honest, I don't see a difference between the versions. What am I missing?
Definitely this version. I really like the new color for the text. But the new font seems a little plain, not as gothic looking as I associate with Godchild. And I don't like the fact that the G is not capitalized. It's an emotional reaction that probably has no foundation in logic.
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2009-05-14, 11:10 | Link #166 |
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Okay, I see it now. Version 3 has more green and yellow. Wow, that's a subtle difference. (Or it could be my laptop screen which often changes a picture's true colors.)
Now that I can see the difference, I agree with the others. I like version 3 better, Sage.
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2009-05-14, 11:13 | Link #168 | |
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2009-05-14, 12:54 | Link #170 |
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Definitely version 3. There's more light to the sig and, like everyone else said, the font is much better. The capitalization of the word isn't very significant in normal cases - often times using a lower case is a design ploy. But in the case with Godchild, capitalization does give the sig more dramatic umph.
Version 2 is good but I would change the font/font colour. @Rick: yeah, slice tool...haha, that's what I meant. @LKK: I actually added yellow, blue, red and green (in that order). Although the blue and red blends into the background a bit. I may try to make the colours stand out a bit more.
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2009-05-14, 13:10 | Link #171 |
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Ok my last attempt before I have to go to work...only thing I changed was the text
V1: Same font as used before, only G is capitalized V2: Used escimo's suggestion about using org font for G Im prone to ver 1 I still think it looks better but again text isnt my forte
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2009-05-14, 13:57 | Link #173 | |
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2009-05-14, 21:37 | Link #177 | |
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2009-05-14, 22:02 | Link #179 | |
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I think that it's colorfull enough but the colors look a bit "dark" (hope you get my point). Maybe if we add a bit more of light it will look better
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2009-05-14, 22:03 | Link #180 |
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I tried to put in as many dull colours to work with it. Blue, Red (you can just see the red at the top), Yellow, Green. I don't know if it's enough to pass for this entry. If not I'll just work something out with KOS-MOS a little more ^^
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