AnimeSuki Forums

Register Forum Rules FAQ Community Today's Posts Search

Go Back   AnimeSuki Forum > Anime Related Topics > Fan Creations

Notices

Closed Thread
 
Thread Tools
Old 2009-05-14, 08:02   Link #161
marksky
Info Tech Stud desu!!
 
 
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: In your Heart and in your Mind
Okay..

version 1



version 2

__________________

Credits goes to Renegade334
marksky is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 10:08   Link #162
White Manju Bun
Anxious bookseller
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Shibuya Psychic Research
@marksky: Im not loving the different colors youre using in the text. Its a bit distracting, espc since the M in Memories is the same color as Fading.

Ok took everyone's advice, made the left side a bit lighter but in keeping the depth (I hope), text is still my biggest concern...

Vers 3


Ver 2 for comparision


Ver 1 is still my sig

C&C?
__________________
Pandora HeartsManju's Stuff
"I will always remember
when the Doctor was me."
- 11th Doctor.

Sig by TheEroKing
White Manju Bun is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 10:36   Link #163
Evil Rick
Black Dragon
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Endrance View Post
V2 with smoother animation still working on V3 to make the animation more smooth


C+C Appreciated
The animation looks good as well as the text.

Quote:
Originally Posted by marksky View Post
Okay..

version 2

I'd go for version 2, look better without those things on the sides.
BTW, which tecnique are you using for the bg?

Quote:
Originally Posted by White Manju Bun View Post
@marksky: Im not loving the different colors youre using in the text. Its a bit distracting, espc since the M in Memories is the same color as Fading.

Ok took everyone's advice, made the left side a bit lighter but in keeping the depth (I hope), text is still my biggest concern...

Vers 3


C&C?
Definetly V3, the text looks very natural here
__________________
Evil Rick is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 10:58   Link #164
LKK
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Virginia, USA
Age: 62
Quote:
Originally Posted by PreSage View Post
version 2:


version 3:
To be honest, I don't see a difference between the versions. What am I missing?

Quote:
Originally Posted by marksky View Post
version 2

Definitely this version.

Quote:
Originally Posted by White Manju Bun View Post
Vers 3
I really like the new color for the text. But the new font seems a little plain, not as gothic looking as I associate with Godchild. And I don't like the fact that the G is not capitalized. It's an emotional reaction that probably has no foundation in logic.
__________________

Avatar: Hazuki of Natsuyuki Rendezvous / Signature: flowers from Natsuyuki Rendezvous
LKK is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 11:03   Link #165
Katocchi
Your Order ?
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in Your Planet
Age: 32
Send a message via Yahoo to Katocchi
Quote:
Originally Posted by LKK View Post
To be honest, I don't see a difference between the versions. What am I missing?
The Color behind the Text ..
__________________
Katocchi's Art and Graphics Project
Kato always welcome
if everyone want to visit
and give comment ^^

_______________________
Vocaloid Avatars
- Last Update 2009/04/03 -

_______________________
MyAnimeList
My DeviantArt
Katocchi is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 11:10   Link #166
LKK
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Virginia, USA
Age: 62
Quote:
Originally Posted by Katocchi View Post
The Color behind the Text ..
Okay, I see it now. Version 3 has more green and yellow. Wow, that's a subtle difference. (Or it could be my laptop screen which often changes a picture's true colors.)

Now that I can see the difference, I agree with the others. I like version 3 better, Sage.
__________________

Avatar: Hazuki of Natsuyuki Rendezvous / Signature: flowers from Natsuyuki Rendezvous
LKK is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 11:10   Link #167
White Manju Bun
Anxious bookseller
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Shibuya Psychic Research
Quote:
Originally Posted by LKK View Post
To be honest, I don't see a difference between the versions. What am I missing?
I had to look hard too but Sage added what appears to be green in the 3rd vers as Kato said right behind the text

Edit: Ninja'd by Sensei!!

Quote:
I really like the new color for the text. But the new font seems a little plain, not as gothic looking as I associate with Godchild. And I don't like the fact that the G is not capitalized. It's an emotional reaction that probably has no foundation in logic.
Hmmm I agree with you about the font, though I liked the other one I used since it was more gothic, I agree with Rick that it looks more natural with this font, using Bleeding Cowboys (shout out to Rhyel for introducing me to that one) made the gradient look bad. Maybe capitalizing the G will make it look better or maybe Ill try another font
__________________
Pandora HeartsManju's Stuff
"I will always remember
when the Doctor was me."
- 11th Doctor.

Sig by TheEroKing
White Manju Bun is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 11:13   Link #168
escimo
Paparazzi
 
 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 41
Quote:
Originally Posted by White Manju Bun View Post
Hmmm I agree with you about the font, though I liked the other one I used since it was more gothic, I agree with Rick that it looks more natural with this font, using Bleeding Cowboys (shout out to Rhyel for introducing me to that one) made the gradient look bad. Maybe capitalizing the G will make it look better or maybe Ill try another font
How about using the original font just for the G (yeah... needs to be capitalized). You could try making it a bit larger as well and dropping the baseline a few px.

Do like the changes you made. They work.
escimo is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 11:45   Link #169
lsley
Senior Member
*Graphic Designer
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Age: 33
Thanks for the C&C everybody

Final Entry

lsley is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 12:54   Link #170
PreSage
Strangely dependable...
 
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: some random place out there...
Quote:
Originally Posted by White Manju Bun View Post
Vers 3
Definitely version 3. There's more light to the sig and, like everyone else said, the font is much better. The capitalization of the word isn't very significant in normal cases - often times using a lower case is a design ploy. But in the case with Godchild, capitalization does give the sig more dramatic umph.

Quote:
Originally Posted by marksky View Post
version 2

Version 2 is good but I would change the font/font colour.

@Rick: yeah, slice tool...haha, that's what I meant.

@LKK: I actually added yellow, blue, red and green (in that order). Although the blue and red blends into the background a bit. I may try to make the colours stand out a bit more.
__________________
:|::|Sig Gallery|::|:
---------------


[/TH][/TR][/table]
PreSage is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 13:10   Link #171
White Manju Bun
Anxious bookseller
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Shibuya Psychic Research
Ok my last attempt before I have to go to work...only thing I changed was the text

V1: Same font as used before, only G is capitalized


V2: Used escimo's suggestion about using org font for G


Im prone to ver 1 I still think it looks better but again text isnt my forte
__________________
Pandora HeartsManju's Stuff
"I will always remember
when the Doctor was me."
- 11th Doctor.

Sig by TheEroKing
White Manju Bun is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 13:15   Link #172
KiNA
Kira_Naruto, the ecchi
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: http://www.exciting-tits.com/
1st round up tomorrow.
__________________
“This be the realest shit I ever wrote.” ~Tupac
So very dead right now.. but still breathing thank you.
Top 4 Manga Waifu
>> Tsukiumi
>> Saeko Busujima
>> Himuka
>> Yui Kotegawa


KiNA is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 13:57   Link #173
escimo
Paparazzi
 
 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 41
Quote:
Originally Posted by White Manju Bun View Post
Ok my last attempt before I have to go to work...only thing I changed was the text

V1: Same font as used before, only G is capitalized


V2: Used escimo's suggestion about using org font for G


Im prone to ver 1 I still think it looks better but again text isnt my forte
Yup. V1 is better. G is too heavy in comparison to the rest.
escimo is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 14:00   Link #174
ganbaru
books-eater youkai
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity
@ White Manju Bun I prefer V2 but the ''G'' could be a bit smaller, it look like it's in bold. The best would be something in betweem V1 and V2.
__________________
ganbaru is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 17:36   Link #175
PreSage
Strangely dependable...
 
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: some random place out there...
Well, I'm going to throw in the towel and say this is it. Thanks to all for the very helpful C&C.

FINAL ENTRY




...now, onto Castor-san...XD
__________________
:|::|Sig Gallery|::|:
---------------


[/TH][/TR][/table]
PreSage is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 17:38   Link #176
Ichigo-Sora
Senior Member
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
1st attempt for this month ^^ Hopefully it's colourful enough:

__________________
Ichigo-Sora is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 21:37   Link #177
LKK
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Virginia, USA
Age: 62
Quote:
Originally Posted by White Manju Bun View Post
Ok my last attempt before I have to go to work...only thing I changed was the text

V1: Same font as used before, only G is capitalized


V2: Used escimo's suggestion about using org font for G


Im prone to ver 1 I still think it looks better but again text isnt my forte
Both are an improvement, but neither is quite there for me. In version 1, the G is too small. Maybe increase the point size by 1 or 2 points? In version 2, the G is too dark. Maybe lighten the shade a tone or two. For grins and giggles, try dropping the version 2 G down so that the letter is centered on the rest of the text. Actually try that in version 1 as well if you enlarge the letter. I can't really say which font style I like best because I get all hung up on the size and placement at the moment.
__________________

Avatar: Hazuki of Natsuyuki Rendezvous / Signature: flowers from Natsuyuki Rendezvous
LKK is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 21:59   Link #178
Hypnox
I Am The Revenant
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Sifting Through Time
Send a message via AIM to Hypnox
Haven't logged in for a while. Looks like an awesome theme. I had to change my sig to fit the restrictions file size wise ^^;

FINAL ENTRY

__________________
Hypnox is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 22:02   Link #179
Evil Rick
Black Dragon
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
Quote:
Originally Posted by White Manju Bun View Post
Ok my last attempt before I have to go to work...only thing I changed was the text

V1: Same font as used before, only G is capitalized


V2: Used escimo's suggestion about using org font for G


Im prone to ver 1 I still think it looks better but again text isnt my forte
I personally prefer the 'G' on version 1 better than the one on version 2.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ichigo-Sora View Post
1st attempt for this month ^^ Hopefully it's colourful enough:

I think that it's colorfull enough but the colors look a bit "dark" (hope you get my point). Maybe if we add a bit more of light it will look better
__________________
Evil Rick is offline  
Old 2009-05-14, 22:03   Link #180
K. Yamato
Sae's Lover
*Graphic Designer
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Oshawa, Ontario Canada
Age: 37
Send a message via MSN to K. Yamato
Final Entry:

I tried to put in as many dull colours to work with it. Blue, Red (you can just see the red at the top), Yellow, Green. I don't know if it's enough to pass for this entry. If not I'll just work something out with KOS-MOS a little more ^^
__________________

Please visit my museum here at AnimeSuki ^^ Here
K. Yamato is offline  
Closed Thread

Tags
contest, sotm


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 16:41.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, vBulletin Solutions Inc.
We use Silk.